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Part4:-

Next day morning, Geet wake up early and doing her yoga .but she looks disturbed.

She came out from her room and standing alone in the terrace when some one said if u angry on me then tell me. But y r u hurting …. But geet stopped him and said don't u think I'm angry on u. who r u ? U r grand son of Savitri devi who saved my life. Nothing more we have in our relationship.

Maan:-geet. We r not just like this. u know very well and stop pretending...but again stop by geet and then geet leave the terrace with out any single word.

Maan stand there confused and shocked.

Then maan murmurs this girl is surely gone mad. But I have to tell her about my decision

Geet ready to leave for hospital when again maan said let's go.

Geet:- chachu I'm going. I don't want any one to come with me.

Maan:-Munshi jee. I'm also going with her. I don't want unwanted problem touch her gain.

Geet:-chachu, tell him. I'm not a kid and I can face those situations very well.

Maan:- munshi jee , tell her she is still kid and behave like this.

Geet:-chachu, but munshi jee said pls stop it both of them.I don't know what happen to geet yesterday night and now both of u behaving like small kid, don't u know aht kind problem we r facing now and still.

Geet:-oh chachu, I have to tell u something but not here alone.

Munshi jee:-I'll listen to u but right now U r going to ur hospital with maan baba.

Geet:- but.

Munshi jee:-No more argument about it now go.

Maan smiles like he won something.

Geet saw it and murmur dusht danav.

Maan heard it.

Both left for hospital.

In the hospital , geet to maan:-I'll be busy with patient …….

Maan:-hmmmm.

Geet murmur, dush danav, hmm, what hmm,go na.

Maan:- don't think too much, just go and check ur patient. I'll stay here.

Geet:-hmmmm….

Geet is very busy full day.

At lunch time, geet back from duty and sit in her cabin but saw a note from maan.

The note:-

Geet,

Just stay here. Don't go outside. I'll be back soon.

Maan

Geet:-I'll be back soon. Ok, I'll go outside………..only one thing he can do rightly giving order.

Geet just stepped outside and saw everything is normal.

Geet:- don't go outside.

But suddenly some one caught her wrist and pull her inside and said don't u have any patience, every time do wrong .don't u think any think before doing.

Geet struggle and said just leave me.

Maan:- yes, leave u . Just leave u for few seconds and u.

Geet:-Who r u to hold me like this or give order. u r no one .

Maan:-Look, geet, u r taking everything wrong. Don't mix two things.

Geet:- what two things, just leave me now. I have lots of work. Not like u who sits and nothing to do.

Maan smiled and said oh really.

Maan leaves her wrist and said let's go.we have to do some work.

Geet:-I'll not go with u captain Khurana.

Maan shocked to hear this and said captain Khurana.

Geet:-yes,

Maan feels sad but said geet. We r friends, I know u r angry on me but ….

Geet:- but what captain Khurana.if u think that u reject me and I'll cry here and waste buckets of water for u then u r wrong captain Khurana.

Munshi jee:- geettt.

Both maan and geet shocked to see munshi jee there.

Geet:- chachu, u here, any problem.

Maan:-munshi jee if there is any problem then u call me na.

Munshi jee:-no maan baba, everything ok. Then little pause and said Maan baba, dadi call u , she has some important thing to tell u. pls call her now.

Maan:-ok.

After maan leaving the room, munshi jee looks at geet and said what do u want now?

Geet:-Chachu. What .I do what. I mean…..

Munshi jee:- look geet, u r like my daughter but

Geet murmurs like ur daughter.

Munshi jee:- now tell me, the problem of those properties. is that related u ?

Geet:- what? me,chachu, I'm not doing anything like to harm the image of Khurana family or u.they want those property for their personal gain. cause they want to….

Munshi jee:- what they want?

Geet:- a very common problem chachu. Rishav's father give money and said they will create a big hospital there and that will wedding gift for .

Munshi jee:-Wedding gift for

Geet:- for me.

Munshi jee looks shocked and said what then sit in the chair

Geet:-I don't want to marry to that *********

Munshi jee:-geett have some respect , u r talking in front of ur chacha, munshi jee:-I'll tell maan baba about it.
Geet:-No, chachu,I don't need his help.I"ll manage it by myself

Munshi jee:- but u 'll not capable to fight with them. ok let me think after some pause ,munshi jee :-geet I know they are little arrogant people but still if they give that proposal then I have so think about it.

