SAJAN FANFIC-DIL HAI TUMHARA #2 (PART68-PAGE62)

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HEYY GUYS SINCE MY FF DIL HAI TUMHARA HAS COMPLETED ITS 150 PAGES I M STARTING A NEW LINK FR D SAME...

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DIL HAI TUMHARA:



CONCEPT-

Basically dis story commences frm d point whr samrat confesses his luv 2 gunjan nd her bauji agrees for sajan marriage.

Its a journey of 2 ppl who r madly in luv wid each other.nd how dey go thru different phases of lfe together.how they stand by each other thru the thick nd thin.obviously every relationship has its ups nd downs but its the way we luk at the things nd sort it out.Following is d character sketch-

SAMRAT SHERGILL-



He was the heart throb of Excel college.Not much intersted in academics.girls r head over heels fr him but he cant see ny1 except his chashmish.Now he has a business of his own nd which is a huge success.he lives wid his dadi.he is d most eligible bachelor in town coz he is rich nd a sucessful industrialist.

GUNJAN BHUSHAN-



She is d most sweet,innocent,reserved girl.she is d best in academics,does not open easily except fr her di nd now samrat.she is soon going to be MRS.GUNJAN SAMRAT SHERGILL.She is madly in luv wid samrat nd can go to ny extend to protect him frm dis evil world.At present she is working as a fashion designer.

MAYANK SHARMA-He is also madly in luv wid nupur bhushan and is also a successful businessman.he is samrats best frnd nd a bhai to gunjan.he has a daughter called sneha.

NUPUR SHARMA-She is in luv wid top student of excel college mayank sharma.she is very close to gunjan nd is also very protective fr her.luvs to pull samrats leg.and has a daughter called sneha.

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PART 56

SAMRAT-.he came downstairs....the whole night samrat did not go inside d room....he went nd sat on d hammlock in dre garden....his whole world his whole life had cum to a standstill....chashmish mujse har rishta todna chahti....vo mujse dur jana chahti hai...vo mujse divorce....nai mera dil nai manta...meri chashmish k liye to har rishta kitna mayne rakhta hai...vo khud ko takleef de sakti hai par apne se jude logon se nai...

while samrat was lying on d swing....he closed his eyes....so as to let all his pain seep down....he just den aftr a fraction of second felts soft lips touch his eyes nd press against dem...he was about to open his eyes....wen d same person blew wind on his fair makin his hair fly a little....he cud sense tht it was no stranger but sum1 who is his own...his own love...part of his soul....he slowly opened his eyes....nd found gunjan sittin rite next 2 him....

SAMRAT-chashmish main.....

GUNJAN-shhh...nd placed her finger on his lips.....
nd samrat lukd at her wid questioning eyes...

GUNJAN-tumhe mere waje se bahut takleef hui hai na....

SAMRAT-nai chashmish aise koi baat nai hai....tum bas mujse door mat jao...mere pass raho...hamesha...fir chahe tumhe mujse jitni nafrat karni hai karlo.....main seh lunga...plz mera saath mat chodhna.....

GUNJAN-nafrat????nafrat kaise karun tumse...jab se tumhe janna hai sirf paglon ki tarah tumhe pyaar kiya hai..tum meri zindagi ho samrat...mera pyaar mera sab kuch.....I LOVE U SAMRAT

SAMRAT-I LOVE U 2......plz tum mere saath rehna muje chodkar mat jana....plz...main tumhare bina nai jee sakta...mar jaung main mar jaunga.....

GUNJAN-shhh...samrat aise nai bolte....

SAMRAT-takes her hand in his...nd says nai pehle tum waada karo ki muje chodkar nai jaogi....

GUNJAN-acha baba wada...ab tum so jao....

SAMRAT-apna waada bhulogi to nai....

GUNJAN-nai samrat nai todungi chalo ab aankhein band karo....nd she places her hand on his eyes....covering it...nd wid dis samrat closes his eyes...

