MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic.

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

Hi mehak first of all a big sorry for not replying. I'm not very active. But I swear I read each and every single one of your parts and I love them to the core.
Continue soon and I'm eagerly waiting for mayur to fall for each other. 😍

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

Amazing update madam ... just amazing ... i am so sorry for being late - their first actual serious discussion over their lives was so powerful and impacting ... then the moments were so cute - missing each other; behaving like typical husband and wife; awkwardness of new love; sharing tears and joys ... everything was just superb ... i totally loved the whole part ... with every part i think what could be more better but immediately in the next part you give me my answer -but then creating such magic is expected from a writer like you .... 👏

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#283

awesome part...

loved their comfort level with each other...

plzzz continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

part 9 ws good!👏
but d last lyn is makin me worried...
*bhoj*🥺
i hope... u'll make everything perfect in d next part!😳

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

part 10 ws awesum!!!!!!!!!!!👏
luvd d way u r progressin wid d story!!!!!!!!!!!😳
*awkward moment*☺️
ok.. me gettin ready 4 more romantic update!😍
thnx 4 d pms~
luv ya!🤗

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

thank u so much for ur appreciation guys...🤗

PART 11

christmas holidays were throughout the country...and these holidays provided mayank and nupur a good time to complete all their pending works of the university and to relax...and both of them were mostly at home...

mayank one day was searching for his book, while nupur was watching her favourite serial on YT...mayank was not able to find his book..

M..nupur...

Nupur was not listening...instead she was smiling at the screen of the laptop..

M..nupur!..

She removed her ears phns...

N..gi kia hua?..

M...meri bat sunna psnd karen gi?..

She smiled...and said in shy manner..

N..kahiye na..

M...meri calculus ki book nahi mil rahi..tum ne dekhi hai...

N...store room main hia..kafi dino se ap ne parhi nahi tu main ne wapis store room main rakh di..

M..tu mujhe baatati tu...

Mayank opened the store and nupur put her ear phns again...mayank found his book and he pulled it from a pile of books
when paper fell down..

He held it and it as drawing...a sketch...

A boy and a girl standing holding hands in front of a waterfall...their faces were not shown...they were shown looking at the water fall, with their backs sketched

Mayank was lost in the beauty of the picture...it was so simple, yet so elegant, so divine...
Nupur turned and was shocked...she got up..

N..ye...

M..ye dekho nupur..isnt it beautiful?..

N,...haan wo...

M..kis ne banai hai?..

Nupur turned her face away..

M..kis ne banai hai nupur..

N..wo meri friend..

M..kaunsi friend...

N..wo ...payal...

M..us k bare main tu tum keh rahi thi us k sare diagrams tum banati ho..tu us ne itni achi picture kasie banai?..

N..wo ye..

M...tum ne baanai hai?..

Nupur wanted to go but mayank stood in front of her..

M...batao na...

Nupur nodded..

M...OMG...nupur this is beautiful..tum itni achi drawing karti ho...

N...haan mujhe drawing ka bht shoq hai...

M...this is beautiful...

Mayank was staring at the picture..

M..nupur i think there is something more to this picture..hai na?..

Nupur was very confused..

N..kai mtlb?..

M..mtb mujhe lag raha hai k ye picture itni simple nahi hai jitni lag rahi hai..hai na?..

N..kuch bhi nahi hai..ap aisey hi..

Mayank went and sat on the bed...

N..ok thek hai! dekhtey rahiye.!.

It was evening...mayank was completing his project and nupur was busy making notes, but mayank used to look at the picture after every 10 minute...he was feeling that it had something..

it was about 10 at night , Nupur was looking out from the glass wall of thier flat, the moon was beautiful...mayank came behind her and softly said...

M...nupur..

N...gi?

Mayank was holding the picture in his hand..

M...ye hum dono hain?..

Nupur closed her eyes and turned her face away

M..hum dono hai na?...

Nupur looked at him, she knew she wont be able to hide more..so she nodded..

M..oh God!..nupur ye..

mayank was speechless...He just hugged her, nupur gently responded..

M...i dont know what to say nupur..ye...kab banayi tum ne...

N..office main banayi thi...

They broke from the hug..

M..nupur..u know what i seriously have no words...main tumhain bata nahi sakta k ye merey liye kitni special pitcure hai...
tum ne mujhe dikhayi ku nai?.

N..wiase hi...

M..waise hi ka kia mtlb hai?..

She turned her face away..

N..wo ..ummm...i ..

M..u were shy?..

She looked back and nodded innocently...and mayank couldnt help smiling...and he pulled her cheeks...

M...awww.. cuteee...u are a sweetheart nupur...

N...acha ap ne pehnchana kaise?..

M..hmmm..ye jo tum ne mujhe banaya hai, sleeves uper kar k...i mean main hamesha full sleeves uper kar leta hon, aur tumhain tumhare baalon se, hamesha asiey uper kar k bandhti ho...

Nupur smiled...

M..aur ik aur baat..we are going to this water fall...

N..ap ko pata hai ye kaunsi fall hai..

M..gi haan, its the Niagra falls...aur hum wahan ja rahen hain..

N..gi nahi....itni sardi main wahan barf jami hogi...

M...so what?...

N....ap samjh nahi rahey hain...paise zaya..

M..listen nupur...hum ja rahe hain and that is final..i know tum ne ye apna dream sketch kiya hia..and i am going to fullfill it...

Mayank opened the laptop and started searching ways to reach niagra falls..

N..lekin hum bus ik raat rahen gey..main ap ko ziyada pasie zaya nahi karne don gi...itni mehnat se...

M..haan tu mehnat is liye karte hain ta k apne khuab pore kar saken..

Nupur was constantly making efforts that mayank should drop the plan but he was adamant .

and the moon outside was smiling at them, bcz it knew towards what UNEXPECTED MAGIC they were heading.....their confession at the beautiful Niagra falls...

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago