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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Amy updated my reply on page 8!😛
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omgggggggggggggg
after a long time
firstly i loved when u said that u r updating this one y u dont know
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dear
i forgot that u also have a ff
really its out of the world dear
just loved the way u have written it
beautifully potrayed everything
loved each n every word of it
completely outstanding
hats off
do continiue soooooooooooooooon
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Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

Hey Amy🤗finnally u updated!😃Gud too read ur update after such a long time..Any ways, now straight to the update..it was really nice esp Sam's part when you showed his soft corner for Gunjan..that was so sweet..then Edwardd discussion😆Hey you feel the same about Ed kya????😕😡 Any ways, dear this time chotu sa reply se kaam chala lo..next time pakka will a longer comment! This time do continue soon dear!😃 Luv yaaaaa!



Thanks honey......!! 😳 I thought u wud feel bad abt the edward part as i knw, he's ur fav... but kya kare... he looks like that in the film yarr........😕
and yess.. as of now i'll manage wid this rep... but next tym log comment huh?😃



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Originally posted by: chilluppp

omgggggggggggggg

after a long time
firstly i loved when u said that u r updating this one y u dont know
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dear
i forgot that u also have a ff
really its out of the world dear
just loved the way u have written it
beautifully potrayed everything
loved each n every word of it
completely outstanding
hats off
do continiue soooooooooooooooon



oh honey.........😛 apparently i have 2 FF's.. hehe.. but dint updated singe ages........ but anyways now that i updated.. i hope u enjoyed i.. and thanks for ur lovely comment 😳
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hey dear, will wait fr ur comments...
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Hello frnds,

Another update for this FF... Actually updating this one again.. because the part i posted earlier was just 1st part and a lot more action in Vday party is coming in this part.
I hope you enjoy this...

Chap 3 : First encounter- part 2
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*Gunjan*

I smiled at myself as Nupur walked towards Mayank. She was just so aggressive. And I was amazed to see a person of her match, Mayank!! He was just so like her.. ofcourse, regarding aggression. The rest of their qualities seemed very different than each other.

"Hey!" I literally jumped at the whisper which came from my left side. It was Samrat!

"Hey.. " I tried to smile covering up my bewildered looks, But he obviously cought the frightened side of me and he gave an awkward smile.

"relax! Its just me..", He said softly.

God!! Sometimes I would act like the most coward person in the world. I mean I could scream the hell out of me just by a mere sight of a cockroach. I avoided going in dark places alone. In my whole life I watched only one freaky movie ' "The sixth sence", and spent the next 2 days wondering if I'm dead or alive.

But today I broke all my records! His soft whisper made me jump..! Great..!

"Ahmm.. are you afraid of me?" His question made me come out of my reverie.

"Why.. Noo.. Ofcourse not!..It was just unexpected to me.. that's why.." I tried to explain.

"Well, that's good. Because you are the first girl, who was standing beside me for a whole minute without a single word." He said cheekily. Wait a minute, is he hitting on me? I shook my head slightly in an attempt to throw away that weird thought of my mind.

"I'm sorry." I said looking down.

"Hey, don't say sorry.. I'm just joking. And I suppose you don't have any problem in looking at me. After all I'm not that ugly." He said playfully and I looked at him. His gaze was fixed at me and somehow it captured mine also. There was something in his eyes, something very intense.. that made his eyes special. Ugly?? He was beautiful, if I can use the word for a boy.. or should I say , he was handsome? Yes, he was the most handsome guy I ever saw. Not that I check every other member of male community. But somehow, he captured my attention. God!! Wats up with me? Gunjan! Turn your gaze.. Turn your gaze' but where?.. oh god!! For god's sake, look away'

With great difficulty I broke that eyelock. I wished that one of us disappears somewhere for I didn't want to look at him again. It was so awkward for me and for him too, for he also didn't speak again. What if he read my eyes, whatever I thought about him.

I scanned the crowd with the hope of finding Nupur and spotted her, standing with mayank in a corner. They were having a conversation. But after taking another look, I realized it hardly looked like a conversation, they were having an argument. By god Nupur!! When will she grow up.

"Hey look, they're doing it again..come.." Samrat said and started walking towards their directions.