Geet:- what no.

Munshi jee:-y no.

Geet:- u told me to marry to that rahul , do u know about him no then . and for ur information they will not build any property their. They will just create this rumor that they want to build hospital but in reality they will do some illegal work.

Munshi jee:- whatttttttttt?

Geet:-Yes.

Munshi jee:- how do u know about it u r not telling lie.

Maan:-no munshi jee. She is right.I heard it earlier but not involved cause I think it's rumor but when u called me and dadi ma also told me about it, then investigate about those properties. And more those properties actual right has geet and who will marry her.

Geet complete the sentence he will get those property freely.

Maan:- but I have some question here, first y munshi jee u want to give ur geet to that rahul . do u know about it ? secondly u r here for long day and don't know about it anything y?

Geet:-one min, maan, it's about me and my chachu. U r interferes about our life.just stay away from my life.If u want those properties then just tell me,I'll sign and give u those properties.

Munshi jee:- geeet. Don't say like this, say sorry to maan.

Geet:-no way.

Maan:-it's ok. Yes u r right Miss Geet Handa. I'll not interfere any more .go enjoy ur life.I'm going.

Geet turns her face to hide tears.

Munshi jee try to stop maaan but fails. Munshi jee:-Geet.

Geet: - I'll marry to

After some time,in the haveli, maan got ready for leaving hoshiyarpur.

Maan looks at geet's room and enter the room and placed letter. And said I'm going from ur life forever. Bye.

After some time, geet enter the haveli feels lonely there .She asks one of the servant about maan .

Servan:- chote shashab toh chale gaye.thori der pehele. (chote shashav left the haveli some times ago).

Geet feels sad and said ok.u can go now.Geet enter her room and sit in the bed .but her hands touch something soft…..geet saw a yellow rose with a letter placed there.

Geet remembers when first time she wants yellow rose and maan give her.

She smiles and said u remember it maan.I think u forget everything about me.

Geet open the letter.

Geetu(Maan lovingly called her by this name, no one know about it)

U think, I forgot about ur likes, dislikes, our child hood na, but u r wrong geetu.I remembered each and everything.

Geetu, a serious thing,

I know u love me and want to marry me and want to live with me forever. But I'm cursed person. In my life whoever come or love me those people go away from me forever. Just like my parents, who dies after my birth in plane crash, just like my big bro who died in a car accident. Just like my dadi ma. Who will be u know she suffers from cancer. And doctor said it's last stage. Now tell me, what is my fault, after all these things still u want to marry me. Don't u think, don't use, I'm curse person. no one stay will me.

Pls geet, just for last time, listen to me. Pls don't marry rahul, he is not good, u also know this very well, and second munshi jee is not good.I heard lots of things against him and then investigate about it and found he also involved with Rishav, rahul .U must be cursed me.I'll accept all ur cursed but pls go away from there.

U know geetu, dadi ma told me that I love u but, I don't.

I know again I broke ur heart, but if I like u as my friend only then y every one wants to think it's only love.

Geetu, if u trust me once then just go away from there.I'm waiting for u. u know the place. Come quickly.

Maan.

Geet looks shocked and sit there .

Geet P.O.V:-

Y maan tell lie to me.but chachu, he loves me. He always behaves well with me. He cares for me. Dadi trust him but maan. With out any prove maan will not give any serious blame to any one.I has to tell everything to chachu.no maan this time.I'll not trust u. u r wrong.

Geet get up from her bed and runs to tell munshi jee everything but stop to hear some voice.

In the down stairs, munshi jee: - are Rishav jee, what a pleasant surprise.

Rishav:-Where is maan ?

Munshi jee:- he gone .

Rishav:-Means.

Munshi jee:-I send my people to kill him and then kill saviriti singh Khurana.

And there rahul will marry geet. Then I'll be relief from everything.

Rishav:- no one know in this long year u r the master mind of this planned. They trust u blindly.

Munshi jee give evil laugh.

