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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
lovely part dear
waiting for the next part
cont soon
and merry christmas
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Posted: 14 years ago
PROMO:

Clip 1: Ridhima's bak wid blood oozing...

Clip: AR eyelock....

so guys there u goooo promo of the hottest part i have ever thought of write....keep guessing...muahahahahhah...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the pm! sorry for the late reply= i was away on vacay!

awesome parrt! dying to see ar romance :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divine93

hey

lovely part dear
waiting for the next part
cont soon
and merry christmas


hey dii..
the part is coming up...
merry christmas to u too..(belated)
happy new year..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

thanks for the pm! sorry for the late reply= i was away on vacay!


awesome parrt! dying to see ar romance :D


your welcum..its ok😊

thnk you very much..😉..keep w8ing..part is gonna be up in an hour..
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Posted: 14 years ago
HAPPY NEW YEAR

TO EACH AND EVERY READER OF LIYL...

May this year be better than the one just gone by..and may it bring nothing but blessings to each and every one of us..


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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY GUYS..i hope u guys had a blast on new year..i had and now im bak on duty to write for you guys..Okay so here v go without a delay.


PART 9 : ITS GETTING HOT IN HERE....☺️

(Before we go ahead..just take a look at what each of them wore)

Ridhima

Muskaan

Nikita

Anjali

Kirti

CONFERENCE ROOM

Ridhima: Hey Atul..

Atul who was talking with the ward boy to get more flowers, turned back to see Ridhima..

Atul : Aha..Ridzie you are looking beautiful..

Ridhima: Thanks Atul..By the way yahaan sab taiyyar haina?

Atul: Yup..Lekin I think we need more flowers..What do you think?

Ridhima: Hmmm..Some orchids would like amazing here..

Atul: Ha..so you also side me..Woh Armaan fool..he tells that flowers are too much in here..haha..

Ridhima: Armaan is here?

Atul: He was here..Abhi he's gone to get the bouquets..Oh there he is..

Ridhima turned to see a totally frustrated Armaan..who just fired into the room without a proper glance on the people in the room..

Armaan: (talking in one go..forgetting to breathe): Yeh traffic bhi na..Looks like Mumbai has more cars than people..And that florist..All she does is stare at me when I am the peak of urgency..And when I ask her what is her problem..she answers I'm her big problem..Ya right..Big Deal..How can I, who met her just a minute then, be her problem..This world is seriously full of psycho people..You know Champ..I think I should consider being a psychiatrist rather than a cardiologist..

Ridhima: Noooo..You are good at hearts..

By now..Armaan and Atul was staring at this sudden reaction of Ridhima..Though they both were staring at her for two very different reasons.

Ridhima: Mera matlab hai..You will make a good cardiologist..

Atul: O like that..Thats so sweet of you..Haina Armaan?

Armaan: (dreamily): mmmm'

Ridhima could now feel a strong blush creeping in at the strong gaze..Nothing Atul talked could distract Armaan from looking at her..Indeed she looked stunning..Absolutely no less than an angelic princess..He dint want this image to ever erase in his heart..The best image he could possible see..

Atul: Ridhima..Can you go and tell Dr.Kirti that everything's done?

Ridhima: Sure..Atul..

She was more than happy to escape the embarrassment of being caught blushing profusely..

Atul: Armaan..Wh are you also going?

Ridhima turned to find that Armaan was beginning to walk with her..

Armaan: Hayyeeeeeeee'.

Atul: Arre bro..You already told me Hi..

Ridhima: Armaan please..

Armaan: Oye hoyye..

Her scent was making him insane..

Ridhima left the room..She saw Kirti at the nurse station talking to her sister Anjali..Hmm..her sister finally wore a saree..She was looking pretty..

Ridhima: Ma'am..the conference room is ready..

Kirti: Thanks Ridhima..

Ridhima: My pleasure ma'am..

They were joined by a glowing Muskaan and a beautiful Nikita..

