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Posted: 14 years ago
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RI(with fake smile) - ya dad packing ho gai h....kal afternoon ki flight h 3 'o' clock ki....dnt worry dad waha hostel mei baat kar li h maine...ab aap jaiye aur so jaiye u know na tension is not gud for ur health...

riddhima's dad left the room bcoz somewhere he also knows he cnt stop her


RI (talking to herself) " WHY ME??? I DNT WANT TO GO...JIN MARKS KE LIYE MAINE ITNI MEHNAT KI THI AAJ WO MUJHE MIL GAYE PAR UNKI KOI KHUSHI NHI H MUJHE...KYUKI SHAYAD YE MERI BARBADI KI SHURUWAT HAI..JISE CHAH KAR BHI MAIN NHI ROK SAKTI " (crying bitterly)

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SHIMLA NIGHT (11 'O' CLOCK)

RIDDHIMA'S ROOM (riddhima standing near window)



RI (talking to herself) - OH GOSH WHY D HELL I M THINKING SO MUCH???WHY I M FEELING SO SCARED???ND GOD Y D HELL I M CRYING LIKE DAILY SOAP ACTRESS FROM LAST 2 HOURS???WELL RITE I KNOW ITS DIFFICULT FOR ME TO GO AND ADJUST IN A NEW PLACE BT DO HAVE I ANOTHER OPTION??? BIG NOOOOOOO 😡 ....kyu mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise waha jane ke baad main kabhi laut kar nhi aa paugi???........pause......SHUT UP RIDDHIMA GUPTA...u are not going on a world war or on any border for fight...so stop all dis nonsense...but how??oh not again........same questions and same ans...relax u r jst going their for ur further studies jst remember dat..not more not less...its not so much difficult... 😕 u see u r not doing anything wrong..got dat...MAA PAPA I WILL MISS YOU BOTH A LOT....U BOTH ARE MY LIFE....i will go....


(and after talking to herself she went sleep....riddhima is very sad for tommorrow on the other hand rainbow gang is excited about tommorrow after all they have just passed their so called exams with 40% marks..........ya with lot of hard work 😆)
now everything is upto god.....wat's gonna happen next in their lifes..........
GOOD???? or BAD????😉
BEST???? or WORSE???😉


NEXT MORNING 😛
( IN DELHI )

RAINBOW GANG IS IN COLLEGE.....ARMAAN LEFT TO MEET HIS SWEETHEART ND OTHERS ARE DOING THEIR DAILY ROUTINE JOBS..........like muskan nd rahul busy in 😳romance.....
anjali ignoring atul's lovely comments😕....and shilpa staring at sid....nd bichara sid making sad faces🥱...

COLLEGE GROUND...........

(ARMAAN SAW A GIRL STANDING IN GROUND WITH HER BACK AT TOWARDS HIM,ARMAAN GOES NEAR HER)
AR - hey sweetheart ............mujhe yaad kar rahi ho?????????
"oh come on handsome ....har waqt flirt karna achi bat nahi h..."girl said with a smile 😛
"REALLY???? maine toh suna h beautiful girl se flirt karne se apki heartbeat normal rehti h........."ARMAAN SAID WITH A WINK 😉

GR-sudhar jao handsome....aisa na ho ki kisi ladki ko dekh kar tumhara heart beat karna hi band kar de..... 😆
AR(proudly) - oh come on now milegi nahi mil chuki h tum ho na...tumhe dekh kar mera kya kisi ka bhi heart beat karna band kar de.............😉
GR(inocently) - sachi???😊
AR(smiling at her innocence) - muchiiiii???😛

and listening dis both burst out laughing 😆
armaan gave choclate to d girl
GR - time to go.......dadu mera wait kar rahe hoge..aaj hum ghumne ja rhe h...byye handsome....
AR - oh fir toh jaldi jao...kal milta hu.....BYE ANGEL


(GIRL WENT FROM THEIR AND SOON ARMAAN HEARD A VOICE HE TURNED BACK)


(IN SHIMLA)

RIDDHIMA IN A orphanage.......talking to kids.........😛

RI (with tears) - 😭 hye bachha party mujhe jyada miss mat karna...aur B.G ka khayal rakhna....

(B.G old lady caretaker of orphanage)

BG (teasingly) - riddhima rona band kar beta tu padhne hi toh ja rhi h....sasural nahi jo itne motte motte anshu baha rahi h....😉

RI(shocked ) - BG mujhe pta hai aap mera mood acha karne ke liye ye silly joked creat kar rhi h na........BG i love u alot 😊........(saying dis she hugged bg)

ROHIT kid (with sad face) -😕 Dii aap humse milne aygi na????
RI (smiling b/w tears) - 😭 of course my sweetu.......jaise hi mujhe holidays milege main bhag kar yaha ajaugi..........happy?? 😊

all kids jumped with happiness nd shouted -WE LOVE U Dii 😆

(after little more chit chat with KIDS,BG.... nd a promise dat she will come to meet them soon riddhima left for her home)




(IN DELHI)
(GIRL WENT FROM THEIR AND SOON ARMAAN HEARD A VOICE HE TURNED BACK)


