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Posted: 14 years ago
hayeeee awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hai...me dead...This is so romantic yaar...😍😍
I loved all the dialogues...I just loved this...
Wish ki tumhari sab OS sach ho jati...It seems all true...
Mindblowing job...Keep it up...👍🏼
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Ahh, Mehak beautiful OS! Amazingly written <3
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Amazing OS's! Do PM me when you write more. <333
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Brilliant OSs Mehak 👏
Do write more and please send me a pm.
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Mehak outstanding N SWEEEEEEEET OS plzzzzz cont hun n thanks e 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u guys..

so i am back with another MAYUR OS!..this one was requested by -jaee-, the whole concept is her's and i am just putting words to it!...hope i do justice to her beautiful idea!...


I just cant help...😆

M... the world economy has been facing serious threats since the last 3 years and its main causes are...

he turned towards the board and wrote the first point..

M..1...increased population..

he turned back to the class..

M..and it..

he suddenly stopped...ash was looking out of the class window, totally forgetting that she was in class..

M..ashwani..

ash immediately sat straight...

A...yes sir..

M..pay attention..

Mayank again turned towards the board..

M..2...the increasing difference in demand and supply..

he turned towards the class..

M..and this means that...

he was lost!!....breeze was flowing in from the window,and nupur's hair were all blowing...today her pony tail was bit lose,and her hair were blowing on her face, entangling in her eyes, and she was constantly putting them away..and she was writing...but the wind blew again and her hair again found places near her beautiful eyes...finally irritated by the constant teasing of the wind, she scrolled down her band and all her hair were now open...multiplying her beauty by an infinite number....she pulled them all to one side

A...PAY ATTENTION!!...

Mayank came back to the real world...ashwini was smiling,and then she added miscehviously..

A...rohan!..pay attention..dekho sir kitna acha lecture de rahe hain...plz continue sir..

Nupur who had now tied her hair in a tight pony tail.., she was unaware what had happened , rohan and nupur both clueless of what was happening..and ash was smiling at mayank, and mayank was so confused...he didnt answered and started his lecture..

M...so the third cause is

Nupur turned towards ash and raised her eyebrows as to ask what happend...ash winked at her...and smiled...

Class was over and he was sitting in the staffroom.. mayank was very confused..

M..aisay tu nahi cahley ga!...dude tumahin ho kia jata hai...thora control rakho apne uper...jitna dekhna hoga ghr pe dekh lena..asiey class main...uffff...

He came home and he had a lot of pending work so he forgot the incident and so did nupur..

Next morning, nupur was getting ready and mayank saw her tieing her hair..he rememberd what happend yesterday..

M..nupur!!...

Nupur got scared ..

N..kia hua??..

M..aise nahi...plz aisey baal mat bandho...

N..ku?..

He made her sit on the stool of the dressing table and opened her hair again...

N..mayank ye kia...hum late ho jaye gey..

M..bus ik minute...

he tied her hair to a perfect prey and placed pins at every flowing strand...

M..haan!..ab thek hai..ab tu hurricane bhi aye ga tu bhi tumhare baal nahi urey gey...

N..what?..ye kia hai mayank...

she turned towards the mirror

N..main aisey clg nahi jaon gi...bilkul bhen gi lag rahi hon main..mayank..

M..nupur plzzz..

N..lekin ku?..aj achanak kia ho gaya hai tumhain?..

Mayank lowered his head..

M..wo actually... tumahre baal class main urtain hain tu main distract ho jata hon..

Nuur couldnt believe her ears...and bursted laughing...

N..OMG...i dont belive this mayank...hmmm...tu kal is liye ash tumahin tang kar rahi thi..

M..haan...aur bus tum asiey hi baal banao..

N..kia mayank tum bi na..itni choti si baat pe,....plz min aisey nahi jaon gi..pata hai pura clg kehta hai k merey baal bht pyare hain, aur mera purana style mujhe bht suit karta hai..main aisey nahi..

she was about to open her hair when mayank held her hand...

N..mayank plz..

Mayank placed his finger on her lips...

M...sssshhh...

he went behind her and placed his chin on her shoulder...

M..tumhain andaza bhi nahi hai k tumhare baal kitne khubsorat hain...

nupur lowered her eyes...and smiled.

N..mayank lekin...

Mayank brushed his hands on her arms...

M..aur tumhain ye bhi nahi pata k tumhara pati tumhari is khobsorti per kis qadr fida hai... jadoo kar detey hain tumhare baal mujh per..

thsi time nupur closed her eyes...he couldnt help smiling...

M...aur ik aur baat... tumhari is khobsorti per sirf mera haq hai...so aj k baad Mrs. Sharma k balon ko sirf Mr. Shrama hi admire karen gey..pora clg nahi...

he gently blew air on her cheek...

Nupur closed her eyes...and mayank gently kissed on her hair..

M..ab chalen..

Nupur opened her eyes and nodded gently..she still was in awe of his beautiful confession of being helpless and his so romantic posessivenesss...
Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak03



he was lost!!....breeze was flowing in from the window,and nupur's hair were all blowing...today her pony tail was bit lose,and her hair were blowing on her face, entangling in her eyes, and she was constantly putting them away..and she was writing...but the wind blew again and her hair again found places near her beautiful eyes...finally irritated by the constant teasing of the wind, she scrolled down her band and all her hair were now open...multiplying her beauty by an infinite number....she pulled them all to one side



Yipppi first to comment...
Hai mehak aaj main sach mein pagal ho jaungi...Ek se barkar ek mayur ff padh rahi hun jo pendings the...I wz about to go then got ur pm...Aur ekbaar phir me flattered..😍😍.Aaj mujhe cls mein koi lecture samajh nahi ane wala...
And just loved this part...Im speechless...How beautifully u've written this...🤪🤪🤪
Loved the sadu mayank in this khoye hue romantic mood...😆😆
This is an excellent piece of work...Now cant get over my mayur...
Ok me off now for collg...And keep it up...👏👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehak.. tu bhi uske baalon ke peeche pad gayi? Par kya karen.. ab itne sundar hain ki nazar hi nahin hattti.. Hayeeeeeee... Nice update dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow.this os was magical.........awesome.....

wonderful writimg........i really wish kuchh aisa show mein bhi dikhate anyways thnx for the pm!

keep writin more n more!!!

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