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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#51

Part 10 (Happy New Year to everyone have a good one)

Kk: We reached Aai!!!! I don't have a good feeling about this I just hope everything is ok
Aai: It will be ok don't worry!!!! No one will even know you have come back to Mumbai I mean it's so big the only way they will find out you have come is if you go in front of them
Kk: You are right Aai well lets go and see Kumud and then go back
Aai: Lets go

Kuwar Industries
Ra: Please tell me what all this is about Kumud?
K: Nothing Rahul trust me
Ra: I can't cause I know you know something I don't
K: Nothing
Ra: I know you don't need this job so tell me what all this is about??
K: Look Ra it's just to do with your new project I just want to know what so big about it that Kapoor industries want to be part of it as well how is Kk related to all of this????
Ra: What do you want to know about my mom?
K: Look your mom is alive
Ra: What are you on about she died 18 years ago??
K: No she didn't look show me a picture of your mom?
Ra shows her the picture
K: She is alive look I can prove she is alive come with me

At a caf
Ka: Nakul what's wrong with you going there like that??????? I hope Kumud is ok
Na: Kali tell me what's going on????????
Ka tells him
They leave for Kumud's House

In a taxi
Ra: Where are we going??
Ku: To my house ok
Ra: Why?
Ku: Just wait you will find out

On the phone
Kshitij: Nakul where are you?
Na: At Kumud's place
Ks: Why?
Na: Long story
Ks: Ok stay there I am coming there

Nakul, Kali, Kshitij, Kumud and Rahul all reach there at the same time
Ks: Anyone want to tell me what's going on?
Na: No
Ks: Fine
K: Rahul coming
Ka: Kumud what's going on ?
K: I told him the truth now I am just proving it
Ra: You also knew you do how your dad is related to Kk right Kali??
Ka: No
Ku: What are you on about Rahul??
Ra: Kkusum is your mom as well Kali
Ku: What mama never told me about Kali!!!!!!!!!
Ka: What but this is my mama (shows a picture of Kk)
Ku: That's our mom as well
Ks: Information overload

Kk and Aai arrive Rahul and Kali are shocked
The end!!!!!! Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Lifedream

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Posted: 19 years ago

#52

Thhat was GREAT!!! Plz cont. soon! Don't leave us hangin'!!!

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#53

Part 11

Simran: Kumud, Kkusum auntie is coming today she said she is already in Mumbai and will be here soon
Ka: What this can't be true…
Si: Huh??
Kk: Simran we have already reached just a bit late
Si: Sorry auntie but Ku just got home from work
Ku: Simran!!!!!!!!!!
Si: Sorry Ku
Kk: What's all this with you working Kumud?
Ku: Nothing Simran will say anything
Kk: I know you are lying I have brought you up Kumud
Kali crying and Rahul walks off
Ku: Rahul wait
Na: Come on Kali
Ks: Come on Kali and Kumud I will deal with Rahul you can tell your mom the truth
Na: Let's go Kali
Kali still crying whilst Nakul takes her away

Ks: Rahul wait up
Ra: What do you want?
Ks: Just listen to me
Ra: Why should I?? I mean my whole life has been a lie all this time I believed that my mom is dead and she is not I have spent days wishing I had a mom and then I realise that some else is getting all her love and attention and every year dad use to give me a present saying it's from mom and she misses me much but why should I believe that when she is alive and hasn't even asked about me all these years… you know how it feels to know that she is alive and doesn't even care about me, she didn't even try and find me?????
Ks: At least you got your mom back mine is dead and will never come back so count yourself lucky you got your mom back without even asking so don't tell me you aren't happy she is alive and that you got her back I would do anything to have my mom back!!!! (Ks crying)

Na: Kali you ok??
Ka: I don't how to react happy or angry I got my mom back but why did she leave me and never come back with Kumud and how is Rahul my brother I mean how does it all work????

