saajna 2 (ff on arsh) {NOTE on pg71} - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
vaani yeh ff likhna bhi hain ya nahi?kya kar rahi ho??/koi bhi response nahi itne din ho gayye hain!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEY.....when u r going to update....... 😭 😭 😭 😭 atleast give some thing like promo or name of the chapter of begining of saajna 2,,,plzzz waiting...... update soon.😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
umm, i love the whole ff anyway
but i love the part of "BEDROOM ROMANCE" very much
especially this
"

Armaan enters the room with a smirk & locks the room. Shilpa was breathing heavily as he was slowly & slowly coming closer. She started moving backwards & finally her back was touching the wall. Armaan put his arms on both sides preventing her escape.

He snuggled close to her & now she could even hear his heartbeat.

S- (Blushing) armaan plz

Armaan just smiled at her nervousness.

A-(whispers) shuru karein?

A sigh escaped shilpa's mouth as she sensed the passion in his voice. But still she managed to find her tongue.

S- ky..kya?

Armaan moved back & removed his shirt revealing his eight pack abs. (oh man I so want to touch them lol)

S- (Looking down) ye kya kar rahe ho?

A- (Teasing her even more) wahi jo??. Pati patni apne bedroom mein karte hai?..bata doon?

S- (Blushing badly) nahi

A- nahi nahi?. Bata deta hoon

S- armaan plz (hid her face in his chest)

A- oye dirty mind?. Main to dressing ki baat kar raha tha. Waise agar tum chaho to??.

S- (Moving towards the bed) shut up armaan? yahan aao

Armaan came & settled on the bed with her but his naughtiness didn't stop

Shilpa was carefully applying medicine on his wounds while he was busy admiring her beauty.

She could not take his intense gaze anymore & finally spoke up.

S- aise kya dekh rahe ho armaan?

A- (Kissing her nose) to phir kaise dekhoon?

The immense seductiveness in his eyes made her blush even more.

A-oye hoyye? par tum aisi mat dikha karo

S- kaisi?

A- (Tugging a few flicks behind her ear) itni?.

S- kya?

A- itni??sexy

She blushes badly

A- pata hai jab tum itni khoobsurat lagti hona to mujhe dar lagne lagta hai ki ?.dar lagta hai ki main apne aap ko rok paunga ya nahi(coming closer)

S- armaan (she gasped)

Armaan gave her a love bite on the neck while she just moaned in pleasure

S-aahhh...

A- I'm sorry?.. (Licking & sucking the spot)

S- (Blushing) itna dard nahi ho raha hai

A- (Concerned) nishan reh jayega

S- (Looking straight in his eyes) acha hai?. Mere badan par tumhare pyaar nishani reh jayegi??.

A- oye hoyye?. Waise agar tum chaho to main? (Moving closer to her neck) aur bhi aisi nishaniyan de sakta hoon.

S- armaan? tum bhi na hato?.

Pushing him slightly she got up from the bed.

A- (Holding her dupatta) kahan jaa rahi ho?

S- (Not looking in his dreamy eyes) kapde change karne

Armaan got up & took the gown from her hands. She wondered what he was up to.

A- Main change karwayun? (Winks)

S- (Not believing what he just said) armaan, ye tum kya keh rahe ho?

A- maine kahan ki I'll change your clothes

S- (Looking down) wo maine suna armaan?. Lekin??.

A- lekin kya shilpa? Main tumhara husband hoon?. Mujhse kaisi sharam. Please mujhe change karne do na plz plz plz (making a puppy dog)

Shilpa couldn't resist this cute pout & turned towards the other side.

A-(Making her stand in front of the mirror) Can I?

Shilpa nodded her head slightly which he took as a green signal.

She closed her eyes tightly as he threw away the dupatta from her neck. He started unzipping her churidar while not missing any of the expressions on her angelic face. Shilpa tried to control her breath but his every touch sent a shiver down her spine. Finally he opened the zip till her lower back. To his amazement, he noticed the alphabet 'A' engraved over there. He became absolutely speechless & kissed that part of hers. Now even shilpa realised that he saw her tattoo. He held her shoulders & made her face him.

A-(With moist eyes) shona yeh?

S- tumhare liye?. Hamare pyaar ke liye?kaisa laga?

A- I? loved it? lekin iski zaroorat kya thi?

S- zaroorat thi armaan? zarrorat thi. Main tumhe batana chahti thi ki mera sharir, mera man, meri atma?. Sabkuch tumhara hai ?sirf tumhara. Aur tum bina meri raza ke bhi mere sath wo sab kuch kar sakte ho

A- (Hugging her tightly) par? bahut dard hua hoga na? (Caressing that spot)

S- (Hugging him back with the same passion) thora sa?. Lekin hamare pyaar ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon armaan?.kuch bhi

A-(coming out of the hug) I love you shilpa? I love you more than anything else in this world...

