New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

awesome...

i loved the rapid fire.........

incredibly beautiful

keep writing..

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pop77

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

Nice FF..I really enjoy reading your FF..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#393

ok...I know I'm behind, but that's what the week-end is for, right?

Ok Part 12: maan is perfection...love how he takes charge!! And i especially love how you described his inner turmoils!!! Loved the dosti kya vada line...genius!!!👏

Part 13: OMG!!! maan god the warm tingling feeling!!! UFF!!!😍 Ilove their little meeting on the roof and holding hands...so beautiful!!!

Part 14:YES Vegas!!! But 1st I could feel geet's pain when she talked about dev to meera! poor baby...so sad!!! My heart melted, but meera and yash are the best! party in vegas...awesome!! This is getting so good!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#394

Part 15: so cute...loved it! The dare part was so funny and chweet! And maneet at the poolside and their conversation! yep..i'm in heaven!!!

Part 16: YES!! Both sitting on the bench talking away! love how geet apologizes for making him mad and their deal!!! He's so caring!!!! This part was nicely executed...self-preservations...so realsitic handled!!!!

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reea88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#395

so lovely and romantic.. do con..

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payal956

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Posted: 14 years ago

#396

Hey this is Awesome, could me message me with updates??

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Posted: 14 years ago

#397

Part 17: I love how he says he's addicted to her!!! OMG! That's an effing brilliant line!! Geet's album idea is so cute!! dadi is gonna get an awesome future bahurani!! YAY!!!!! I love how in the beginning he notices her and watches her...gave me a chill! And poor soul prayed she would say yes to trying on the ear rings!!! So lovely!! And oh her "secret stash"...so cute!! Love them...i loved this part..mostly b/c both were genuinely happy and no stupid dev!!!

Ok...i'm gonna try to finish as much as i can tom...my mom is yelling at me to go to bed!!! But so excited about part 18!!!!!

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Manpreet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome
Update!!! At first i saw that this update was realllllly long but when I started reading it, it went by really fast. haha!

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Tanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Phew! Read it in one go..going back to read again..it's just mind blowing..BTW your french is excellent Mon amie..Thank you so much for your lovely updates..but I admit ..am greeeedy for more...😉

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blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#400

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb right from each n every moment was soooooooo nice n i'm happy to see maaneet closeness n their feeling of each other n rapid fire session it was awesome................n maan n his secret was soooooooo precious yaar n his flower delivery ..............hmm.................sooooooooooooooo dreamyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy n finally chocolate cake for maaneet n the reason behind it was superbbbbbbbbbbbb so finally geet to accept the cake without any complaints.....................i throughly enjoyed this part............very welll written👏....................................