AR-champ.............relax konsi race mein part lena h jo itni mehnat kar rha hai???😕
AT(shouted) - HUM PASS HO GYE MERE BHAI..........😃

"40% aane pe itna excited hai jo 45% ajate toh coma mein chala jata....thnk god hum jinda h aur sirf 40% aye....."armaan thought 😡

AR 😡- sach champ????mujhe toh pta hi nhi tha...ABBE SAALE KAL SE EK HI TUNE PE KYU ATKA HUA HAI???
AT(with a sorry face) - oh sorry mere bhai main bhul gaya tha
AT - hey MINNIE gai????kya yaar mujhe bhi milna tha kitni pyari hai....LAGTA HI NHI SIRF 7 SAAL KI HAI....
AR - CHAMP aur kya wo tujhe 70 saal ki lagti h????come on wo tere barabar ki nhi h....(giggled)😆


(ok time for armaan's sweetheart intro.😉......well minnie,a sweet 7 year old kid...college watchman SHAYAM SINGH'S GRAND DAUGHTER.......armaan met her on his first day of college in college whicle parking spot..she was sitting their and armaan our charming hero did dosti with her...after dat day she is very special for her.........)😉😉
atul and armaan came back to canteen....and after discussing their meeting point all left for their homes


SHIMLA AIRPORT........

RI(sadly) - i luv you dad and i will miss u both alot....aap plz apna dhayan rakhiyga...main apko waha pahuch kar phone karugi

SH (sadly) - tum bhi apna dhayan rakhna or ha pahuch kar pakka call karna..take care of ur self bachha
RI (sadly) - ya dad announcement ho gai h ...i have to go...aap apna aur mom ka dhayan rkhna...i will miss u both.........bye dad
SH(sadly) - we will also miss u alot.....bye beta...........

(riddhima went in to take her flight)

IN EVENING...............DELHI AIRPORT
GIRL COMING OUT FORM AIRPORT........TALKING ON PHONE
HER BEAUTIFUL EYES


HER BREATHTAKING SMILE........


RIDDHIMA............RIDDHIMA GUPTA ...ON DELHI AIRPORT
(HAPPY GUYZ......😉..AFTER LONG WAIT RIDDHIMA IS IN DELHI 😉)



ON THE OTHER HAND ARMAAN IS STANDING NEAR HIS ROOM'S GLASS WINDOW....
AS SOON AS THE WIND TOUCHED RIDDHIMA'S AND ARMAAN'S FACE BOTH FRIEZED AT THEIR PLACES UNKOWN ABT D REASON BOTH FEEL DIFFERENT SHIVER IN THEIR BODY....




BUT BOTH IGNORED IT....RIDHIMA WENT TO HER HOSTEL WHERE SHE IS GOING TO STAY..AND ARMAAN WENT TOWARDS HIS CUPBOARD...........


MALLIK HOUSE
AR (scremed) - Biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Bi - ammi mere bachhe...bhari jawani mein tera yeh haal????kyu P se PAGAL ho raha hai???

"bii aapne meri fav. t-shirt ke 2 tukde kar diye?????kyuuuuuuuuu???"ARMAAN SAID IN LOW VOICE WHILE SHOWING Bi HIS T-SHIRT

Bi (cool voice as in not a big deal) - toh??ammi
se F se fatti hui thi toh maine socha kyu na isse ghar ki dusting k kaam mein lia jaye.........great idea na???

AR (pouted) - great??bii wo iska look tha..fashion bii
Bi - ammi tabhi kehti hu tum sab apna checkup karva lo...aisa na ho mental hospital walle tumhe most wanted diclair kar de(she is refering to whole rainbow gang )

Bi(loudly) - chal ab rona band kar aur aja khana khate hai.....
AR(scaredly) - biii main taiyar ho kar ata hu
Bi - mere bachhe tu??tu t se taiyar ho kar dinner kabse karne lga ???yaad h na aaj hum ghar par hi h..tu
AR (cutting her) - bii aaj hum celebrate karne ja rhe hai...biii hum pass hogye h u know na??
Bi - H se haa p se party toh aise karne ja rhe ho jaise 95% aye ho........40% pe itna uchalte hue sharam nhi ati tumhe???

"bii???jinke 95% ate h wo abnormal hote h...aur aapko toh khush hona chahiye ki apka saare bachhe normal h" armaan said with a wink😉
"ammi tu pura pagal ho gya h...shudhar ja yu sabko ghumana chod de...varna aise ladki milegi jo tujhe ghuma ke rakh degi " Bii said with a wink 😉

WHILE LISTENING Biii's COMMENT ARMAAN POUTED

NIGHT

ALL GANG IN CONNAUGHT PLACE OUTSIDE CLUB T DISC

SI - yaad h na kal fee deposit karni h???
RA - ya man dont worry sabko yaad h....
AT- hey guyz 11bje tak ghar chal lena varna meri leena,meena,tina,rozy bor ho jaygi...aur ninu toh abhi 4 days ki hi h...
SH(excited) - waoooooooooo atul ninu kitni cute lagti hogi na....plz mujhe bhi dikhao na i want to see...sid (turned to sid) bolo na atul ko meri ninu se meeeting karvaye
AR - sid lets go...entry kar lete hai kuch dair aur ruke toh yeh dono yahi plant nursery khol lege aur hume maali bana denge.....armaan and sid giggled
SI - ya rite .....lets go hey anji where is naina???