S- I love?

Before shilpa could complete her sentence he captured her lips with his own.They were literally chewing each other's lips. Armaan started to moving his hands up and down her body while shilpa just kept her eyes closed.

Armaan put his hands under her churidar and to her waist and lifted her up while shilpa placed her head against his chest. Armaan walked towards the bed and gently placed shilpa there with him coming on top of her.

Shilpa put her hands around Armaan's neck and pulled him down even more. Armaan then moved and kissed her again while her hands moved down towards his chest. They both smiled while kissing /Armaan started to pull down the straps of her churidar when she pulled out of the kiss and pushed Armaan a bit back.
A:Kya Hua?
S:Armaan abhi Nahi. It's not the right time I mean abhi tum bahut weak ho. You'll end up hurting yourself if we carry on.
A: I don't really mind if I end up getting hurt. At least I'm with you.

S: Armaaaaaan. Try to understand
A : Acha teek hai.
He got up & wore his vest while shilpa rushed into the bathroom to get changed.

She came out wearing a white nighty only to find her passionate hubby sleeping like a small baby.

She went closer & whispered in his ear-

S- I love you jaan

Armaan laughed. "The same way, i love you"

Shilpa was amazed to find him awake.

S- tum jaag rahe the?

A- ofcourse sweetheart (winked)

He pulled shilpa in his arms & finally they were dead to the world.....❤️"

that was superb
i jus luved it to the core......
and also the part "muski darling"

"Armaan greeted her with a warm smile & wished her good morning.😊

Muskaan seductively moved her index finger from his forehead till his lips.

M- Hi darling? how are you this sexy morning?😉

Armaan was shocked out of his wits but understood what she was trying to do. He was THE ARMAAN MALLIK after all.⭐️

A-(kissing her cheek) hi sweetheart??I'm as hot as ever what about you?

Muskaan really didn't expect this but before she could speak anything armaan pulled her closer.

A-(huskily) you know?.. I really missed you last night (winks)😉

M- (Getting out of his hold) oye hero?.. Main to sirf mazaak kar rahi thi😕

A- (Falling at her feet) But I'm serious my love??chalo na yahaan se kahin door bhaag chalte hai?. (Dramatically)😆

M- (Nervous) dekh armaan ab bahut zyada ho raha hai haan? 😕

A- (Getting up) but I really love you dear??😆

M- theek hai mere baap??main haari. Armaan Mallik se koi nahi jeet sakta bas.😕

A- (Controlling his laughter) bus?. .Hum bus se bhag rahe hai?😉

M- Main tumhe sirf nashte ke liye bulane aayi thi?..rahul?😕

A- (Cutting her in bw) rahul se main baat kar loonga don't worry

M- (Really annoyed) armaan?.tu pagal ho gaya hai. Chaddo main jaa rahi hoon😡

She left banging her feet while Armaan gave out an evil laugh.

A-muaaaaaaah 😆

But as he turned back he was mesmerized but the sight in front of him .Shilpa had just come out of the bathroom clad in a red salwaar kameez & was looking drop dead gorgeous.😍

His constant gaze made her nervous. She kept looking down while he slowly moved to the spot where she was standing.

S- (Blushing) armaan please?. 😳

A- (Whispers in her ear) Mujhe pata hai subah jo hua ?..uske baad tumhe bahut sharam aa rahi hai, magar ye bhi jaanta hoon, tum is bare mein kuch bolna nahi chahti?. ❤️

She was amazed as he knew her so well. She looked up only to get lost in those big dreamy eyes.😳

A- (Huskily)Tumhe pata hai, jab tum sharmakar, nazarein jhukati ho na?. to bahut khoobsurat lagti ho?aur jab tum?. Nazrein uthati ho?.

?. To usse bhi zyada khubsoorat lagti ho😍

S- (Blushing) thanks?.ab tumhaari tabiyat kaisi hai?

A- (With a smirk) well? anyone would feel good after doing 'it'. (winks)Don't you think so?

She was becoming shyer by his naughty talks."


both are my favourites, moreover i liked the part - :ahem ahem" too
on the whole ur ff is simply fantastic
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
awww yayy =D hmm this is hard haha...i actually liked every part....but anyways....aww i wish RM would be there neighbors =[
anyways...i guess abhinikki is fine otherwise ahha unless you wanna make RM move as there neighbros =D hahaha anyways...can you PM me when you update?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
i just loved the ' mujhe haq hai ' line in Ahem-Ahem part
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
how i wiss dmg story to like this and i wish u were the story witer and director dmg woulg b always no.1 then thanks for making arsh 2gether and making my wish fulfil through your story
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hey vaani continue soon
waiting for d begining of dis ff...........

luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
sorry guys my net had broke down
so here's part:
LATEST UPDATE
DELHI
4:00 AM
As the light rays of early morning disturbed the couple, shilpa half-opened her eyes. It was a bit cold so she cuddled Armaan.