SAMRAT-after a few seconds....chasmish.....chashmishhh.....chashmishhh....nd wen he gets no answer he opens his eyes nd is shocked 2 b al alone in d garden....he looks in all directions but finds her no where....

SAMRAT-CHASHMISH!!!!!!!!

kyun chashmish kyun?kyun saza de rahi ho muje...apne aap ko...humare pyaar ko aur sabse zada humare is khoobsurat se rishte ko....tum janti ho samrat k bina gunjan aur gunjan k bina samrat dono kitne adhoore hain?agr samrat dil hai to chashmish uski dhadkan....agr main asman hoon to tum chand...agr chashmish ka dil dhadakta hai to main saans leta hoon...mat cheeno mujse meri zindagi...meri dhadkane main kisi jeeunga?chashmish main tumhare bina nai jee sakta...main tumhare pyaar k bina aur tumhari nafrat k saath jee sakta hun par tumhare bina nai.....nd wid dese thoughts he spends d whole night.....

on d odr hand in d room:

GUNJAN-she cud here back ol dose harsh words nd hurting conversation she had wid samrat....tears kept rolling down her face....muje yakken nai ho raha samrat ki humara itn apyaara rishta is tarah se khatam hoga....maine kabi nai socha tha ki main tumse ye sab kahungi jo maine aaj kaha...muje khud par yakeen nai hota ki tumse itna pyaar karnepar bi maine tumse apne aap se dur jaane ko kaise bola?main achi tarah janti hun ki main tumhare bina nai jee paungi lekin...nd she sits up wiping her tears...lekin isse humari zindagi to nai rukti na samrat....tumhari khushi mere saath nai hai....

SAMRAT-kisne kaha?

GUNJAN suddenly turned arnd to luk who ws it?but she cud nt find ny1 despite searching d whole room...she got up...

SAMRAT-kise dhhond rai ho?main to tuhari har dhadkan mein rehta hun.....aur tum ye janti ho ki main tumse bahut pyaar karta hun....
nd she got up nd went near d window......

GUNJAN-she cudnt see ny1.....samratt...samratt....nd den she turned around aying samrr.....nd she hit against samrat...she lost her balance but samrat caught her in tym....

SAMRAT-tum ye soch bi kaise sakti ho ki main tumse pyaar nai karta....ki main tumhare bina khush rahunga...ki main zindagi main aage badhna chahta hun....

GUNJAN-par samrat.....

SAMRAT-main sirf aur sirf apni chashmish ko janta hun...pehchanta hun...aur usee beinteha pyaar karta hun...zindagi hai chashmish meri.....nd makes her stand stratght...he slowly tucks her flyin hair strand behind her ear....nd goes near her ear nd gunjan closes her eyes....nd whispers I LOVE U....

GUNJAN-I LOVE U 2....nd den slowly opens her eyes....but doesnt find samrat wid her in d room...she searches by scanning d whole room but he wasnt dre....gunjan just cnt control her tears back nd goes nd throws herself on d bed...hiding her face in d pillow....sobbing badly nd saying sab khatam ho chuka hai mere aur samrat k beech sab kuch.....nd wid dis she spends her whole nite....

in d morning:

at around 8 am gunjan woke up nd didnt find samrat....

GUNJAN-ye samrat kahan hai?jab main soi thi tab bi yahan nai thaaur ab bi nai hai....she quickly got out of d bed nd rushed downstairs.....

GUNJAN-goes in d kitchen nd sees d maid was working...she den ran 2 d odr rooms 2 chck nd finally in d garden...but stil cudnt find him...

GUNJAN-maid...

MAID-ji madame...

GUNJAN-samratt...sahab kahan hai?

MAID-vo to bahut pder pehle hi office chale gaye...

GUNJAN-office chale gaye????

MAID-ji...

GUNJAN-to tumne muje uthaya kyun nai...nashta kisne banaya?

MAID-unhone apko uthane se mana kiya tha...aur nashta unhone kaha vo office mein hi karlenge...

