FF: Out Of Darkness *Thread - 1* - Page 98

Originally posted by: sindu555

just read part 15 😒

it was sickening ..... i felt like killing all of them .....

they're all psychos ... lunatics ... including her damn father ....

..... how do you manage to write all this?

... am so disturbed reading this.... let alone having the guts to write something this torturous.....

the precap is even more disturbing .... i dont think i have the courage and the heart to read the next update .... but i know i'll eventually end up reading it and getting more depressed too 😭

anxiously waiting for slightly happier updates 😃

love

Sana

Sana, I know it's hard to read such angst but I have read too many novels that were true stories of the abuse and torture the young children went through... I guess that's why I am able to write this ff because I know that in reality the abuse some unfortunate ones go through is much worse then the abuse Geet went through... the happier parts are coming soon...

Originally posted by: Asha2010

Hey I don't know how did you write those cruel scenes? My heart was wrenching while reading it, very nicely written and I must say very detailed. Please add me to your PM list.

But please I don't have courage to read more cruelty on Geet, it is just unbearable, what was your inspiration to write this cruel kind of a story, I feel like I can't even read then it is impossible for me to write it.

Angst is my forte so it's easier for me to write such scenes and a lot harder to write romantic scenes.... my inspiration came from too many sources, all the non-fiction books I have read on child abuse inspired me to write such a story....

Originally posted by: princessbabli

Hey angel
Just finished reading previous 11 parts and its wow amazing awesome and out of d world
U hv maintained d intrigue and mystery factor too well thru out d story
Reading ur ff I felt like as if watching it on tv
Must say u hv an amazing hand and grt hidden talent
Suggestions :
Geet hving a spark in her eye seeing d kulfi and maan noticing and giving it 2 her
Maan giving her anything she needs and not allowing her 2 get up 4m bed and doing any work and maan taking leave 4m office to tc of geet
Maan discovering abt manu who i feel is kirty 's bf
Angel wen r u going 2 updt dear pls updt soon i m getting restless and pls updt more often (sry 4 making such a long post i rly wanted 2 express my gratitude 4 providing such entertaining ff 2 me)
love
Babli

Babli, the first think i would like to let you know is that I LOVE reading long comments so please do post long comments because it gives me an insight to how the readers are perceiving the characters and their thoughts on the updates....

I am glad you read all the parts and hopefully have a full understanding of the story and all the characters.... thank you for reading my ff....

as for your suggestions.... i promise i will have the kulfi scene between maaneet...... I have already written few scenes where Maan is taking care of Geet....

alright I am going to flat out say it since you are still stuck with the whole Manu being Kitry's bf.... Manu is not Kirty's boyfriend.... 😆

Originally posted by: kooliio

Awesome FF...!!!

OMG! I felt so bad for geet...!!!

Her father and brother beat her like she is not a human...!!!

They are sooo horrible 🤬 ...!!!

Thank God she is out of that hell now...!!!

Loved maan and his family...they are all sweet..!!!

"Kirty saw the glimpse of him in that girl but still her mind kept hoping she was not the one. Should she tell them? but she wasn't even sure if it was really her, maybe it was some other girl, there can be many people with the same name in that town. Just because she is from Hushiarpur and her name happens to be Geet doesn't mean she is her . Kirty tried to justify her mind, it would not be right to tell them, one was in New York attending an important business meeting while the other one was in London completing his last year of internship"

Is kirty here talking about Geet's biological Dad and brother???

Cant wait for the next part...!!!

Please continue soon...!!!

The abuse Geet suffered is horrible but it is something that happens in real to many unfortunate young kids....

As for who Kirty is talking about.... that is a mystery that will take sometime to be solved....

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

babes are u alive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??

barely..... 🤢

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Will post the update soon.... editing it right now so will definitely post it tonight....

hey plz update soon waiting for long tym

Originally posted by: marde

hey plz update soon waiting for long tym

Will update in an hour... 😛

i really like ur ff please add me to ur pm list

hey u haven't updated..... plz update soon plz plz