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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#781

I am kanphused 😕

mayank is dead or alive..

but you wrote a really scary ..os..👏 👏

Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#782

wow...wow...wow...
really a scary one...

when that scary part start, i thought that it might be just a dream of her/him...but that was all true...
you wrote it beautifully...

do write more scary...OS/FFs...its all interesting...

Edited by Mudrika25 - 13 years ago

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: mayuloveu
what a scary os?

kinda actually 😕

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#784

Haha sorry dii but i do found it funny...
So sorry but mujhe scary movies se hi darr nahi lagta toh OS se kya lagega...
But i found it interesting also...The concept ws unique nd beautifully written...
Write more OS dii nd this time a romantic mayurish one...
Love u..<33

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unknown

@--unknown--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#785

Horror nights yaad aagayi par pehli baar horror story se nahin dari kyuki tumhara horror story mujhe funny lagaa good one

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Diii...sorry but I dint found it scary...mujhe to horror movies se bhi dar nahi lagta ulte I ROFL on scary scenes...lol

But yes it was mysterious...and I kinda liked the story you formed around events..it was a little different than usual horror stories...but last para I dint get it...was Mayank dead or alive? I mean his death date was 10 may..ab aapne ye toh mention nahi kiya ke wo bua ke ghar kis date ko gaye the😕😕 ...also you wrote that bua and maasi were saying nupur that you can not go anywhere...come with us...than it means they wanted to take nupur's life...mayank also thought running out of basement that nupur's life is in danger then how come Mayank was dead in that picture..should'nt it be nupur?😕plz clarify my doubts.

But you did a commendable job as writing so much eventful OS is not an easy thing.

Well written and well woven.

Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago

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mahek

@Star_001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#787

such a scary os and i loved it

but the question is mayank bach gaya na

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#788

that was too scary for me to read ...so i skipd most of the story...ending part itself give goosebumps..but it proves hoe versatile writer you are
thanks for the pm

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#789

awsom ...
its ur best OS ...
initialy i thought its nupur dream but ...intillegent fiza .one of the best OS .

bas answer my 2 questions ,...

1) what about that picture about mayanks death n date? is he dead?
2) what about the picture of samrat n nupurs weding?

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#790

oMG this was sooo horifying

speechless

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