SR/A: Being Here, Only Ours Today UPD:1/18/12 P 30 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

WHERE ARE MY ABHI-NIKKI?!?!?!


missed u loads woman <3


ilu <3



i missed u toooooo
abe come one! i tell you this everyday!

patience is a virtueeeeeeeeeeeeee


Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

FINALY I READ IT!!😃

Aish it was great i mean ALL the parts yaar
Sid n Shravan again!! mindblastin yaar😉...
i loved their scenes they were really hilarious
and Ishhhhhhhhhh Sid nanga in towel only☺️...
and very interestin endin lookin forward to it n dude im addicted to ur FF now so cont soon otherwise i'll bring the nikammi gang here😆



thank youuuuuuuu lots of huggies noorya!!!
sid n shravan are adorable na?
i know right.. sirf ek towel ko beech mein aana tha..
nikkammi gang is here now.. o boy roller coaster ridesssss

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Aish u nikammi u wrote an FF and I didn't know about it😡😡😡


Thnx to Harshuu I found out about this warna meko toh pata hi nhi chalta kyunki Aish nikami ne kabhi bataya hi nhi😡😡

anyways now back to ur FF....
it's FANTASTIC AWESOME MIND-BLOWING.....Too good

really interesting and SR dating....awwwwwww😳😳
and look what a co-inky-dinky KW's in BHPH now ruining Sharavan's life😆

Love the FF so far and do update soon and nikammi u better PM now warna😡😡😡



phirse shuru hogayi...
i swear...YOU KNEW ABOUT THIS!!!!
😡😡😡
😡
thank you thank you thank youuuuuuuuuuu *HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS to zarqu!*
i know.. i wanted more dating seq na? lmao i kno in bhph n now here... kya baat hai right?! im just amazing for thinking like this, u kno kw n bs in the same thing... o well actually i mean.. eh.. forget that.

see now im pmming! arent u proud?!!? 😃



Originally posted by: sidma_love

Aish 🤗

Nice update !!!!
Loved d SR & Saavan scene

Sid all nangu pangu 😆

d last scene was interesting ;)

Looking forward to d next part...
Continue soon....



hello!!!! hi harshu!
everyone seems to love nangu pungu... hmmm 😈😈😈 shirts ko ban karni chahiye...


Originally posted by: monty22

Aish 🤗


awesome FF.i love sid- shravan bonding.......they r really cool dude & best buddies.......

sid in towel......😍

well update warna i m ready with my belan & dhamkis,,,,,,,,,,,😡



hi montu! how are you!?!??! ur never here when i am 😔
n thank you!
i wish they were buddies on tv 😔 vms bannaneko milta...
well for ur information:
i am now belan n damki proof, jo mahine mein ek baar update karti hai... itna tho aana chahiye...

Originally posted by: zeenia

Aish!

Thank goodness I discovered your FF's! better late then never!!😆😆
Anyway I loved all of your FF's and OS and this one is just as amazing! You've already got me gripped after 2 updates and cant wait for your next one!!😃



zeenia! well im glad u found this! yay readers! n true dat, betta late than neva... y am i gangsta... o well anywho!
thank youuuuuuu
i have u hooked?!?!
on what!??!
i swear i dont do drugs! 🤔
k theres something wrong with me...

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

falalalalalalalalalalalala


elmos world elmos worldddddddddd
ur such a kid...

Originally posted by: Liashna

Please Pm me dear when u update!!! Awesome!!!



thanks! n ur on my buddy list so its all good lmao


Originally posted by: muni-loveAN

aish both parts r lovely i really liked it but where is my abhi n nikki i m waiting for them plz bring them soon

continue soon 👍🏼



u too?!?
sheena... kahan hai tu? o godddd
jkjk
theyll get here, promise!
😆

Originally posted by: Merry_Shwit

i read eveything... 😆 reserved😃



uhuh... still waiting....


