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nikipuki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#571

That was a a very tender and sweet update. Geet perhaps at the juncture of maybe just maybe lowering her defenses. Poor girl hasn't been treated well since 10 years! That's a long time to bear abuse......I'm just glad that all her experiences thus far after marriage have been positive.

Girl, your writing is very captivating.

PS How come she is wearing a chudidar for muh-dikai? Would't it be traditional to wear a sari?

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#572

Awesum jus loved it

Geet is such a sweetheart

I jus loved her gesture wen she kissed back Maan on nose as a Thank U

Marjawa meri sweet si Geet ki innocence par

Loved NT's care

She is really a sweetheart

The way she cares for her talks to her n all is fabest fab

Maan was loosing himself in her

He was madly following for her

Loved it

Update soon

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#573

Very well written part....... So pati is falling in love wid wife..... Poor maan wifey dosen't know anything abt husband wife....... She was comparing maan wid her brothers nd dad......OMG.

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#574

hey atlast u updated yaar.............
am waitng for u r update sooooooooooo long..........ya it was nice maaneet moments,i loved it.........................wanna maaneet romance more n i wanna atleast 2 updates for a week,..............
please do it na...................update ASAP..............

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#575

awesome,shall i say first ray of light ignited by maan in the dark life of geet. beautiful felt very happy knowing geet feelings. she is feeling secured in his company. loves geet when she refer maan as pati. waiting for next update.