A (irritated): kya kar rahi ho?
S (innocently): mujhe bahut thand lag rahi hai

With this she kept her head on his chest.
AR:(rudely) leave me
S (confused): kyun?

Armaan separated her from himself & moved towards the cupboard.

He brought a blanket and covered her with it
S: (sweetly) tumhe thand nahi lag rahi?

A: I'm okay

S: thand nahi lag rahi ya mere sath blanket share nahi karna chahte?

A (shouts): tumhari problem kya hai? Maine kahan na I'm fine. Don't irritate me.

Before she could utter something he slept with his back facing shilpa.

With tears falling from her eyes, she just closed her eyes & lied down on the bed but couldn't sleep.

After sometime she got up & went to take a shower. She changed into her bathrobe & moved towards the bed to wake him up. She was still upset by the morning incident but all her worries vanished when she saw him sleeping like a cute baby.

She smiled & slightly brushed her lips on his cheek but this broke his deep slumber.
a (angrily) what?
s- (Scared) kuch nahi?sorry
a-(getting up) main nahane jaa raha hoon

S-(holding his hand) I'm sorry

A-leave my hand
S- pls armaan
A (shouts) you have some hearing problem or what? Maine kaha na mera hath chodo

S- fine
....fresh ho jao.....i'll make the breakfast...

Armaan rushed towards the washroom & she dressed up in the room itself. She wore a red net sari. She was putting on her earrings when Armaan came out of the washroom in a pair of jeans & black shirt looking delicious as usual. He looked at shilpa disappointingly.

A:ye kya pehna hai tumne?
S: acha nahi laga?
A: (rudely) kyun pehna?

S: Armaan ?.red tumhara favourite color haina?
A: I hate red.

S: lekin armaan main to..

A: (shouts) mere liye kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai

S: (moist eayes) ok? I'll change.


He saw the tears in her eyes & handed over his handkerchief to her.
A (not looking at her): Sorry ?.you can wear it lekin

S: Mujhe is baat ka bura nahi laga ki tumhe mera ye dress pehenna pasand nahi aaya. Dukh to is baat ka hai ki ?ki mera armaan kahin kho gaya hai.

A: shilpa pls

S:(moist eyes) kehne do mujhe armaan. Kehna do ki pichle ek saal mein kitna miss kiya hai maine tumhe. Kitna miss kiya hai tumhari baahon mein aakar bikhar jaana. Armaan?. when was the last time you smiled? When was the last time you touched me? Kissed me? made love to me? When was the last time you said I love you?

A (shouts): mujhe itna dard de kar thodi takleef nahi seh sakti tum?

S:(crying) jaanti hoon?.jaanti hoon ki meri ek galti ne unki jaan?.par hum jeena to nahi chod sakte na armaan?

Armaan moved out without saying anything .Shilpa changed into one of her simple churidars & cursed herself once again for that mistake of hers.

As she stepped out of their bedroom, she noticed the breakfast lying untouched on the table. She too rushed out of the house without having anything.

Outside armaan was waiting for her on his bike.

Slowly she moved towards him.

A:(rudely) thoda jaldi karogi?

S:sorry

She tried holding his shoulder for support but was very afraid to do so. Finally she settled on the bike with great difficulty.

Soon he started his harsh driving without giving a damn about her comfort.

But his blood boiled as shilpa bumped onto him because of a speed breaker.

Immediately he stopped the bike & removed his helmet. He turned to give her a deadly look.

Shilpa got really scared & started looking down.

A(coldly):dekho?agar tumhe bike se road par girkar tamasha nahi karna hai to please mujhe pakad ke baitho.

S:(softly)tum?umm?bike bahut, tez chala rahe the

A:(angrily) excuse me?

S:(scared) nahi?kuch nahi

A:whatever?mujhe pakad ke baitho, roads bahut kharab hain

With he turned his face & wore the helmet again

A chill ran down shilpa's spine as she placed her hand on his shoulder. She was touching him after so many days.

She held his waist slightly with the other hand. Armaan made her hold onto him tightly by pulling her forward but without any physical desires.

Finally he started the bike again & headed towards sanjeevani. During their entire journey shilpa was shivering by their close proximity while Armaan on the other hand was least bothered.

Jispe hum mar mite usko pata bhi nahin

Kya gila hum karein vo bewafa bhi nahin

Humne jo sun liya usne kaha bhi nahin


Kehde zara soch kar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar

This was there daily routine now. In the past 1 year, Shilpa kept trying different things to cheer him up, like forcing him to take her out for movies and dinner, cooking his favorite dishes, etc. but in turn got only heartbreaks & arguments.

Edited by vaaniKSGmallik - 15 years ago

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