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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 1:-

She stopped her car and got down. She looked around, it was the only place where she found'..peace and solace. The only place which gave her the view of what she felt always and also what she wanted. And today she is here with the only person she lives for , her daughter. Her only reason of smiling, her days starts with her daughter and ends on her. Her daughter broke her thoughts by calling out to her

"MOMZ!!! We are you lost? Now Lets have our breakfast , please"

She smiled at her daughter and told her

"Nahin beta, we are waiting for somebody . Let them come then we'll start and you just had your milk so wait for sometime"

She said to her daughter who just sat down.

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She glanced at her watch, it was 10:45 . Where was she ? She had said she would come , they both hadn't met each other since 11 years. Suddenly she heard the sound "chan-chan" . She knew it was HER! Her sister , Nupur. She looked at the door, surprised to see a young girl entering. Behind her came Nupur . She was still the same but there was a certain emptiness in her eyes , which she (know u guys must have understood, "she" is gunjan) couldn't understand. Then she ran up to her "di" and said


"DI!!! Tu'.tum kitni badal gayyi ho''.yeh saari aur who bhi itni plain aur khule baal aur yeh kya, tum khaati nahi ho kya? Itni dubbli hogayyi ho!; aur--- acha yeh sab chodo aur bataao tum kaisi ho aur yeh (bending down to Nupur's daughter) yeh tumhaari beti haina? Kitni bardi hogayyi hai! Itna Samay nikal gayya haina? Iska naam kya hai? Yeh "


Gunjan said all this in one breath. Her last sentence remained incomplete as Nupur Finally spoke


"Bass! Gunjan'tu kitna bolne laggi hai , BY GOD! Aur yeh tu itna badal gayyi! Tu toh hum saath saath hain ki sonali se bilkul K3G ki kareena kapoor ban gayyi hai!!"


Gunjan smiled, and said "acha di wod sab chodo''meri beti se millo, yeh hai meri beti MONAYA! aur beta this is your massii, Nupur massi"


Nupur smiled and hugged Monaya and then she introduced her daughter "Gunjan , yeh hai meri beti ARTI"


Gunjan did the same as what Nupur had done previously.


Monaya and Arti shaked hands but then Monaya pulled her into a hug. Both Gunjan and Nupur smiled at this gesture of Monaya.

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Gunur and Monaya-Arti had their Breakfastand they all sat on the Couch.

Gunjan said to Nupur "I wanted to tell u that Di me & Samrat are separated (Nupur was shocked and about to interrupt) and I want Monaya and you to know about the reason and for that I need to tell Monaya saari kahani shuru se toh tum doggi naa mera saath? Aur haan. Maine issliye tumhe Jiju ko yahan lane se manna kiya tha"

Nupur interrupted and said"Gunjan main aur Mayank bhi ab saath nahi hain kyun mat puchna ushi ka jawab mujhe bhi Arti ko aur tujhe yeh bataana tha issliye hi maine haan kaha milne ke liye.'

Gunjan was way more shocked than Nupur because she had never thought of something like this would happen .

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Gunjan and Nupur gave loud call to their daughters

"MONAYA!!! Come down abhi!"

"Arti!! Tumbhi neeche aaoo!

Monaya and Arti obeyed and came down and then Gunur gave another a look and gunjan started saying

"Monaya and Arti you both know that your mothers are alone and We both know that you both feel that we don't ell you anything! We have been through what your going through right now but are Father never told us anything, you both are lucky because me and Di have decided to tell you both about our lives, how we started our journey , how we fell in love and moreover about your fathers"

Both Monaya and Arti made a disgusted face because they had both seen how their mothers lived . But they wanted to know more about their mothers, their young college days ect. So Monaya said smiling

"as u wish momz me and Arti have no problem you both please go ahead!"

Nupur said "BY GOD! Thik hai toh waapis chalet hain aapne gaao ki gaalliyon main aur shuru karte hain uss din se jab hum dono ko Mumbai ke liye nikal tha , raat ko, who humaara Morena main akhri din tha'''''''."

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**FLASHBACK**

"humare bauji kehete hain ki maafi maagne se koi chota ya barda nahi ho jataa par jo maaf ker deta hai usska dil bohot barda hota ji"

"acha theek ha'"

"Chup aap chup rahiye"

Nupur Bursts out laughing holding her stomach and watching her favorite movie 'kabhi khushi kabhi gum'

Just then bauji comes and tells her

"beta aaj ke din toh yeh mat dekho'..aaj tum dono ka yahan akhri din hai ''dono se yaad aaya yeh gunji kahan hai aur suno tum zarra haath muh dholo khaane ka samay ho raha hai tab tak main gunji ko dekhta hoon"

Nupur nods and leaves

On the other hand Gunjan was in her school taking the blessings of her teachers and saying bye to her friends . She was about to leave when one of her teachers told her

"gunjan you are a very bright girl and hope to see u shining brightly in the sky soon, wish u luck my dear child and make Maurya High proud" with that she left for home.

