[MG] FF~ In Love With Enemy(I) updt new thrd? - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow, awesome ,amazing, brilliant update. loved it.
pls pls update soon.
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plzzzzzzzzzzz reet i m waiting impatiently 4 ur nxt update plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
today only I started reading this FF and read it one go... really awesome work... a different story line...
please contd asap.
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Posted: 14 years ago
gawd this maan is just so agressive towards her....he is
manhandling her..poor geet...i really am amused wid ur
style of writing....and the precap...so eager...
keep writing...👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soonnnnnnnnn.
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee the update.
Maan and geet r falling in love with eachother.
Thanxxx for the pm.




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plz update soon!!!! cant wait anymore lolz...
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oh wow- no updates for today..hmm
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wow! what an amazing ff! plz add me to ur pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
uuh so sorry guys i coudnt update it ....
what to say ...my update is ready .....but the problem is ....i m nt getting a song ...i need to select a song .......awwww....i m so frustrated ....!!
plz wait for tomorrow may be something comes in my mind ...
plz dn eat me up for nt updating ...i m very much sorry
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Posted: 14 years ago
better late than never ....me updating .....well not satisfied with the song ....but cant waste time scratching my dumb head ...lolz....
hope u enjoy it
part 6
precap-

she didn't know how long he drove.......as she had fallen asleep being tried crying for a long time .............

suddenly something made her wake up ......as she found herself hanging in the air.........a pair of strong arms clasped around her .........the cologne was too prominent to her nostrils ..............his cold robust chest she felt on her side............ his warm and hurried breaths were fanning out on her bare neck ........

After a fraction of seconds she realized she is in his arms....he is carrying her .....but to where ....?

she didn't know she tightened her grip around his neck .........

And he knew she had woke up .....he continued walking not bothered by her ...

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he dropped her ......and with a * thud * she landed on the floor....

uhhh ...!!........

she winced anticipating the pain ...but it didn't hurt her that much .....as she found her on a lump of dried straws ....
nautanki ....!!.........he mumbled.....

he looked at her........hair all messed ..her purple colour suit has torn a bit ....she was struggling to open the blind fold around her eyes......as she was trying doing it ...her hairs moved behind making her nape peep out.....................his eyes fall upon the bluish purple scratches on her white nape ...

his eyes were fixed on the marks.....he recalled his hand their pinning her to the wall.......suddenly he noticed she is almost done with the blindfold.....turning back to her he moved away ....

after a few minutes of trying she managed to open it and her eyes took some more time to adjust in the light .....she looked around .....its a shabby place......with wooden roof and wooden floor ....filthy darkness in the corners as only a dim light was hanging over her head ....might be a garage .....as she noticed two discarded tires at a corner.........

she sighed.....her eyes were feeling heavy because of crying .....but where is he ....is he left this place ....omg .....putting me down here he left ...!!

babaji ...!! the mere thought of being alone here dried her throats ......

hello.....!! she tried to call out ....but no sound came out of throat .....she felt her throat choking in thirst and she started coughing ..

she bent down in force of coughing ....

when a bottle thumped in front of her.....and a packet thrown just after it....

looking at the source she found him munching something sitting quite away from her......with stretched legs ........she noticed he has took off his shirt .....just clad in a blank tank top.........

which made her look away ....little uneasy.....she had never seen any man in his vest ....this distracted her but she couldn't stop her coughs ......she ignored the bottle and turned away ..!

eat before I tie u up and get some sleep ........!!

she didn't pay attention to him ......tried to sooth her throat by gulping down saliva and rubbing it externally ....

he was irritated by the cough ....he ignored and took another bite from the food .......but as he saw her turning back to him and the foods.......he understood she is not going to listen to him ....he had started knowing this stubborn girl...

he tried to ignore again ...but couldn't .....he kept down his food packet ....and neared her ....

kneeling down behind her ..he picked up the bottle ...and pulled her towards him in a sudden jerk ......shocked she opened her mouth feeling herself in his clasp .... she felt his warm skin of his bare chest rubbing the bare part of her arms .......as he had held her tight with his chest by one arm ......

and he poured the water in her mouth .....though ..the way was not a caring way .....but one cant call it outright rude way ......

she gulped down water filled in her mouth and stared at him with shock in her eyes......then it changed to anger .....

his gaze scrolled upon to her eyes from her mouth....as he realized her body stiffening in his arms.......and he looked at those big honey brown eyes.....the koel has smudged ...the puffy eyes fixed on his own .........the ruffled hair locks falling on her face .the tip of her nose has turned red..due to coughing ..or may be crying........... he realized he is actually staring at her ....again .....and when not needed ...

he cursed ........both himself ....................and this stupid woman ....with big talketive eyes ..

releasing her with a jerk ......he moved away ......picking up the food kept on the ground he made his way out.......

this time geet herself took the bottle and splashed water in her face until the bottle finished..........after feeling the cold water against her hot skin ...she felt bit calmer ...releasing her hairs from the plait she ran her fingers to smooth down .......

what have u done u silly woman......!!!!!!! the groan made her look back ......

he yelled seeing the empty bottle laid near her feet ..... that's the only bottle I had .....

shit ,...!! u dumb woman...!!

he gritted his teeth .....and looked at her .......he was about shout again when his eyes struck her face .....

and he stopped abruptly .....................

his mind stopped ..his tongue paralised......seeing her wet face ....water drops descending down as the wet locks were falling on her face .....her wet eyelashes....bit widened in his sudden shriek .....her wet lips ..he could see a drop of water still lingering on it .......he scrolled down his eyes to her neck and lower....and suddenly again looked up at her realising what exactly he is doing .... .......and turned away.....al this happened within a fraction of second ....