(WHEN ALL THESE WERE BUSY IN THEIR STUPID JOKES A MAN CLICKED THEIR PHOTO)
MAN(COVERING HIS FACE WITH A MASK TALKING ON PHONE) - YES they are outside......ya i will inform u.....ok...tommorrow????ya fine with me..yes ..ok bye


(back to the gang)

AN (fumbled) - Wo actually guyz....maine usse call nhi kia..

ALL TOGETHER - WATT???WHY??

AN (tensed)- guyz kal college canteen mein shilpu ne jo hungama kia tha wo naina ka plan tha..pause.....sid ke liye....maine khud usse dekha tha glass mei kuch mix karte hue..but jab tak main sid ko rokti juice shilpu ne pi lia aur aage toh tumhe bhi yaad h...

all are shocked they never thought not even in their wild dreams
MU - chudail,bhutni kal milne do usse uske hath tod dugi main
AR (trying to control d situation) - leave it guyz...chod na muski relax...hum apna mood kharab kyu kare???lets go...varna ab hum andar nhi ja rahe fir disc wale hume andar nhi ghusne dege

all laughed
all went in disc but ammi stoped sid....and told every oe dat he forgot to lock his car....dey are going to lock it...
outside d club
SI - kya hua 12 kyu bje h tere face pe???

AR - SID TU SATIYA GYA HAI KYA???yar i m thinking abt naina.....pause....hmare bunch of ididots ke samne kehta toh shonna dar jati aur atul pure club ko bta deta...
SI-but ab karna kya h??

AR - DEKH BETTER HOGA HUM DHAYAN RAKHE...TAKI JO KAL HUA WO DOBARA NA HO...HUME ALERT REHNA HOGA...INHE ALERT KARNE KA MATLAB HAI SHER KE MUH MEIN HATH DALKAR KENA---LE KAAT KE DIKHA
sid nodded and both laughed 😆


RIDDHIMA'S ROOM IN HOSTEL


RIDDIHMA LYING ON BED

RIDDHIMA(talking to herself) - so ready riddhima gupta???tommorrow a big day for u...new college...new city...new room...great..now dnt be sad..U CAN DO IT...GOSH STOP GIVING LECTURES TO UR SELF RIDDHIMA IT WONT WORK...ATLEAST NOT THIS TIME...NOW SLEEP...KAL ADDMISSION LENE BHI JANA HAI NA...

(AFTER HER CHIT CHAT WITH HERSELF SHE SLEPT.........)


ON THE OTHER HAND RAINBOW GANG IS ENJOYING AND LAUGHING IN CLUB WITHOUT ANY REASON........SOON SHILPA WENT ON DANCE FLOOR ND TOOK D MIKE AND STARTED HER SPEECH

SH (loudly) - HEY U ALL
RA (scaredly) - dnt tell me guyz yeh aaj bhi talli hogai
AR (looked at rahul) - abbe tujhe kya wo sharabi ya bevadi lagti h??
SI - lagta toh aisa hi h
AR - sid one more word nd i m gonna kick u on ur butt
MU - and me to ammi...
AR - THNX MUSKI FOR THE SUPPORT
AT - MERE BHAI TU KYA POLITICIAN H ???JO VOTE KI TARAH SUPPORT MAANG RAHA H??
AN- SHUT UP ATUL

SHILPA SHOUTED ONCE MORE TO GAIN THEIR ATTENTION...

SH(shouted) - HEY U ALL LETS DANCE NA WE CAME HERE TO ENJOY....BHUL GAYE???YEH RONA DHONA BAAD MEIN CONTINUE KARTE H....

ALL LOOKING AT HER WITH OPENED MOUTH
SHILPA FIRST TIME UNDERSTOOD THEIR QUERY

SH - GUYZ STOP STARING AT MY FACE WITH UR OPEN MOUTHS....BUT SID U CAN CONTINUE (SHILPA BLUSHED ) AUR MAIN TALLI NHI HU....APNE MUH BAND KAR LO VARNA TUMHARE MUH DARD KARNE LAGEGE




ALL LAUGHED ND CAME ON DANCE FLOOR
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PRECAP :- SURPRISE GUYZ😉

HIIIIIIIII FRNDS


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Dis PART 4 of my ff hope you all liked it''''..😛

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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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yayyyyyyyy!!!!!!i am the firstt one to commentt!!!👏👏🥳

now coming backk to the partt it wass OWSOMEE!!!

i hope the reason behind riddhima's crying come out soon

continuee soon

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Edited by arshbest - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy
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really liked it
luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
made for each other..........DMG will not have any perfect ending besides AR reunion...............thnks a bunch to CV and starone........

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