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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Intro ! 🤗
Good job ! 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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your writting is really intense please add me to your pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh my..Maan pehle din se hi hospital me...What happened..??? Dear update soon...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww...
good start
awesome updaet.. cant you plz add me in pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OOh the first part sounds very interesting. Can you add me to your PM list please? :-)
Keep on writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey loved it PM me the next part it is really good
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg nice story...plz add me to ur pm list...great update so fAr lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

She left prescription in her hand and run behind the stretcher. The stretcher left into the ICU and a nurse stopped Geet. Geet then sat on a chair and started crying 😭.She was crying very badly.Then a nurse came near her and said "excuse me mam"

geet then asked the nurse "how is he?"

"mam,he is in serious condition mam" listening to this got shocked and became speakless."mam, doctor told that he need to be operated immediately,so we need signatures of some relative of his in these papers." geet did not say anything "mam, how r u related to him." geet did not speak anything.then nurse put her hands on geet shoulders and shanked her while saying "mam",then geet came back to this world and said "I'm his wife." saying this tears rolled from geet's eyes, she took those papers and signed on them.

Geet then told her mobile and dilled. "hello,Nakul "

"ha"

"nakul plz tell dadima that maan has met with an accident and is admitted in Hyderabad's globe hospital.

"but who is this "

"geet" saying this she cuts the call.

Geet then goes towards a chair and sits there, leans back and closes her eyes slowly.

Flashback:

geet is walking slowly on the road.she looked very dull and sad.

She then went into a house. Inside that house everything was scattered. Geet than immediately shouted "ma"

and started to put up things n was putting them in their places. no one came out and again she shouted "ma" and put the thing in her hand on the table beside her and went in. there was a lady,she looked quite old.She was picking up things and putting them in their places, tears were rollings down from her eyes. After same time she turned back,saw geet, she then quickly warped off the tears saying "When did u come i did not notice u?" geet asks her "what happened ma?"

"what happened,nothing" she replied while trying to smile."ma" said geet with a question face.She ask "nothing" looking around she continued "O, looking at this u r asking" she smile and says"I was just cleaning the house. Now u go, fresh up, I will give something to eat." saying this the lady starts to moves from that place. Geet stops her by holding her hand and say "did those people come again." she replies "yes, 1 more week and we need to pay 8 crores, otherwise we will lose everything,I don't know how will u manage it." Geet then turns her towards geets face and with a smile on her face say "don't worry I will do it"

"how will u do it till now we could only save 3L."

"ma I will find some way" says geet with tears in her eyes as she know that is is not possible.

"Ur plz don't try to make me happy by telling me lies,I know it is impossible to do it, U know that"saying this she warps geet tears n leaves. Geets thinks that she should find some way to complete this impossible task, thinking in this she becomes bold to face it.

Maan gets down the car and goes into his bungalow. "Dadima" he whispers n with and 100 watts smile on his face

runs towards her and take her blessing, then Daaima say "Kush raho, aur jaldi say shadi karo"

Listening to this Maan says "dadima mayra shadi"

"ha shadi"

" dadima," with angry face continues " kabi nahi"

" Maan hum aapko 1 week ka samay derahaihai agar aap tabbe shadi nahi karana chahatai hai tho"

"tho"

"hum yaha say hamaysha kaliya chalayjayangay."

"what??????????????"

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Guys I actually have some problem with Hindi,so if u guys think my Hindi is fine and I can continue in Hindi I will or else I will start writing completely in English. Plz do tell me about it.


Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzzzz add me in your pm list .............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Awesome Dear.........
Loved it..........
Eagerly waiting for th enext part
Pls Update Soooooon

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