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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadiq24

Awesome update thanks
Dev is freaking geet out
Continue soon

Thank you so much! will continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved it
aww the mall scene was so cute
loved the kiss scene
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Thank you so much!! I will update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kadds02

Luved ur writing
So add me to ur PM list

-Kads

kads thanx so much!!! You are on the pm list!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

loved da update

do continue
it was amazing

Sweet cherry! Thank you so much!! I will update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kellz

dev is a creep
i knew that already
good thinking on dadimaa;s part
wht is dev doing at the mall?

Thanx so much!! Will update soon! and ur answer to ur question 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vaniabi

hey superbbbbbbbbbb update......................poor geet struggles to avoid dev na................thank god she went to mall n maan bhi there ................... it was nice....................but in ur precap
dev😡 tooooooooooo,really dev is irritating yaar..................looking fwd......................

hey vaniabi: thank you so much! will update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

hi....

just compltd readng all d updates....
ds is superb dear.... loved it...
thnx a lot 4 d pm.. do cont soon..

wow u read all 14 parts? Thank you so much!!! I will update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys: Sorry for the delay....here is the next update! Hope you guys liked it! 😆😆😆 and sorry in advance if it is short and not up to your guys expectations! 😳

Chapter 15

Geet went to the store to buy some clothes for Sargam. It has been half and hour since she saw Maan. She started getting worried and wondered where he could be. She tried calling his cell but it was turned off. "Should I leave and search for Maan?" "What if I leave this shop and he comes here?" "hey Babaji, please let him come here soon" She was deep in her thoughts when someone tapped on her shoulders. She got happy and turned around "Maan you are finally here" but to her shock it was Dev.

Dev: umm I got bored at home so Dadima said to come to the mall
Geet: ji woh mujhe laga ki...
Dev: You said that you are looking for a dress for Sargam so I searched every kid store until I found you
Geet: Ji woh mein...
Dev: I hope you don't mind, if you are you done we can go to lunch together and pick Sargam up from school.
Geet: No, that is fine. I am not done yet, you can go home if you are bored (Maan kaha ho aap and started looking toward the entrance of the shop)
Dev: hmm I don't mind waiting for you here. I will buy something for Sargam too.
Geet: Ji uski koyi zarroot nahi hai
Dev: No, I want to get something for her. There are some other kids store in the mall. Let's go there.
Geet: ji no I am fine here (Still looking toward the entrance)
"Dev what are you doing here" Dev turned around and saw Maan
Dev: "What are you doing here? You were at work right?"
Maan: "I was but when Geet called me to let me know she is going to the mall. I thought I might join her too"
Dev (upset): "oh ok, Dadima told me to come here since I was getting bored at home"
Geet: "Maan aap kaha chale gaye the..I was so worried"
Maan: "Sorry Geet, I went to buy you this saree"
Geet: "Saree buy karne ki kya zaroot thi"
Maan: "Dev I don't understand women sometimes...You buy them stuff they have problems and when you don't buy them they have a problem"
Dev: "Yes, you are right, well anyway I should go home then. You guys can enjoy the shopping"
Maan: "No way, lets go have lunch before going home"
Dev: No Maan. It is fine.
Maan: "Geet tell him to come have lunch with us"
Geet (hesitant): "Why don't you join us Dev"
Dev (got happy): "Geet since you asked me, I will come"

Geet gave a weak smile to Dev and looked at Maan. Maan noticed her uneasiness but couldn't figure out why. All three had their lunch, Maan noticed that Geet wasn't eating as much. She kept her head down the whole time while Dev and Maan talked.
Maan: "Dev since you are bored why don't you come to work with me. I will show you around."
Dev looking at Geet: "Maan no that is fine. I might just go home and spend time with Dadima again"
Geet "Ji Dev Maan is right. You will be more familiarized with the office"
Maan: "See even Geet said it. Come to the office, Geet can go home with the car with Sargam"
Dev: "No Maan I..." (Maan cut him off)
Maan: "Dev I don't wan to hear it. Come to the office we are going now"
Geet: "Maan aap dono office jayiye mein jaa rahi hoon"
Maan: "Alright, we will be home early"
Geet: "Ji" She was glad that Dev will be at work with Maan. Before leaving she looked toward Dev who was looking at her with anger. she got scared looking at his eyes. "I have to talk to Maan today, no matter what"

Geet as usual got busy with Sargam and making food for everyone for dinner. Sargam always spends her time with Dadima while waiting for Maan to come home from work. She kept on thinking about the incident today at the mall. She was really scared with the look that Dev gave while leaving the mall. She had to talk to Maan and didn't know how to bring up the subject with him. She didn't want to create any misunderstanding between each other and between Maan and Dev.

Maan: "Geet what are you doing. You are burning the food"
Geet came out of her thoughts: "huh when did you came"
Maan: "I came home about 5 minutes ago and I came here to get some water and saw you here dozing off...where is your mind?"
Geet: "huh no where...umm I will get the food ready"
Maan: "Geet is everything ok, I have been noticing that you are acting different lately"
Geet looked down: "ji everything is fine"
Maan came up to Geet, slowly pulled her chin up so that he can see her eyes: "Geet tell me what happend"
Geet: "Ji woh..."
Dev: "Maan mujhe...ohh am sorry"
Maan backed up a little from Geet: "hmm no its fine"
Dev: "Geet do you need any help with setting up the table?"
Geet: "Ji nahi"
Maan looked at Dev: "Dev she will tell Nakul to set up the table"
Dev looks at Geet: "Alright, I am going to play with Sargam before dinner"
Maan: "Geet now tell me what is going on?"
Geet: "Ji woh mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai"
Maan holds her face: "hmm bolo"
Geet: "woh..."
Sargam: "mama dinner kab hai?"
Maan: "Sargam go outside and play, dinner will be ready soon" (angry)
Geet: "Sargam meri bachi come and help your mama with dinner"
Sargam: "Alright mama"
Maan: "Geet humari baat"
Geet: "Maan aap bahar jaaiye"
Maan: "humari baat kahtam nahi hui" (left giving Geet an angry look)

Everyone ate their dinner quietly. Maan barley ate and kept thinking about what Geet have to tell him. Geet didn't eat either but kept herself with Sargam and ignoring Maan's look. She knew that he is thinking about what she has to tell him. He can't stand it when she is upset with anything and he doesn't know the reason behind it. He couldn't take it anymore. He decided he has to talk to Geet right now, no matter what.
Maan: "Nakul clear the table and the dishes. Dadima would you put Sargam to sleep. I have to talk to Geet about something important"

Maan got up and dragged Geet outside from the dinning table to their car and drove off. He didn't care when Dev and Dadima were calling him from behind. He stopped the car in the middle of nowhere and turned off the car. Maan looked at Geet who had her head down. He couldn't take her silence anymore. He needed to know what was on her mind. "Ok now tell me what is going on"


Precap: Will Maan believe Geet???

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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the Update
That Dev is soooo Irritating..😡
Finally...I hope Maan Believes geet..
Loved the update..Awesome..pls
Continue soon
Thanks for the Pm!!:)

~Shreya~
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow this good update waiting for long

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