"Hey Samrat!" I called him, and he again looked at me in my eyes. But this time I managed to control my mind, "I'm sorry for all this.. you know.. for everything nupur said." and I trailed off.

"sorry? For this" he pointed at Mayank-Nupur and I shook my head. "Gunjan, who said all those things?"

"Nupur.." I whispered.

"And whom did she addressed those things?" he asked softly.

"Mayank", I replied even more softly.

"Then why are you apologizing yar?" he said grinning.

Why did i..? I didn't know. I looked at him. He was looking at me with curiosity.

"Because I felt like saying sorry." I shrugged and walked towards the fighting twosome.

*samrat*

I was amazed to hear her answer. First time in my life I met a girl who apologized even when she was not at fault, just because she felt like doing that. I smiled to myself. She belonged to a different species, or maybe she was an angel. Well she looked like one.

We came near Mayank and nupur and she resolved their argument. They seemed quite tamed. Then they apologized to each other, shook their hands. And I was a passive onlooker of all these incidents. As if I didn't know both of them. I just knew the angel who was sorting their issues, and she had all my attention. She looked so beautiful.

"Sam!! Time to hit the dancefloor.." Benji, who disappeared a while ago suddenly emerged and said. Besides him was a girl, our classmate, holding his hand. So! Finally he got a date. "See ya there dude!" he said and disappeared again in the crowd.

"Wow!!" before I could say anything a scream came from nupur's side," that's so cool.. lets go..I love dancing" she said.

"Hey me too.. lets go." I said and we started moving towards the dancefloor . But not all of us. Gunjan stayed behind.

"Come on Gunjan",I turned to her and asked , but she shook her head negatively.

"I don't dance.", She said, "Please carry on."

For a second I thought of backing off and staying with her, but hey! Nupur was my date. I didn't want to make her feel bad. And I had to control these weird feelings I was getting about Gunjan. She proved to be the biggest distraction for me. Maybe this was the time, when I could focus Nupur instead of her and have some time with Nupur.

As we went on the dance floor, the DJ changed grooving beats changed to a slow number, on request.

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale


Ohh! For god's sake.. not this song.. I thought, while my eyes already started searching her.

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

The girl in my arms,Nupur, was equally stunning, beautiful. But still my heart was seeking her. My body was in coordination with Nupur, on the dancefloor. But my mind was with her.

Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logon ki woh hai wahan
Aur pyaar ke mele mein akela itna hoon main yahan

It was a perfect song for my situation. I was here dancing with this beautiful lady, and she was there sitting on a corner table alone. And still I felt that I'm the loneliest person in this world without her. was it just attraction? I needed to find out what was it.

Partners changed and Nupur went to mayank who was dancing beside us. I excused myself from my new partner and walked towards her table. But to my surprise, she was not there. I looked around, she was talking on her cell. She looked so happy. Who was it? I moved a little close.

"Ohho, I'll take care of myself. Don't worry.." she continued without noticing my presence.

"ya.. ya.. ok baba.. oh.. now don't start it again.." she pouted. I realized that I was evasdropping her conversation, but I couldn't help it. I was just too curious.

"Ok.. Bye good night.. love you too.." She said and ended her conversation. But my heart sank by the last few words she said. She turned to find me standing a few feet away, and she jumped with fear just as she jumped before.

"Oh you..! you really scared me." She gulped and said sighing heavily.

"Boyfriend?" was only word I could say. It sounded like a plain word rather than a question.

"What?.. oh .. no no.. IT was my bhai..!" she answered , much to my relief. And I was smiling again.

"So you don't dance..?" I asked and watched her playing with her cell. She slided the screen of her cell again and again and cleaned it with her thumb by rubbing it, as if it was alladin's chirag.

"No." She said looking down.

"Why?"

"Because I never did."

"Don't tell me you never danced in your whole life." I said with surprise.

"No.. I mean I danced, but when I was in kindergarten. Not after that." She said innocently.

"And why is so?" I asked, snatching her cell from her hands. The way she was sliding its screen, it could break in two pieces soon.

"That is because, I'm a bad dancer." She said taking the cell back from my hand and gave me a flaunting smile. Now that was a million dollar smile.

