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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 11

The week passes by and its Thursday afternoon, meanwhile rids has been building a growing bonding with rahul as she meets him after his school hours…On Thursday afternoon sid takes neeta for shopping, rids isn't aware of the fact that neeta and sid are not together anymore

In the shop neeta bumps into rids, she walks her over to sid but sid just says a quick 'hi' and walks away, making an excuse that he has a phone call to do ..rids is quite disappointed…meanwhile neeta is looking to buy something 4 sid she goes into the mens department with rids and looks 4 a shirt she sees pink shirt and rembers the instance when he wore that too impress her.

rids thinks in her mind-'bhalaye tum mujse aj nafrat karthe ho lekin kuch cheesee aur yadeen abhi bhi hai jo hume jodthi hai '
Neeta grabs a white shirt and looks at it lovingly.'Sid loves white' she says

'Sid ki kuch pasand aj bhi badli nahi' rids in her mind..they finish quickly and sid drives them to a coffee shop where matt joins them….Rids on the other hand drives herself home..

Matt: neeta mai soche reha tha yeh jagah ithni koobsoorat hai kya hum yehi shadhi kar le

Neeta: yes y not I am happy also dad's coming here too tomorrow..

On the other hand in ridhima's house shashank and padma have arrived to surprise rids..they share a lovely evening , rids later tells him about meeting sid and working with him again.

(PS: hey guies now here is lil adjustment I am now gonna show that sid's dad, shanky and neeta's dad are college mates)

Neeta's dad too arrive, he meets matt and he is convinced for his daughter's marriage.

On a Saturday evening shashank & padma arrives from Mumbai and suprises rids he is all happy to see rids getting on well.On Sunday morning sid's fmily including matt,neeta ,sanjeev & sapna go to the temple.Now, Neeta requests her dad for the marriage to be held in shimla and that to ASAP.Them guies were discussing about this and were walking out when rids and shanky wlked up the stairs into the temple.Rahul who was holding on to sid's fingers ran to rids and hug her.While sid watched from distance, he was furious but did not respond as he didn't want to create a scene infront of his family so.The family walks to Shashank.Mat's dad,shashank and sid 's dad meet each other they are happy to have this small reunion.On the other hand sid and rids were slightly shocked.Shashank kept wondering who that that little chap ( Rahul) was until sid's dad introduced him.Shanky was glad that sid was his mates' don. He said 'hi' to the little kid.The old guies discuss between thmeself about what was happening regarding the marriage.Rids was quite surprised rather more happy to know that neeta wasn't marrying sid. She ocationally glances at Sid which catches his attention and he glances back but takes his eyes off her quickly.They were standing on two extreme ends..Sid was talking to sanjeev, while sapna isolates them and decides to mingle with rids.

Sanj: ja bath kar use..yeh mauka abe kbhi nahi ayega

Sid gives a cold expression.He then addresses everyone..

'acha muje kuch important kame hai iss liye I have to leave early and I am taking rahul with me'

Rahul: please let me stay with ridhima aunty

Sid:rahul maine kaha na chalo mere sath..( in a bolder tone )

Then everyone insist on sid leaving rahul with rids, he did not wanted to create a scene so he leaves and heads of too his car and sits down on there with his head on the steering

Sid: yeh ek hafta kyon nahi beeth jatha so that I can get out of the misery of seeing her.arrgggggghhhh.

The 3 oldies discuss about whats happening,

Shanky: are yeh bahut achi bath hai

N's dad : mai soch reha hu kyon na ma kal rath ko he engagement karva du

S's dad: that's a good idea but matt ke ghar valo ka kya ?

N's dad: his parents dided in a plane crash when he was at uni and he doesn't have any close relatives so that's fine..

Shashank: but ithne short notice pe arrangemets kaise honge

S'dad: don't worry about that snjeev aur sid hai na they will get everything done

Shashank: yh and I will get angali, rids and atul to help out as well.

S'dad: ek kam karthe hai …lets all meet at mine tonight for dinner and then we will decide and inform.

Shanky : that's a great idea

After a while they all drive back to their respective houses.Shashank speaks on phone to sid's dad and discuss about the SR's past

Shashank: aj kal ke bache thoo choti choti batho par divorce kar dete hai

S'd dad : ha ..sid ne muje bataya tha ki unke divorce ka reason tha because they were not compactable for each other, I didn't know ki he married your daughter..abe shayad hume he kuch karna padega unhe sath lane ke liye..

Shashank: ha .. lets see aj rath ko kuch karthe hai

( now no one is aware of the real reason behind the divorce except for . In the evening they all meet up for tea. The last person to arrive was sid as he was coming from hospital.He knew it was reunion but was surprised to see everyone together including anjie, atul,rids,padma and shashank.simi and rahul were playing while the oldies were together with their convos..Sanjeev sees sid and he brings him down to where he was.He sees rids,anjie,atul,sapna,neeta,mat all together and walks to them he greets everyone, after a while the girls go out to help sid's mum in the kitchen. ….After a while padma comes out of kitchen, she sees sid and sid her.Sid had always had great respect for older people.He walks around and greets her..

Padma hugs him

P: tum kaise ho?

