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Posted: 14 years ago
update on its way ......how many of you want it ...? shud i update ...or wil do it tom..?
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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

update on its way ......how many of you want it ...? shud i update ...or wil do it tom..?

do it NOW........How can u think of tomorrow???😃
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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

update on its way ......how many of you want it ...? shud i update ...or wil do it tom..?

NOOOOOOOOOO NOT TOM
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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

update on its way ......how many of you want it ...? shud i update ...or wil do it tom..?

noooooooooooooooooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzz today love this ff today today today 😆
Edited by maaneetfan123 - 14 years ago
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my on my ..slow it down gal
cause i m with you tonight ...
okay here it goes in next post ..........
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guyz forgive me.....its not that big ..and......i dont know whether you will be satisfied with it or not ...some of u wanted something else from this part ...but i had something else in my mind.....hope you like it
fingers crossed..........
part 13

As she tightened the knot of the bandage ........it had hit directly his wound........................causing a piercing pain to him ...too sharp to bear..

.....he jerked up in reflex....with the loud groan escaped from his mouth ........causing geet to go numb at fright ............. ...scared geet was about to get up ........when he caught her hand out of reflex to bear the stabbing pain ...........

With the sudden pull.........................before she could check her balance ..she found herself landed on his lap......

Ahhhhhh........!!..u silly woman ................. what did you do .....?

he seethed fiercely and opened his eyes...........
he was about to bark at her when he found the most beautiful face of the world staring at him........ few inches away from his own.........

Her breathtaking butterfly eyes widened in shock.......gaping at him with awe mixed with horror ........Pink supple lips of hers parted a little.....trembling in fear ....

Unruly locks of her messed up hair falling allover her face......

Her chest heaved as she gasped in fear ......

Her petite delicate body was stiff ......he could feel the heat of her body transfusing through the bare part of his skin touched her .................

His brain was flaring stopping indication to him......refraining him from stooping down on her ....................but somewhere in his chest something was throbbing limitlessly ........

He hated her ......he immensely hated her ....he had promised himself countless times he will never look at her face.....at least not in her eyes....
Naino ki mat manio re......naino ki mat sunio .......
Naina ki manio re ....naino ki mat sunio ....

Naino ki mat sunio re......

Naina thag lenge.....naina thag lenge thag lenge...
Nainaaaa thag lenge .....

jagte jaadu phukenge re jagte jagte jaadu

jagte jaadu phukenge re nindein banjar kar denge

naina thag lenge....... naina thag lenge.......

naina thag lenge, thag lenge, naina thag lenge
naino kee mat maaniyo re....naino ki mat sunio.....

Woman can never be trusted.....

she had tried to kill me....

I hate her ....

Woman are meant to ditch ...

I cant trust her .....

My job doesn't allow me ....

I cant let her come close to me...

Its dangerous ....

I and death are pronounced together .....

She is out of my league ....

Its sin.................................................................sin ....and that's it....i know it more than anything.........

But I m losing it..... .....

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He couldn't take away his gaze............he couldnt take his eyes off his enemy.............................................all he could do drink the most beautiful sight of world....

" Beautiful.".....the word escaped from his mind........................but didn't reach his lip.......neither he moved nor he released her ......dazed chief sat still with geet on his lap ......

Meetha sa ishq laage,
kadvi judaayi


yaar mera sachha laage,
jhooti khudaayi

Geet saw the language in his eyes changing........from fury to.......stun ..........daze.......is it lust in his eyes....?his eyes licked her eyes and then going slowly downward.....and fixed on her lips........ then again went back to her eyes...the melting light of moon was alluring them......

Meetha sa ishq laage,
kadvi judaayi


yaar mera sachha laage,
jhooti khudaayi

At first She wriggled to free her hand .......but seems like the movement was not awakening him ....he turned to statue .....only his eyes told her that he had life in him........

His eyes were capturing her eyes into some bottomless unfathomable sensation.....the intent eyes were slowly passing poison to her.......he was hypnotizing her .......unknown of herself she slowly had stopped wriggling ...........she felt his eyes were burning her .........unknown of herself her heart quickened beating ...........she couldn't hear a single thing .....she couldn't see a single thing except the face....3/4th of which was covered .......but that was enough ....his eyes were telling her a unsounded language.......and she felt she is able to decipher..........

chandni ne tan pe mere, chadar bhichaayi
odha jo tune mujhko, saans laut aayi


chandni ne tan pe mere, chadar bhichaayi
odha jo tune mujhko, saans laut aayi
ohooooo'.ohhoooo'..

