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Posted: 19 years ago

#191

Hi Guys

I am posting the next Part!! I Know you have all had to wait so long but I am really sorry i have just had so many exams and i do still have a few but i have a week off and exams at the end off June so i am going to try and write as many parts as i can to post on more quicker!! Well I hope you like this part it has taken me quite a while to write it!!

Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 40

Kali and Nakul are dancing
Ka: What was the point of that??
Na: So that people would get over the fact about Kshitij walking in with a kid!!
Ka: Look if you know what's going on would you like to tell me??
Na: No because I can not tell you as it is not up to me as it is not my secret to tell ok??
Ka: Fine

Kshitij in his room.
Ks: Dad you can go back down!
Ary: You ok beta?
Ks: Yeah I am fine
Ke: Can I go down as well?
Ks: Yeah let's go

Kshitij comes in and starts to enjoy the party
Everyone gets a big Surprise as Pinky comes back from America and Sohan also comes!!!!!!!!
Pi: Happy Birthday Little brother
Na: Thanks how come you didn't tell anyone you are coming??
Pi: I did!! I told Kshitij and he said he will send someone to pick me up from the airport
Na: Bhai why didn't you tell me she was coming?
Ks: Spoil the surprise!!
Everyone is enjoying the Party but everyone can see there is something going on that they don't know about

Finally everyone goes and the only people left are Kali, Kumud, Rahul and Sohan!! Arymaan has gone to sleep and Keya is also sleeping
Sohan doesn't know what is happening!!
Pi: Kshitij where is Rhea?? Look either me or Nakul were going to ask so you might as well tell us.
Ks: She went to see her uncle no one in India knows about Keya and she wants to keep it that way… I think I understand where she is coming from!
Pi: Oh yeah so do I!!
So and Ka together: Can someone tell me what's going on?
Ks: Something none of you need to get involved in
Garv over hears the conversation
Ga walks in and says: Why are you stopping them getting involved cause you got involved when you didn't need to!!
Ks: Because I am not heartless like you!!
Ga: Oh yeah of course how could I forget what a big heart you had!!
Pi: Both of you leave it!! Look it's Nakul's birthday so I don't need a fight to top of your entry Kshitij!! And you two said this will not effect your friendship!!
Ga: It wouldn't have if he would have left Rhea and not helped her!!
Ks: Just go from today onwards I won't nothing to do with you... You stay out of my life and I will stay out of yours ok??
Ga: Fine doesn't make a difference to me
Garv is leaving when he sees Rhea and stops
Ks: Why did you stop?? Forget something
Rhea walks in
Ra: Wow what timing eh?
Na: Shhhh Rahul for once in your life eh?
Ka: Nakul don't talk to my brother like that!!
Rh ignores all of that goes to Pinky says something to her, then carries on walking and goes to Kumud
Rh: Well what do you want to know??
Ku: Everything
Rh: Ok so how much do you know?
Na: Not much Rhea just start from the beginning
Rh: Well Keya is my daughter I will not say who the father is but he knows who he is and he was the one that left me when he found out I was pregnant!! Well the reason Keya thinks that Kshitij is her dad is because Kshitij has always been there for me and Keya since I have been pregnant and he done things with Keya which only fathers to with there daughters and Keya from then on started calling Kshitij dad!! I also tried to commit suicide but I was saved by Kshitij and since then he promised me he will never leave me and Keya even if it ruins his relationships in India!!
Ra: Then why didn't he marry you??
Rh: Kshitij did ask me but I said no saying he needs to marry the one he loves not me because I am carrying a child that isn't even his!! Anything else??
Kumud leaves from there, Rahul goes after but Kali says leave her on her own Kali and Sohan also leave
Rh: We should get going
Ks: No you are going to stay her tonight ok??
Na: If you say no I will not let you go as it still my birthday for a minute.
Rh: Ok then!!

The End!!!!!!!
Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Parineeta

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Posted: 19 years ago

#193

Awesome job...terrific continue soon more kumud n kshitij scenes

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muqualp

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Posted: 19 years ago

#194

great part! please cont soon! that wasnt really the end?

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GK-KK~ROCKS

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Posted: 19 years ago

#195

It was a superb comeback. 😃 😛 😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#196

Hi Guys,
Thanx for all the great comments!! I will post the next part in a while!!

Nikita

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#197

Part 41

The next in the morning
Nakul and Kshitij are downstairs having breakfast Rhea comes downstairs!!
Ks: Hi Rhea sleep well??
Rh: Yeah great
Na: That's good because I am taking you and Keya out today!!
Rh: Oh you don't have to I was planning to go back to America later on this week so I wanted to book my ticket and things!!!
Pinky (As she comes down the stairs): Well you can do that tomorrow as today me, Nakul and Kshitij are taking you out right??
Ks and Na: Yep
Ks: It's going to be the five of us and we are going to have a good time!!! No Worries or Problems!!
Rh: Fine let me go and get Keya ready!!

At this moment Kumud comes to Kshitij house and is shocked to know that Rhea has stayed the night there and leaves before any one notices that she was there…

At Kuwar House
Kumud goes back there
Kali: Hi Kumud where have you been
Ku lies: Nothing just went for a walk
Ka: Oh right so you went for a walk in a car?
Ku: What!! No I drove to the park and then went for a walk!
Ka: Ok then… (She let the subject drop) You want to go shopping?
Ku: Why Not?
Ka laughs and they leave

Kshitij, Rhea, Nakul, Pinky and Keya also leave for their day out!!
They go around the sites of Mumbai
They have lunch at the club. Afterwards Pinky and Rhea go out to do some shopping.
They go to the same mall Kumud and Kali are at!!
Pinky and Rhea try on different outfits when Kumud and Kali come into the shop!!
Pi: Rhea come on buy something. You are not paying for it I am!!
Rh: No I can't let you buy it for me.
Pi: Don't worry about it it's not even my money I mean it's Kshitij bhai's card and he never lets anyone use his money I mean you of all people should know that!
Rh: I know that but I can't I mean Kshitij does enough for me with buying me things!
Pi: Don't worry about it, think of it as a birthday present then ok?
Rh: Ok I guess there is no point arguing!!
Pi (smiles): Of course there is no point when have you ever won an argument against me?
Rh: Never
Pi: Exactly.
Kumud sees Rhea and Pinky having a laugh…
Nakul walks in with Keya
Na: Come on you two we have other things to do and Bhai is getting impatient
Pi: Just wait a moment we are just paying for what we brought!
Na: Well I would hurry up in case Bhai changes his mind about the money!
Rhea laughs

Kali sees Nakul with Rhea and Keya she doesn't see Pinky paying for the clothes!
Ka: Nakul
Na: Hey babes! How are you?
Ka: I am fine! What are you doing here? (looking at Rhea)
Na: Well what would someone do at the mall but shop?
Ka: Nakul you know what I mean!
Rhea walks away slowly but Nakul notices and stops her from leaving
Kali notices.
Ku: Kali I found something!
She doesn't realise that Kali has noticed Rhea she turns and she sees that Kali is talking to Nakul and Nakul is carrying Keya and holding Rhea's hand.
Kshitij walks in

The End!!!!!!!
Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#198

Hey guys
Thanx for the comment hopefully i will be able to update it by 2mo i have tried to write as much as i can. I should me finished by 2mo so i will update it as soon as i finish.

Nikita

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muqualp

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Posted: 19 years ago

#199

cant weait....its already tmmrw though!

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#200

sorry for the delay guys my comp is really messing up so it is really hard to get on the internet and post the next part!!

Nikita
Anyway enjoy the next part

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