GUNJAN-hmmm...theek hai tum apna kaam karo...

aaj samrat ko kya hogaya pehle to vo kabi bi itni subah office nai gaya...matlab before 9 am he nevr goes...to fir aaj....
lekin main itna pareshaan kyun ho rahi hun...waise bi sirf do din ki to baat hai uske baad waise bi samrat ko khud hi...main thodi na yahan hogi...muje shayd in sab cheezon ki aadat dal leni chahiye...shuruwat aaj se hi karni hogi....

on d odr hand samrat in office:gunjan tum shayad ab tak jag gayi hogi aur shayad yehi soch rahi hogi ki main aaj itni subah office kaise aagay...kyun maine tumhare uthne ka intezaar nai kiya....lekin main bas itna janta hun ki agr main wahan rehta to shayd fir se hum ek dusre ko takleef dene ki koi na koi baat kar dete...aur ye aakhri k do din main tumhe koi dukh nai pahuchana chahta...mujse jitna ho sake main tumse humaretoote rishte ki thes door rahunga....

now we cn see....a guy pickin up his cell...nd wen he dials d number nd puts d cell on his ears we cn see his face...its vicky....

VICKY-heyy samrat...

SAMRAT-hi vicky

VICKY-hows life?

SAMRAT-gud very gud....

VICKY-u ok?

SAMRAT-ya i m fine..

VICKY-so r u cumin ffr my marriage...

SAMRAT-ya...

VICKY-nd bhabhi?

SAMRAT-hmm...she is cuming...

VICKY-great....kuch naye rishte banenge aur kuch purane rishta apni khushboo wapas payenge....

SAMRAT-matlab?????

VICKY-kuch nai...chal fir see u kal at pune at my engagement....

SAMRAT-ok....bye....

VICKY-bye...nd he has a victorious smile on his face....hey samrat welcome 2 pune....jahan teri zindagi fir se ek baar ek naya mod legi...aur is bar mere ishaare par...

VICKY-again dials up a number....hello....

GUY-hello...

VICKY-maine jo kam diya tha uske pata kiya?us raat ki saari details....

GUY-ji sir apka kaam hogaya hai...ab bas aap pune aajiye...

VICKY-hmmm...goddd job...mujse ab pune se ye duri bardasht nai ho rahi...neways i wil b there tommorrow aftrnoon...nd get set fr d party at nite...ok?

GUY-sure sir....bye

VICKY got into d car nd rove ffr a while nd halted at a bunglow....he went nd rung d bell....

VICKY-heyy hi baby!!!!!!

SIA-makes a nt so happy face....but remebers wat aryan said....heyy vicky....tum yahan?

VICKY-ab mujse apni hone wali biwi se zada dur nai raha ja raha....

SIA-awww....really...

VICKY-yeahh...so wats d plan soon 2 b wify?

SIA-umm...ab tak to kuch nai....

VICKY-puts his arnd her waist nd pulls her close 2 him...so how abt a date wid me?

SIA-date????

VICKY-yeahh ab kal to waise bi sagai hojayegi so we hve only 2day 2 freak out nd njoy as lovers...

SIA-par...

VICKY-heyy chill i wntd 2 tk u fr shopping...kal sagai ka outfit nai kharidna kya?

SIA-ummm ya...ok..sure lets go...

VICKY-ok so quickly go n get ready...

SIA-hmmm....nd she goes nd gets ready.....

aftr a while she cums out dressed in backless top nd nd capries....

VICKY-hmmm....sum1 is lukin hott...

SIA-ohh ya...thnx...kuch naya bolo...i knw dis...

VICKY-oho attitude....

SIA-yup...i deserve 2 carry it...

VICKY-ya but it shud nt become arrogance nd ego darling....

SIA-ya ya...ab bore mat karo...chalein?

VICKY-yup babes...nd dey both drive down to a mall...

In d mall:

d moment dey enter d mall we cn see sum1 following dem continuously.....

VICKY-so sia...bolo kahan se shoppin karni hai...

SIA-dre....she points out at d showroom....

