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Posted: 14 years ago
Love ur ff alot plzz can u add me to ur pm lest
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thankyou guys! dhara, i didn't PM anyone 😆 sorry!
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Chapter8:)
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I just want to tell you all that I really admire your comments! They are VERY encouraging! And the PMing takes a lot of time so if i forget anyone anytime then please forgive me 😳
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He slowly walked into the hall, remembering those few moments. That kiss. That touch of hers on his lips. He was lost. How did it happen? He didn't
know. Everything seemed amazing all of a sudden.


He walked into the hall and looked around but she was nowhere to be found.
"SASHA!" he called....and the plump girl came running by him...
"y-yes Mk?"
"Geet kahaan hai?" he asked...

"woh MK. she left a few minutes ago. She seemed - i dunno"
"Tum se jo poocha jaye, utna jawaab do. That's it."

And he left the hotel building... where was she? why did she leave? was she angry at him?
Maan felt like dying in there.

He caught her almost running to her car. Maan went by her and grabbed her fist and crashed her against his hard chest. Her lips still trembled from

that kiss and her eyes brimmed with tears.

She had a hard time breathing...


"Why are you running away Geet?" He asked... "Why are you hiding YOURSELF from me when you know that you can't LIE."

"i'm not lying maan. Let me go!" She yelled, twisting her arms so that she could get them out of his grip.
"i won't." He said stubbornly.... "Not unless you tell me the truth. And that i want to know now!"


the anger, frustration, pain, love and every emotion was visible in his eyes. Those warm brown ones changed into cold and dark eyes. He wanted

answers and he will get them!

Maan let go of Geet's arm and let her escape in her car.

"You love me Geet! Stop DENYING it!" He yelled... as she made her way away from him....

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Geet speeded up the car as much as she could; tears rolling down her cheeks and angry at herself. What was the need to show ur love for him?

Why did you get so involved in the moment Geet? Why did you make it clear and evident that HE was still in her heart? Did she want this? hell no!

Geet abruptly stopped the car. "i need to get a hold of myself" She whispered and wiped her tears...
"muskaan..." she reminded herself and turned around the car to go and pick up muski....


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Muskaan slept with her teddy bear as Geet stood at the window... She could still feel his cold lips on hers... and closed her eyes. Tears rushed down

her pink cheeks and she continued to stand there for almost 10 minutes. The door bell rung and snapped Geet from out of her own world.


"Itni late? " she wondered as she walked down the stairs and opened up the main gate in thought of who on earth would be here THIS late.

"haha!" Geet heard a familiar voice... Her tears dried up and she smiled looking at her uncle walking in the door.

"uncle!" Geet almost yelled rushing into his arms and giving him a warm daughterly hug... She stayed there for quite some time and slowly weeping.

Mehta pulled Geet out gently and asked

"What's wrong beta?" and looked at Geet's party dress who she still wore... "I told you to stay away from here Geet. Why are you doing this to yourself!"

"HOw can i say NO to you UNCLE? after all you have done for me?" she sobbed uncontrolably...

"I haven't done anything beta. It's Maan. He still loves you Geet."

Geet's head snapped up. Obviously Geet didn't tell mehta uncle that she loved maan and he loved her. then how on earth did he come to know? He only knew the hoshiarpur part of the story..

Geet stared at uncle questioningly and he chuckled.
"I know you must be wondering how i know about all of this. The reason you are here with me is Maan beta. He never left you alone. He made me

want to help you... He came back for you but returned because he thought that you had moved on, settled in with someone else. "


Geet stared in shock and disbelief. Everything came crashing down to her... OhmyGod. Geet whispered to herself. This was not done.

"He really loves me" she whispered...

"And you really doubted her love Geet?" Mr.Mehta responded....

"I might have... " geet answered as she slowly made her way out of the main entrance...

"Geet!" Mr.Mehta called... "where are you going Beta? It's almost 12."

"I can't wait till tomorow uncle. I just can't.... This needs to be settled. Now Or never!"


"geet! take the car!" Uncle yelled but she was too caught up in what she was going to do to listen.


She knew that he still would be at the party till it got over. Geet took the car and parked it away from the building. Everything was dark and chilly

but nothing distracted her except for the fact that she had to go and see him. Now.

She started to walk slowly towards the hotel entrance which was quite far away... she was too tired to move and she cursed herself for parking the

car that far...

"Oyeee Hoyeeeee" She heard a manly voice.

"Kahaan jarahi hai?" the same perverted voice she heard....

Geet froze for a second, not knowing what to do. These were the goons and she needed to get out of here... She turned around to run only to see

a guy wearing shades-at this time of the night- staring at her... His mind filled with bad intentions.


The guy grabbed her fist and pulled her close... Geet screamed in horror..

"SHUT UP!" he yelled, placing his hand over her lips and trying to pull her close to him....

But before he could have done anything, another hand which was very much recognizable to Geet, grabbed the hand of the goon and threw him

away.

Geet looked up to see that it was none other than her saviour, Her MAAN.

"What the hell are you doing here at this time Geet?" He questioned angrily but before Geet would have replied, the other guy, who hseemed to be

be hitting on Geet, hit a thin iron rod on Maan's head.

"Maaan!" Geet shouted as he fell down. She rushed towards him and the goon left when he saw the security guards rushing towards where they were standing.

"Maan! Wake up please!!" She held him.... There was no such injury but Maan had fainted... Blood trickled down his forehead and dirtied Geet's hands too.

"NO NO. Please!" She held him close to her as he slowly closed his eyes....

"We need an ambulance!" The security guards announced... Geet took out her cellphone from her pouch and dialled for an ambulance with

trembling, bloodied hands. Tears rushed uncontrollably from her eyes and she couldn't see anything and anyone except him....


Pinky, adi and the rest of the office staff came rushing in at the sound of the guards and the ambulance..


The place got crowded But geet was still.. she felt hurt seeeing him hurt. She stood by her car... and observed the people who pulled Maan safely into the ambulance and took him away to the hospital...

"Geet? What happened?" Pinky asked, worried... But Geet was in no state to reply....

"Come on! Geet, tell us!" Adi almost yelled....

"Adi.... Geet's not okay. We need to take her home for some rest..."

"Come on Geet... Let's go home. i'll drive the car.." Adi offered.... as he held her hand....

"No."
"But GEEET-" pinky cut in....

"i said NO! i want to go to the hospital. I want to know if he's going to be okay. i just can't - " streams of tears rushed down and she felt herself about to faint. The clock was almost about to hit 3....

"FINE geet." adi answered... and he took the Keys from her...

"But adi!" Pinky tried to argue...
"No. Geet needs to be with him right now... and she's too stubborn to listen to us so... come on..." Adi whispered back....

They sat in the car and drove to the hospital...


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I'm really Sorry if i haven't PMed you guys about the part! It takes quite a LOT of time and i might be just a bit lazy 😛 But i love YOU all! And hoping forgiveness for NO pms 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Love this part, so finally geet came to know abt maan

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, egarly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vrsharma

Love this part, so finally geet came to know abt maan

she still doesn't know about dev being thrown out 😉
thanks for reading!
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Originally posted by: kirti_fiji

nice, egarly waiting for the next update

Thanks! 😃 and yeah, the next part will be updated soon-ish 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
thx 4 the pm.gr8 update.hope maan is f9 n we get 2 see a union of both of them

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