MARS (mjht) part 11 (pg 111) - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

763

Views

40.1k

Users

107

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
PART - 02
Next day

"kya" samrat shouted "mayank r u sure???"

"impossible mayank" nupur said agreeing with samrat "how can it b possible"

"yup it is, whats so strange In this???" mayank said seeing the confused expression of both.

"whats strange???"nupur said "u r saying that our clue will b the one with a cross"

"exactly tujhy kya lagta hy hum cross sign ko is pore jungle mein dhondein gy??? Strange man" samrat said ignoring the words of mayank

"samrat we have to solve an ancient mystery that is hidden somewhere from centuries. If we r the true people that will get the key of this secrecy then the problem will resolve on its own in front of us. N if v r a wrong choice then our hard work of centuries will be of no use" mayank explained "kuch samajh aya???"

Both of them looked towards each other n nodded but it looks from there faces that its difficult for them to digest.

"mayank tum in dono ko choro tum ye btao whats the plan???"

"thanks God kisi ko to samajh aya. First we will search the place"

"so we four r going towards which side???" gunjan said asking for explaination looking towards the four directions around

"nops not v four" mayank said "v both" he said pointing towrds nupur "towards that side, n u two towrds that one"

All three nodded.

Samrat n gunjun was moving clearing the branches of trees standing as a hurdle in their way. Gunjun was busy observing her surroundings while samrat was in deep thoughts thinking of attempting suicide

"yar is mayank k sath rehny sy to behtar hy insaan suicide kar ly" he continued "itna bolta hy or jo bolta hy wo samajh bhi nae ata"

"acha" gunjan said chukling

"tumhy buhut hasy aa rahy hy, soch soch k mery sar mein dard shroo ho gya hy but is larky ki aik bhi baat samajh nae ae"

"han to saal mein aik bar apna brain use karo gy to dard to ho ga na"

Samart gave her a angry look "tum mery sath ho ya team B k sath"

"itna bura bhi nae hy wo"

"means thora bura hy ye tum bhi manty ho???"

"SAMRAT asy baat nae hy. Wo thora mature hy n mujhy lagta hy he is really responsible n caring just like a big bro"

He asked moving close to her looking directly in her eyes

"oh really what about me??? Mery bary mein kya lagta hy???"

"tumhary bary mein" she asked looking back in his eyes

"u really looks like a younger brother"

"WHAT" he shouted moving back a little bit

Gunjun giggled seeing his sudden reaction

"mujhy baat to complete karny do, u really looks like a younger brother of nupur, dono full nautanki"

"not bad chashmish" samrat said giving calm expressions

"ab agy chalein???"

"as u wish"

He said giving her way to pass.

Is mayank k sath hy phasna tha mujhy subha sy paka raha sadu kahen ka nupur thought looking towards mayank who was busy noticing his surroundings carefully

"kya hua nupur tum ny mujh sy kuch kaha???"

"nae to"

"shaid tumhy pta nae hy I can read mind"

"WHAT" she almost shouted but said giving a calm expressions "but mera mind parhna itna asaan nae hy"

"acha, no prob mein ye mystry bhi aik din solve kar ln ga"

"oh God mystery sy yaad aya, v r here for some task. Lekin tum bolna band karo gy to hum kaam py dhiyan dein gy na. isi tarha bolty rahy na tum to humary to sary zindagi nikal jae gy is jungle mein"

"nupur" mayank said with confused expression

"kya nupur han. Wahan to bara lecture dy rahy thy, un dono ko bheej dia n khud yahan baton mein time zaya kar rahy ho. Mujhy to pehly "

"nupur agy"

But before he could complete his sentence nupur was on the ground, with her face facing a stone

"nupur dekh kar chalo na. Or mujhy bhi pta hy that we have to find a cross"

He said bending a little offering his hand.

"mill gaya" nupur said with excitement in her voice

"kya mill gaya???"

"cross"

Edited by chilluppp - 15 years ago
Soulmate_Sana thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
ressssssssssssssssssssss
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy im firsttttttttttttttttttttttttt