Geet heard it and shocked .Geet:-Baba jee now, what is this, Chachu is behind all this…..I have to save maan first then I'll talk to chachu.

But if I'll go from the front door then he will know about it.no.I'll go from back door, yes.but if chachu placed hi men there.uff.idea.

Here maan sits in the stair .when he feels some one behind him and about to attack maan, he bend his head and caught that man's hand and throw him front and then punch him hard. Maan get up quickly and saw 8-to 10 men came with stick, knife, and sword.

Maan shook his head and murmur, munshi jee is very smart.

All men try to attack him.Maan bend from one and kick another then hold another men's knife and punch another men. Other man slashed by sword on maan's back and it's cut slightly. Maan turns and hold his hand and punch him and kick him. Another man came form behind but before he can attack maan some one hit his head…Maan turns and saw geet in a saree. He again shook his head and asked by his eyes what is this.

But his attention divert due to another man who try to attack geet now. But maan pull geet towards himself and punch that man by another hand.

Here, hearing noise some villagers came to help maan and geet. Those men try to leave the mandir .but fails, villagers hold them bit them.

Here, geet sit in maan's arms and lost there.Maan looks at geet and surprised to see her blushed face then he realized that his hand rest on Geet's bare waist and geet clutched his shirt tightly but her eyes roaming lovingly on his face.

Geet's face and eyes has many expression…it has relief, happy, love, care, respect, concern, faith.

Maan eyes narrowed and said what happen?

Geet:-nothing. Maan released her and then turns to those villagers and said don't hit them . take them to police station.

Raju chacha:- par chote shashab. This people are doing all bad things to the village and now they attack u….

Maan:- then y u don't register a complain against them earlier ?

Sonal chachi:- we scared shashab jee .We have family.

Maan:- same thing. Anyway now u called police.

Priest came out and said I called them and they told me to keep them with us and they will take them.

Maan:-ok.

Raj chacha looks at geet and said are geet beti. Sonal chachi and many other villagers narrowed their eyes to see geet like this.Maan surprised and think y they r looking geet on this way?

Maan turns and see closely geet then understand she stood their like married women means , she wore a red saree with, matching bangles , little bindi , sindoor, mangalsutra.

Maan :- u r ….but raju chacha cut his sentence and asked beti u r married but when , and ur husband?

Geet blushed more and said jee , he is here.

Maan turns his head to search geet's husband.

Geet saw it and thinks uff this maan na, I don't know who gave him job in Army. Never used his brain or never use his brain only in my case.

Sonal chachi:- beti, where is ur husband. Munshi jee know about it na.

Geet: - jee, chachu know about it.

Here maan feels sad and looks at geet and thinks u marry to rahul but y geet?

Geet shook her head and then hold on maan arms and said jee he is my husband.

Every one shocked to hear this and including maan also. Maan looks at geet but geet eyes tell her to smiles but maan cannot understand anything.

Suddenly geet faints and maan caught in times. Villagers said let's go the doctor,

Maan lifts geet in his arms and said move, here geet also wrapped her arms around his hands. Maan take her near to his cars when geet said don't go the village again, just turns and go to Shiv Mandir ,pls maan listen to me once.

Maan looks at her shockingly and then villagers who start some gossip.

Maan ignore them and put geet in the car and sit in the drivers sit ………

Maan starts his car and take u – turn and left the place as early as possible and left the villagers there.

After some time maan asked, call rahul?

Geet who rest her head on the sit, suddenly open her eyes and said what, rahul but y?

Maan:- he is ur husband.

Geet looks at maan then said r u gone mad? I'll prefer to die rather than marry to that rahul ******.

Maan:- don't use such languages.

Geet:-Captain Khurana don't tell me what to do or not.now whatever, I will tell u , just do it.

Maan:-oh hello. Who r u to give me orders. Just forget it.

Geet raised her eye brows and said who, I'm.ok captain Khurana let me remind u, something, I'm would be………. Some pause…….

Maan :- would be…..

Geet smiles and blushed slightly and said would be Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana.

Maan :-what, r u crazy.

Geet hold on pati dev, uff would be pati dev,If u stops the car here then I'll tell u every one and specially to dadi that.

Maan looks angrily at geet and said what,

Geet:-I'm pregnant.

