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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
awesome update sweety!
really luved it!
n rishi!huh!
hope he doesn't hurt maan!
n m glad tat rishi's character will b over after 7 updates or so!
thnxxx a ton for d lovely update!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Awesome update
loved it
romantic part
hope rishi doesn't hurt maan
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 18

Since I made you wait 6 hours instead of 3 Ive given you a very bigggg update.. and like i said i dont update on tuesdays Ive decided my punishment for making you wait for sooo long is do give you one 2mz.. BY THE WAYYYY PLEASEEE PRAYYY THAT I DO NOT GET PICKED ON 2MZ in CPE (Criminal Evidence and procedure) !!!!!! I kinda didnt understand the work and im gna look like a dumbass!!!
The next day Geet awoke before Maan thinking of the night before. She was really happy that she had forgotton all about the phone call. All she could envisualise in her mind was Maan and only Maan. She turned to see Maan holding her tight from her waist. This protective Geet thought. Geet smiled to herself. Geet got up and looked for her clothes. They were lying on the other side. The first thing she could see closest to her was Maan's shirt. She picked it up and wore it around herself. Then Geet had a funny idea in her mind to wake Maan up. She slowly crept towards a sleeping Maan and slowly brought her head to his. Her mouth to his ears and screamed in his ears

'I LOVE YOUUUU MAAAN!!!' Maan got up with jerk and stared angrily at Geet. His ear drums had exploded hearing Geet yelling so loudly. Geet quickly moved away from him laughing her head off before Maan had a chance to grab her. Geet put her hands in a thumbs down motion and walked towards the cupboard to get out some clothes to wear. Maan then thought of a idea to get his wife back.

'aaahh Geet mera saar main bohot dard hai' Maan said. Geet looked at him suspiciously but seeing Maan eyes in pain she went up to him and stood next to him giving him the medicine that she took out of her bag. She looked at him with awe. Without warning Maan grabbed Geet and locked her onto the bed.

'So Mrs Khurana you love me huh'. Geet struggled to get out of his gasp and tried to push Maan off her. But Maan was too strong for her. Maan pinned her hands down above her head.

'Maan Get off me' Geet said. Maan looked at her eyes and smirked and said to her

'mujhe itna pyaar she tumne mujhe uttaya ta toh Iska thank you toh mujhe dena haina Geet'. Geet looked at him confused and wondered is he going to scream in my ears. She couldn't even use her hands to cover her ears as he was pinning them down. Geet continued to struggle to get Maan off her but seeing there was no avail. She gave up. Maan loved having Geet under his control and especially when she gives herself up to him. He pushed her hair back to one side and nuzzled her nape. He removed the shirt she was wearing and bit her shoulder. Geet gasped and moaned in pleasure. She closed her eyes. Maan looked at her expressions and smiled. He ordered her to open her eyes. Geet kept them shut. She kept breathing heavily as Maan kept kissing her all over her body.and working his magic on her. Maan then kissed her passionately on her mouth. Biting kissing her lips leaving a sore swollen mark. After a while Maan stopped kissing her and moved away. Geet realised Maan had left and opened her eyes. She wondered to herself where Maan went. She got up and looked for him in the bathroom but he wasn't there. She decided to get ready and then wait for him. Meanwhile Maan had gone downstairs to enquire about hiring a car. By the time he came back up he saw Geet was not in the room but it wasn't hard to find her as he heard her singing in the bathroom to Cheryl Cole 'We gotta fight fight fight fight fight for this love if its worth having its worth fighting for'. Maan smiled at her choice of songs and laughed at her voice. Geet exited the bathroom with wet hair opened. She brushed them at the mirror wearing a pink anarkali suit. Maan was mesmerised by her image. He walked up to Geet who was busy applying Kaajal and hugged her from behind. Geet shuddered at the sudden movement making the Kaajal smudge. She looked in the mirror and saw Maan leaning his head on her back and kissing her back. Geet smiled and then realied that the kaajal had smudged under her eyes. She pushed Maan back and looked at him angrily. Maan shocked wondered what was the matter. He soon found out when Geet turned to face him.

