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Posted: 14 years ago


thanks prachi..glad to know you enjoyed the update..

loads of love..
Mel..


Originally posted by: jiyaa

nice ff

add me to ur pm list



thanks Jiyaa..glad to know you enjoyed reading the fic..will Pm you from next time..

loads of love..
Mel..

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


thanks aishar..glad to know you enjoyed the update..

loads of love..
Mel..


Originally posted by: amruta04

hey Mel
it was nice update
liked it
waiting for the next update
do continue soon
take care and
thanks for the pm.
Merry christmas to u 😊




thanks amruta..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
now it's new year..so happy new year to you..😃
loads of love..
Mel..


Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jiyaa

they r dammmmmmmmm hilarious

plz add me to ur pm list



once again thanks Jiyaa..looks like you read the last update late😃..will Pm you for sure..

loads of love..
Mel..


Originally posted by: iffath_arshia

hi mel.......😛😛

another hillarious ud....🤣
it was amzing dear bt again u end it at very interesting point,,,, nt fair😭
plz continue soon n
thnks fr d pm😊



thanks arshia..glad to know you enjoyed the update..arey mujhe uske aage nahin aa raha tha..so ended at that point😆..

loads of love..
Mel..

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fatzfathi

hey i came across tis story n its really hillarious..😆 loved d way u hav written d brothers enconters wit each other n wit teir enemies..! plz do pm me frm next ud onwards..

take care..!



thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed reading the fic..writing about the three guys is soo much fun..enjoying it thoroughly..😆.. will Pm you from next time..

loads of love..
Mel..


Originally posted by: Jinalee114

hi mel!

OMG y did u stop!? tht was a really short update. wht is riddhima going 2 say, wht r atul n rahul going 2 do, wht is cooking in armaan's head?! OMG so many questions! I WANT 2 READ MORE!
armaan n his nautanki, tsk, tsk, but im really looking 4ward 2 reading the AR parts tht r going 2 come up
n sorry abt the late reply :(
update soon!!!!!
tc! =D



hey Jinalee...glad to know you enjoyed the update..let see what she says? abhi tak to you must have known..story ko lamba karne ke liye maine kya kiya hoga😛...Rahul and Atul are pakoing Khichdi making Armaan the bakra..😆... this is just the start of the nautanki's ..abhi bahut kucch hai..aage.aage..😉😆...
don't be sorry for the late reply..I don't like it😡.

loads of love..
Mel..

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


thanks ashu..glad to know you enjoyed the update..

loads of love..
Mel..


Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiii

awesome update
loved it
love the trio
they r hileriuos
loved armaan
cant wait 4 more
con soon
plz do pm me when u update
thanks



thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
me too..love writing about the guys and their acts..😃..

loads of love..
Mel..

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

shollly....im late......

but simply amazing part..

sooo superb......

bechara armaan...socha kya aur ho kya gaya...

n ridz ready to beat him...n hit himas well...

n cooker....he was amazing........bhaiyaa ji.......

n instead of chekcing...they r assuming he is dead........

n the last bit was simply superb.......

mein kaun hoon...tum kaun ho....tum meri gf ho..........

that was amazing........

thnx for the pm...........




hey anu..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
and don't say sholly and Sorry..I don't like it..😡..
ab Armaan ka jadoo itni jaldi nahin chalega on Riddhima..it will take time..😆..
Armaan kissed her so Riddhima will definitely gonna take badla for this..😆..thank god she didn't hit him again to bring back his memory..
Cooker is the most entertaining character in the fic..I love writing this character..😆..
he is just acting ...nautanki kar rahe hain...when riddhima will come to know..god save him..😆..

loads of love..
Mel..


Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved
was so funny
rolling on the floor with laughter
poor abhi
poor guys had to go through nikki's food torture
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm



thanks dear...glad to know you enjoyed the update..
Nikki's food is something not everyone can handle especially Abhi..😆..

loads of love..
Mel...

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kavyaa

2mnths & 2 days...hehe😆.... you only told me..2 months and 2 days..isn't it cool..😎😆

okees nw m finally commenting😊...
voh bhi after a long time..but since your exams are going on so you are excused..😆
d part just left me in bouts of laughter😆... hw do u manage 2 write such an awesome part...totally hilarious... i enjoyed it veryyyy much😃... sometimes even I wonder..I have no reply to this question.. it's an inborn talent hehe.. * on a complementing spree right now, so I am not leaving any single chance*😆..
awwww poor amy,rahul & atul... bechare after a complete day of working & all dey cm home 2 find dat super "yummy" food made by niks & dey had no escape...hehe i sympathize wid dem😆.. and what about Nikki..she did all the hard work and you are sympathizing with the guys..not fair..😛😆
& abhi us bechare ki toh pucho he mat😆... 3 times in a row he rubbed niks on d wrong side... it was worth reading wen he was caught criticizing niks' food & den him manaofying her... totally hilarious.. i cudnt control laughing reading dis part🤣... glad to know you enjoyed this scene..it was fun imagining his expression and writing..😃
u know wen i was reading dis part mah dad was sitting in front of me & i was sooo nt able 2 control mah laugh... he even caught me laughing once & he was like r u mad or wat & den i had 2 leave reading d part so dat mah dad doesnt find me laughing again coz obviously i cudnt tell him y i was laughing so badly kyunki agar unhe pata lagta toh he'd hv killed right den & der...😆