VICKY-very smart sabse expensive place hi choose kari...

SIA-ab aftr ol main vicky se jo shaadi kar rai ...

VICKY-yeahh standard to hona hi chahiye meri wife ka kuch....

SIA-yeahh...nd dsta wat i luv abt u..nd kisses him on his cheek...par vicky ek baat bolo baby
tum jab samrat k itne ache dost hoto ye sab tumne usko kyun nai sikhaya?

VICKY-ab ye samrat yahan kahan se aagya?

SIA-i mean see ur his business partner....

VICKY-hun nai tha.....

SIA-ya par the to sahi...use apne standard ka koi khayal nai hai...

VICKY-sia kyun?

SIA-i mean gunjan...umm..kya bulata hai vo us bhenji ko...chh...crapp yaar wats d name he uses....

VICKY-chashmish.....

SIA-ya chashmish...wat choice yaar....

VICKY-pehli baat to ye ki vo bhenji nai hai...nd dusri sirf chasme pehen lene se koi bhenji nai hojata....infact wat i feel is vo chashme hi hain which makes her look so simple yet beautiful...agr vo chahe to kisi bi hot se hot ladki ko complex karwa sakti hai nd she wil b successful widout a doubt par she has her feet grounded 2 earth nd i think dis is wat attracts samrat towards her..

SIA-matlab vicky tum bi uski tarafdari kar rahe ho..

VICKY-nai main bas ye keh raha hoon ki khubsoorti saadgi mein hai....

SIA-kya tum us jaisi ladki se kabi pyaar ya shaadi karte?

VICKY-agr samrat ne usse shaadi nai ki hoti to pakka karleta....arre vo to kisi ko bi apna deewana bana le....i must say samrat is way 2 lucky tht she is his wife....

SIA-plzz vicky give me a break kahan samrat kahan vo...

VICKY-acha fine leave it cmon lets shop....

nd after 2 hours dey r done wid shopping of her sagai dress nd jewellery....nd dey go 2 a restaurant fr lunch....

VICKY-so sia...tumne kabi bataya nai...

SIA-kya?

VICKY-yehi ki kya tumhe kabi pyaar nai hua?

SIA-well ek ho to bataun..

VICKY-ny1 frm college.....

SIA-ummmm....well 2 b frank ya i liked samrat par uski choice to tumhe pata hi hai....

VICKY-i really like ur honesty.....

SIA-aur tumhara?

VICKY-well many nd i m sure u wudnt mind

SIA-tum muje jante nai ho vicky bas agr ek baar muje koi cheez pasand aajaye to main use haasil karkar rehti hun...chahe vo koi cheez ho ya....

VICKY-ya

SIA-pyaar....

VICKY-ye tumne kis par try kia?i mean u cn share wid me...only if u want no compulsions....

SIA-ab tumse kaisi sharam tum mere hone wale pati ho aur bhai k frnd bi....well main samrat se bahut pasand kart ithi aur use haasil karne k liye kisi bi hadd tak ja sakti thi...

VICKY-kisi bi hadd tak.....

SIA-haan aur is hadd ka tumhe pata chalega jab tum mere sath shaadi karloge....

VICKY-hayyye konsi hadd dikhaogi muje?

SIA-apne pyaar ki hadd....jo tumne abi tak dekhi nai....

VICKY-acha ji...neways lets go now its gettin late....

SIA-hmmm...sure....

It was around 10 pm in d nite nd samrat was stil nt back home frm office....

GUNJAN-ye samrat kahan reh gaya hai...aaj to kaafi der hogayi hai...subah se na koi fone na koi message....kahin kal raat ki wajah se kuch..nai nai..main bi ye kya bekaar ki baat sochne baith gayi....maine bi to samrat ko ek bar cal nai kiya.....
nd she takes her cell nd dials his number....
but she cud hear d his cell ringing in d house...samrat had just returned....

GUNJAN-aaj kafi der hogayi....

SAMRAT-aaj kaam kaafi tha...