'Maan dekho tumhari wajah se kya hogaya' Geet said pointing at her eye. Maan stared at her for a bit and started laughing. Geet looked at him angrily. She turned to the mirror and grabbed a wipe and sorted out her makeup. Maan was still laughing. Hearing Maan's laughter Geet was so angry. She grabbed her shoe and chucked it on Maan. Maan ducked out of the way. Geet grabbed her other shoe and chucked it at Maan. Maan managed to miss it. Geet started chucking whatever she could find to throw at Maan. Maan saw her anger and realised she meant business. Finally when Geet ran out of things to throw. He went up to her and kissed her lips and said sorry. Geet melted into his eyes and lips and forgave him.

Later that evening they went for dinner and returned to the hotel to an unexpected guest. Well not a guest exactly but someone they ran into at the hotel. A girl wearing a black sleevelss dress just up to knee lengh wearing high heels short hair in a high pony was at the reception desk. She turned around to see Maan and Geet entering the hotel and waved at them.

'Oh My God Maaaaan!!!' She said going up to him giving him a hug. Geet didn't like this closeness and felt uncomfortable. Maan saw Geet's expression and came out of the hug.

'Hi Pari, how comes you're here.. its been what 5 years. Oh and this is my wife Geet' Said Maan introducing Geet to Pari. Pari looked at Geet and gave her a hug too.

'Wow Hi Geet, Im Pari, Maan ke saat college jati ti. Hum dost the liken acche dost nahi matlab hi bye wala. Yeh aapka pati hai na sirf aapne parai main ta aur kisi ladki ko dekha tak nahi mujhe bi nahi. Liken tumhe dekha waah kya choice hai. Geet your are very beautiful. Muj me kya kami ti Maan Hai Maan mere dil tod diya ' Pari said acting. Geet looked at Maan in a weird way. Maan looked at Geet innocently. Geet knew her husband is handsome and every girl would fall for him. And on top of that she trusted her husband.

'Pari tum yaha kaise' asked Maan desperately trying to change the topic. Pari explained she was here on a business trip and was engaged to a Mr Karan. Geet smiled seeing no problesm with Pari. Pari asked Maan and Geet to come to a disco with her to have some fun the following night. They both agreed. Maan did not want to but Geet thought as Pari was his friend and seeing them after so long that's the least they could do. Saying bye they left there ways.

Following night

Geet and Maan left for the disco and met pari there. Pari seeing Maan and Geet together was jealous and that was because she used to love Maan from early days. Pari asked Maan for a dance. Maan glanced at Geet who assured him with her eyes to go. Geet stood near the end watching her husband dance with Pari. For some reason jealousy panged her heart seeing Pari so close to Maan. She felt a bit quesy and signalled to Maan she was going to the washroom. Maan went up to her and asked her if she was okay. Geet replied she was and will be back soon. Maan looked at Geet and Geet at Maan until she left his sight. Pari seeing this love between them was angered and envy filled her mind and heart.

Pari went to the drinks counter and got a drink for Maan and mixed some alcohol in it in it. She gave the drink to Maan who thought nothing of it and drank it. She gave Maan two more drinks until he was partially drunk. Pari took Maan to the dance floor and started dancing intimately with him. Maan did not object. Geet came back out of the bathroom to see Maan and Pari dancing intimately and other girls dancing nearby. Geet was really angry seeing Maan like that. Pari smirked at Geet and Geet went up to the bar man and asked what did Maan have. She was shocked. Maan was drunk and allowed Pari to let him drink whatever was given. Geet without thinking twice grabbed Maan and pulled him out of the disco. Maan obideintly followed. She led him back to the hotel room. She shouted at Maan.

'aap kaise kar saktey ho. Kaise aap pari keh saat aisee dance itna pass aur aapne shaarab bi pi.

'Geet I'm Sorry I Love you' Maan started. Geet was still angry at Maan and without thinking she said

'BUT I hate you Maan'. Maan who was already drunk and already out of his mind became angry at Geet's sudden outburst. He violently grabbed her and chucked her on the bed. Geet was scared at Maan's sudden outburst. She tried to get up But Maan who had removed his shirt by then jumped on top of Geet making her lay down. He violently ripped her clothes off until she was bare. Geet was scared but worried if she made Maan stop he would hurt her more. Geet understood Maan was angry drunk and not in his senses saying or doing anything to Maan right now would cause Maan to be more aggressive. Maan started kissing Geet violently on her lips biting her lips. Letting blood ooze out. He licked the blood away. He suckled everycorner of her mouth. He started kissing her shoulders biting sucking leaving marks and bruises. Geet shut her eyes in fear. He kissed her biting her leaving bite marks bruises nail marks all over her body. Geet wimpered but the fire in Maan's eyes was too much. Maan then undressed himself giving Geet a chance to breath. He whispered hoarsely in her ear as he nibbled them,

'Don't you dare say you hate me.' He Said it with much anger that Geet silently nodded.

