MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 26

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Posted: 14 years ago
crude reality showing up.i know this should affect their relationship, but i dont want it to.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
but I am worried abt last line
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Posted: 14 years ago
Madam, you are just creating magic with each of your update ... I simply loved the way he built confidence in her or the way he wanted to accompany her ... they have already started behaving like a husband and a wife - he forgot about time; she was waiting .... the conversation and her sweet threat was actually really cute ... and the way she was waiting for him at night was so sweet ... Mayank's words actually left me speechless - My mind is actually churning about what's gonna happen next ... do update soon ... šŸ‘šŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update!!!!
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update.........but last sentense was a bit shockin frm mayankz side..........anyways all in all cute part!
n i luv it wen he callz her cuteee!!
do cont soon!
n thnx for d pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u guys...šŸ¤—, and awww...u all are such cutie pies..worried about mayank...šŸ˜†šŸ˜³

PART 10:

Nupur pushed her plate away..

N..kia mtlb rishta bhoj ban gaya hai"..

M..bhoj ban gaya hai nahi kaha tha..main ne kaha tha k bhoj ban jaye ga

N...aur ku ban jaye ga

M.. ku k aisay rishtey nahi abntey..tum khud ko exertion de kar kia kia karna chati ho..

N..ap kia bol rahe ho..?

M...dekho nupur!...i have a diferent defintion of building relationships, chahe hum sath diner karen ya nahi, tum meray aney se pehle so ya baad main, the main thing is that we should be there for each other, mujhe bus tum se itni assurity chaiye k jab bhi mujhe tumhari zarorat hogi u u will be bthere...thats it...

N..wo tu main hamesha rahon gi, ..per..

M..bus tu phir thek hai..ye bachon jiase kam nahi karo gi...nupur we work more than 12 hours a day, us main asiay sab kuch mushkil hai..shoro shoro main thek hai per ye continue nahi kar sakte..

N...tu ap ko lagta hai k main ap se laron gi k ap bhi merey sath asiey hi krao jaise main...


M..nupur mujhe nahi pata...bus i want to keep things simple and strong...bcz main.i.....i cant afford to fight with you...tum meri life a bht important part ho...is liye mujhe dar lagta hai k agr main tumhari affection return nahi kar saka tu tum ...

N..ap se return kaun mang raha hai..

M..tumhrai ankhen mangti hai nupur...mujhe in k pyar se darr lagta hai...main itna pyar nahi karta tum se...

Nupur's eyes were filled with tears..he reads my eyes....

N...hmmm..ok..jaisa ap kaho..

Mayank smiled and hugged her..

M..thank u for understanding..

Nupur felt as if her heart had found its ultimate place...the warmth of maynk's closeness was filling in a new life in her...


mera asaaman bhi chota par gaya
mujhe jab se hai bahoon main teri panah mili..


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Their lives were now gelling with each other as of they were never alone..

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M..nupur utho saat baj gaye hian...

N..acha...

and she turneed her side...after a while the alarm snozzed again...

N..uthiye..saat baj gaye hain..

M..pehle tum utho..

N..nahi pehle ap utho...

M..nahi...

and they both went to sleep agian and alarm snoozed and they both woke up with a jerk..

M..pehle main nahao ga..

N..gi nahi...

she ran towards the washroom...

M...nupur bahr niklo...

N...nahi...

M...tumhare pas bus 5 miniute hian..

N..10 minute..

M..5..

N..ok 7.5..average of 5 and 10..

M..very funny...

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Not only fun, they started to use their rights on each other..

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Mayank returned home and nupur was working on her assignment..

N..ap k liye nai jag rahi hon..apna project kar rahi hon...

mayank threw his things and lied on the bed...

M..nupur ye subha kar lo gi?..

N..ku kai hua?...

M..i am having a severe headache..thora sar daba do gi plz...

Nupur threw her pen and sat beside him on the bed and gently started pressing her delicate fingers on his fore head
and then her palm on his forehead and on his head,her fingers in his hair...she could see that he was falling asleep, but she kept on pressing her fingrs untill she herself fell asleep, with her lips gently touching his hair.

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Not only rights...there were tantrums also...

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N...uthiye...clg nahi jana..

M..mujhe aj chuti hai,

N...chuti?..kuuuuuuuuu????

