^^Love Knows No Boundaries^^ MoNaya FF (completed)

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Riaaa 🤗 Sanzz!!!🤗🤗🤗 OMFGGGOMGGGOMGGG 🤪 ☺️ The Best Updare Everrr . aaawww...thank you sooo much!!!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗 From The Beginning To End Was Just Simply Perfect . I Especially Just Adored Ther Last Scene :) Me too...i was blushing like hell while writing that!! ☺️☺️It Was TOOO TOOO TOOO Good 😳 I'm Simply Speechless . & Loved The Last Scene & It Was SHOO Trueee Once Again They Become One, Became MoNaya <33 😍 Unhe toh ek hona hi tha...warna FF adhoora reh jaata! 😛 I Hope We Get To See Mohit & Sanaya In Real Become One In Sacred Bond Of Marriage :] Heyyy...me also waiting for that eagerly!!! ☺️☺️& Can't Wait For Epilouge . I Have REQ 😳 Aakpa hukm sar aankhon par madam!! 😳 Pleashhh Show Us MoNaya To Be Parents From The Beginning Where They Get To Know About The Good News After Sanaya Faint//Vomit Or Something & Then He Tolerating Her Moodswings 😆 & YOU Have To Show The Phase Of Nine Months . It's Gonna Be Extremely Fun Hon :) & You Can Take A Leap Too Like After 2 Yearss Or Something Coz Sanaya Don't Want Child In One Year & Wants To Spend Her Tym With Her Baby Mohit !! ☺️ Let Them Live In Peace In One Year :) Pleashhh Let This Wish Be Fullfilled 😳 I SOOO Want To Imagine MoNaya Like Parents . How Mohit Will Be Worry When Sanaya Feel Sick & Then They Get To Know About The Good News . Mohit Take Cares Of Sanaya & Her Moodswings, Even Little Pain Worry Him AWWW 😍 😆 They Holding Their Child . Just Perfect <33 * 😳 Touchwood * I Can SOOO Imagine Them In Real But I Want YOU To Write It Coz I Know You Are TOOO Good At These Stuff . Love YOU ! 🤗 && Now You Get LONGGG Comment Also SOOO You Have To Listen To Meee Riaaa Jeee 😆

Hmm... so I get it... Kaafi achhi request hai!! 😃
I'll surely think over it... coz right now im busy with exam preparations...
So you have to bear with me for a long time!! Kindly try to jhelofy me!! 😆
But one thing is for sure... the sequel will include as much as monaya romance you wish for! 😉
So uski chinta mat karo... jab writer main hun, toh MoNaya romance zarur hoga! 😳😳
And yup I'll also make MoNaya parents to a sweet kid... ab wo boy hoga, girl hogi, ya twins honge, ye toh sequel mein pata chalega!

Till then keep dreaming, drooling, and reading my other FFs!!

Loadz of luv and hugs!!! 🤗🤗🤗
Ria! 🤗

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Ayesha

@..-Ayesshhaa-..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

loved MoNaya 😍
sorry for the late comment !!
best of luck for your future and continue soon!!
and please try to give romantic updates in future as well
love <3
Ayesha

Edited by Ayesha_LuvSaJan - 13 years ago

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fend

@fend

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#863

hey ria 🤗it was wonderful update👏👏
👏👏everything u wrote was just perfectly written ⭐️👏n ending was just soo beautiful👏👏
👏i m speecheless it seriously took me to monaya dreamland☺️😍 i was blushng throughout while reading it☺️☺️
☺️loved the saree scene it was superb the way mohit helped her to wear the saree😍
it was soo adrable😳 omggg mohit was soo damn romantic☺️ every touch n kiss
of his made san blush like hell n just lost in him 😍☺️
☺️loved the reception scene it was awesome loved the whole song sequnce
the song choosen also was very nice 👏
now cmg to buaji scene the way she said ek saal ke ander pehla😆 poor san shez so sweat ❤️
she became all confused really loved her expression it was soo cute😳
n now cmg to the last scene loved it a lot it was just the best n soo januable
loved the way like a small kid san was opening the gifts n when she cums across the blue saree
n it was gifted to her by mohit only the way she started blushing hayeee ☺️😍
loved their sweat romance at the end both showering their love for each other 😍☺️beautifully wirtten👏 n this line just loved it was perfect ❤️⭐️⭐️
And once again they became one; once again, they became 'MoNaya'.
brilliant piece of writing👏👏 kudos for wrting this mindblowing beautiful FF👏👏 i will miss it a lot please cumback soon with its sequel will be waiting for it😃 n thanks for the pm

Edited by fend - 13 years ago

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Thank You For Replying =) 😳

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Shreya

@SM_317

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

edited my commnt on pg 128

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: gunurlove
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As per your Request Ria...finally i m going to Edit my comment😃 Aaawww... thats so sweet of youu!! 😳😳

finally u ended up this Veryyy cute FF...😔 I had to do that... Warna mujhe ye FF end karke achha thodi na lag raha hai! 😔

Thanks for giving us such a Fantastic and Wonderful update on Monaya...and special thanks for last long part.😳...it was the bestest part ever...Beautiful ending...👏 Thanks alot dear...🤗🤗. It really means to me!! 🤗🤗

Loved Confuse Sanaya alot when she was being tangle with Saree..it was so funny...i was imagining the irritate Sanaya and the way she wrapped Saree around herself like bedsheet...it made me laugh...😆😆..u were written this scene so beautifully when someone wear Saree 1st time and even dont know abt how to put it on...Very nicely wriiten.😳 I know... Because when I had to wear a saaree for the first time, I also wrapped it around myself! 🤣😆

And the Cutest part when Mohit helped her while wearing Sarree...no doubt Sanaya looks indeed very Gorgeouse and beautiful in Sarree..❤️ I imagined and wrote it down!! And you too imagined and read it... toh use beautiful lagna hi tha! 😳😉😳

Thanksfully Nisha came...that too on what a perfect time...😉 Shez a true frnd of Monaya indeed...after Monaya i loved her character most..throughout in this FF...and i was really missing her on thier marriage..afterall she made this mariage possible na..😳 Yeah I agree... she's one of the most supportive character in this FF! 😛😃

that Bua part was so hillariouse...Sanaya is really vry innocent yaar...hamen samajh aa gai usko nai ai.k.."bua ek saal me pehla chahti kya he"😉😆 Lollzz...😆 ispar comment na hi karun toh achha hai! 🤣

oh God so cute it was...and Sanaya's statement.."abi to mai khud me ek choti si baby hun" so sweeettt...❤️ I agree... she's still a baby to mohit!! 😳😳

Lastly...My most fav scene in this whole update was that room and gifts scene...too much beautiful...the way she was unwrapping all the gifts like a kid...i can undestand she will be looking so cute and innocent to Mohit...❤️

this scene was fabulouse..n Awesome...loved it alot...u was written it so nicely..without putting a so much romance..u portrayed the feelings of newly married lovely couple in Excellent way...Gud Work Ria...overall its been a Very Beautiful and mindblowing ff...

plzzz come back soon with its new thread...we'll be waiting for u..All the Best for ur Exams...🤗🤗🤗

Thanks for the pm...

Thanks for giving sooo sweeet comment rija!! 🤗🤗
I'll surely come back with the sequel ss very soon... 😳😳😳
Till then keep drooling over and dreaming of MoNaya!! 😉😳
You know, mujhe toh is FF ke aadhe se zyada romantic updates dreaming se hi mila hai! 😉😆

Thanks for your wishes... Will surely do well in exams! 😎

Love,
Ria 🤗

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: preety88
wonderful ending...monaya were cute...cant wait for the epilouge

Thanks dear!! 😊

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: princess_sara
👏👏Res... hahahahahahahaha...

*Unress*

OMG...I M LOST...!!!!!!!
I MONAYA DREAM LAND...!!!!!!😍☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Yaar yeh tu ne kya ker diya ????
Mujhe itna Blush ker waya ke... I M DEAD...!!!!!!

Sach mein...tu ne sab kuch tod dala...Itna intense update tha nah...
i was like...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
And Mohit...He is such a Romantic hai nah...Phewww...i m still in that Dreaming World..
He Help Sanaya to wear Her Saree...!!! My Goshhh...
seriouslyyy i blushd even more than Sanaya did...
And aur sweeet sanaya...Such a sweetheart she is...
that scene was roflling..."Shadi ke baad Pehla...!!!!...Hahahahaa...
Then back to Monaya scenes...
Mohit was sooo naughty..."Jo kaam main ker sakta hu...Usi kaam ko Bigaad bhi sakta hu..."...OMG...

U Deserve this
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But nowww i m SADDD...😭
Enddd of ur FF ...
Plzzz yaaar jaldi se sequel start ker nah...!!!
Plzzz sweeetyy...⭐️

I m gonna Miss ur FF Sooo Muchh...

Luv u,

Sarah.

Hey Sara!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗
We've never talked personally, but still its nice to see your comments on my FF... 😳😳
And ye comment toh... simply a BIG thanks to you for such encouraging comment! 🤗🤗
I can understand yaar... jitna blush tune ye update padhte time kiya, utna hi blush maine ise likhte time kiya!! ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
And see I'm still blushing!! ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Thank God I remained successful in sending you to MoNaya dreamland!! 😎😎 This means that my update was really very nice!! 😳😳
And yup mohit is extremely naughty... bas wo sabke saamne dikhaata nahi hai! 😉😳😆
And that's why san always says him an unromantic person! 😆😆

Thank you sooo much for the round of applause!!!!😳😛 It really means to me!! 😳😳
And please don't be sad dear!!! I'll be soon back with the sequel SS!! 😳😳
Its a PROMISE TO YOU AND EVERYONE!! 😳😳😳
Bas I need a break so that I can give more time to studies, and once my exams are over, you'll get the sequel soon!! 😳

Love youu too!! 🤗🤗
Ria. 🤗