so madam reads chup-chup ke..😆.. I know how it looks like..it happens with me also and quite a no.of times even I am caught when I sit with the lappy to update the next part. I laugh and smile looking at the screen.. my mom says "are you okay? what is there to laugh" and I have no answer to her question.😆

hmmm nw it wd be interesting 2 know wat happens wen amy tries 2 pataofy ridz😊....
definitely..it's gonna be really very interesting..😉

*sigh* finally one comment done & one more 2 go😊...
I think you should change it to 2 now..😛😆..

loads of love...
Mel..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay guys next part...not that funny, not that sad but maybe bad....that's all I have to say ;D

Pardon me for the mistakes..haven' t checked it properly.😳

PART 3

"Shock laga laga laga Shock laga"

*couldn't think of any better title ;P*

"tumhe kucch bhi yaad nahin, store room, fight, kiss and..."

"Are you my girlfriend?" Armaan asked as she looked at him shock.

"eeks...NO..."she quickly got up and stood beside Rahul and Atul still trying to digest the words she heard a moment ago.

"but you just said..store room, fight and kiss..."

"So..."

"So that means you my wife..." Armaan said innocently as she looked at him twice shocked.

"jeez...NO...are you crazy?...I am not..." she was cut-off as Rahul and Atul grabbed her hand and took her away to a corner.

"Riddhima what are you doing?" Rahul asked as she looked at him confusedly. "I mean..You can't tell him the truth."

"But why...he thinks I am his girlfriend or maybe his wife. So shouldn't we clear his doubt? Don't you know agar doubts clear nahin hota to tension ho jaati hai or agar tension ho gayi, his BP will reach rocket high aur phir he'll depend on medicines all the time..aur phir coz of tension he may lose his hair and even you know Greeks are very looks conscious. If he goes bald, he may try to kill himself and that time what if we aren't able to save him...so..I was just trying to help him" she said looking at them. Atul nodded, impressed with her talks as Rahul was ready to pull his hair out. It was getting impossible for him to handle her Geeky talks. He looked at Atul for help but watching his impressed face, he knew it was time for him to do something.

"Armaan has just lost his memory Riddhima and telling him the truth means..you'll break his heart aur..agar uska dil toota to voh phir...he can go back to coma again" Rahul spoke seriously, crossing his finger praying that she'll agree to this.

"par..vo coma mein kab gaya tha pehle that he'll go again..He just fainted..." Riddhima replied innocently. Atul and Rahul looked at each other and went to another corner leaving her alone.

"Atul, I can't handle the geek..har question ka answer, you are also a geek but even you don't have answers to every question but she...kucch kar na..." Atul looked at his frustrated face and putting his imaginary thinking cap thought of a plan and a smile formed on his lips.

"Let me Rahul..Only a Geek can handle another Geek.." he said and moved towards Riddhma.

Armaan who was sitting with Cooker had no idea what was going on between the three of them. He noticed the tension lines on his bro's as Riddhima was looking at him angrily. He couldn't even say anything right now as it would have let her know about their plans.

Cooker who was beside him all this while noticed the change in facial expression and made big eyes, looking at him in shock, pointing his finger at him.

"you...you....you are not..."

"Chup..kar...Chup...shhh" Armaan pointed his finger at him, forcing him to keep quiet.

"But..."

"Cooker..I'll tell you later abhi shut your mouth otherwise I'll ask Nikki to cook food for you aur uske baad kya hota hai..I don't think I need to tell you..." Cooker gulped back the words that were ready to come out of his mouth as the picture of last time flashed in front of his eyes. Just like this time, Nikki wanted to cook food and as these three were out for work, Cooker was her new victim. She made him taste her cook food and after that what happened, even thinking about that time scared the hell out of him.

"Fine...but I want all the details bhaiyaji.." Cooker said getting all interested, erasing the picture that was in front of his eyes as Armaan nodded.

Riddhima standing few metres away, saw them conversing but couldn't hear a single word. Setting her glasses, she was about to move towards them when Atul came and stood in front of her.

"Riddhima..We need to talk.." he grabbed her hand and stopped her. Rahul came and stood beside Armaan as they waited for the geeks to finish their convo.

