Ever since I knew you! (my 1st ever FF)Prt 2 updtd

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okie friends,

Thanks to all my friends on IF...specially Shimzie and Nits for encouraging me to try my hands on writing an OS or a FF.😳
I had thought of trying my hands on an OS, and as I sat on my royal chair with my laptop and decaffeinated coffee, I did feel like a novel writer!😃
With 1000s of thoughts accumulated on how I should begin, I started drafting an outline that I wanted to start and end in a ONE SHOT!
But anybody who knows me is aware how my nature in detailing my subjects are!šŸ˜†
So the OS kept extending and the details provoked me to stop drafting an OS and start thinking of a full fledged FF.
Since I am in love with the names Armaan and Ridhima, I decided to work on these two names as the protagonists of my story!
But other than the names, my story has nothing to connect with DMG, coz in my story, AR are not from any medical backgrounds.

Here are the outlines of my FIRST ever effort in creating an FF. I call it " Ever since I knew you..." Please let me know if you want me to continue. I want an honest feedback, coz I am surely happy making posts. This one is just for the people who have appreciated my writing!😳

Armaan Malhotra: Born and bought up in the United States of America this guy has dated numerous girls but still does not know what the power of LOVE is! His dad owns a motel in New York, and Armaan goes there just becoz the housekeepers are young, sexy and captivating! šŸ˜‰ Yep, the flirt that he is, he is still not aware that a girl from India is on her way to sway him away from his feet😳..he is still wondering what he needs to do to earn his bread and butter..though he is sure of one thing...its not gonna be Mr Malhotra's motel...lets see wat destiny has in store for him!😃

Ridhima Kapoor: A girl born and bought up in Mumbai, India. She comes from a metropolitan city, is modern enough to wear sleeveless tops and short skirts but uniquely conservative with her thoughts where she believes that the man who shall be her 1st love shall be the guy she shall finally marry! And since she is not very sure of what she wants in her life as a life-partner, she keeps pestering her dad to choose someone for her! Precisely, she wants a husband just like her Dad, who happens to be a business tycoon in Mumbai! 😳..She has always been her Dad's little princess and has never been told by her dad what she should be doing and what she should not, Coz Mr Kapoor trusts her daughter's decisions. 😳She is coming to NY soon, for further studies in the field of software technology! 😃Oh yeah, I forgot to mention the link between the malhotras and Kapoors! Armaan and Ridhima's moms happen to be childhood friends!...and they just met each other on face-book a few months ago!😳

So let me know how keen you guys are to know more about these two! I am also planning to bring in a few more characters to these two's life!
And for a change, I might just keep this FF pure simple and all romantic...not much of depression!!!😃
Shimzie, Nits...hope I am able to do justice to your expectations!
Love ya,
Pri😳

Update list:
Part ONE: Pg 3
Part TWO: Pg 4
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ShimzAR4EVER thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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priiiiiiiiiii.wat an awesomeee beginning..something thatz not related to medicine..ooo i like!!!! even though i lovee the medical backdrop..but this will be kinda HATKEšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

u need to continue, ASAP!!
and thank u sooooooooooooooooooooo much for doing this..seriously.. muahhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShimzAR4EVER

priiiiiiiiiii.wat an awesomeee beginning..something thatz not related to medicine..ooo i like!!!! even though i lovee the medical backdrop..but this will be kinda HATKEšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

u need to continue, ASAP!!
and thank u sooooooooooooooooooooo much for doing this..seriously.. muahhhhhh



Awwww...thanks to you Shimzie. I am actually loving this!šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
I started with an OS, but saw some scope to this storyline for an FF..
though, this story shall be a short one...thats wat I intend...coz this one is my first FF.
I shall try to get the love story started soon...lets see how it goes.
but if you guys want me to hurry up with their first meeting (which I kinda not wanna do)...let me know!
I can take it from there!Love,
Pri


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: IloveARLove



Awwww...thanks to you Shimzie. I am actually loving this!šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
I started with an OS, but saw some scope to this storyline for an FF..
though, this story shall be a short one...thats wat I intend...coz this one is my first FF.
I shall try to get the love story started soon...lets see how it goes.
but if you guys want me to hurry up with their first meeting (which I kinda not wanna do)...let me know!
I can take it from there!Love,
Pri


if waiting can give us an AWESOME first meeting..then we shall wait!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy pri....
nice to see tht ur tryin ur hand in ffz
nd i do knw ur detail oriented writing
and am lukin forward to read more n more of it!!
sio plss do update soon........
the concept is different!!
nd am dyin to see wht hapnz nxt
thnx so much fr the PM
n writeee soooooonnnnnnnnnn

-kinnari
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinnarik

heyy pri....
nice to see tht ur tryin ur hand in ffz
nd i do knw ur detail oriented writing
and am lukin forward to read more n more of it!!
sio plss do update soon........
the concept is different!!
nd am dyin to see wht hapnz nxt
thnx so much fr the PM
n writeee soooooonnnnnnnnnn

-kinnari



Awww thanks so much Kinnari..
I shall come up with the next update by tommorow!
Hope you like the progress!
Love,
Pri

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx 4 the pm pri😊
its looks really interesting
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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vry nice pri....loved the start....plz do continue and want loooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttssssssssssssssss of ar love....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic
I will like to have a different backdrop for Armaan & Riddhima's lovestory. I will really like DMG3 to come with entirely different story but old cast. I will also love to see KW in the show if possible. No triangles please. Just want to enjoy KAKA as brothers, friends/enemies like Rahul Armaan relationship.....
This backdrop seems so perfect to fit KSG's style. excellent carry one plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please pm me if AbhiNiki are in here!

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