Her eyes........her ocean deep eyes.......the naive big lashes......wet with old tears.....the frightened gaze......slowly turned into something inexplicable ...he could read submission in her eyes.....and what more...........?

He watched her bright cheeks flushing as it turned red.......he could hear the random beats of her heart ......her warm moist breaths fanned on his chin .....

Her kissable full lips were still trembling...............but not out of fear ....out of panting........to match the increasing beats of her heart .......he knew.....he could read his effect on her ........so much he desired to see this effect on her ......

She sat still on his lap......as if she was meant to be there......as if it was the coziest place on earth ......each muscle of her relaxed .....she sat there with her little wrist in his grip....

She felt safe......once again .......

He again lifted his gaze to her eyes.......the gaze in her eyes....the submission .....or may be trust .......he couldn't stop himself from accepting the fact ..

He loved her eyes...!!

yeh aalam hai ishq ishq, aalam hai
ohooooo'.ohhoooo'..
yeh aalam hai ishq ishq, aalam hai

ohoooo....ohoooo....

I cant trust her ....i don't trust her .....i so hate her ......but why m I seeing trust in her eyes.........why m I feeling she is submitting herself to me....

Why m I loving this ......why my heart beats growing louder.....

Why ........for the first time I m feeling I do have a heart ....?

What are you saying geet.....say it loud........i wanna hear you.......i wanna hear this bizarre utterance of your beautiful eyes...... his mind said.......

Did it reach geet's ears....?

It was the moment ....or their hormones....?...whatever it was their heart was taking over their brain .......

mehndi ka rang jhat se, gehra gaya
ek pal mein haayeee kya huaaaa.....?


payalon ka shor jaane, kaise tham gaya
ek pal mein haayeeee kya huaaaa....?


man maane na, kuch jaane na
baawaarapan ghudi sa udhe'.

He slowly lifted his other hand .......to wipe out a little stain of blood on her temple ....it was his blood.......staining geet's forehead ....

Was it symbolic......?

What was the blood denoting ......what is written on her destiny .....he.. .......or his blood....???

He reached out her milky skin to wipe it off.....she didn't protest....nor moved a little.....she allowed him like he owned her ....he saw her closing her eyes at his touch .......he watched her face tilted a little with his touch.......like she wanted him to touch her....caress her face...

bole bina kitna, kuch keh gaya
raat bhar mein sochta raha


ek masiha mujhko, choo kar gaya
kaun tha mein dhoondta gaya


man maane na, kuch jaane na
baawarapan ghudi sa udhe'.

She closed her eyes to counteract the shivering sensation of his touch on her forehead ......

whats happening to me.......why m I craving for this touch ......why m I not able to move my body from him .......why m I wanting him ......?
meetha sa ishq laage, kadvi judaayi
yaar mera sachha laage, jhooti khudaayi


meetha sa ishq laage, kadvi judaayi
yaar mera sachha laage, jhooti khudaayi


chandni ne tan pe mere, chadar bhichaayi
odha jo tune mujhko, saans laut aayi


chandni ne tan pe mere, chadar bhichaayi
odha jo tune mujhko, saans laut aayi


ohooooo'.ohhoooo'..
yeh aalam hai ishq ishq, aalam hai
ohooooo'.ohhoooo'..
yeh aalam hai ishq ishq, aalam hai

She opened her eyes........

kaun ho tum.......................................?????????????

who are you .....?

the most expected .....and most unwanted question had finally been asked ........

fraction of a millisecond .....the words entered his ears...........each fiber of his muscle contracted.........and he broke the gaze to avoid her eyes......

shit ....................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

he immediately released her ...............pushed her back ......

it was bound to come .......!!!........

he shut his eyes tight quickly facing his back to her.......

go inside.....................................leave .....!

geet stood there rooted ............... his voice was bitter ......than his eyes.......why his tongue and eyes speak languages poles apart .......

who are you .....................geet was persistent on her question ....

its not important .......his mechanical voice told her

it is ............she finished after a pause...........to me...!

he gripped the railing .......to control the sensation that geet sent through her answer...

there was nothing to react ....but there was something very much wrong ......in her voice...

geet go inside............he tried....tried his best to sound rude....but couldn't ..... u might catch a cold...

not until u say who are you .....

chief was silent ...................he had no answer.....except this.

