FF: Out Of Darkness *Thread - 1* - Page 33

geet still has not spoken a word!!!! maan seems to like his wife treating him wid such respect :P dev is on a wheelchair?!!! fab part

interesting pre-cap.. waiting for it.. the conversation between Maan and Geet..

fianlly maaneet talk lolz

hi angel.........

Ah, a beautiful update yet again! Awesome! Lolz at Naintara's thoughts about her brother telling dreadful things about her to Geet......and Naintara and Myra's bickers......really funny! Dev on wheelchair.....maybe he too was injured while trying to save his daughter Pari. Aww....he really loves NT a lot......nice! Hmm.....so everyone enjoyed the food cooked by Geet and Maan was feeling proud and happy.....and his understanding Geet's hesitation through her eyes.....really good! As of now Maan is really understanding.....it's good how all of them are trying to make her feel at ease and are patient with her......especially NT. Lolz at NT wanting Geet to be on her side and against Myra.....they are actually cute! I must say, I really like the way you are also focusing on the other characters too and developing their tracks as well without making it boring.....it makes this FF all the more interesting. Guess Geet will someday read that domestic crime book and come to know of the brutality inflicted upon her by her own family and not the in-laws. It's a damn intriguing FF....loving it! Do continue soon.

Also, add me already to the PM list of the SS you are planning on writing. I am hoping to read it real soon.😉

Angel

First of all some hugs for you 🤗 🤗 🤗

For some reason today my mood was totally off and I was unable shake the moodiness off 😔. But your FF did it. 🤗

Thanks you so much for that 🤗

You are a lifesaver 🤗

Now coming to the update 😃

Awesome update. At the cost of sounding redundant - you have a gift for writing that grips the viewer and draws them into the story to the point that they actually see the story happening before their very eyes. Very few writers have this knack and you are blessed with it. Thank you for sharing it with us. 🤗

I loved this update. You brought out Geet's doubts, her fear and her happiness beautifully. Loved the scenes where NT realizes that Geet is scared and corrects herself.
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The rivalry between Myra and NT was hilarious 🤣 🤣 and it was awesome how NT trapped Myra in her own web and made her touch Geet's feet 🤣 🤣. I have a feeling instead of Geet joining one or the other, she will be the glue that binds them together and will build bridges between the two. 😃

I have to mention this. I love how unlike the useless people writing Geet the series you make sure all characters get equal footage - the CVs of Geet should take lessons from you . Case in point the scene where Dev in a wheelchair observes NT watching Geet with a satisfied look on her face and feels happy. I loved that scene 👏 👏 👏

I enjoyed reading about Maan realizing that Geet will do nothing without his permission. Loved how he made her sit down, served her and made sure she ate. Loved his thoughts on how his wife makes better halwa than his grandmother 😆 😆 😆......... they say the way to a man's heart is through his stomach 🤣 🤣......I say Geet is already half way there 🤣 🤣.......she needs to make him a delicious lasagna and the man will gladly be her slave for life 🤣 🤣

The scene where Geet was showered with gifts was very well written 👍🏼. It was truly telling how she did not even take the gift until Maan told her it was ok to take it and immediately touched daadima's feet as Maan instructed her to . 😃

But I saved the best for the last. My most favorite scene of the lot is the scene where NT cajoles Geet to open her presents. You managed to weave so many facets together in that one scene - NT's thoughts on how she can only ever see Geet's eyes and cannot read the expressions on her face, NT's feelings about Myra and how she wants Geet to be on her side 🤣, Geet's hesitation and uneasiness in opening the gifts, Geet's reaction to being gifted a book as compared to her reaction at being gifted gold kangan. It is clear to NT where this girl's priorities lie. She knows that this girl is not greedy. 😃

It was heartening to see NT feeling bad that she was taking the book away from Geet even though she knew nothing good would come from Geet reading the book. It was endearing that NT told Geet about the library and she could have access to it at any time. NT is some ways will be the mother Geet lost and Geet will fill the emptiness in NT's soul that exists due to the loss of her daughter. These two souls need each other to heal the own wounds that life has given them. Let me be honest with you - I look forward to the burgeoning relationship between these too and Meera as much as I look forward to the establishment of a firm understanding and then the falling in love part of Maneet.

Myra coming and gifting Geet a cookbook on Italian food means that at some level she also cares for Geet and wants her to be happy with Maan. I would love to see the scenes you mentioned of Geet teaching the other two to cook. I think that would be very enjoyable to read.

Last but not the least NT better be very specific or Geet will start doing Jhadoo-pocha (sweeping and mopping) of their bedroom too 🤣 🤣

I think I have bored you enough for one day 🤣 🤣
Thanks once again 🤗
Jhan

Barely been a day since I read it all but can I say I am eagerly awaiting your next update..

thanks for update luv it can't comment rite now properly have tons of work from skool so for few days i won't b bothering u to update lol anyways luv the part of nt being so nice and maan being happy that everyone is complimenting geet and geet serving him before she served anyone how sweet gosh i will comment more later on thanks for updating the next part

Lovely update....i like how u r showing the relationship btw Naintara & geet ...and naintara and Myra..love it...it is so diff from other FF

Love it...it is so different from other ff....love the interaction between NT & Geet...and also btw NT & Myra, how they bicker