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Posted: 14 years ago

woww............amazing...

a beach date is soooo happening and that too with sunrise...

just superb....it was awsum OS mehaku...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ok sweets, i am back again. 😆

as we all know that we were never given a morning scene after the heavenly consummation of MAYUR,😡 instead Mayur were shown directly in the hospital after gunjan's accident. So, I have written a small scene before MAYUR come to know about gunjan's accident. Assuming that gunajn was shot in the morning. Hope u all like it..😳

Mayur OS:

Feeling Complete..

Sunshine was pouring into the room and the expressions of irritation were evident on the faces on whom it was shining with full intensity.

Nupur snuggled into mayank's neck more, to avoid the rays, while mayank placed his arm over his eyes; so consequently, both of them were able to avoid the torture of sunrays.

Their faces showed the contentment, peace and calmness one could ever wish on the faces of a married couple. The bliss of last night still over-whelmed their bodies, leading to the deep peaceful slumber and the care-free state of mind.

It was about 12, when finally they both showed some signs of gaining senses. Mayank stretched his arms and wanted to turn his side, but stopped finding that nupur was snuggling to him so close. In a flash of a second his mind connected things and he kissed her forehead, smiling. Pulling her sleeve back to her shoulder, he pulled her close, increasing the grip of his arms.

Nupur on sensing the grip turn strong again, experienced the deep pleasure and opened her eyes, to find that her husband was already staring her intently.

As soon as their eyes met, a strange, new feeling of belonging sprouted in their hearts. Nupur lowered her eyes, as the shyness took over her very soon, while mayank was still observing the pink color creeping up her cheeks which was very inviting, "good morning nupur', he said as he marked her cheeks with his lips.

Nupur couldn't help her lips curve into a beautiful shy smile and slowly raising her eyes she reciprocated the wish, "good morning", she said and again buried her face in his neck, where her lips softly touched his bare neck.

It was all so new for them that they were being too shy to tease or blush. Getting married at an early age and then going through a havoc of emotions, being childish and silly, but then finally able to settle a bit in their life. Reaching on the verge where they had something to look forward to in future, a sense where they could feel the security that they had started working to make their future secure, and then finally giving each other the complete right over themselves. It was not easy for them where they both were so opposite to each other, but then again there love was something which was to bind them always and it did, and that was the reason they both today were able to call themselves as a part of each other.

"phir so gayi ho?', mayank said as he thought the silence was prolonging.

"nahi", she replied immediately, raising her head again and looking in his eyes who were still intently looking at her, "tu itni chup ku ho?', he asked and slowly started mingling his fingers in her hair, "tum bhi tu chup ho", she softly said, still looking at him and enjoying the caress in her hair.

"haan tu main tu bus tumhain suntna hon aur tum bolti ho", he said cheekily and nupur giggled, with her lips fully smiling, leading to the beautiful shine in her eyes, completely making mayank go speechless at her beauty.

Her eyes seemed more huge and her smile felt more wide. Her skin was shining in the dim light of the room and the circle of her arms around his neck was so tender and warm, it was a whole new feeling today with her.

"u are beautiful nupur, I love you", he said spontaneously brushing his thumb lightly under her left eye,

"I love u too", she almost murmured smiling shyly and was about to get up when mayank pulled her back, "kahan ja rahi ho?", he asked strictly looking in her eyes, "uthne lagi hon, dophar ho gayi hai tu..", she said slowly, trying hard to avoid his direct intense look

"rehne do", he said sternly, making way for his fingers through her hair till her neck and softly rubbing them over, "kyun?, roz tu tumhain uththey hi coffee chaiye hoti hai,?", she tried to be cheeky, but was unable to hold the tantalizing feeling she was getting by his soft rub over the back side of her neck.

"aj coffe nahi chaiye", he said as he turned and now lied completely facing her, with his arms enveloping her and pulling her close, "aj nupur chiaye mujhe", he kissed her ear, and whispered, while nupur melted on his sudden action and hugged him back.

After a while when he had traced her neck, cheeks and ears with his lips again, he himself moved a bit away, and as he did, he noticed a disappointed expression in her eyes, "we will continue, but I am afraid we have a phone call", he said kissing her cheek and there nupur realized that she was so lost in mayank that she had been completely ignoring the bell. She blushed hard, as mayank pulled her close, reached for his cell phone and attended the call.

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!res ===============
angel wat do i say to u....ur an angel....a magical one.....fulfilled such a prolonging thing we wanted to c...the actual bondin of mn....thnx angel....
love ya..tc!
it was awesome as usual...
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edit

Kinza-------- ok at first i wanna
HUG u for writng this beautiful OS for us..


i really wanted to see a bright morning scene of mayur after their consummation .......
and ridi is right- u have fulfilled our wish........

Its a very nice piece of mayur scene- i loved their shyness, the depth of love in their eyes....
i loved everything of this OS
it was mind-blowing yaar
muahhhhhhhhhhhh

And Neetu i m with u- i m also demanding another magical mayur FF frm u.....
so work on a new ff soon
take care
love u infinity(ye Fari special love hai- jaida neji milti.LOL)




Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mehak...u fulfilled one of my wish..........i just wanted that moment.......but as usual that CVS didn't give that.........bt now i have no complain.........it was so beautiful.........love u yaar...........aise hi likhte rehna............
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Posted: 14 years ago
too good.......
amazing os and when will you start a new os on mayur????
i am eagerly waiting....
am not asking, am demanding.....
and why such a short part??
you know what? i want to read some 6 to 8 pages of update from you.......
i love your updates to that much extent.....
Edited by mayurg2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Uhm okay ... it was a very beautiful one-shot ... Very romantic .. I can't say anything more - your writing is brilliant :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow

d mayur os was fabulous

loved it

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG lovely update

soooooo romantic

very sweet


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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGG........Soooooooooooo romantic☺️
I sooo wished to see a Morning scene like tht after their consummation.....😍
awwwww Mehaku....that was lovely.....but too short😳

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