GUNJAN-hmm...ok....tum fresh hojao main khana laga deti hun...

SAMRAT-nai maine kha liya hai...tum kha lo...

GUNJAN-pani peeyoge....

SAMRAT-hmmm....par u dnt bother main khud lelunga...tumne packing karli....

GUNJAN-nai..abi nai...

SAMRAT-to tum shuru karo main paanni peekar aata hun...

GUNJAN-hmmm....ok nd she goes upstairs nd strts 2 pack her stuff....

SAMRAT enters d room nd after changing into his nite clothes strts 2 pack his stuff....

nd aftr half n hour both r done....

GUNJAN-samr....

SAMRAT-vo chash....i mean gunjan.....

GUNJAN-tum muje ye do din chashmish keh sakte ho....

SAMRAT-muje bahut neend aa rahi hai...so plz so jayein if u dnt mind...

GUNJAN-hmm...sure...

SAMRAT-ok...den gud nyt....nd he lies down on d couch switching off d lites...

GUNJAN olso lies down on d bed.....

SAMRAT-aftr a few seconds...tumne khana khaya?

GUNJAN-haan kha liya

SAMRAT-ok gud nyt....nd he turns d odr side...theek se jhooth bolna bi nai aata....nd he closes his eyes...

GUNJAN-jab khana khaya nai hai to sach to bolte samrat....itne tym hogaya hai pat jhooth bolna aaj bi nai aaya tumhe....

PRECAP-KYA SAMRAT AUR GUNJAN KI DURIYAN AB BADLENGI NAZDEEKIYON MEIN?KYA HAI VICKY KA IRAADA?KISSE VICKY NE KI FONE PAR BAAT?KYA SAMRAT AUR GUNJAN KI ZINDAGI FIR PUNE MEIN LEGI EK AUR NAYA MOD?

HOPE U LIKED IT....

PLZ DO REPLY.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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tht was sooooooooo awesomeee plzzzzzzzzzz yaar jaldi say sajan ko together karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow awsome update

really loved it
hmm and wat is vicky up too
and sajan so sad
they both havnt eaten
their little convo in the end was nice
and their dreems in the beggining seeing each other were awsome
cont soon cant wait for next part
oh and congratz on new thread😊
luv tanzeel
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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☺️☺️Aashi it was really a beautiful update..🤗 SaJan imagination was so real..It showed theit true love & passion for each other..Vicky was so cool😎 He really rocked..I love the wat he stood up for gunjan..Sia was in her true color..😡Can't wait to see her going down..But i love the way Vicky is handling her...👏 The little separation of sajan bought out the love ,care & understanding they have for each other..It was really fantastic..You bought out so much of emotions with so little words...Your writing is really outstanding..👏👍🏼my favorite was when Gunjan said to Sammy that he call her CHASHMISH...😭It was sad but adorable too..It showed how much she missed him calling that.The symbol of his love for her...Aashi now with such a fabulous update I can't wait to read next part..Please continue ASAP..Waiting to read it... ❤️
Edited by Anjali_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omgggg 2nd thread wowww aashi congrats hopeee to get many threads anyways awesome update so so so sad sajan gosh bt lovee da dreams where dey were imagining each other n all loved dat one n den wat is vicky upto i bet he is trying to reunite sajan yupieeee n den sajan short convo was good dey knw each other so well to knw dat dey both havent eat hayee wat an understanding between dem very well writeen aashi loveee da way u express da emotions, da feelings gosh u rock do continue soon now

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrax for d 2nd thrd .
n awsm updt dear luvly.plz cnt wid nxt part soon n add me to ur pm list.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesum update yaa..cant wait 2 read d next part
do cont soon and thanks 4 d pm sweety😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part!
sajan scenes was awesome.
Cant wait to know what is gonna happen in pune.
cont soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg omg wat a part yarrrrrr
superb
fantastic
mindblowing
amazing
gr888
beautiful
wonderful
painful
n so so januableeeeee...........

Do cont asap..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Love
Radhi...

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