*Edited*

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
omg omg omggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
saraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mujhe marna ka irada hain kya
yeh kya kiya tuna
hamesha mujhe aur dolly ko
bolti rehti hain
that we stop at bad point
phir tuna kya kiya😲
kitna bad point par rokh diya
im anger on u now
i want an update
that too retty soon
soon matlab soon huh

n about scene from starting
i liked Sanu alotttttttttttttttt
not me samrat n nupur dear😆
they were awesome
the way theu were interacting with mayank was just mindblasting style

n than my SAJAN
woppieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
gunji nah signal de diya indirectly
she liikes sammy
soon she will loves him
hahahaha bro of nupsi
bahut sahi meri janu nah
loved sajan alot
bhaiya bana diya mayank ko
gunji ka wah
but serious sam reaction toh dekhna nahi read karna layak tha😆
when she said he is like her little bro
but yeh she did not finished her sentence at that time
woh baat alag hain😆

n thn mayur
huh mayank can read mind
lolz im sure usna guess kar liya hoga nupur usse galiyan de rahi hain man main😆😆😆
mayank is too intelligent to get this thing too soon
n nupur she was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
n omggggggggggggggg they got the cross thing
yaar i m dieing to know
whats the cross secret is
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz try to update it soon

i liked ho u presented all 4 foursome interaction
very goodly
sanu,majan,mayur n sajan
all small interaction were good
brlliant work dear👏
keep it up👍🏼

n yeh the update was superb mindblowing fantastic fabulas moindblasting brilliant
very goodly written
with full justice to both the couples

no screen space fight here😉🤣

n all in all i love the update top the core
n main koi mkhan nahi la rahi hoon tujhe
i saying the truth
u have to except it
n idont want to hear from u that it is not so good
thats it

it the bestest n unique ff
i ever read samjhi

now do continue it soon n thanx for the pm

love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
miss uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh🤗

ur's n only ur's
Sanu.

p.s:n oppos comment kuchzyada hi lamba ho gaya
but seriously sara
it is the best part i ever ever read
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
lov uuuuuuuuu


Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

ressssssssssssssssssssss
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy im firsttttttttttttttttttttttttt

*finger crossed*
buhut darat hy tn
seemamittal thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy
amazing start
love these kinda stories
do continue soon
n thanx for pm
Soulmate_Sana thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chilluppp

*finger crossed*
buhut darat hy tn


MAINA KAB DARAYA😲
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

ressssssssssssssssssssss
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy im firsttttttttttttttttttttttttt

*Edited*

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
omg omg omggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
saraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mujhe marna ka irada hain kya
yeh kya kiya tuna

mera to nae pta
to ny jo kya
mee called it buttering

hamesha mujhe aur dolly ko
bolti rehti hain
that we stop at bad point
phir tuna kya kiya😲
i have asked u
will i update more
it was ur choice dear😆

kitna bad point par rokh diya
im anger on u now
i want an update
that too retty soon
soon matlab soon huh
mein tujhy story pm kar dety hn
wasy ab mein sary badly pory karon gy 😈

n about scene from starting
i liked Sanu alotttttttttttttttt
not me samrat n nupur dear😆
but me like u more😳

they were awesome
the way theu were interacting with mayank was just mindblasting style
kya bolon b mein???

n than my SAJAN
woppieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
gunji nah signal de diya indirectly
she liikes sammy
soon she will loves him
hahahaha bro of nupsi
bahut sahi meri janu nah
loved sajan alot
bhaiya bana diya mayank ko
gunji ka wah
but serious sam reaction toh dekhna nahi read karna layak tha😆
when she said he is like her little bro
but yeh she did not finished her sentence at that time
woh baat alag hain😆

n thn mayur
huh mayank can read mind
lolz im sure usna guess kar liya hoga nupur usse galiyan de rahi hain man main😆😆😆
mayank is too intelligent to get this thing too soon
n nupur she was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
n omggggggggggggggg they got the cross thing
yaar i m dieing to know
whats the cross secret is
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz try to update it soon
buhut fazool seecret hy
is lie wait na kar🤣
it will break ur expectations BADLY

i liked ho u presented all 4 foursome interaction
very goodly
sanu,majan,mayur n sajan
all small interaction were good
brlliant work dear👏
keep it up👍🏼

n yeh the update was superb mindblowing fantastic fabulas moindblasting brilliant
very goodly written
with full justice to both the couples

no screen space fight here😉ROFL
isi screen space k chakar mein i have changed half of my story dear😆
mayur scene likhna is the most difficult task ever

n all in all i love the update top the core
n main koi mkhan nahi la rahi hoon tujhe
i saying the truth
u have to except it
n idont want to hear from u that it is not so good
thats it

it the bestest n unique ff
i ever read samjhi

now do continue it soon n thanx for the pm

love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
miss uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh🤗
loveeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuu tooooooooooooooooooooo

ur's n only ur's
Sanu.
always b mine jani

p.s:n oppos comment kuchzyada hi lamba ho gaya
cheated line dear
🤓
but seriously sara
it is the best part i ever ever read
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
lov uuuuuuuuu
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu toooooooooooooo


itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
Edited by chilluppp - 15 years ago
XDevilsDesireX thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
Edited my comment on pAge 3

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".