For once, Kirti became one among them..and the 5 girls giggled and exchanged generous compliments on their stunning looks..

Back in the conference room..Rahul and a nagging Shubankar joined Atul and Armaan..Shubankar was terribly upset because he dint want Kirti to take strain..Somehow Kirti had convinced him to bring her today for it was a special day for Sanjeevani..

NURSE STATION

Umar Bhai: Madam..woh bade bade log abhi aayenge '

Kirti : Ji..So Doctors..Behave at your best..This is very important that we create a good impression about our hospital and it lies in your hand

Girls in unison: Jee, Madam

Kirti: Good..Okay so let's move to the conference room..Nikki, have you got all the files required?

Nikki: Yes ma'am..

CONFERENCE ROOM

Subhankar: Yeh Kirti bhi na..hamesha aise hi hai..she expects me to follow her..

Rahul: Sir chill..

Shubankar: Nahi Rahul..every lady is like that..so fussy..all they know is get us in their way..

Armaan: True, Sir..plus they are idiots..that florist lady..grrr

Rahul: I agree also sir..sometimes they can kill us..My mother does that to my dad..my poor dad comes to me with his grief..

Atul: Hmm..I don't have any such experience..so really cant tell, sir..

Shubankar: Your lucky that you haven't experienced it..

Kirti: Experienced what Shubankar?

Everyone turned to see the girl's army in their stunning sarees..God..the Sanjeevani felt their knees weakening..They were sooo beautiful..Armaan winked at Ridhima..Rahul smiled widely..Shubar had already seen his wife in the morning and something something did happen..But once again he managed to capture him..and as for Atul, he held his hand onto his heart and was close to fainting..he was such a dramatist..

Kirti: Well guys..I hope you all are ready..

Her strict voice could wake anyone even in their deepest slumber..

The boys cursed her under their breath for having broken their buble..

