[MG] FF~ In Love With Enemy(I) updt new thrd? - Page 14

it was very good............ maan is the inspector................... ha ha ha ...........

okies that was killer of update...

Maan was so funny. I haf a feeling dat da Chief is Maan. He is playing 2 characters. Mayb just a guess. The update was awesome. Thanx 4 da pm.:-)

Reet honey, i cud never imagine that d gal who writes d sooo emotional BT can write this sort of emmm... Thriller. But here u r doing it well... quite decently. A lot of suspenc, lets wait n watch whats there on d cards next:)
i hope u update it quickly vrna i ll send u dhiishum dhiishum pms;)
ps-i know msk n chief r same, thr is no ques of them being seperate:) after all its a maaneet ff, nhi!

reet - this a very very different story.... i had thot the chief is Maan but tumne to inspector ko maan bana diya... lol... nice story ...comtinue soon

Reet!!!!!!!!!!

oyee...update deta hai ya bulau...chief ko.....

nice update....

shivangi --- hey honey thank u so much ...i have updated....and next update will be up at 10.30 pm .....all ready ...uhh by the way ...keep reading honey .....suspence will be unfolded with each update ...slowly...!

PART - 5

MAAN SINGH KHURANA....!! he proudly announced inflating his chest ...

Thank you Mr Maan Singh Khurana ....!! she muttered after a pause ......

Geet got up ...so as puja ........

Before going out of the door ...she looked back at the officer .........

She moved her gaze ....but before going she looked back again to lock her eyes with him ......... is he smiling .....but his face is straight ....!!

He waved his hand as a bye ....

Ohhh god...this flirt ...!!!

Uhh whatever ...

Why the hell I was staring at this silly police officer ...whats his name ...maan singh khurana isn't it ....? humph....!! he doesn't look like his name sounds ....she chuckled .....

Oye ...here I m robbed and u r smiling ...? puja broke her trance ....

Whats that ?

Lolz....
she let out a small laugh .......and thought .....his stare ....ummm so uncomfortable ....what was it in his stare .......??umm why did I feel its familiar ....

Arrgghhhhh ....geet puttar ... get a grip .!!!..now a day's u r thinking too much of menz......!! first that musk man ...and now this joker .....!! huh .....she scolded herself

Oye listen ....u go to home ...i will go the person was going to introduce me to dev sir ...puja's voice brought her back ....

Okay .....byee....she took a taxi bidding her bye.......the taxi stopped soon in a signal .....

And was about to start again when someone barged in her taxi......and at that instant the signal became green ...

Hey what are you doing ....hey .....!!! .she shouted.......

Ohh lady ...my bike has punctured can u please give a lift...please lady ... ??? the man in the helmet begged...

The taxi started .......

U see there is no other taxi available .....!! please lady ...!!

No find another one ..i can't give u a lift !

She lowered down her voice but was still adamant on her demand...

He dropped his head .....took a pause and said....

What if I say ...i won't ....!! his voice had totally changed ....

Whattt ...? how dare you ?

I guess this is your favorite dialogue ...he chuckled...

She felt something strange ..yet familiar .....who are you ..?

He took off the helmet from his head And chuckled ...

And winked behind the muck !!!

Geet jumped in horror.......
what you are doing here ....!!

Simple .......Following you sweet heart ...!!! I thought you are intelligent ..... he smirked...

Don't you have anything else to do ??

Darling as of now you are my prime interest ....!! he leaned on the back seat ...

Look don't call me sweetheart darling and all that ...

Honey I told you not to go to cops... his deadly cold voice was back ...............

geet was numb for some moments ... babaji ...!!

Look I dint go there to complain about you ...... I went for ... she tried to reason ...!

Your friend puja ...to lodge a FIR about her purse theft ... he completed ....

She stared at him with jaw dropped .....!!

Why honey ..!! why do u always open your mouth anything I say to you ....

She closed her mouth and said ..... look .....! he didn't let her finish ....

Yes darling I m looking at you ...and you will too.....as you are now going with me .....we will be having enough time to gaze each other ...eyelocks and all .....he grinned slyly ...

I m not going anywhere with u ... she backed off ...

Yes you are ...... the order was coldly stern ..!!

No I m not .....u cant take me any where .....no way ....she couldn't think of much ...but she had decided to get out of the car ..even if its running ..no matter what happens next ...

Taxi.....roko ....jaldi roko ....she grabbed her purse to run away ....she opened the door to jump down .............when she felt the strong grip on her wrist .....

As she tried to get rid of his grip .....

Stop wriggling u silly woman ...!! he glared ... and sit zipping ur mouth ...

As she looked up ...she found a gun pointed on taxi drivers neck ... she gasped in horror ....the man is too dangerous ...!!

Drive until I ask u to stop ....take the highway on left .....to which the poor driver just nodded...

Darling I know you are brave ...but have some brain too......see I had told you earlier ....that not to mention anything about me ....but u didn't listen to me...what can I do ....!! ...

What the hell......why don't you understand ..... I haven't said anything about you there ...

Stop lying girl ...!!! I know u didn't but u tried ......he retorted calmly while checking out the road ...

What??? ...?

Didn't you ? he asked pulling her close in a jerk as she bumped on his chest ... .......his light brown eyes peered her eyes with a burning gaze ....... the dangerous calmness in his voice sent a eerie feeling through her spine...