Originally posted by: merdersidma1

Ash finally got around reading ur latest update....

its nice and light no drama and rona dhona which iss the best so looking forward to more from u :)



😃
yo!
yup no hardcore rhona dhona yet! and if there is, trust me ill try to balance it!😉


Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

Eyyyyy! You know he's mine! Dont even go there!😡



going there ☺️....
kuch der baad,
aish ki haal >>>
🤪💔



Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

nice ff

update soooooooooooooon



thank youuuuu




thanksssss




uhuh yes sir!


Originally posted by: Liashna

Are yaar, tum update kab karogi..... Mein budhi ho gayi intezaar karte karte!!!!!


If u won't update soon, then won't talk to u!!!!!



im doing it! idid it! see!
n ur not old! remember... age is just a number, say it with me now: age is just a number😆😆😆

see now ur contradicting urself, ur talking to me!!!

Originally posted by: Ovi_Tanni

Hi mallu!!!sorry i dnt knw ur name....
Ur update is very nice....plzzz pm me when u ll update....plzzz



hey! im aish! n ur.. tanni?
thank youuuuuuu
n ive buddied u so now yay for you! u get everything😆


Originally posted by: sidma_love

update soon nikammi😈


i am i am!



thanks😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

heyyyyyyyyyyyy

finally u updated😛

its like ages since u updated😈

dis update was really very hilarious🤣

i hv seen dis happening😃

my cousin was jst as Sid in dis update n i was like Arjun😆

he was really a darpok jst as Sid in dis update🤣

nxt tym plsss cont soon n a longer update😈

Veena

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
nice update buddy........thnx 4 d PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Aish 🤗

Finally u updated 😆😆

I love love love dis update
It was hilarious 🤣🤣

Sid's dreams 🤣🤣🤣

And Shanky giving training to his would b son in law😆

Continue superrrrrrr soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
I was giggling while reading this!! Typical sid!! Thank goodness Shashank was there!!😆😆
And I could complain thats its way too short Aish but I forgive you since your busy doing nothing!!😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Aish 🤗

I LOVE this update yaar
Sid and his dreams😆😆
typical Sid😛

Shanky giving pep talk to his would be son-in-law😆
niceeeeeeeee

plzzzz update soon nikammi....waran I will have to strt my nikammi giri over here 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Awww lovely update....sid's dream was too good....continue soon..
...Noorya... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Aishhhhh😃
dude that was amazing yaar!!🤣🤣🤣
poor Sid even in dreams he gets jor ke fataks🤣
and how is Arjun...jo bhi hai he seems deamn hilarious yaar😆
and by God what a sasur is Shashank re😲 munde ko pe talks deta hai to pataoing his daughter for shaadi🤣🤣🤣
only you can think about such scene yaar...
air nikammi dont be too busy doin nothing kyunki dhamkiz will welcome u very soon😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
I swear and promise I will come back soon to reply to EVERY single on of these comments, Really.
But I gotta rush right now, so pleaseeeeeeeeee be patient. For now, here's the next part 😃 along with a special treat from my friend Natasha [Tashu/Natashu.] It should give you some perception of who will be entering soon enough and the general mood so keep reading!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HnZEM11cBpQ[/YOUTUBE]
and yes, i did randomly decide to start naming my chapters...


Part 4: Excited Murmers

Shashank cleared his throat. "Excuse me!" he called out into the microphone, "may I have your attention please?"

The crowd at the annual Gupta New Year Party quieted down, listening in as one of the most esteemed surgeons in India addressed them. Shashank grinned down at the crowd from the stage, "First of all, I would like to invite my dear friend, Romit Modi on stage."

A murmur ran through the crowd as one of Delhi's most successful businessmen appeared from within the crowd, adjusting his suit as his charming smile overtook his face. The two elderly men gave each other a hug before turning to face the crowd once again.

"So friends, we have a huge announcement" Shashank said. Picking up on his lead, Romit continued, "Our families have been friends for years, but now," he paused, building up the anticipation. Turning to his friend, Romit flashed him the same mischievous grin he had passed onto his son. Picking up on his clue Shashank began speaking again, "but now'well, why don't we just show you?" Beaming as well, he pointed to a giant projector which had unraveled from the ceiling.

The camera zoomed in so that the party goers could clearly see the nervous Siddhant and anxious Rhiddima out on the patio a mere few feet away.