M..bcz aj sirf ik submission thi jo main ne kal hi kar di thi

N..ye kiya baat hoyi..

she pouted in an innocent voice..

N..mujhe bhi nahi jana...

she aslo lied down...and mayank turned towards her..

M..gi nahi,chalo utho..

he almost made eher sit and she went stamping her feet to the cupbopard...and rambling

N..ab agey se jab ap chuti karo gey tu main bhi chuti karon gi..

She returned from the bath went to the kitchen..mayank was standing the smiling..

N.,.wow!..pasta!!..

M..gi haan...main ne socha k aj meri cutee akeli unversity ja rahi hai tu main us k liye breakfast bana don..

N..oh thank u..

she jumped and hugged her..

N..pata hai main soch rahi thi wohi biscuit kahne pare gey...

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and they both had started missing each other in romantic weathers..


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Nupur was in the office, she had her tea break,the weather was beautiful..

N..hello...

mayank said in a mischevious voice

M..may i talk to Mrs nupur mayank sharma plz..

Nupur couldnt help smiling..she also said in a mischevious voice...

N..actually she is busy..may i take the message plz..

M..sure...plz tell her that as the weather is beautiful so her husband is waiting at the coffe shop near her office..ask her to come for half an hour...bcz i know she has her break at this time..

N..but u know she doesnt drinks' coffee..

M..no problem she will have icecream..ask her to come soon..i am waiting...

Maynk dissconnected the phn and nupur was blushing so much that her collgue was also smiling, she immeditely left to have coffee with her husband..

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and finally they had started sharing their pain with each other

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Nupur came home and mayank was already there..

N..ap mujhe se pele a gaye aj..

M..haan wo christmas ki chutiyan ho gi hai na so ...

she came and sat beside him..

N..ap udass ho..

he turned his face away and was about to get up when nupur held his hand..

N..kia hua...

mayank placed his head on nupurs shouder, his tear fell on nupur's hand..

M..mujhe maa k yaad a rahi hai..sab chutiyon main apne apne ghr chaley gaye han..mujhe bhi ghr jana hai..

This made nuur's tears flow as well, she herself was holding them back from the time when the holidasy were announced..

N..mujhe bhi...

her tears also started falling on his cheek...

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and finally the first bliss of love starting..

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N..suniyeeeeeee......

Mayank who was busy drawing a very difficult diagram got shocked at nupur's voice and all his diagram got spoiled..

M...kia hai?..

N..ye bahir se merey kapre pakra den gey..main bhol gayi hon..

M..kaunse kapre?..

N..ye chair pe hon gey..

Myank knocked and nupur tried to open the door but it was locked...

M..kia??..

N..ye khol nahi raha


M.....pata hai tum ne mera sara diagram kharab kar diya hai..ab dobara banana pare ga..

N..haad ho gai...mujhe bahir nikaley gey...

Mayank tried pulling the door outward and nuur started pulling inwards..

M..ye kia kar rahi ho..ander ku khainch rahi ho?..

N..oh sorry..

Mayank was triyng..

N...agr main ander hi reh gayi tu?..

M..tu mujhe nahi pata!..mera sara daigram kharab ho gaya hai aur tum.. aur uper se ye lock...

Finally the door opend the door and nupur who was standing leaning against the door fell on him and they both were abt to fall on the floor...

M..oh God nupur tum..

Mayank opened his eyes,and was speechless..dressed in a bath robe till her kness, wet hair..water dripping over her neck and she nervouly looked at maynk contarcting in the corner, mayank turned his
face away and nupur went inside th wash room again..

M..ab phir se band mat kar lena..lock change karna pare ga..main le kar ata hon..

the first awkward moment..
Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
you i've got my finals tomorrow. still i've entered if today to read your os. and most importantly this is worth it.its wonderful.
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updt šŸ‘
n the way u expressed abt their growing relation
in different situations was so cutešŸ˜
n thanks 4 the pmšŸ¤—
Edited by amritavasireddy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwww luvd the way their relationship grew!
n d first awkward movement was so cute........
awesome update!
do cont soon!😊
u didnt pm me this tym.....but the update was really very gud!
Edited by nikitasharma. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Im speechless...............each n every word is worth reading.................kya weekend mein 2 updates nahi ho saktašŸ˜.....................!!!

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