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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
soo glad hun u give us happy ending
other wise it was painful to read
but wonderfuly writt
en u are really good wirter happy to read ur stoires lov

so keep writing insha-allah
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
drfizaahmed 🤗
loved reading u r OS yaar!...
good job😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: -Yash-

drfizaahmed 🤗
loved reading u r OS yaar!...
good job😊

thanku yash
welcum to my thread
n u can call me fiza
thanks alot
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
nice os.
contune soon.
thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice os.
continue soon.
thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Hey Guys
back with an OS...i know i know i need to update FF...bt i'll paka...soon...
this time i have wrote sumthng stupid...bt i want sumthng like tht onscreen ...so thought to share it with u....n ya im nt gud at hindi tht much so ..spell chk for the title n if it has error pm me...plz
luv u all
fiza
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

NaamKaran

Smarat: cant u just b study ….itna left right left kerny se…kuch jaldi nhi hoga..

Mayank: jab tera time aay ga na tab tum se pocho ga

Samrat: itni hi fikhar hai tu andar chala ja…

Mayank: khoshish ke thi …per us ko bht pain ho raha hai..n I cant tolerate it

Samrat: hahaha

Mayank: he gaved him a dead look…sami..tang maat ker

Samrat: tera kiya bechari ko sahna parh raha hai…kam as kam us ko moral support tu day

Mayank: he actually was feeling guilty..han kiya tu mera hi hai…( sami was shocked…yeah sach mein serious hogaya)…tu sahi kah raha hai…jab wh itni himaat ker sakti hai tu..i should b thr with her

He went in side the delivery room..n was lost to see her crying in pain…bt a hope in her eyes when she saw him..n fwd her hand…made him a bit strong…he went near by her.. n grap her hand tightly….n put his other in her hairs….caressing them

Mayank: shona don't worry evrythng'll b fine …just b strong

Nupur: mayankkkk…she scremed clutching his hand

Mayank: im here na..im with u

Within few moment the sight changed complete..n tears of pain changed in too tears of happiness…he was holding his child..one by one….just cant imagine wht they got

Mayank: he fwd there child to her…hey dkho humara beta….proudly he said

Nupur: she kiss her child….n her love did it to her..true she was feeling so blissful

Mayank: sorry nupur….meri wajaha se u go through ths pain..so cutely he said tht she just cant stop laughing

Nupur: mayank…tm bhi na ..poray pagal ho..thnku

Mayank: thanku….double treat k lyan..tmhain pata tha na

Nupur: han

Mayank: so y didn't u told me

Nupur: bata dayti tu yeah pyari se smile kasay dekhti….Mr.sharma

He hugged her tightly…n kissd her head…

Samrat: covering hs eyes…hum ajay ya abhi aur kuch kerna bhi baqi hai

Nupur: samrat….tu kab se itnay tameez dar hogay

Samrat : jab se ap meri saali hogain

Mayank:…OMG thy r angels..kissing his babies

Nupur: yes thy r….

Mayank lookd at her lovingly n kissd her too on forehead…

Smarat:uff… tu love birds..naam kya socha

Gunjun: manave aur mahdev

Nupur: jiju ke chamchi..M..se rkhy gi

Nupur Smarat: boring naaam hain

Sami: sameer n nishant

Gunjun n Nupur: no…plzzz

Mayank: kitny hi naam soch loo sab reject honay walay hai…while playing with hs son's fingers…

Sami n Gunjun: kyun

Myank: kyun k bollywood queen ny tu kuch aur hi soch rkha hai

Nupur: mein ny kya kaha…mein abhi tak ek lawaz nhi kaha hai Mayank

Mayank: ap k hum se kuch khanay ke zaroorat hai kya Mrs.Sharma

Rahul ya Raj kya rkhna hai…he look straight in her eyes..n raise his eyebrow with question

She smile on hs words…true he knows her more than her…..

Sami: ufff…moola ke dooar musjid tak

Mayank: exactly

Nupur: samrat mayank k sth zayada mat raha kero us k jasay hi ban jao gao..phr meri bahan k kya hoga….aur hello Mr. Sharma…actually Muno k Papa

Mayank: nupurrrrhhh

Nupur: kya nupur….raj ya rahul kyun …dono rkh sakty hain hum tu

Mayank: hello madam….they r my kids too han….ek k naam tum rkho ek k mein…..

Nupur: ji nhi..mein ny itna khashat uthaya hai…naam mein rkho gi

Mayank: is khashat mein thora hath mera bhi hai…naam mein bhi rkho ga

Gunjun: uuufoo di. Jiju thk kah rahy hai…ek k naam tum ek k naam jiju...perfect

Mayank: hmmm

Nupur: jup jiju ke chamji…mein 3 saalu k lyan kya gai ..dono jija Sali ek hogay…phly white wedding…by God Ujala k advertisement lag raha tha….ab naam mein bhi problem hai

Gunjun: diii

Mayank: nupur ..plz na

Nupur: acha thk hai…mein ny Rahul chose kiya

Mayank: he looks at hs son acting sad….bs beta ab tera tu bhagwan hi bhala keray…papa kuch nhi ker sakty ByGod…ek second….Rahul….surprisingly…Raj kyun nhi

Nupur: han…Raj tu koi aur hai…looking lovingly to mayank….

Chalo Mr.Sharma….now ur turn …5 sec mein naam decide kero warna mein rkh do gi

Mayank: nupur..ths nt done

Nupur: 4…3..

Mayank: ek min

Nupur: 2

Mayank: pranav…n he smiled looking at nupur..wht say dear

Nupur: she moves her hand around mayank face in nazaar utharo style

Hai mera DDLJ k raj

Sami: oooh tu Raj yeah hain …wasay agar larki hoti tu…before he completed

Nupur: Simran

Gujun puts her head on mayank's shoulder in disbelieve.. n mayank console her by putting hs hand on her head

Mayank: koi baat nhi hota hai

Nupur: tum do no ke tu naa

Gujun: di tum doo bacho gi maa ho…ab tu serious hojao

Mayank: koi zarrorat nhi hai….encircling his arm around her…ghar mein ek sadu kafi hai….wasay agar simran hoti tu mein kya Amrish Puri hoon….

Sami: yaar tu tu bachpan se he character mein hai….sharing high five with nupur

Mayank gave him a dead look..i mean hoti kya…next larki yeahi full stop lagnay k irada hai..

Nupur: samrat

Mayank: soachty hai..idea bora nhi hai

Nupur: mayank

Mayanak: I mean….samrat ki beti k naam bhi tu hosakta hai simran..kyun gunjun

Gujun: jiju ap bhi na….

Sami: idea bora nhi hai chasmish

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Awww!! After so long..I found something so ADORABLE to read!☺️

Hehe..mayank cant see her in pain..aww..he going into the delievery room..the babies..born..the names fight..lol..It was so cute the way they were fighting..

Esp. "Ujjala" waali add..ROFL. Then Pranav 😍 aww..n den teasing for a daughter..simply tooo cute!!

Do write more like this :):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I loved Ujaala wali line.. I srsly felt like that... and very adorable OS...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Aww... A very sweet Os Fiza... Mayank can't see her in pain...

And then the teasing-.. Rahul & Raj... aur phir Simran-Amrish puri...Hillarious...

And then Saja's Simran... A veryyyyyyyyy cute os....

-Laiba

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