Turning Rahul looked at the big grin on Cooker's face and frowned. He looked at Armaan waiting for the answer when Cooker's mouth opened.

"Bhaiyaji I know everything..." Cooker said looking at him, the grin not leaving his face even for a second.

"you told him.." Rahul looked at Armaan accusingly.

"I didn't tell him. isse apne aap pata chal gaya and stop giving me those looks man...maine kucch nahin kiya"

"Armaan you are useless. Ek kaam bola tha and you couldn't even do it properly. Ab agar Riddhima ko pata chala na.. that all this is just an act, I don't know about you but that Muskaan will kill me for sure. Phir aana idea ke liye mere pass." Rahul shook his head and looked at him angrily. "and Cooker..agar tune kissi ko kucch bhi bola..to yaad hai na..Nikki ka yummy and tasty..."

"Bhaiyaji..not fair..aap mujhe unke khane ka dhamki nahin de sakte hamesha...and I promise I won't open my mouth. Cross my heart and hope to die.."Cooker said. Rahul and Armaan looked at him suspiciously, knowing very well his big mouth.

"Bhaiyaji..I won't tell this time..last time I was talking with nikki madam to pata nahin chala when it came out of my mouth but this time..I won't..One last chance..please.." They had no other option left but to agree to him. If not, they knew he'll be the first one to go and tell the girls all about the plan.

"fine last time..par agar tune..."

"I promise..you can count on me this time..." Cooker grinned looking at them.

They turned their attention towards the Geeks who were talking few distance away. "Waise Rahul what are they talking about?" Armaan asked looking at the different sets of expression on her face. She had an angry look first as she was looking at him from the distance, followed by sad, funny and now she was frustrated as she nodded her head positively, agreeing to Atul's. They made their way back and she stood beside him and looked at him for a moment.

On an impulse, she flung her arms around his neck and hugged him tightly as he looked at his Bro's in shock as he was least expecting her to believe him and agree. Rahul and Atul gave a thumb up to him and with a big smile on his face, he hugged her back.

"I am sorry for fighting with you Armaan..mujhe tum par shaq nahin karna chaiye tha, I should have talked with you...kafi dard ho raha hai." She asked touching his head where she had hit him as he nodded his head like a child.

"don't worry, now we are back together na..to main tumhe aise thik kar dungi.." she said snapping her fingers as a big smile appeared on his lips, agreeing to her.

"chalo...come on now...let' go ..you need rest and Atul and Rahul will take care of your work" Riddhima said. The smile vanished from their faces as they heard her.

"yes..yes..yes..." Armaan was screaming in his mind, jumping in joy looking at his Bro's sullen faces. Now this was something didn't even cross his mind. "No work and only food"- Can this day get any better.

Walking beside her, he turned and looked at his Bro's one last time as they were standing at the same spot, looking at him angrily. He waved them and walked out with Riddhima on one side and Cooker on the other.

They reached the home and thankfully Nikki wasn't at home. Well they had made the plan in such a way to avoid her. Cooker went into the kitchen to prepare some food as she took him to his room. Adjusting the pillows behind him, she helped him sit on the bed and she sat on the chair beside his bed.

There was an uncomfortable silence in the room as both were having difficulty in initiating a conversation. Armaan didn't knew what to talk and Riddhima- some much happened in such a short span of time that it hardly gave her time to talk.

She was pretending to be the girlfriend of the guy, she hated the most. If only he had not kissed her- this wouldn't have happened. What was he thinking when he pulled her on an impulse.

Flashback

Riddhima jumped on him to beat him badly, that's what exactly her facial expression looked like as she heard him calling her "Geeky..Psycho..." nobody had the right to call her- Armaan knew that and still he told this on her mouth. How can she let him go this easily?

Without giving a second thought, she jumped on him and Armaan not ready for this sudden attack hit the wall behind him. She was punching him with all her strength but Armaan being a stronger one in front of her, her soft punches wasn't helping in this case.

"Riddhima..I am sorry...I didn't mean to...Stop it..." He was trying to grab her hands to stop her as she was punching him blindly without seeing whether it was actually hitting him or not.

With the switch board behind him, the lights turned off as he was trying to himself. The darkness stopped her hands in air and seeing this as a perfect opportunity he grabbed her hands twisting it behind her back.

"Armaan leave me..." she was fidgeting in his hold but all her attempts were going unsuccessful.

"So you can hit me again..No ways.." Armaan replied tightening his hold on hers.

"Armaan..main last time bol rahi hoon..leave me.. nahin to.."

"What are you gonna do? Haath to mere pass hai..now how are you gonna hit me" Armaan replied cheekily knowing very well that she'll be now boiling with rage.