Her loose hairs flew as air rushed in .....................she looked down ......his voice was sending chill to her spine .....he chuckled inwardly seeing the effect of his on her ....

Have you bugged the police station too.......or what ...? she still couldn't get how did he know what happened inside the police station ...

Shut up .,..!!! That's not important ......important is this u haven't listen to my words....u took me too lightly ..and now u gonna pay for it ....he rudely pushed her to the other side........

Suddenly an idea struck her mind......as of now ...i don't know anything ...before I make an escape from his hand ....how about taking some other information about him ......

Geet that would be dangerous to mess with this freaking man.... she told this to herself....

But I should try ....and I will run away as soon as he gets down from the car ...he will be little absent minded then.....if.....if I behave calmly ......if he till then keeps this hold on my hand....i will bite and run ....he wont be able to grab me in public spaces......what if he takes me to a lone place .......her mind worked fast.....

When he was silent checking out the road ......but he was much aware of her silence ..which was unusual of her .....but he kept mum ....

Where will I stay ...my cloths .....my books ......let me go home at least ... her voice softened instantly ......which wasn't missed by him ... she tried do divert his attention ...but chosen wrong set of words......

Ohh hello ...you are not going to sashural ....!!! he looked at her as if she is some specimen out of this world ....and stop blabbering ....u talk too much ...!!

She reddened at his words.....geet what the hell you are saying ....!!! she flinched ...

Tell me one thing ...what do you do ...except following me everywhere ....

Not everywhere .......ummm at least not to ur bathroom ..........

Shut up ....!! she groaned ....

When he just let out a small laugh seeing her red cheeks ...

But she tried again ....

I mean you have a good accent of English ......you don't seem to be like petty criminals ....!!

He smiled........and turning his head to her ....he looked at her ......she immediately lowered her eyes............and he bent on her .........he bent so close that she could see his red lips .........he whispered in a husky voice .......

Sweetheart ...are you just trying on me ...?? or trying to gather some more information about me ...????

She looked away instantly ........

Mahnnn!!....this man can surely read mind ...geet stop looking at him ....he is way too intelligent for you ....

And suddenly the ringing of phone broke the silence ....

Hurriedly he picked it up .......

-Yess....

A: sir taleb is going to crack a deal at kasar wadi this afternoon ...within 1 hour !! needs ur special attention ...

-So early ,....but MJ (he used the code as geet was beside him )

A: Sir ....he is going to give big share to him .....sir ....they are planning big ....this deal has to be cancelled ...or else manjar will again patch up with him .....

-God...!! I m stuck with that girl here .....!! it will minimum take 2 hours to reach there......

A: So what to do ....?

-Wait ...i will call you back ....!!

Hanging it up ....he turned at her ...

U r busy na....so let me go ...... she told as if it was decided ....

Look gal ..... u r just getting on my nerves.....!! stop acting smart and listen to me carefully .....he roared ...

Gotta have some urgent work ......but will be back soon ...till then think of me...miss me .....hate me .....but don't show up to the cops.....!!

Do you get that ....?

Or else....ur dirjee will be in trouble ...he cant do without the inhaler na.......!!

Her eyes widened in shock ........what did I do ...?? she murmured .....her eyes welling up thinking how this man troubling her ................

But he didn't pay any attention to her and said ,...dont dare to disobey me...!! got it .....!!!

And remember ....my men will be watching you .....

Saying he pushed off the door by a single kick ....and pushed her out .....

She was about to shriek in fright as she thought she is getting down from the running car .......

But it was not ....

As the car left with smoke on her face ...she discovered she is standing close to the highway to her house.....................

Sighing she started walking ...!

First she again thought of going to the police station ...but the mention of dirjee..........made her weak.....she felt like seeing him once .......this man was jeopardizing her life....incredibly ....

~xXx~

Geet puttar .....geeet .......dirjee called her out .....as she came out of the bedroom ....she found a girl sitting on the sofa ....

Geet puttar ...meet her ....she is sunita ......has come from ludhiyana ..... she is daughter of your aunt ....she has come here for an interview ....will be staying with us for some days ......

She tried to smile ....though she was not in a mood to talk to anyone ....but she is a guest ...!!

She forwarded to her ...and welcomed her ..then took her to her own room .....after a few talks ....she found the landline ringing........

As she picked it up ..............

Hello ......

Silence followed in the next side....

Hello ..she spoke again ....

Did you miss me...?

Whattt ..? who are you ...? have u lost it ..??

Sweetheart ....!! I m sure u missed me ...though you don't wanna admit ,... the reply came with a small laugh ....

What do you want now..... she tried to shorten the conversation ...

To let you know ....that ur so called sister actually works for me .......so take care ...and don't do anything for that you have to repent later .........
saying the words he hung up

She stood there frozen and turned back to her cousin sister .....

Who was comfortably seated in the sofa ....and waved her hand to her as a Hie....!! grinning slyly .....

This is simply not happening .......now I have to stay with his informer ....

Babaji .....! what did I do.....she closed her eyes..........

Hie ..nice to meet you girl ..... sunita winked at her

To which geet didn't reply ...and slumped on the sofa ....covering her face with both of her hands......

precap - meeting ***--------- coming 10.30 pm at night .....