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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Omg maan why ur doing this to geet I heat u know plzz update soon plzzz update today plzzz I whant to know what geet will do to him thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
awesome ff............i loved each and every line..........wanting to read more.....plzzzzzzz update soon

with luv,
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Liked Geet's family care for her
Maan is using Geet
Loved the way Geet has control on herself
Lets c wat happens to Maan
Well his ego is toh hurt 1st now hop he dosent take sum idiotic step

lol... what do you think will happen next...?? is maan really and idiot or something else...!! chalo dekhte hai where i can lead him😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
wow thats Fabulous Dear
Loved Geet's reaction.............
Pls Update Soooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Hey
lovely update once again.
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Fantastic update...
nice one....
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RECAP : she drew the dagger
Hes on his feet, alert like a fighter. ' do you draw a blade on your king? Do you know treason when you do it madam?

' I draw the blade on me, myself,' I say quickly. I hold the sharp point to my throat and his eyes narrow.

'I swear if you come one step closer, if you come one inch closer, I will cut my throat before you and bleed to death on the ground where you have dishonored me

'play-acting.'

No. this is not a game to me. I cannot be your mistress. I came to you for justice and then tonight for love, and I am a fool to do so and I beg your pardon for my folly. But I too cant sleep, and I too cant think of nothing but you, and I too could only wonder and wonder if you would come. But even so.. even so.. you should not…'

'I could have that knife off you in a moment. he threatens

' you forget I have two brothers. I have played with swords and dagger since I was a child. I will cut my throat before you reach me.

' you never would. You are a woman no more than a woman's courage.'

'try me. Try me. You don't know what my courage is. You may regret what happens'

He hesitates for a second, his own heart hammering, in a dangerous mix of temper and lust and then he masters himself, raises his hands in gesture of surrender and steps back. ' you win,' he says. And you may keep the dagger as the spoil of victory. Here – he unbuckles the scabbard and throws it down.

'take the damn scabbard too, why dont you?

Never taking my eyes from him I kneel and pick it up.

' I shall walk with you to your home.' He says.

'I shall see you safely to your door.'

I shake my head ' no. I cant be seen with you. No one must know we have met in secret. I would be shamed.'

For a moment I think he will argue but he bows his head.

'you walk ahead then,' he says ' and I will follow behind you like a page, like your servant until I see you safe to your gate. You can revel in your triumph in having me follow you like a dog. Since you treat me like a fool, I shall serve you like a fool and you can enjoy it.'

There is no speaking against his anger, so I nod and turn to walk before him, as he said I should. We walk in silence. I can hear the rustle of his cloak behind me. When we get to then of the wood and near my house I pause and turn to him.

' I will be safe from here,' I say ' I must beg you to forgive me for my folly.

I must beg you to forgive me for my force,' he says stiffly. ' I am perhaps, too accustomed to getting my own way. But I must say I have never been refused at the point of a knife before. My own knife at that.'

I turn it round and offer him the hilt. ' will you have it back your grace,'

He shakes his head. ' keep it to remember me by. It will be my only gift to you. A farewell gift.

'will I not see you again?'

'never,' he says simply and bowing slightly he turns to leave.

'your grace,' I call and he turns and pauses.

'I would not part with you on bad terms.' I say feebly. ' I hope that you can forgive me.'

'you have made a fool of me.' He says, his voice icy. ' you may congratulate yourself for being the first woman to do that. But you will be the last. And you will never make a fool of me again.'

I sink down into a courtesy, and I hear him turn. I wait till I can hear him no longer, then I rise up to go home.

There is a part of me, a young woman that wants to run inside, and fling myself on my bed and cry myself to sleep. But I don't do that. I bear myself as more than a silly girl. I am not defeated by a boy with a newly born crown, and no man will ever walk away from me certain that he won't walk back.

I walk back home.

do hit the like button... and i am always ready for comments discussion and criticism... 😊

Love,
Zamee<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome!!!
Read it before your PM😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
great update do continue cant wait for da nt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Loved Geet's corage to the core
Maan's ego is hurt very badly
For sure he will never forget it
Lets c wat happens wen the meet another tim though Maan said he will meet her never

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