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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy adya!!!
i luved this update!! its rlly cool....but its very short!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sajanfan004

heyy adya!!!

i luved this update!! its rlly cool....but its very short!!!


thank you Vidhi..........
I know they r mny ppl who said it was short....I didn't have enough time........d nxt part will be longer for sure!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi adya
thnxxx......i'll be waiting for the next update......
pls do pm me!!!
-------vidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sajanfan004

hi adya

thnxxx......i'll be waiting for the next update......
pls do pm me!!!
-------vidhi


yeah! I will!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 5!!


*AT THE PARTY*



The party was in full swing , everybody were dancing or some people were just sitting and chatting with one and another . Gunjan and Nupur had just entered the party as usual holding hands and it seemed like the whole city was here , thought Gunjan and Nupur but what they didn't know was that the whole Excel was equivalent to half of Mumbai.


Gunjan whispered in Nupur's ear " Di mujhe yahan kuch ajeeb lag raha hai........... please hum chalte hain" making a nervous face.


"BY GOD! Gunjan hum abhi abhi toh aaye hain thodi der party ........ sharty karte hain phir challe jayyenge...............aur abb zarra muskaraa warna sab ko lagge ka maine tujhe kali kotri main band karr diya tha aur tu kissi tarah wahan se bhaag karr aayyi hai." said Nupur .


Gunjan laughed at her sister's reply and told her "Di main samjh gayyi aur abb please aisii baatien mat karo aur Uday bhaiyya ko dhoondo"


Gunjan and Nupur started looking for Uday. While looking for their "Uday Bhaiyya " Gunjan saw a boy reading a BOOK and though "Who is he ? Reading a book in a party. " The person person kept the book down and Gunjan saw his face. It was Mayank and she then thought " I'll go ask him for an extra book. Let me tell di" Gunjan turned around and before she could say anything Nupur screamed loudly , no very loudly "UDAY BHAIYYA!!!" Making everyone present there looking at their direction.



Realizing the fact Gunjan was thinking of a way to divert the people from looking at her sister when she heard someone say " HEY GUYS!" All the people along Gunjan turned to look at the direction from which the voice came.


Gunjan was shocked , it was Samrat.


All the girls went like "OOOOO!" and "AAHHH!" and Samrat giving flying kisses to all the girls with his trademark smirk but his eyes were only with Gunjan who was wearing a pretty red colored long gown and hey hair as usual were left open.

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*Later At the party*


Samrat while listening to Benji was stared at Gunjan who was talking to Mayank about some "book" while Nupur who was sitting with Uday was also staring at Gunjan and Mayank. Actually only at Mayank. While Mayank and Gunjan were oblivious of the whole staring session going on.


Both Samrat and Nupur kept staring at them when suddenly the lights were turned of and a spotlight fell on a girl walking down the stairs . Sleek body , short hair and tall. She came down and hugged Samrat and said "Hey Sammy!!"


Samrat smile and said "Happy Birthday Candy"

Gunjan who had also seen them hugging , thought "Candy? Toffee bhi bhala koi kissi ko bulaata hai!"

While Gunjan thought this , Principal sir came with a mike in his habd and said


"Thank you everyone for coming! It's a really important day for me as its my daughter , Diya's Birthday.I know I'm late and most of the people have gone but still the rest of you are here. Please do enjoy the party and now diya please come here as your the host now". He went and Diya took the mike and said "Guys it's time for some fun so first let's play something , any ideas?"


Some people said " Passing - the- parcel" while some said " Musical chair"


Finally Diya decided and said "So it is Passing - the - parcel"


They all sat in a circle. All as in Samrat , Benji , Diya , Mayank (Principal sir requested him) , Nupur , Gunjan (Nupur pestered her) and Uday for music.

So the music began and they all passed the pillow to each other and Uday paused the music , and the pillow was in Samrat's

hand. He picked up a chit from the bowl and read his punishment aloud "Either pour Water on Gunjan or Diya"


Both Gunjan and Diya glared at Uday as he had written then punishments in the chit while he just looked here and there.


Samrat picked up a cold-water bottle and started walking towards where the girls were sitting .


Gunjan thought "Oh! God..........yeh kaisi punishment hai? I wish yeh punishment Mayank ko milli hoti toh who mujh par paani nahi daaltha but yeh Samrat toh............."


While Diya thought "I KNEW IT! Mera Sammy mujh par kabhi paani nahi daalega ." and smiled.


Samrat was confused. Diya was a good friend while Gunjan was'' nothing! But his heart wasn't allowing him to pour the cold water on Gunjan. She annoyed him so Samrat decided who he was going to splash the water on.


Samrat tilted the bottle towards Gunjan while Gunjan closed her eyes and Diya smiled and said "Thanks Sa----"

Diya couldn't complete her sentence as she was WET!

Diya couldn't believe it , the others were also shocked that Samrat had turned the bottle down on her . She thought "I can't believe it Sammy! How could you?"


Samrat after getting the shocked looks from all and most of all from Diya said " Sorry Candy! It was part of the game!" and Sat down. While Gunjan just thanked him through the eyes.