"Let's Find out!" I forwarded my hands towards her. for a moments she looked at it blankly.

"Oh.. No.. thanks . I'm a really bad dancer." She said as she realized my motive.

"Come on gunjan.. you need to try this." And I grabbed her hand and took her on dancefloor. Another slow number was being played at this time.

Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon

Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..

Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda..

We stood face to face and she gulped looking at me. I smiled at her.

"Samrat, this is my favorite song.. I don't want to remember any embarrassing moments when I'll listen this song next time.." she said and made a puppy face.

"Dancing with me is embarrassing for you?" I said with fake anger, and as I expected, it hit the right chord.

"hey, I'm sorry. I really didn't mean that.. I was just.." she stopped as I rolled my eyes and gave in,"Ok, leave it. But don't blame me if I stamp on your foot." She said and we broke in a chuckle.

*Gunjan*

He was instructing me about where to place the hands, how to stand, how to move the legs and how to follow the beats. But I couldn't get all of those things. Still I tried to follow him sincerely. He was a good instructer. He will make a good choreographer.. I thought.

"And lastly, for a good coordination, you should trust your partner completely." He said me pushing me away from him, and with a jerk I was pulled back again, " So trust me", he said catching me in his arms, "I wont let you fall."

I looked at his eyes. They were reflecting the same intensity I saw sometime back. And I trusted him.

Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa

Mila karu sirhaane pe

Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda


The rest of the night was in blur for me.. I wanted to live only these moments, this dance.. In his arms.

Oh my god, I was in his arms.. I was just so close to him. Immediately moved a little back maintaining a safe distance. I looked around and found Nupur chatting with Mayank and Benji. Her eyes met with mine and she signaled me to see the watch. I took a shot at my wristwatch. It was 9.40PM! Time's up..!

*Samrat*

"Oh my god.. I need to go." She freed herself from my hold suddenly.

"you are going soo soon?" I was disappointed.

"Ya I have to..The rector will close the main gate at 10PM." She said in an alarming voice.

Not fair! I thought. I felt like spinning the earth backwards, till the time I saw her first time. But alas! I was not Rajanikant.

"wait na, I'll drop you girls.." I said in a hope to spend few more minutes with her. She turned back and smiled at me.

"No, we'll manage. Bye Samrat, it was nice meeting you." She said softly.

"bye" was all I could say. She literally ran towards Nupur,bid farewell to Benji and Mayank, then they made an exit from the party, and I stood there watching them go.

I could completely understand how 'Prince Charming' must have felt each time 'Cinderella' left him and ran towards her home at midnight. The only difference between him and me was, his Cinderella had those extra two hours..

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Comments and criticism welcome!!😳
Edited by amy00487 - 14 years ago
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Perfect update 👏 👏 😍.This time you seriously send me to SG dreamland with your magical update 😳 😍.The song was no doubt all time my fav😍 and it perfectly suits SG 😃.Aahh The dance was so wonderful 😍Somehow the dance reminded me of KJ dance on Vday 😳.OMGG the eyelock was sooo Cute ☺️.She was totally drowned in him ☺️Aww it was so diffcult for her to break that eyelock 😳totally caught in his eyes 😳.The best thing which I loved in gunjan when she said sorry even though it was not her fault but still she felt saying it and she said it 😳Too Januable 😍and the last part after the dance,when Gunjan was leaving him,I felt that Cinderella was leaving her prince charming behind😳Totally a fairytale😍.And OMGG his thoughts about rajnikaant and the Cindrella story 😆"poor Boy 😆.
Fantastic and Marvellous update Di.Now cont soon😉
Love
Ash
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Kya baat hain meri chotu.......... reserved b4 my PM fr 2nd tymm :) hehe😃 luv yaaaaaa😳
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Originally posted by: amy00487



Kya baat hain meri chotu.......... reserved b4 my PM fr 2nd tymm :) hehe😃 luv yaaaaaa😳

Hehe I usually keep an eye on your FF EmbarrassedAnd luv you too Embarrassed
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Originally posted by: -BlueFairy-

Hehe I usually keep an eye on your FF 😳And luv you too 😳


so sweet of u honey...😳 read and comment soonnnnnnnnnn, and i mean reallyyyyyyy ssoooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn😃

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