A Contract-new FF on Maaneet (upto part 26)

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Interesting concept and great update can't wait to read Klee do update soon 😊

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sravanthi vangala

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Hi everyone,

This is my First FF and i'm very happy 😊that u guys r liking it.

Thank you all for ur encouraging comments.🤗

Guys Can anyone help me by saying as to y my FF is been transfered to Fan fiction for Geet forum.

Any way I have no problem for it. But as I'm new to IF, so just wanted to know Y.

Can any one plz answer my question

- Sravanthi.

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Trisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: sravss

Hi everyone,
 This is my First FF and i'm very happy 😊that u guys r liking it.
Thank youall for urencouragingcomments.🤗


Guys Can anyone helpme by saying as to y my FF is been transfered to Fan fiction for Geet forum.
Any way I have no problem for it. But as I'm new to IF, so just wanted to know Y.


 Can any one plz answer myquestion
 
 - Sravanthi.

Hey erm of course, well the forum ppl transfer ur FF into the fanfiction after a ceqtain no# of pages so that the actual forum is nt clogged up as we often found discussions and all sorts were bein pushed back to pages 4/5 as all ffs were takin glory. Bt ur ff is available 4 us to search and found at the link on page 1 whre its lyk all FF ONE SHOTS POETRY ETC. Hpefully that helps x and hpe we c an update soon x

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

hi,

wonderful ff.

please add me to ur pm.

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sravanthi vangala

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Tishuu

Hey erm of course, well the forum ppl transfer ur FF into the fanfiction after a ceqtain no# of pages so that the actual forum is nt clogged up as we often found discussions and all sorts were bein pushed back to pages 4/5 as all ffs were takin glory. Bt ur ff is available 4 us to search and found at the link on page 1 whre its lyk all FF ONE SHOTS POETRY ETC. Hpefully that helps x and hpe we c an update soon x

Thank you so much.😊

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Cutee999

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

nice updates
thanks for pm
continue soon..........

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sravanthi vangala

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Part 5

Maan reaches his bungalow in his car.He stops it in the parking area and gets down. He looked very dull n worried ,While holding the car door he thinks"am I doing anything worried" recollecting geet's helpless face while accepting, immediately his face turned red with anger n he closed the car door with lot of force. and continues thinking "Y am I wrong, Did I force her, no. She herself accepted bcz she needed money." He then enters his bungalow.

He saw Dadima sitting on the sofa.He went ear Dadima and stood in silence. Dadima asked him want did u decide,I know there r 12 more hours but I need the answer right know."

"Dadima but.."

"Maan I have to go back right now as the is some business problem, so wanted to know ur reply before coming"and continues with a Attitude face "I wanted to know whether I should come back or not." saying this she looks at Maan.

"Maan then sits down on the floor,holding Dadima's hands and looking at her with a small smile on his claim and pleasant face says "dadima u know that I love u and can do anything for ur happiness" he become quite and dull.Dadima looks at him anxiously. Maan continues "Dadima I'm ready to marry" Listening to this Dadima becomes very happy and say "I'm very happy Maan, thank you"

Looking at dadima's happiness Maan gets a smile on his face.

"Maan should I start searching girls for u"

"No Dadima"

dadima with a confussed face asks "no"

"Dadima I choose a girl myself"

dadima with a huge smile on her face catches maan ears and say "u r already in love"

"dadima plz leave my ears its paining."

"Paining, and when I was tensed about ur marriage."

"Dadima."

Dadima was about to say some thing, Nakul entered and says "Dadima, its time we have to leave."

Dadima then says to maan "maan I will talk to u later, Mail me her photo, and I will talk to u about other detail on phone."

"Ok dadima" says maan and take her blessing.

dadima leaves.

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The next morning Maan was waiting for Geet in her collage.Geet does not come to collage, Maan gets tensed, he talks to himself "Maan U r alway right, Girls r not truthworthy." and becomes Angry,"The moment she received money and all her loans r cleared off she left." thinking like this he starts to move from that place Geet comes. He stops seeing Geet. Geet walks towards Maan and says "Thank you". the angry Maan looks at her angrily and say "Photo" putting his left hand up with palms facing sky. Geet takes out the photo from her bag and puts it in his hands.

Maan sees the photo and puts it in his pocket.

"Geet in a paper right all ur details that is contact no,address,e mail id, etc.. so that I can easily contact u n also write about u, ur past colleges,school , ur marks, likes, dislikes, etc........."says maan with a rude tone.

Geet then takes a paper and rights all her details n gets it to maan.

"Geet I will meet u only after I yrs, that is on the same date next yrs at sharp 9 o'clock."

Geet says nothing .

"Don't worry I will tell dadima that u want to complete ur graduation, before marriage."

Geet remains silent

"Come along with ur mom next time I will take u to Dadima and from then our Contract starts."

geet remain silent.

He looks at Geet and continues "Is it clear."

Geet looks at maan with irritating look and nods her head.

Maan then leaves.

Geet looks at with a irritating Look and says "Mr.Attitude." n then taking a strong breath "Now I should bare his, Don't know for how long."

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A year later Maan Come to the collage and keeps waiting for geet.

15 mins passed

30, then 60

Maan keeps waiting.Geet does not come.

Maan calls to Geet cell its switched off. Maan gets angry and says "girls, girls r not trustworthy."

Edited by sravss - 14 years ago

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

wow....that was really awesome.....great update

do keep writing

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ManEet_KaSh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Awesome update!

Thanks for the PM

Update soon!

Yamini

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aarthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

y so short update want a long one... awesome update.... y is always Geet late to meet him... and yes he is MSK not even ask the reason y she is late...