" your enemy .....!! "

geet was mum by the answer.....

are you ....??........... she finally asked....

geet ......you had hit me ......chief changed the topic...... u tried to kill me...

because u had kissed me and.......she paused meaning everything which she left unsaid.........geet was being too much straight forward for him .....

chief ...the chief ....the killer felt the tinge of fear with her straightforwardness...

he was rendered mum .....

the silence was too awkward to break .....

geet was adamant ...she moved forward and stood beside him ......facing him .....so that she can read his eyes.....

but he knew his eyes can spill .....so he avoided looking at her ....

he knew she is going to repeat her old question ..........she needed to be stopped....

you had kissed me back ...... he bit his tongue for saying that ..

geet turned back as the words sank in ......it took her some more moments to compose herself....

kaun ho tum ......? she asked ignoring his deliberate try to avoid the topic.....

I m chief ......the killer .....a petty criminal ...why do you interest..?

She was mum again .....and he knew it would work...

Why do you hide your face...but she wanted her answers...badly

He scoffed .....i thought you are intelligent ........to hide my identity ..!!

The phone rang harshly to break the thick air of tension created in the balcony.....

Geet ...i don't feel like to answer your silly questions ...now if u excuse me......

He answered the call.....

Yes...

Chief .....musafir has been killed....no trace of sudhir ............

Shit ....!!he shut his eyes in despair.....musafir was his most trusted subordinate....

Police has arrested makdi red-handed on the spot of the mirja's weapon deal.....around 60 lakhs unlicensed ammunition has been caught by police raid.... cm privately recommended not to give bail to anyone...media is paying good attention to this matter ....how we gonna save yash ....!! police is searching madly for raman and sudhir.....i have saved raman ...he is now with me......

Why the hell he was there in the operation ..? I repeatedly told him not get physically involved in these things......why why ....? he punched the railing out of frustration ....

Sir......aadi paused.....yash thaught he can prove himself more trustworthy as makdi was suspecting information is being leaked...

Then why the hell I was not informed previously .....??Listen .....do whatever ....crack locks break the bars .....get him out .....he must not be counted in that list ... chief was never so anxious.....

Boss.....vigilance is very strict ....

I don't want to know aadi......get him out ...wait ....i will call someone....and calling you after that ....

Chief ...what about sudhir and raman ......?

Wait .....they were not in the operation ....right ...?

No .....actually musafir came to save yash......

Hmmm.....keep raman in your custody ...

Boss what will be about the informers ...?we will be weak ......worry was evident on aadi's voice...

That could be dealt later ....and by the way we still have two others...

Sir do you think after taking out yash ..taleb will still trust on them ....

He has to take new persons aadi ...or else he will not be able to run his new business ....this time someone most efficient ......he ended meaningfully ...

What do you mean sir......aadi's voice quevered .....whats going on in chief's mind....probably he could read it .....

Aadi don't panic ......take care of the present situation ......

Sir sudhir....?

Kill him .......as quick as possible....

How do you know......aadi was stunned......!!!

Chief let out a small laugh.........he uttered the next wording while controlling a deadly laugh.....

No one can save himself from my eyes aadi .... Shut him up forever ...NOW .......!!.

Geet shivered as someone's death sentence was being announced.....

Sudhir was cheating on him....both sudhir and yash was in same place working with perfect co-ordination ......raman was saved by chance ....but sudhir fled away ...how...why didn't he show up till now.....this means......

He is traitor ....!!

And listen ....dont inform anything to yash's family ......his wife is going to deliver his child next month .....send money in the name of his...

He hung up the call.......

How can you kill someone .....??? he heard the voice fuming from his back...

You wont understand...!!

I will ...try explaining ......she said crossing her hands adamantly against her chest ....

He is a traitor..... he didn't know why he explained himself....

So ...? u get the authority to finish his life ..?

Geet ...you don't understand....he has defrauded us ...chief tried again ...

So you will kill him...? how can u take someone's life...what do you think yourself ..??

I m not bound to answer you...!!

Yes you are...tell me what do you want...money ...?power ...? what ...

He refused to reply ...as she ranted on ....

You can earn money by hard work ....did you ever try that ...ohh how can you ...you build up your muscle to show it on woman ...and kill innocent people....