When she reached home she saw Bauji and Nupur seated for lunch and she quickly washed her hands and came to them and sat . They had Lunch in absolute silence much to Nupur's annoyance and Gunjan's nervousness.

After lunch Nupur and Gunjan told Bauji that they are just going on a round of Morena as they both wanted to capture Morena in their eyes. Bauji allowed them and went to do some office work

Gunjan and Nupur sat on a rickshaw and nupur stood up on it and started saying

"tu dekhna gunjan , jiss tarah humain yahan Morena main sab pyaar karte hain usshi tarah Mumbai main bhi karenge'.aur kya pata mujhe aapna raajkumar bhi miljayye jo ek safed ghode pe sawar hokar aayega aur mujhe urdaa aaaa---!"

BANG! She fell down on the seat and said "le jayyega, BY GOD"

Gunjan just giggled and told nupur "Di! Tum bhi naa'..hum wahan pardne jaa rahen hain naaki tumhare uss laapata raajkumar ko dhudne par jo bhi ho mujhe lagta hai ke Mumbai hoga bohot hi acha'.."

With these thought the two returned home to find out that they are not going to Mumbai! (not leaving u guys on a cliff hanger)




They are not going to Mumbai in the night but now itself as it would take them two-three days to reach their''


They sighed and looked at the station for the last time and went inside the train and shouted out "BYE MORENA!" And they left for Mumbai for a new journey.

**FLASHBACK ENDS**

Gunur smiled and came out of the past and then Monaya said "Momz and massi you guys were so funny and sweet! Now please continue'."

To which Gunjan said "no u both go sleep , its late! We'll continue tomorrow!"

Monaya and Arti smiled and said " bye MAAA!!! Baaki ki kahani kal!!"


A/N: Hey guys here's part 1! hope u all liked it!:)

some dialogues are courtesy K3G! and the rest are mine.

Abt Monaya & Arti...........kya haina SaJan nd MayUr are boys names so maine socha tht this will be suitable!

Also there is no precap because I'm tired!🤣


Edited by AttractiveAdya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi Adya!!!!!!😃

yayy i read without pm!!!!
superb update!!!👏
loved the names of both monaya n arti!!!!!!!😃
gunur scenes were too gud especially the auto rickshaw one!!!!!!!
felt sad that sajan n mayur were seperated😭.....except that i really loved the whole update!!!!
u wrote really very well!!!!!!
do continue soon!!!!!!

luv
deepti🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Adyaaaaaaaaa 🤗

omg omg so cuteeee 😳
Monaya & Arti kids ke naam 🤣 Awwwww!
Haaayyyee love the 2 sisters & HAHA K3G ki Kareena ban gayi hai 🤣🤣

SaJan & Mayur seperated? Aila :O Nahiiiiiiiii :( But we do need some turns in stories to make it interesting so yeah I hv faith in you that you'll write the FF awesomely 😆

Muaaaaaaaah 🤗 Thankyou so much for the PM! Do PM me! :D
Loving it 😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
its awesome
very nice start
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey adya nice starting.......loves arti n monaya n yes u chose correct names........luved evry bit of it..............do cont soon n thnks 4da pm......nw dont 4get 2pm me.........agr pm nahi kia natoh main..................main..............main google se dhoond kar padh loongi😆............bt pls. do pm me......
luv,
ria
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Posted: 14 years ago
Adya!!!!!!!! 🤗
This was LOVELY! Monaya and Arti... 😆 I loved the names! Do continue soon and thanks for the PM! I just love present-past flashback type ke stories! 👍🏼 Good job!
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Posted: 14 years ago
will rply to all tomorrow now me tired!🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi adya
nice update

i hope mayur aur sajan jald hi saath ho jaye
they r incomplete without the other
pata nahi aisi kya baat hui hogi ki mayank ne nupur ko aur samrat ne gunjan ko chod diya

update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow dear superb first update yar loved it to the core and thanks for pm do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lolzzzzzzzzzz i read the part and loved one thing alot...monaya and arti names of girls...lolzzzzzzzzzz wht a imagination.....waise i have doubt monaya ladki hai ya ladka kyuki tune starting mai ladka bataya..thn ladki bana diya...kya chal raha hai...waise loved the starting...waise tu bhi flashback mai story batayegi...wah...behen kisaki hai....lolzzzzzzzzzzz....continue soon
Edited by lucario - 14 years ago

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