SAJAN FANFIC-DIL HAI TUMHARA #2 (PART68-PAGE62) - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyy aashiii

now i am finally editng dis cmnt of mine...cz since d past 2 updates am nt able 2 cmnt...
as usual..i loooooooved ur update
jus like alwaz i luvvvv d dialouges u write...i mean dey r realy intense
superb jobbbb yaar...
pooor gnjn....shez hurt 2 d core..
evn sam z hurt..bt den no1 can b blamed here....
its ol cz of dat siaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

thnx 4 d pm..n cont sooooon
i knw its a small cmnt...bt den tym hi ni mil ra tha pehle toh..n now i gt sumtym so i cmnted FINALYYYYY😆
Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 14 years ago
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IT WAS EXCALLENT PART.. TRUELYYYYYY LUVEDDDDDDDDDDDD ITTTT REALLLY AMAZING PART LUVE ITTTTTTTTTTT CONT SOON. SARA
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update aashi..cant wait 4 da nxt part
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PART 60:

Samrat is walking alone fr quite a distance wen he realizes gunjan is nt walking wid him....he stops nd turns back nd found gunjan was still standing in d same place whr he pulled her 2wards himsekf 2 tie her knot...nd samrat just kept staring at her face....but she was just nt luking at him...she had her eyes fixed on to d floor.....nd tears were rolling down her eyes non-stop.....

Gunjan on d odr hand did nt move an inch...she was fixed 2 d place whr samrat left her as if her feets were jammed.....was it she who didnt want 2 move or was it samrat who made her fix at d spot.....nai main samrat se pyaar nai karti...bikul nai karti...nafrat karti hun main samrat se....nafrat karti hun main samrat se...usne meri zindagi ka kya haal banadiya...aaj meri aisi halat hai ki main na to jee sakti hun aur na hi mar sakti hun.....uske bina ek pal jee bi nai sakti aur uske saath bi jee nai sakti......just den her thoughts were interrupted by samrat.....

SAMRAT-chashm.....i mean gunjan.....

GUNJAN-quickly turned around.....nd tried 2 control her tears wid her full efforts....she wiped her face....

SAMRAT-brought his hand closer 2 her shoulder...nd was abt 2 keep it on her shoulder...just wen he tightened his fist...nd brought his hand bck....gunjan tum theek ho?

GUNJAN-hmm....

SAMRAT-dekho agr tum chaho to tum wapas apne room mein ja sakti ho.....

GUNJAN-usse kya hoga?wo room to waise bi mere har dard ki wajah hai....

SAMRAT-gunjan tum....

GUNJAN-dekho samrat main janti hun ki ab tumhe mera sath kuch kadam k liye kya kuch waqt k liye bi bardasht nai...par main tumse waada karti hun...bas ek bar tumhe diya hua main apna wada pura kardun main chup chap tumhari zindagi se chali jaungi.....aur is bar hamesha k liye....kabi na wapas lautne k liye.....

SAMRAT-hmm.....main janta hun ki tum apne waade se muh nai modogi.....

GUNJAN-absolutely.....to chalein?

SAMRAT-haan chalo....

nd wid dis samrat and gunjan walk 2wards d hall...nd fr d first tym dey were walking at so much distance.....d physical distance between dem was enuf fr ny1 2 knw.....how far dey had traveeled frm each odr in lyf.....kon keh sakta hai in dono ko dekhkar ki ye dono jo ek dusre se deewano ki tarah pyar karte hain aaj kuch kadam sath nai chalna chahte.....ek dusre se nazar chura rahein hain.....ek dusre se dur bhag rahe hain.....

nd wid ol dese thoughts dey reach d main entrance of d hall.....

d hall was beautifully decorated wid flowers nd diyas.....nd gunjan cud feel it ws full of scent d scent of purity whr 2day once again 2 ppl were 2 cum 2gedr n be tied in a relation dt remains frevr.....
forever???????forever??????dis word kept ringing in gunjans ears again n again......nai forever yani ki hamesha nai ye sab jhooth hota hai...koi bi rishta hamesha k liye nai hota.....jo bi humare zindagi mein hota hai sab jhooth hi hota hai...aaj tak kisi ne apna rishta puri imendaari se nai nibhaya...sirf dhoka hi baar milta hai.....nd wid dis she saw samrat....who was lookin in front 2wards vicky nd sia.....