Maan stop the car with a jerk and said what rubbish .Geet enough of ur jokes, now get out of the car and go back village.

Geet:- oyeee.what do u think of ur self? First u told me to run away from my house then said go back to ur house, do u now it's village and what will happen to me.

Maan:- first stop ur drama. and now listen to me ,I told u run away but not to told every one that u r my wife. Now u told me that u r pregnant .What is this geet.

Geet huskily said pls call me geetu na maan.

Maan:- stop it geet. Don't do this to me. U know…………

Geet:- yes,I know u r not going to marry any one, u gave me some useless reason but listen to me mr Khurana , U'll marry to me right now. IF not then I'll kill my self.

Maan:- geet, stop ur drama right now. Don't tell me those childish things.

Geet:- ok fine. Look maan. I know u don't love me and
I accept it. But u gave some useless reason and I want to prove u wrong.

Maan: - this is not some game which was playing by some kids geet. This is life and I don't want to spoil ur life.U know ,I'm cu but stop by geet who placed her soft palms on maan's mouth and said pls maan , don't say this. U r feared to loose me , I now u have only dadi ma and me , u don't want to …. But maan,I"ll prefer to die as ur wife rather than marry to any one. And I know u think this words are very lame but maan , u know one thing more y ,I'm telling u to marry me right now , cause I have three reason , one is dadi have cancer and last stage .Dadi ma wants to see u married man and specially with me. Dadi ma want see both us lived happily, and at least for dadi ma we can do this. Secondly, munshi jee wants those properties and want to destroy the name of Khurana family but I don't want .thirdly, munshi jee try to send some message about my marriage to rahul and it'll affect her health.

Geet removed her hand and then said maan , if u want me as ur friend only then I'll be remain like ur friend only but maan right now we have to save many things, dadi ma, name of Khurana family and those innocent villagers. Pls maan. I'll not disturb ur privacy. I'll not force u anytime to accept this relation. I'll stay away from ur life but for those reason maan.I know u think …….. I'm mad and cause I beg u to marry u but no captain Khurana.I'm not begging in front of u cause of me.I want to marry u for those reason. I'm tired to explain u . Now u have to choose in which way u want to go.and one more thing think fast not like every time. U think today then u'll analysis after 2days.

Maan who sat there confused, shocked don't know what to do but then said let's go to the mandir.

Geet looks at maan and said are wah, too fast. Oh oh I guess u r also love me and chance pe dance.

Maan shot angry glares and said don't think too much and don't see those boring movies and mind u one thing u gave those reason and I heard and accept it just cause of those reason. Nothing more.

Now come fast before I can change my decision again.

Geet show him tongue.

After some moments both sit in front of Idol. Priest starts the chanting holy mantra.

Priest:- tie this mangal sutra.

Maan tie the mangal sutra and then Geet's mang filled with red vermilion... little vermillion falls on geet's nose.

Geet looks at maan and her tears filler with tears.Maan looks at her and asked by his eyes the reason of her tears.

Geet:- just nothing, let's go take blessing from shiv jee.

Maan:-ok.

Both bowed down in front of shiv jee's idol……

Geet closed her eyes and said(in mind) to shiv jee , U know na I loves him want to erase all his bitter memory and want to give him happiness.want to protect him, want to protect the name of Khurana family, give happiness to dadi ma.Shiv jee give me strength to protect them from all evilness.

Maan closed his eyes and said (In mind) to shiv jee give me strength to protect dadi ma and geet.I don't know y ,I agree to marry her or I really loves her or not. But I Cares for her, don't want to see her in sadness. always want to see her in happiness.I don't know after marry me she will either be happy or not. But give her all happiness. give me all her pain.

Here geet open her eyes and looks at maan happily ,admire him more.

Maan open his eyes and saw geet looks at her then said let's go maan.

Maan nodded.

Precap:- In delhi, some one in formed dadi ma about geet's marriage.

Dadi ma:- what geet's marriage and I don't know anything about it. where is maan?

Geet sit in the bed like which decorated with flowers, candels.

Geet's husband enter the room and mesmerized to see geet's beauty.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi all updated next part. pls read it and comment it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome update....totally loved it...
maaneet married....so glad..loved it and keep writing

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