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Posted: 14 years ago
finally jenny mein ne saray parts parh liye😆
nice work sweety🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
..::UPDATE TIME::..
hey frnds...ahh m updatin after ages i guess....anywz m really sorry for dat..i was didn't able to manage coz of my studies...
but i wrote one part so sharing wid u all..hope u all like it.
part : 13


mayank at his home thinking about nupur...
m : ye nupur mere khayalo se kabhi jaati hi nae hain pata nae kyunn....jahaan bhi dekhtaa hoon sirf uska chehra dikhayi detaa hain..
may be i was i m in love with nupur.... (his smile vanished in few seconds)
....but agar nupur ne mana kar dia toh...agar main jo feel karta uske liyee?...wo waisa feel na karti ho toh?
but shayaad wo bhi mujhse pyaar karti wo uska possesive hona mere liyee...aur usse bilkus accha nae lagta ki main kisi aur ladki ke saath baat bhi karoon....
ye sab to yeh lagtaa hain ki she also loves me....so main usse propose kar raha hoon...but main usse propose kaise karunga mujhe to aisa kuch ataa bhi nae hain...
maine books to kae padhi han but propose karne ke liyee koi book nae padhii.....hmmmmm shayaad samrat meri kuch help karde....
wo waise bhi ladkyo ko patane main kafii intelligent hain..

and he calls samrat samrat was sleeping as it was 12:00...😆

s : ufff pata nae adhi raat ko kaun mujhe yaad kar raha hain...lagtaa hain koi mujhe sone bhi nae degaa..
he picks the phone...
m : hey samrat mayank here
s : mayank tumhe itni raat ko meri kyaa zaroorat padi....itni raat ko to sirf ladkionka call aataa hain.
m : i know...but mujhe tumse kuch kaam hain
s : jaldi batao mujhe sona hain
m : oyee sam kitna sota hai re tu...uth ke bed pe baith...aur mujhe propose karne ke tips de...jaldi
samrat sits on the bed with a jerk
s : kyaa tu mujhe propose karega wo bhi 12 baje r u alright?...dekh mayank main koi aisa waisa ladkaa nae hoon samjhaa naa...
m : ohh god mujhe bhi koi shauk nae hain tujhe propose karne ka samjhaa...wo to mujhe kisi ladki ko propose karna hain..
s : oyee hoyeee ladki hmmmm to pehle bata kaun ai wo ladkii?
m : main kyun batau tune usko bata diyaa to mere plan ki toh band baj jaayegi naa..
s : main tujhe aisa dikhta hoon kyaa ?
m : haan.
s : ohh god ab bata bhi de main usse nae bataunga.
mayank thinks for a while and deides to say
s : kahaan ko gayaa jaldi bataa
m : NUPUR !!!
s : what?nupur?
m : haan wo nupur hain!!
s : r u sure?
m : offcourse i m !
s : ok..then so wo tujhse pyaar karti hain?
m : umm kabhi pucha nae hain maine...but uske chehre se to lagtaa hain.
s : ohooo chechra padhna bhi jaan gaya hain tu.
m : ab chal apni bakwaas bandh kar aur kaam ki baat pe aa
s : ok ok

and then samrat explain him whole plans

s : so dude hope tumhe sab samajh aa gaya hain
m : yah
s : ok so all the best and gd night also
m : ok gud night byee
s : byee
both cuts the call
m : so nupur bhushan get ready for a big change of ur life..
and he goes to sleep..

next morning

mayur at canteen

n : so mayank...tum kyaa khaoge?
he was lost in her !!!
n : mayank !!!
m : haan....tumne kuch bola?
n : kyaa mayank tum bhi naa pata nae kiske khayaloo main koya hue hoo.
he thinks...offcourse tumhare aur koi ho sakta hain kyaa.
n : so i asked ki tum kyaa khaoge.
m : mera kuch man nae hain...so only coffee.
n : ok then...same here!!
after doing their lunch both were going to attend d class.but mayank stops in middle !!
n : kya hua mayank.
m : nupur tum jaao main baadme aata hoon
n : ok..come soon
m : yah sure
after nupur went mayank send a msg to her
"hey nupur after ur college come to the
adress which i m messaging u "
"come in red dress"

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precap : mayank proposes nupur....and a big climax coming to d story !!!

so guys hope u all liked it do rate and comment

loads of love jenny....))
Edited by -Arti4ever- - 14 years ago
ginny09 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
w8ing for the proposal :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part ....................
waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
loveddddddddd it it's osom blosom
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part..
waiting 4 the climax
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update jenny
wah maynk is going to propose nups
i just wish nups will accept it
but then whats the climax?????

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear waiting mayu proposel n sorry 4 d late comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jenny awesome,amazing part.loved it.wow now mayank will propose nupar,like sayank conversation,what is the twist n i hope nupar accept mayank propose.update soon.

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