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Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

hey nice story
but why so sad ending???.....sorry i don't mean to sound rude but i am and they lived happily ever after kinda person......
anyways it was written beautiful
keep up the good work.

thanks for your comment

don't be sorry its just your pov😛. i will try to make only happy ending os in future😊.

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice one



love
Riddss

thanks once again dear😃

Originally posted by: kash.is.bk4ever

:'( sad ending
but it was touching <3

thank u dear😃

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

Dude!!
U F****en made me cry!!
Gawd it was so sad!!
If possible do cont wid a second part!

Since I am the hapily ever after types!!

thank u dear😉

Originally posted by: shinseen

very well written by youyeh OS parhe ker last sene yaad agaya Shilp aur Armaan ka

jab wo kahti hia **I MISS you Dr. Armaan Mallik**

sad ENDing DMG mein hi kaafi hia

yehan tu hum apne DIL ki baat kerskty hian..................kiun?

and please when you post any tyape of story please PM me

thanks once again to share your thouhts

take care

THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS DEAR😉