I was supposed to shout on her ......yell at her .....be mad at her .....and i m checking her out .....godd....whats wrong with me....!! he blinked his eyes in frustration

Seeing him going away ...she muttered ...Khadoooosh !! Dusht ..!! Daanaav !!!....

she gritted her teeth ...he is barking like that just because I finished his water ...isnt that the bottle he had given it to me ...how was I suppose to know that's the last one....wait a min .,,...dint he say I had ...ohh doing mercy on me by giving it to me.........

ohhh did I tell him to kidnap me ...bloody criminal ......!!!!!

She went on in her process of cursing .....after sometime she realised it had been a good time he didn't return back .....after a while .....she was feeling scared .....her eyes were searching for him ...but there was no sound.....it started raining out side like cats n dogs ....the garage was getting brightened with each lightening ........she again looked up for him......

She stood up ....walked towards the door .....may be it's the time for running away the thought clicked in her mind ...............was about to step outside.....when bolt from the blue he appeared in front of her ...causing her to bump on his robust chest .....

she hit her nose on his hard chin in the try of looking up ....as her soft body hit his chest hard ... dreaded at the thought of being scolded by him again ....she quickly turned back ......but he didn't shout .....

he just chuckled ........looking at uneasy geet

she looked around .......why did I meet this jerk ...sadoo ....khadush ........!!!at this time I would have lying on my cozy bed snuggling with my duvet ....and see where I m stuck ....and that too with that dusht danav ..!!!

eat n Go to sleep .....!! his husky voice broke her dream of having a sleep on her soft clean bed..

Where ? she couldn't stop herself from asking that .

He narrowed his eyes at her ...... there he indicated the dried paddies ....

She scoffed .....ohh really ...!!

What do you expect madam..? will make a bed for you ..? so that my queen can sleep with all her comfort .....huh .....he smirked.....

She didn't feel like to retort back ....

Guys click the link ..... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TgAy9jIacCM

Let it play in back ground ....and u be with them..

He looked at her ......pouting her lips looking at something with her hands on her hips .......and the rush of wind blew in ....causing her hairs to ruffle again .......he stared at her as she ran her fingers through them..... ..he didnt know a smile quickly passed through his lips ....as he saw her lips pouting checking the dust on the floor........she twitched her little nose oblivious to the burning gaze on her....she sat down on the floor.....

and he took a step towards her.......

another turtling sound of lightening .....and the huge rush of wind blew in ......

As she was settled in her so called "bed "...she had a strange feelings....and looking up she found him nearing at her ......

the sight .....the very sight made her numb instantly .....ohh no ....babaji ...!!!she gasped......

bahar se koi andar aasake .....

andar se koi bahar na ja sake.....

socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho ....

socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho....

Her mind was blank for a second .............what is he coming here ........why is he looking at me in that deadly way .......is it lust in his that noxious eyes.... is he going to rape me......hey babaji ....!!

Don't come close to me......!!! stop right there .....!!

...she warned with a feeble voice......she looked sideways for something ...something that could be used as weapon ....but to he dismay there was nothing .....

She gasped as she saw he took another step further ............. her heart raced in fear ......what is he upto ....babaji .save me ...!!

Hey Stop ....!she pointed out her little white finger .....

But he stepped ahead ....

No .......dont ....she mumbled.......tried to run to one side....but he blocked he was too swift to do that ...

hum tum .....ek kamre bandh ho......!!

aur ........ ** winks **

Look stop right there......she shouted panting heavily .....!!

the words were not affecting him ...as she noticed the slowly decreasing gap between them....she could swear he is chuckling ....even behind the musk .... his eyes had the sparkle in them........

she looked at all around helplessly ....she knew she cant run away being cornered by him at one edge ......

Yes ...he was enjoying it .... slowly .....took each of his steps ahead ....like a leopard ...and the aura of lethal danger kills the deer before the death ...

as he saw her stepping back .....he chuckled inwardly as he stared at the scared deer trapped by him .........he slowly but steadily moved towards his prey ......he was aware of the fact .....what the idea she was getting ....

She was feared to death ....as her back hit the wall behind ....she couldn't imagine more.....dreaded ....she closed her eyes not able to do anything else......she was so much scared she held her breath waiting for the monster to pounce on her ....

But she was too shocked as she found she is being turned back at a sudden jerk .....and both of her hands being tied by something .........

she tried to turn back ....and wriggle ....when she jerked by his bare shoulders to look ahead.......and she did ....................

tying her up he bent on her .....he moved his fingers stroking her arm lightly ..... he clasped her shoulders from her back ...................and took a deep breath filling his lungs by her scent ..........he checked on her ....and chuckled seeing her closed eyes .....feeling her stiff body frozen under his clasp he smiled inwardly .......
she found her tongue tied in horror.....she couldn't shout ....she found her own body frozen ..........................shut her eyes tight dreaded in fear ....
bending down on her white nape ......he moved her tresses back ......giving him a free access of soft skin ............brushing her nape by his rough lips ...his hungry breaths hit her skin ........
but suddenly he left her heaving in tangled emotions ...scared ...........baffled......and relieved ..???
no dear ....that's not a typing mistake.............questions are there ...!😉

I know its short ...but better some than nothing isn't it ....

Chalo me gotta go ......goodnight to all who are in india ...and love to all of them from outside india..

Love

Reet

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Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago

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