I had told you I don't kill innocents ..... he stopped her

Ohh really ...!! ...geet fumed in anger the more he tried to defend himself........who has given you the authority to decide who is innocent and who is not ...that was lame.....you hear me....that was utterly lame...you want wealth power and ................she paused to say the next set of words......to waste it on lusting over woman .......shameless cre............

she was abruptly stopped by a dangerous groan........

stop it ....he yelled breaking the silence into pieces ...

You are getting on my nerves you woman ....you want to know na ....then listen ...

If I don't kill sudhir........... he will take a lot of life..he has been tempted against a lump of money ..he is bought ....

Whose life..?,.....some criminals like you ......??? she retorted back

Yes...like me...now get lost u silly woman ....!!

he couldn't take it more.......................The address criminal had hit him tight ....he had forgotten a few minutes ago he had addressed himself a criminal....

Yes ..of course I have to get lost ...cause you don't have any answer to me....u escapist ...!!!!

Geeeeet ...he hissed.....just shut up.....

No ....you shut up ......!! and take it from me......you will be punished....you will suffer .....u bloddy criminal...she seethed in anger .....she raised her finger to his nose.... and was about stomp inside when ...........

Ohh yeah... why don't you go to police and punish me....he retorted back from her back...

She was mum ...... she couldn't retort back....she couldn't say .....I WILL...

And chief noticed her silence....

she was feeling void inside......she was suffering ....she didn't know the actual cause...she didn't like it .....anything she did outside.......she had herself accused him.... he had just defended himself.....

But a lump was clogging her throat ...... he is criminal .....but why his eyes speak so different language......why it is so pure .......? her heart and brain was in war again ...

After some time he went inside and found her sitting infront of the fireplace while emptying out the alcohol of the bottle held in her hand....

He rushed to pull her back as he saw hungry flames of fire dancing few inches away from her face......

Geet ...what are you doing .....are you out of your mind..... he shook her wildly while she had kept her eyes down..... with lips sealed.....

She lifted her eyes gradually .....to meet his......he read the unuttered question in them,...... Why do you commit sin ......?

Why ?...................she whispered proving himself right ...

Geet I kill people I rob people but I don't lust over women.........neither i kill innocents .....he whispered making her see through his eyes....

she knew he is saying the truth ...she stared at his eyes....which were reading her acceptance .....

He released her ....

Go and catch some sleep .....its quite late at night ....

She silently rose and about to go ....when he whispered....

Why do you bother geet ...............................????.....you shouldn't ......

Hours passed ....geet lay in her bed .....with eyes open....

A question was ringing in her ears .....

Why do you bother geet ......?....?????????

Why do I bother ....? .....she asked herself.....but she had no answer....why it matters to me whether he is a good person or not .....

why it has become suddenly so important to me......whether he is that bad or not ......?.....when already I know he is a criminal....the actual place of criminals is the place behind the bars .....then why m I fumbling .....why couldn't I reply him .....that I will send him behind the bars .....

Why do I find his eyes innocent ....why his word doesn't match his eyes.....why do I feel so safe in arms of a criminal......why my heart says to trust his eyes.....

What is that in his eyes.....................i feel like to trust him .....let myself loose ....

meetha sa ishq laage, kadvi judaayi
yaar mera sachha laage, jhooti khudaayi


meetha sa ishq laage, kadvi judaayi
yaar mera sachha laage, jhooti khudaayi

ohooooo......ohhoooo....
yeh aalam hai ishq ishq......., aalam hai
ohooooo.....ohhoooo.....
yeh aalam hai ishq ishq........, aalam hai

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Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Reet your amazing loved the update wow wat a fantastic ff👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
REET!

LOLZZ 😆 That was awesome! They have so much to say and yet they say nothing at all . . . Their eyes speak for them and its wonderful . . . ! But please reveal more as to why Chief does what he does and how come we can't call him Maan? Give Geet more insight so she realizes that she is in L.O.V.E!!!!

Love ur rapid updates sweetheart!
Edited by luvabbybaby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing!
loved it!
hez not really a criminal but juz fighting against those who do wrong
juz loved d way they were lost into each other
geet on his lap n staring at each other!
it wz amazing!
loved it loadzzzz!
update sooooooon!

love
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tat was strongest update uptil nw wit maaneet confrontation n lots of spoken n unspoken truths, wel done gal, good potrayal wit a fantastic song accompanayin it.

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