'Say that you love me' Geet said 'I love you Maan I always loved you' Maan replied by smacking her right on her lips.

'Say that you are mine'

'Im yours Maan I always will be'

Maan satisfied with her answer wanted to show her that she belonged to him. Tears rolled out of Geet's eyes whlist Maan opened her legs and moved in. Geet was upset of her behaviour she knew in the morning if Maan saw her bruises he would hate himself. Geet hated herself for saying that she hated him. More than it hurt him it hurt her. She wished she would not have been so angry. She hoped to God that he would not remember and would be able to hide them. Maan on the otherhand drunk and senseless increased his pressure. Geet whimpered and clutched the bedsheets for support. Maan who didn't care less of what he was doing to Geet kept increasing his pressure until the final climax when he withdraw and slumped beside her. Within a few minutes he fell asleep. Geet seeing Maan was asleep reaslied that the alcohol must have made him fall asleep. She quickly got up and ran to the cupboard quickly dressing Maan because she didn't want Maan to feel guilty. Geet was in pain abdominal due to the aggressiveness of Maan but she decided to live with it. She took a painkiller got into her nightdress and went to sleep after making sure that all her bruises were covered. I'm so sorry Maan. Hurting you. I have always loved you. I can never hate you. Mujhe apna sara zakham Maan se chupana hoga. Jab woh Kaal hosh main ayenge aur yeh sab dekhliya toh wo apne aap ko kabi maaf nahi karpayengee. Main Maan ko khush dekh na chati ho. Bas Geet kal subah tu Maan seh pehley Jaldi utna aur yeh zakham meetani ki koshish karna. Thinking of the day's events Geet finally went to sleep sobbing. She whispered to Maan in his ears 'I love you' Maan unconsciously held Geet's waist and Geet fell asleep in his arms.

PRECAP: Geet blasts at Pari. Maan finds out about last nights events. Rishi calls Geet but Maan picks up.

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Thanks for the update...did u have to bring Rishi back? :-( I cant wait to see how Maan handles Rishi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Aww that was sweet if geet she really does love him alot and hate that paari thought she was engaged but yeh I wonde how maan will react when he finds out what he did to geet Bd ooh riches back meaning the twist is near can't way update soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
PROMO>>>>>
Geet walks into the bathroom. She forgets to lock the door. Maan returns from his morning walk and decides to go have a shower. He walks into the bathroom and shocked to see Geet's state. Geet turned around and see Maan shocked. They both stare at eachother and tears come out of Maan's eyes. He went up to Geet in the shower cubicle and asked her about the marks. Geet eyes swelled up.
'Kya maine'. Maan asked seething with guilt. Geet looked down and Maan got his answer. Geet looked at Maan and told him not to worry its okay. But Maan looked at himself disgusted and left the bathroom. Geet broke down into tears.
PROMO 2
Maan and Geet spoke over what happened the previous night and Geet reassured him everything is fine and all problems are solved. They both smile and Maan gives Geet a peck on the lips. Geet walks into the bathroom to get changed. Maan smiles and sits on the bed when Geet's phone rings. Maan looks at Geet's phone and sees it is a private number.
'Geet private number call for you' Geet looks up at the bathroom mirror in fear. She runs out looks at Maan in fear who is about to pick up the call.
PROMO 3---- FOR UPDATE 20....
Maan's nightmare comes true!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
do yu really need to bring back rishi now i can't wait to see how pari will react to the out burst of Geet brillint update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Oh dear. Both promos are great and big thank you for them.
I hope Maan receives Rishi's call and gets to know the story from Geet. Thanks to the second promo, I'm happy to know Geet-Maan are over the bad incident.
Update parts 19-20 soon :-D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

Oh and I'm definitely going to pray that you dont get picked on for CPE. All the best and dont worry

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!
n d promo's
they r all amazing!
really luved it laodz!
update soon!

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