Diya gave him a short smile and said "Let's continue the game"


Next it was Mayank , his punishment was to either to dance with Nupur or slap Diya 100 times.


Mayank thought "Diya ko thapad marne se toh acha hai ki main iss Nupur ke saath hi dance kar leta hoon"


Mayank then put his hand forward to Nupur and Nupur who was really happy accepted it.


While dancing Mayank was just doing time pass while Nupur was so lost in Mayank , she thought to herself " Mayank kitna achaa hai. Woh uss makchardi Diya ko thapad nahi mar raha hai." She thought about Mayank for so long that even after the song ended also she didn't leave him and continued to hold his hand when Mayank told her " gaana khatam hogaayya hai" . Nupur left him and went and sat down.


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After the party everyone went home and slept as all of them were really tired.


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Next day


In the morning , Excel college was full of students .


Gunjan and Npur entered with Uday and the three went to their class [yeah yeah whole GANG is in d same class] and got seated. Gunjan sat with Nupur. Then Mayank came to the class and saw a seat behind them and sat their, and at last the "COOL" gang came. Samrat sat with benji , in the other row which was right next to Gunjan's seat and Diya sat with Annie , one of her "chamchis".


The Professor (Deodhar) came in and said "please open your books" and started writing something on the board and the whole class was silent . Suddenly Benji sneezed , Deodhar sir turned around and asked him "India main sabse pehla TV color translation kab hua?"


Benji just looked down and then Deodhar sir said "Kissi aur ko answer aata hai, Mayank Sharma ke alvaa?"


He turned back to the board for a minute when somebody said "Sir , 1982."


Deodhar turned around and said "good! Aur humare desh main sabse pehle radio broadcast kab hua tha?"


She said "Sir , 23rd July 1927


Deodhar sir said "Correct again, tumhara naam kya hai?"


She said "Sir Gunjan." To which Deodhar sir replied "Sir Gunjan?" then Gunjan said "Sorry , Gunjan" Deodha sir said "Sorry Gunjan?"


Gunjan smiled and said "Sir, mera naam Gunjan hai" only then Deodhar smiled at her and said "Please sit down" .


Samrat , Diya , Benji and even Mayank was shocked at her intelligence and also on the fact that Deodhar smiled at somebody other than Mayank. Nupur was proud that her sister shocked everyone including that Diya.

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*IN THE LIBRARY*

Gunjan had just entered the library when she heard two boys discussing her , one of them said "arey yaar.........yeh toh wohi hai jisne Deodhar ko smile kar waaya" and then the other one said "abbey! Yaar............who chord aur apna kaam kar"

Gunjan was uncomfortable but she had to study so she took a History book and sat . As she sat she found Mayank sitting next to her with another History book and he said "You were way too good in class" to which she replied "I know!" and they both laughed and shake hands with each other .

Just as they were shaking hands Nupur was passing by the library and from a window she saw the scene. After that she muttered to herself " Mayank aur Gunjan??Arey! aisa nahi hoga. Par kahin....... Nahi nahi!!! main bhi naa" she smacked her forward and went ahead unknown to her someone heard what she said. It was Samrat. He also looked at Mayank and Gunjan know both were reading and discussing some common points. While doing so they were laughing also and that is when Samart got a reality check and he thought to himself "Why do I care? Or do I ".


A/T: Hey guys !! the part is long so I want long comments!!😆

Do tell me if I'm partial with one couple! also these part are in Past and also SG and MN will interact respectively soon!!


My school has strted so updt will be only once in a week! and also I want motivation as many times I'm in foul mood!

Also do press d "like" tab!


Luv Adya!🤗



Edited by AttractiveAdya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res! Yay!! Im first!!🥳 🤗
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Hii Adya!
Simply splendid update!!
Loved Majan Together! haahhaa..! why does Sam care?! LOL!😆
n yay! Sam din throw water on Gunjan! I kinda guessed that! Par mazaa aata agar giraata toh! LOL!
Nd then Nupur ke thoughts! man she thinks mayank and gunjan???
No man! kitna boring ho jayega! LOL!
Nd sam heard all of that! Im sure he will do something! Nd will regret later!
I love The way you write adz and Your ff is Too Goood!!
Just love reading it!
is this a Longgggggg Comment?? I hope soo..
Nd haha..The funniest part was Mayank and Gunjan Studying at a party!! LOL!😆
Superb update agaiN!
Love youu!
--Manjari
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey adya nice update because of ur update i started watching mjht 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow adya awesomeee update n it was a bigg update not bad not bad anyways hehehe nups in starting she is so so funny da dilaogue she said" ab zara muskara anhi to sab ko lagega mein tujhe kal kotri se" one gosh lovee da sense humor of urs der n den hehehe gunji so funny wen sammy called diya candy hehehe n den wow thnx god sammy didnt poured water on gunji how sweet of sammy n den mayur dance loved it n den SaNu thinking dat something between majan nooo do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear
just loved it to the core
really enjoyed reading it from start till end
sammy chosen dia
nice decission sammy
n nupur feeling pocessive seeing majan together
really lovely
want an update really sooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy adyaa as usuall mastt updatee yaarr..nd thanks for d pm..!

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