SAMRAT-umm....gunjan....

GUNJAN-.................

SAMRAT-gunjan nd shook her lightly............

GUNJAN-flower bouquet in her hand fell down....

Samrat saw her nervousness.....nd wen he bent down to pick up d flowers gunjan olso bent down at d same tym...nd both caught d flowers at d same tym....gunjan had her hand on samrats hand....nd she quickly withdrew her hand back.....nd both of dem got up....

SAMRAT-vo...m srry.....

GUNJAN-its ok...chalo jakar sia ko i mean tumhare adhure pyar ko uski zindagi mein aane wali khushiyon ki wishes dedein....

SAMRAT-mera adhoora pyaar?????????

GUNJAN-haan...kyun kya ab sia ko bi itni jaldi bhul gaye?

SAMRAT-gunjan tum ye.....

GUNJAN-ohh main to bhul hi gayi thi main kis samrat se baat kar rahi hun...pyaar...jiske liye pyaar ka matlab roz ek nayi ladki se.....nai nai jiske liye pyar to zindagi k har modh par khada hota hai.....

SAMRAT-haan...bilkul sahi pehchana muje tumne...farak sirf itna hai ki kabi main use apna bana nai pata....khair chodo......chalein?

GUNJAN-hmmm.....nd dey both walk 2wards sia nd vicky.....

SAMRAT-heyy dude...congratulations yaar....

VICKY-thnx....

SAMRAT-congrats sia...nd shakes hand wid her...but sia holds his hand tight....nd d first thing samrat did was to luk at gunjan whose face once again lost its color....it wasnt dt gunjan wasnt aware of dis fact of her lyf dt dre relation was no more d same...but everytym she saw sia wid samrat she felt her heart being ripped of freshly....

VICKY-who saw samrats uncomfortableness nd gunjans lost color....heyy sia mera haath tumhare haath ka intezaar kar raha hai....ab samrat ko jane bi do yaar...usko sambhalne k liye uski chahsmish hai na.....kyun gunjan????

GUNJAN-gives a fake smile....umm...congrat 2 u fr a new beggining in ur lyf.....

VICKY-thnk u so much fr cuming til here....

GUNJAN-congrats 2 u 2 sia...aur aati main kaise nai aakhir sia humari zindagi ka mera matlab samrat ki zindagi ka itna atoot hissa jo hai....

nd vicky got wat she meant....he gve a luk at samrats face which showed a line of pain right across him....

nuthinng nd no1 cud hurt her d way gunjan cud coz he had a hear 2 heart connection wid her....

after a while samrat nd gunjan were standing dere having complete pin drop silence.....btw dem...just den sum1 kept a hand on samrats shoulder....

Samrat turned around nd was shocked 2 see d guy infront of his eyes....

SAMRAT-aryan.....

ARYAN-ohh so u remember me...thnk god....hume to laga tum apne dosto ko bhul hi gaye hoge....kyun gunjan.....

SAMRAT-idhar dekhkar bat karo...gunjan ko beech mein lane ki zarurat nai hai....

ARYAN-arre arre samrat tum to gussa hogaye.....main to mazak kar raha tha...waise gunjan agr bura na mano to ek baat kehna chahta hun...hamesha sabke beech ana theek nai hai..
kabi samrat aur sia k beech....kabi tum mere aur apne beech bi agayi....

GUNJAN-had tears in her eyes now.....

SAMRAT-aryan dekho....

ARYAN-arre gunjan ye aansun....nai nai plz mat ro na...main tumhe rota nai dekh sakta.....ohh kahi ab tak us raat ka dard to nai jab maine tumse tumhara baby.....

SAMRAT-ARYAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nd got hold of his collar....apni bakwas apne pass rakh.....agr main chup chap khada hun iska matlab ye nai hai ki main bol nai sakta.....main isliye khada hun kyunki......