Seemingly letting out a deep breath, Siddhant reached into his pocket, and knelt in front of her, grabbing a hand to hold and caress. The party fell even more silent as he began to speak up towards Rhiddima. Her overjoyed eyes filled up as he began his spiel.

=ll=

He had of course, practiced this very spiel a hundred times over the past few months, at least he had practiced a spiel. Well many. The problem now was that he seemed to have forgotten all of them. Closing his eyes he took another breath,

"Rhiddima."

"O god. Ok."

He closed his eyes and paused to take another nervous breath as her hand clasped urgently at his.

"Rhiddima Gupta, I have never, ever, met anyone more annoying or bossy or confusing as you." he began. Feeling her hand slack in his, Siddhant allowed himself a small smile as he opened his eyes. Giving her hand a gentle squeeze he brought up the small box. "But I've also never met someone so intelligent, beautiful, adorable, cute, self confident, and simply amazing before either. I swear to you that you're the first thing I think about every day and the last thing I think about too. According to everyone else, you're all I ever talk about too. I don't know about all that. All I know is that I have never, ever, loved anyone like I love you. I have never thought about anyone in my whole life as much as I think about you in a day. I will never find anyone like you, and that's why I know that I would be the world's biggest idiot, if I didn't ask you to marry me right now."

He paused to take a breath as she gasped, laughing and crying at the same time. Giving her a moment he continued, "Rhiddima Gupta, please, please! Will you annoy me, and confuse me, and boss me around for the rest of my life? Will you love me for the rest of my life'as my wife?"

"YES!" she screamed, "YES, YES, YES!!!!!!" Barely containing her enthusiasm, Rhiddima was bouncing up and down, literally jumping in joy.

Letting out the breath he had unwittingly been holding, Siddhant laughed in joy, slipping the platinum and diamond ring onto her waiting hand. He stood up shakily, unwilling to test and see if this proposal was a dream too. It finally sunk in as she leaped into his arms. "I love you Siddhant Modi," she gasped in excitement, "O god I love you!"

He held her close; burying her into a smothering hug as he swung around. "I can't believe this," he replied. Still breathless, he continued, "I love you too Rhidi, oh so much!"

=ll=

The lovers pulled apart in surprise as applause erupted from the party indoors and the doors leading to the patio opened.

Led by the two proud fathers, a crowd emerged, shouting one large anthem of "CONGRATULATIONS!" at the top of their lungs. Siddhant and Rhiddima stepped apart as their fathers approached, gathering their children into hugs.

Shashank gently laid a hand on his daughter's head. In a brief moment of melancholy, he allowed himself to see his wife's smile radiating from that of their most beautiful creation. "Your mother would be so proud, beta, "he said softly. Rhiddima smiled, pausing for a moment she asked, "But why papa? We haven't even run away yet!"

Romit's infectious laugh rang out from beside them, "you still can you know," he said teasingly. "Karcha kam padenge!"

Siddhant rolled his eyes, "dad!"

Rhiddima giggled, pushing her now fianc over to give her father-in-law a bear hug. Still tucked under his arm, she looked up to face him. "No chance dad, we already planned out a huge wedding!" she grinned up at him, matching his impish smile. Romit quirked his eyebrows, "Oh?" he said inquisitively.

Shashank exchanged amused glances with him, turning them to a perplexed Siddhant, "We did?" Sid ventured to ask. Rhiddima emerged from the hug, shrugging, "I don't know about you, but I did." Proclaiming this, she walked away from the astonished men to greet the guests and accepts their wishes.

Sid stood between the two fathers, bewildered. He had just proposed and his wedding was supposedly already planned. Wow.

"Ow!" he massaged the back of his head where he had just earned two swats, "what was that for?!" he exclaimed.

"For being so transparent," his father replied.

"And for taking so long 'bout it," Shashank added. Straightening their ties, the two men walked off too, leaving Sid alone to contemplate what he had just walked- no sprinted, right into.


Edited by malluangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
heyyyyyyyyyyy Aishu
u updated ur ff den y didnt u pm me
nyc part
finallyyy Sid proposed Riddhima
pls cont soon n pm me
Veena

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