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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaayyyyyy....finally Maaneet will meet in the next part...!!! buh dunno wen u ll put it up..!!!😕😕

Anyways, this part was great....n u hv not left us with an option to complain abt the length....😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow wonderful update... waiting for a maneet meet.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww loving the fact they still havent moved on after so many yrs.....
BEST OF LUCK WITH UR EXAMS! :)
hope they go really well and ur back on here ASAP to continue this gr8 ff... ive liked the first post but will ask again anyway if u cud add me to the pm list plzzz?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u have to make up missy as these small updates is not enogh2 quench our monsterous appetit for ur ff😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hey love your writting can you add me to your PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

I'm real sorry about the length guys! I know it's short :P but right now, i'm caught up haha! but the next part will be long so don't expect the update to be soon :) And about dragging maannet meeting, well... true love is challenging right?! 😆

annie!
P.s thankyou for your patience and comments! <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Awesome Dear
Loved both the Parts
Loved the way Geet answered Sasha.........
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter4


No! He must have heard soemthing wrong. It cannot be geet.. She never wished to return... but what if she had, what if she still loved him, what if... Maan suddenly realized that Geet might have moved on.

How can she have survived 3 years on her own without a man's help? The thought of seeing Geet with another man made his heart wrench.
Everything that could have been and everything that had been... Maan made up his mind. He would not force Geet into doing anything she never wanted. If she was happy the way her life was, then he would never interfere. The only relationship they would have would be of nothing more than business..

***

Geet silently sat in the car as the driver drove and thought about how life had changed. Once there used to be a time when Maan would always be with her.. standing right beside her and now... A tear escaped Geet's eyes. No matter how much she tried to convince her heart, she could never forget Maan. She loved him. Nothing changed about her feelings...

***

Geet silently walked inside her mansion, lost in her own world... her own thoughts...


"mommy!"

she heard muskaan who ran to her to give her a hug.

"Grr! i missed you! why are you late?" She whined.... to which geet chuckled and gave her a light kiss on her cheek.

"Sorry muskaan! You forgive Mommy don't you?"
But muskaan continued to pout angrily...
"Hmm... so muski needs something to make her up..."
"yes! i want chocolates! You promised Mommmy!"
"I did?!" Geet gasped trying to look sad and that she had forgotten...
"You forgot that too?!" Muskaan innocently said with tears in her eyes....
She grumbled a "KATTI!" and turned to run away from Geet but Geet caught her little hand and took out the dairy milk she had been hiding...
"Yay! I love you mommy!" Muskaan said hugging Geet. The feeling when she felt happy and hugged her mom was unexplainable. It made geet feel that all the love in the world had come to her. "I love you too cuppycake" Geet whispered in her ear and Muskaan ran away with her toys in her room.
Geet sighed and turned around to leave when the phone rang....
"Hello?" Geet spoke...
"GEET!" Pinky yelled in the phone.
"Halke bol pinky. Kya hua? abhi tou office se nikli thi mein. "
"Woh Geet, Maan sir ne tujhe.. umm... kal subha 10 baje bulaya hai. Will you be able to ... i mean... tu..."
"Pinky... i will be there. Don't worry..."
Geet said as she hung up the phone.

***Song-TujheBhulaDiya<3

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fJGX9i-jhig

Geet walked towards the window to see it rained heavily....

She closed her eyes as she walked into the garden... The heavy raindrops reminded her of her pains...

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye

She closed her eyes as she walked into the garden... The heavy raindrops reminded her of her pains. and those memories..

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rove palkan de Kone vich neend meri

Kurbaan hua, the dhabba, hoshiarpur...The day they first met

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Hanju digde ne chot lage dil te
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut birha de badlan di chhaa gayi


*Maan*

He walks in his dark room.... Not bothering to turn on the lights...

Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti

He remembers those days in the office... That day she cried infront of him....

khoya khoya in raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi


The day she walked out of his life... leaving nothing but darkness, pain and sorrow....

Har pal her lamha, main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal her lamha main khud se yeh kehta rehta hoon


Maan closes his eyes, tears rolling down his cheeks....


Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh

He takes out the photo of his drawer of Him and Geet Mr.Chopra's parties...
Recalls Sasha saying "geet handa" when he asks who the client is....


Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya.. oh
Mujhe rula diya


*songEND*


Geet stood in the rain, her eyes closed and she could not feel herself. It was six in the evening and the sun was nowhere to be found. All there was visible was darkness and water....

"Why?" She questioned in her thoughts...

"Because you can never forget me Geet"

Geet instantly opened her eyes. It was maan. He stood infront of her, wetting himself in the rain like she was doing...
Geet couldn't breathe for a second. All she wanted was to run into his arms and forget the stupid world. Nothing else mattered! Geet sobbed as she saw him standing expressionless infront of her...

"I can't do this" She cried....

and he disappeared into thin air... "i cannot do this Maan!" She cried again and fell on her knees because she did not have the power to stand on her feet. They were too numb... and she was too. ...

*"I love you" He whispered to her picture....

Note:
I tried hard to fit a song in there! Hope it succeeded ROFL!! sorry for the shortness since i promised a long part. My academics and stupid skewl ain't letting me get to my FF.
Hope this was sort of enough to make up ;)
And you have to keep on reading to see when Maan&Geet will FINALLY meet :)
Until then...
ciao!
Annie=)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome..so they r meeting soon.all the best 4 ur exams.thx 4the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Oh God....I want Maaneet to meet fast....it was so touching....!!!😭😭

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