ARYAN-i knw i knw...main sia ka bhai hun aur tum sia se pyar....

SAMRAT-just shut up......nd just den vicky came nd separated d 2.....asking samrat 2 realx....nd tuk aryan frm dre 2 whr sia n vicky were standing.....

VICKY-are u out of ur mind????ye kya batameezi thi????tum meri party mein akar ye sab....

ARYAN-ya ya i knw i ws nt ryt...srry yar....

VICKY-hmmm...bttr......

GUNJAN on d odr hand was crying badly.....she just realized once agin wat she had lost dt nyt....d 2 nyts she cn nvr frget in her lyf r being reminded 2 her again n again..one wen she lost samrat nd one wen she lost her baby....

SAMRAT-gunjan......

GUNJAN-plz samrat ...muje koi bat nai karni...m fine....

SAMRAT-par...

GUNJAN-was about 2 go out of d hall but

just den dre ws an announcement.....

ARYAN-heyy ladies gentlemen.....now finally its d tym fr vicky nd my sweet lil sis 2 exchange rings nd b engaged wid each odr frever...

nd every1 clapped......

VICKY-heyy aryan engagement????????

ARYAN-haan...engagement.....

VICKY-par...

SIA-ye tum kya keh rahe ho vicky?

ARYAN-heyy wats wrong wid u????

VICKY-arre tum dono itna tensed kyun lag rahe ho....mera matlab hai ki itni bi kya jaldi hai....thoda gana bajane to hojaye.....

SIA n ARYAN tuk a sigh of relief....nd vicky gve dem both a smile.....

VICKY-ok sia now lets strt wid u......

nd d lights went off wid splot lite on sia....nd d she strtd 2 sing....

Haan a ha ha ha ha, haan a ha ha ha ha
Haan aa ha, haan aa ha, aa aa aa aa(nd she strts 2 cum down frm d platform she was standing on....)

(Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Dil hai hawaaon ka jhonka jhonka jhonka(goes 2 vicky nd hugs him,,,)
Dil ko bachaana, dhoka na khaana
Dhoka hai pyaar yaar pyaar hai dhoka) - 2(goes 2 gunjan nd points a finger at her)
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Haan a ha ha ha ha, haan a ha ha ha ha
Haan aa ha, haan aa ha, aa aa aa aa
Dhoondega koi bahaana, dhoondega koi nishaana
Haan dhoondega koi bahaana, dhoondega koi nishaana(goes 2 samrat nd stands bck 2 bck wid him.....)
Dil ka baazaar hai yahan to dil ko dilon se bachaana
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Dil hai hawaaon ka jhonka jhonka jhonka
Dil ko bachaana, dhoka na khaana
Dhoka hai pyaar yaar pyaar hai dhoka
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Bachna is aashiq se bachna, kaanton ki dosti se bachna(goes evn more close 2 samrat....but he luks sideways.....)
Haan bachna is aashiq se bachna, kaanton ki dosti se bachna
Aankhon mein bhar le andhera, tum aisi roshni se bachna(makes samrat face him.....nd den goes near his ears singing d lines.....)
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Dil hai hawaaon ka jhonka jhonka jhonka
Dil ko bachaana, dhoka na khaana
Dhoka hai pyaar yaar pyaar hai dhoka
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Haan a ha ha ha ha, haan a ha ha ha ha
Haan aa ha, haan aa ha, aa aa aa aa
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka(goes bck 2 vicky nd shares a close dance wid him...nd gves him a peck on his cheek)

VICKY-heyy gunjan now its ur turn.....
GUNJAN-umm...no vickky...plz no i cnt.....
VICKY-fr me plz...2day is such a big day in my lyf...plz it s frnds request....
GUNJAN-plzz...i cnt....
VICKY-plzz gunjan just once....
GUNJAN-hmm...ok....
she closed her eyes....nd started 2 sing......

Zindagi Mein Koyi Kabhi Aaye Na Rabba,
Aaye Jo Koyi Toh Phir Jaaye Na Rabba,
Dene Ho Gar Mujhe Baad Mein Aansoo'
Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba -2
Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba.

gunjan had tears in here eyes....nd ol d past memories came 2 her........