Kk: What's all this about who were all these people why were they here and what did they want??
Ku: Mama how could you do this leave my brother and sister here alone mother less???
Kk: What are you saying Kumud????
Ku: The people here were Kali Kapoor and Rahul Kuwar remember anything???
Kk crying: How did you all find out the truth???
Ku: A lot of pictures but how long were you planning to hide this??
Kk: But people here know that I am alive Sid knows and Jytio and Vishu all knew I was alive
Ku: Sid uncle didn't know then why did he let Rahul go on with the project in memory of you??
Kk: Because if he didn't everyone would know that I am alive and I don't want that to happen
Kali and Rahul enter
Ka: Why not you don't even want your son to know that you are alive or even your daughter???
Ku: Aai even you didn't tell anyone the truth??
A: I did I told Sarla
Ka: Kk answer my question well our question???

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#54

wow that was great
plz write soon

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Sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

#55

omg!!! when u updated....no idea at all !!!! 😳any way gr8 going.... 👏👏

A Very Happy New Year to u too.... 😛

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#56

Part 12

Kk: Aai when did you tell mumji??
Aai: When I came to Mumbai for the first time with Kumud
Ka: Answer please????
Kk: Kali beta listen to me a day hasn't gone by when I didn't think about Rahul or you but I couldn't come back I was scared I will have my heart broken again and I have that done enough by Abhay and Sid knew I was alive and I always use to send stuff for Rahul I wanted to for Kali but couldn't as Abhay would know I was alive which I didn't want and Kali I knew had a mothers love so I wasn't as worried about you as I was about Rahul!!
Ka: What mother???
Kk: Mahi and I know both of you have a right to be angry but I had to do this when I found out that Abhay was having an affair and I couldn't handle it as it took me so long to trust him again and cause off him I lost Sid!!!!!!!
Ra: Lost dad
Ka: With who????
Kk: No one you need to worry about Kali and nothing you need to worry about Rahul
Ka: I want to know
Sid: Hi Kk
Kk: Sid!!!!!!!!!!
Sid: They need to know the truth I am going to start it off but you need to add in the bits I don't know all three off them need to know the truth!
Kk: Ok
They tell them the truth
Kshitij: What that can't be true about my mum???????
Kk: Your mom??
Ku: Saakshi auntie was Kshitij and Nakul mom
Kk: Oh Sorry I wouldn't have said it all if I knew
Na: Its ok continue
Kk continues
Ka: Was that someone here who was pregent with me having and affair with my dad?
Sid: Yes!!!!!!!!
Kk: Sid no more ok??
Sid: Fine

At Kapoor House
Abhay: Where's Kali ma?
Sarla: Don't know she went to college and then I don't know she might have gone somewhere with Kumud or Nakul
Ab: But Kumud is at work so lets phone Nakul to find out
Ab: Hello Nakul
Na: Abhay uncle
Ab: Is Kali with you??
Na: Yes don't worry I will bring her home soon and she is fine
Ab: Ok bye beta
Na: Bye Uncle

Ka: Was that dad?
Na: Yep his worried about u
Ka: Did he ask where I was
Na: Nope
Ka: Good
Ra: Papa but that still doesn't explain why mom didn't come with us to the US with Kumud??
Sid: That's cause I still didn't trust Kk and then by the time I realised that I could it was too late Kumud was too old and might have found out I ma not her dad and everyone would think that Kkusum ran off with me and left Abhay and ran off with me
Ku: Does this mean that Abhay Kapoor is my dad??
Kk nods
Ku runs off
Kk: Kumud
Ks: Don't worry auntie I will look after her you lot finish off (he leaves)
Kk: that's about it. I am sorry Kali beta I left you all this time but I have always loved you as much as I loved Kumud and Rahul I have also loved you the same
Ra and Kk hug and Kali leaves
Ra: I will go after her
Na: I will come with you

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Rhea

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Posted: 19 years ago

#57

its really good!
all the confusion is being sorted out!
cont soon!

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#58

👏
that was great i hope kumud and kali forgive their parents
plz write soon

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Parineeta

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Posted: 19 years ago

#59

AWESOME continue fast suspense is killing

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Sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

#60

thnx nikita!!!! to be very honest i didn't understand a single thing of last epic but now i m quite clear.... 😛 😛 😛

gr8 going...love all dh way.... 👏 👏 👏

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