"Accha..abhi batati hoon.." She said and before Armaan could think of her next move, she started hitting on his legs with her legs.

"Ouch..Riddhima..Are you crazy?" Armaan said as he was jumping in the dark to save himself without leaving her hands. Though she wasn't wearing any high heels, her kicks were really painful to handle.

Riddhima was kicking blindly in air coz of darkness which sometimes was hitting the target- his legs. With complete darkness and having no idea what was in front of them or behind she lost her balance and hit the ground. Armaan who was holding her hands came on top of her and then- vo hua jo kisi ne nahin socha tha.

Armaan lips touched hers and the first words that came out of his mouth "Oh Sh**" he whispered and quickly got up. He couldn't see her, but could very well imagine her expression. Riddhima made big eyes as she realized what happened a second back. She felt him moving up from top of hers and quickly got up.

"Riddhima it was just an accident.. I swear.." He was moving back as he felt her shadow like figure slowly coming towards him. His back hit the switch board and the lights came back. As expected, she was fuming in anger from behind her glasses with her hands on her hips looking at him angrily.

"Armaan.. how dare you..?" she said and she looked around for any weapon. Her eyes got fixed on the baseball bat and she quickly took it in her hands.

"Riddhima..believe me..It was just an.... Bhag Armaan bhag.." he ran out of the room as he saw her coming towards him with the bat in her hand without even caring to listen to him.

Flashback ends

They looked at each other for a moment and turned their faces. Cooker came in the room with the food and Riddhima excused herself and went to the washroom and locked the door.

As soon as they were alone both of them took a sigh of relief- one in the washroom and other sitting on the bed.

"oh god..it's so awkward..Riddhima and me..I never really saw her in that way- Riddhima aur meri girlfriend. Rahul tune mujhe kaha phasa diya hai" Armaan muttered, covering his face with his hands.

The situation was not very different in the washroom also. Riddhima looked at herself in the mirror- what was she thinking when she said yes to Atul. "oh god..this is so not happening..Armaan and me..agar Muskaan ko pata chala to..she'll kill even before Armaan but I can't leave him also. He is in this situation coz of me. Agar maine danda nahin maara hota to..par maine itne zor se bhi nahin maara tha..ab use kucch yaad nahin to mujhe help to karni padege. Waise bhi Atul ne bola tha "just one week"..itne time mein use sab yaad aajayege..Par agar nahin aya to.... please bhagwanji..ek week mein sab thik kar dena..please.." she prayed looking up and looked at herself in the mirror.

"Riddhima you can do it..yes you can do it...you just have to pretend to be his girlfriend...just his girlfriend..remember what Atul said " you just have to act like Hina. The way she acted in our favourite serial jab voh Sanjay se milli this pehli baar and then their love story started..BAS..just for one week.."" she recalled Atul's word, repeated it and calming herself down moved out.

Armaan was about to eat when he saw her coming out from the washroom. With the bowl in one hand and the other holding the spoon, he felt his throat getting chocked as he looked at her face. She had a big smile on her face, completely opposite to what was before she went to the washroom.

"kahin Riddhima to pata to nahin chal gaya that I am just acting?" he thought looking at her. Very calmly she sat in front of him on the bed and took the bowl and spoon from his hand. Armaan gulped as he imagined her emptying the whole bowl on his head.

"Riddhima..vo main..." he opened his mouth to apologize but was cut-off by her as she brought the spoonful of soup in front of his mouth.

"chalo..Armaan open your mouth.." she said. He opened his mouth and she fed the soup, his eyes fixed on her still not believing that what he is seeing is a part of reality or dream.

She was feeding him the soup as he was busy noticing her actions, her expressions and by the time the soup finished he looked at her in shock as the truth finally came in front of his eyes "This can't be....she is acting like Hina from that serial..." he mentally told himself.

End of Part 3

Ho gaya..ho gaya..part complete ho gaya...I am sounding like "aaj ki taaza khabar...aaj ki taaza khabar" ;P...So there is a taaza khabar for you guys. This is my last update in my series of 'shocking quick updates'. Next update will most probably be in February. I have 2-3 projects hovering over my head..*just completed one today and it feels soo good..* aur agar professors ke blessings rahi- there are 2-3 more in the pipeline ;P .. Aren't they too sweet and I need to update my other fics too and prepare for my exams and..the list is never ending..as of now January and February are jam packed. So I'll be back hmm..Let me think..I don't know when but I'll be back...😃

Hope you all enjoyed the part...

Looking forward to your views..

Loads of love...

Mel...


PS: Here I am back with my regular line- in case I missed anyone, please do let me know. I haven't made a Pm list till now so I may have missed pming about the update..will make it by next update..😳

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.........
its awsm .......
hope u update sooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy
funny part
lol
cont soon

harneet <3

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