The guest doctors arrived in time..the doctors of Sanjeevani put forward their best behaviour and maintained their dignity..At first they had at tough time coping with accent of the US doctors but later on they made an effort to concentrate and listen to the words..
The presentation by Shubankar went very well and highly appreciated..The Sanjeevani gang took care of the foreigners needs with utmost sincerity..To their surprise, there was a young handsome Indian doctor too among the lot..The gang talked with him on the atmosphere of US and blah blah what not..
The party was to take place at a posh hotel and all arrangement expenses was funded by Sanjeevani..The ambience in the hotel was so beautiful that the mood imediately changed from official to romantic..the US doctors had brought their husbands, wives and boyfriends along for this party..
It was then Rahul once again saw the guy in the nightclub who seemed so familiar to him and who was dancing with Nikki..Armaan who saw the expressions in Rahul's face whispered something into Rahul's ears..
Rahul: WHAT..reallly???????
Armaan: Haan yaar..main sach keh raha hoon..lekin kisi ko mat bataana..you know her na..she will make sure i dont live the next minute..
Rahul and Armaan chuckled..They could obviously imagine her in that situation..
Just then the DJ announced: Yo people..im sur eyou guys are rocking the dance floor..For a change lets seal our loved ones with the romantic tracks coming up..So guys reach out to your partners hand and dance your way to their heart..
As expected Rahul asked Muskaan and Atul asked Anjali..Nikki was once again noticed to dance with that 'guy'..Shubankar had a tough time in deciding whether he should make Kirti dance..But the mood was too much for him and the couple ended up dancing..
It was then that Armaan saw that Ridhima was missing..He searched her aroung the party..He came out of the party hall..He wondered if she was in the restroom..He decided to wait outside the restroom for about 2 minutes..When he finally concluded that she was not in the restroom, he dialed her number in his phone..It was switched off..Dammit..He went all around till he reached a quiet corner of the hotel..He suddenly saw Ridhima running out of a room, tears flowing down eyes..The sight tore Armaan..He went to her..
Armaan: Ridzie..what happened..Why are you crying?
Ridhima din't reply..She just hugged him tightly wetting his shirt with her tears..The initially shocked Armaan hugged her back..and when he saw took his hands off.he saw blood covering his hands..Now he was stunned..
Armaan: Ridzie..yeh blood..how..what happened? Come with me, we will get back to the hospital..
Ridhima just nodded and hung close to Armaan's hands..
Armaan: Ridzie, try stopping the blood flow..
Armaan shot his car at top speed with a sobbing Ridhima sitting beside him..Armaan was finding it difficult to concentrate on anythig but her..
When they reached, Armaan almost dragged Ridhima for she was busted out after all the crying..Armaan couldn't imagine what was the reason behind all this..Nothing would break her so much..He closed his eyes as the worst ever thought crept behind his head..
They reached the dressing room..The blood wasnt flowing much now..It had partially clotted..When he went to her back..he found her blouse torn badly..He took the bandage and started wiping out the blood..While doing this he decided it was safe and important for him to know the reason for all this..
Armaan: Ridzie..what happened??Why did you go to the room?? And how did your blouse tear..
At this Ridhima started sobbing harder than ever..
Ridhima: Woh..that young doctor..US..woh.. mujhe..bulaaya..aur..aur.mujhe..i..ran..and..he followed me..when i tried..to escape..my back hit a..lone nail..my blouse tore..aur..aur
Armaan was now fuming..The guts of that rascal to touch his girl..Yes..he dint have any qualms in telling RIDHIMA WAS HIS GIRL..He wouldnt leave him alone..All hell dropped loose in Armaan..He wanted to spit anger at that ba****d..He would catch hold of him once he was done with Ridhima..
Armaan: Ridz..its ok..abhi kuch nahi hua na..uske liye..thank god..aise rone se koyi fayda nahi..It wont change what has happened..We will make sure he gets what he deserved..Ab rona band karo..aur smile..
Ridhima nodded at Armaan's words and wiped off her tears..She would be strong..She wasnt the one at fault and she would make that guys suffer..
Armaan: You still dint smile..
Ridhima smiled..God this girl could charm him even with a simple smile..
Now that Ridhima was consoled..Armaan went to other side of the bed where she sat..He tore up the piece of blouse that stood alone exposing the side of her back..Though this dint seem relevant to Armaan, Ridhima suddenly stiffened at the gesture..He started cleaning up the wound without being aware of her reaction..
In between her hair started disturbing him..and he pushed her to her front..the other part of her blouse hung loose..
Engrossed in his work he dint notice that her back was completely bare before him..Ridhima shut her eyes as his touch sent chills down her spine..
It was only when Armaan bandaged her wound did he realise what lay before him..Her silky smooth and absolutely even toned back drove him crazy..His control began to loose..
As desires captured his blood..he found his hand brushing her back..Ridhima who was breathing heavily till then suddenly felt her stomach turn upside at his touch..It was doing nothing good to her system though she felt right..
Her skin was so smooth..The bare back was driving off his head..Barring his vision..the little heart of his was in a frenzy..He so badly wanted to kiss her..He came closer to her ears..
Armaan (huskily): Why..why are you so stunning?
Ridhima (in equal huskiness): Armaan..
Armaan was plunged in by her seductive voice..He was possesed in by Ridhima's extreme beauty..
No longer able to gulp his desires..He bend down onto her neck and pressed his lips on it..
Okies guys..that was part 9..one of the hottest i managed to write..Now guys i so need you opinion..I want to know if u guys want this romance going on or do you want to start up with the real story..I wouldnt mind writng more and more hotness😉..but it depends on whether you guys want it..coz as far as the story is concerned..i have hardly started it..
Do leave ur comments..
<3 amal
Edited by arluver4life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear
awesome part
yeah add some romantic scene
update soon
Edited by shilpI007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey that was a good part
i think you should do more romance and then start the real story
anyways nice part
continue soon
and could you add me to your pm list
thanks

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