Jaate Jaate Koyi Meri Khushiyon Ko Le Gaya,
Suni Suni Akhiyon Ko Gham, Koyi De Gaya -2
Aas Jo Lagaayi Hai, Aankh Bhar Aayi Hai -2
Itna Bhi Koyi, Sataaye Na Rabba,

she had flashbck wid ol d moments she spent wid samrat....nd tears kept

flowing down her eyes.....nd samrat kept lukin at her wid so much pain n

hurt clearly visible in his eyes.....







Zindagi Mein Koyi Kabhi Aaye Na Rabba,
Aaye Jo Koyi Toh Phir Jaaye Na Rabb,
Dene Ho Gar Mujhe Baad Mein Aansoo'
Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba -2

Dil Lene Waale Pe Zor Nahin Chalta,
Pyaar Ka Ye Sikka, Kahin Aur Nahin Chalta -2
Yaad Teri Aayi Hai, Tu Harjaai Hai -2
Itna Bhi Koyi Tadpaaye Na Rabba,

gunjan strtd 2 walk further in d hall.....but it was as if a statute ws walking....

which had no life left in it...no reason 2 live...no reason 2 smile...




Zindagi Mein Koyi Kabhi Aaye Na Rabba ,
Aaye Jo Koyi Toh Phir Jaaye Na Rabba,
Dene Ho Gar Mujhe Baad Mein Aansoo'

Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba -2


gunjan slowly opened her eyes....nd cudnt control herself....she was breaking

down by every minute.....she cudnt bear d pain nymore....she cudnt belv wat lyf

ws in front of her...samrat was sum1 she found a frnd in...her luv in...d father of

her baby in...but now everythng was over....nd she wanted 2 run

away by d evry minute passing by....


nd as she tuk a step away frm dre...samrat caught her hand....


but she had completely lost herself nd she threw samrats hands....nd ran frm dre...

nd samrat just stud dre....lukin her go frm dre.....nd samrat had tears flowing down

his eyes.....nd vicky saw samrats pain clearly visible nd dat ws it fr him....


nd d moment gunjan reached d door....she heard a voice nd she stopped at d door....


PRECAP-WHAT MADE GUNJAN STOP WEN SHE WAS OL READY 2 LEAVE EVERYTHNG??


HOPE U LIKED IT....


PLZZ DO REPLY....


Edited by ak_sajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aashi that was very pleasant surprise.❤️..🤗.It was really awesome mind blowing update...You really made us cry.😭...It was so emotional and heart wrenching...🥺..The SaJan scenes were beautifully written...The conversation they had was so real...It carried so much of pain & trauma they went through ...SaJan's meeting with Vicky& Sia was also beautifully written...The songs u selected was so goo..Perfect for the situation.😃...SaJan flashback was too good...Can't to see them back like that...😍SaJan - Aryan confrontation😡 was really well written....You showed the anger,the pain,the hatred everything..You made Samrat face the reality😔...Aashi you are doing a great job with this FF...Please continue soon...You left us hanging on the cliff with the last scene & precap...😲
Edited by Anjali_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum yar cnt wait 4 d next yar
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome update
i hate sia and aryan so much
and i feel so bad for sajan
gunjans song was sad but well writted
and sia was like🤢
cont soon
i really am waiting for precap
very badly cont soon
love
tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was sooooooo sad part i really hateeeeeeeeeee sia and ayran soooooooooooooooo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey first thanks a lot to upate
the update was as usaully awesome..n sad too ;-(
plzz yar itney extreme point pe mat chora karoo
plzz agla part jaldi kallllll update kar denaa plzz
i cant waittt moreee...
sajan itna dukhii haiin cant see them in such a paiinnn..
ur ff is osamm..it always bring tearrss
u r an awseome writter n its ur ff that i wrote a long comeent
thanks for pm
love u
mary
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii aashi Awwww so so so sad part uffff hateeee sia n Aryan ufffff they r such b*****s man ufff pooor sajan especially da words by gunji dat was so hurting man gosh n den da song gunji sang so so emotional now can't wait to knw y she stopped do continue soon

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