FF with all my heart(Maaneet)EPILOGUE PG 117 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Looking forward to the next part...add me to ur pm list...
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lovely FF👏 yaar plz add me to ur PM list😊
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Hi to all'thx for all the lovely comments' very sweet all of you'my computer has some problems' so I can't pm'but I'll try'so here is my second part enjoy

Part 2:

Next day

Maan is in the locker room. He is getting ready for his rounds. Armaan entered the locker room.
Armaan: Hey dude. The princess will be here in an hour. Dr. Chopra wants to see us in ward nr. 3 in an hour.

Maan: princess?

Armaan: ya sister of Arjun punj

Maan: oh ya right' but I need first a coffee.

Armaan: ok dude'c u then

Maan was on the way to the canteen. Suddenly a dupatta flew on his face.

Oh sorry sir can I have my dupatta back he heard a sweet voice say but Maan didn't move.

The girl called again: sir mera dupatta

But Maan didn't response. What is that about her voice that makes him loose his sense? He doesn't know.

Girl: ohh babji whats wrong with him? Are you deaf?

She grabs her dupatta. Maan closed his eyes by her touch.

Girl: Pagal and then she walks away.

Maan opend his eyes but she isn't there anymore.

Maan back to his senses: Arre Maan whats wrong with you?

Now he's annoyed. Stupid woman how dare she call me pagal. I need a coffe now. So he walks to the canteen.

Maan orders: a black coffee no sugar no milk

iuu black coffee without sugar and milk'how can you drink that' bad taste'he heard a voice behind him.

He regonized her voice.

Maan turned to see her face. There she is'He has never seen a more beautiful woman. A girl with big almond eyes, milky skin and her curly hairs. She looks like a pari Maan thought. And the smile on her face...he could watch it the whole day'

Maan to himself: What? Stop Maan' what are you thinking. Now he is angry' How dare she to call my taste bad.

Maan to girl: hey what does it matter to you how I drink my coffee'my taste my coffe I'll drink it how I like it'so stupid woman keep your comments to youself.

Girl: Stupid woman? Stupid woman? How dare you to call me a stupid woman. You are stupid. Don't you know how to talk to lady? Don't you have any manners?

Maan: don't talk about manners'you are the one who are giving comments to people you not even know'stupid woman

Girl: now I understand'you're life must be so bitter that you can't stand even a sweet coffee'ohh babaji why I am even talking to such a jerk'such an idiot'I don't want to see your ugly face ever again'

Maan: who said I want to see your ugly face'I want to see you never gain.

Girl: same here

Maan: good

Girl: perfect

So they both walk away in the opposite directions'

Precap:

Dr. Maan, Dr. Sameera, Dr. Armaan may I introduce Geet Punj to you'

So my second part'.i know it's boring'but I hope the next part will be better'again thx for you lovely comments'I'll try to pm

Edited by sonnal_17 - 15 years ago
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no yar its good but update a long part plz
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wow that was really good plz add me in pm list
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Part 3

Maan is really angry. He walks into the ward Nr3. Dr Chopra, Armaan and Sameera are already there.

Armaan whispers to Sameera: Where is our princess?

Sameera whispers back: I don' know

Dr Chopra hears them: she'll be here any moment'

Maan doesn't say anything' he thinks about this annoying girl'

A girl enters the room and two men with suitcases in their hand fallowed her. The girl looks cute and she has a chips bag in her hand.

Armaan: There she is'

Girl: Hello Dr. Chopra. I am Pinky. I am a friend of Miss Punj. She'll be right here. She wanted to have a tea.

Dr. Chopra: Ah ok. We will wait'

Armaan: why should we wait for her? We are here the doctors. A patient has to wait for the doctors and not the doctor for the patient

Dr.Chopra: Sometime a doctor has to wait for a patient Dr. Armaan.

A knock on the door'

Pinky: Ahh there she is'

Armaan looks at her'He can't belive his eyes' What is she? A greek goddess? She is a princess a real princess from heaven'

Maan didn't look to her' he is still thinking about the girl'

Dr. Chopra: Dr. Armaan, Dr. Maan, Dr. Sameera may I introduce Miss Geet Punj to you.

Geet: hi' Geet also didn't notice Maan yet.

This voice brought Maan back'

Maan shous: YOU????

Geet shouts: YOU? WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?

Maan: I AM DR. MAAN SINGH KHURANAA

Dr. Chopra to Maan: Dr. Maan do you know her

Maan and Geet: noooooo'.

Maan thought: god what is this stupid woman doing here

Geet thinks: He's a doctor'Babji the poor patients'poor me'

Dr. Chopra: Ok' Miss Geet these three young doctors will be responsible for you'

Geet thinks: Babajy why you are doing this to me'Now I have to see him every day'

Maan thinks: No she is the special patient. Now I have to handle this disaster'

Dr.Chopra: Miss Geet you must be tired... Please you take rest I'll talk to you later...And doctors I want to see you three in my in an half an hour' Dr. Maan please check Geet BP befor you leave.

Geet and the other three: ok Doctor'

Dr. Chopra leaves the room. Sameera says bye to Geet and leaves the room. Pinky and the men settle Geets room.

Pinky to Geet: I'll be right back'I want to buy some flowers for you'She and the men left also'

Armaan is still mesmerized by her beauty.

Armaan to Geet: Hi Geet! I am Dr. Armaan.

Geet: Hi Dr. Armaan

Geet finds Dr. Armaan very sweet.

Dr Maan takes Geets arm'she pushed his hand away'

Geet: oy leave my hand'don't touch me'

Maan: don't be childish I have to check your BP 'and grab her arm again but this time rougher

Geet: ouch your hurting me'

Armaan: Maan don't be so rude' you don't how to handle a princess like her'

Geet: He's so gentle' Not a dhust like you'

Maan now angry: How did call?

Geet: I called you dust' are you def or what?

Armaan: Mann let me check her BP.

Maan: no I'll check. Dr. Chopra gave me the job so I'll do it.

He checked her BP even though she protested'

Her BP was really high'But he didn't say anything and left her room'

Now Maan wondered: What's wrong with her health? Why didn't Dr. Chopra say anything about her case? He doesn't know why but the thought that something with her health isn't ok, makes his heart feel heavy.

Armaan and Geet chatted for a while' he looked at his watch' he has to leave now'

Armaan to Geet: sorry my princess but I have to leave now'c u soon.

Geet: Dr. Armaan why are you calling me princess...

Armaan: Because for me you look like a beautiful princess.

Geet blushed

Armaan: When you blush u are looking more beautiful'and pls call me Armaan when the senior doctors aren't near.

Geet: ok Armaan bye'

Precap:

Geet's heart

Edited by sonnal_17 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow that was superb cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OOh super duper sweet cute story. Can you PM me too?
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hey dats really sweet...
i really liked it...
plz continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooh its different!!! haha in my FF geet is the doctor 😛
please add me to your pm list!!



Shreya

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