S: Mai theek hu aunty ape bathao ?

P: aunty ? maa kar ke nahi bulaoge kya

S: (sid gets a bit uncomfy)

P: chahe tumhare rishte kyon na cut gaye hoo,lekin kuch rishthe fir bhi kayam rehthe hai

S: looks down disappointingly

P: ( she sees sid uncomfy so decides to change the topic)vaise tum bahut badal gaye in salo mie, vaise apne bte se nahi milaoge

S: sure ..ek minute he looks around and finds rahul paying he calls him and he quickly runs to him

Sis picks up rahul in his arms

S: this is my son rahul, beta aunty ko Namaste karo

R: rahul folds his hands in the gesture and says 'namaste' he smiles @ padma

P: puts her hands across rahuls cheeks,Namaste beta and then to sid bada he payara bach hai..

Sid smiles

R: dad who is this ?

S: yeh Dr ridhima ki mumma hai

Padma sees how cold sid's feelings are now towards rids as he addresses her as Dr ridhima.

Rahul: oo

R: aunty patha hai apki beti bhi bahut pyari hai

P laughs at rahuls' childish innocence but sid has a worried expression,

R:Papa kya mai abe ja sakta hu

S: sure ape jao( he place him down )

P: how old is he?

S: he is 5 soon

Padma thinks 'so sid married soon after their divorce'

P: hmm ridma se bathe ke

S: nahi I just came

Sid senses where the conversation was heading , but thankfully sanjeev gives him a shout and her takes this opportunity to sneak away.After a while the entire crew moves into the garden for tea..

Anjale and rids are in a corner of the garden, while all the guies are together.Sapna is in the kitchen..

Sid is thinking-'rids ke dad aur mera dad dosth hai tho iska mathlab agar mai 1 week badhe chalao javoonga thoo bhi usse kisi na kisi tharah juda rahunga :/, yeh aindagi bhi ajeeb hai

On the other hand rids and anjie are having a conversation

Anjie: ek bath kahu ridzi

R: ha bolo dee

A: you should reconsider sid

R; dee voh mujse nafrat kartha hai

A: come on rids nock jocke thoo humesha miya-biwi ke beech hoti hai iska mathlab yeh todi na hai kit um divorce ley loo

R: dee its complicated tum nahi samjogi..aur upar se rahul will he able to accept me as his mum

A: I have seen him bonding well with u so that shouldn't be problem

R: dee u have no idea ke tum kya keh rehi hoo,

A: mai bus ithna kehna chati hu ki aj zindagi ne tumhe doosra mauka diya hai, so why not just use it

R: noo dee sid badal chukka hai , au uske dil mie mere liye koyi jagah nahi, so I don't wann go down that line

A: ek bath poochu …kyat tum usse bhool payi ho ? although tumhara divorce ho chukka hai

R: umm she goes speechless as she knows she still hasn't forgotten him.

A: don't worry I didn't intend ki tum speechless ho jawo don't worry lets just leave it on god jaise uski marzi, shayad tumhe fir se milane ke behind uski koyi marzi hoo

R: ha

Anjie gives rids a light hug.

N's dad walks into the centre : my dear young children muje ek important announcement karni hao . maine aur shashank aur raj( sid's dad) ne milkar yeh faisla kiya hai ki neeta aur mat ki engagement kal rath ko ki jaye ..aur ise unhe bhi koyi aithraz nahi hai.I know it short notice but muje yakeen hai ki ap sab co-opetrate karenge aur sab acha hoga

Sanjeev: ofcourse we will all work together

N' dad: thanks beta ..so mai, raj aur shansank chahte hai ki ladko ki taraf se sid aur ladkiyon ki taraf se ridima saree arrangements ko lead kare.

Sid: has a shocked expression on his face( in his mind) no way I am doing it with rids

Sid looks at rids and gives her a fustrated look while rids is all happy but she gets disappointed after seeing sid's expressions..Sid then looks around to neeta and she has a pleading expression and only because of her he agrees.N's dad finishes the announcement, everyone disperses.Sid and rids are the only two left in the garden.Sid pretends to be texting on his phone when Rids walks upto him

R: Sid !

S: ( without looking up ) yes?

R: we need to start on the preprations

S: yh lets just join the rest of the gang and find out more about it

They walk together into the house to the gang while raj and shanky are watching

Raj: shashank dekho they are together.

The whole gang decides on everything they assign decorations to sidma along with the overall wath over.

Next day in the morning everyone meets up at the sid's place and starts off with the arrangements.The flowers and stuff arrive at the right time and everyone is all over the place. By afternoon Sr find themselves together and they see all the couples romancing each other, which brings memories back.They both feel awckward especially sid.Sid an rids are instructing the workers to place things in the right place. They are putting up curtains .They were standing opposite to each other as they were folding a curtain,but someone accidently pushes sid he falls on to rids.His arms grabbing her by her waist on to the piece of the curtain the guy was trying to fix , they fall into it, roll on the floor for few secs and get enstarngled in the fabric.While coming to a hault,Sid's feet accidently hits the table with the basket of rose petals, the basket tosses in air and the petals fall on them.Sid and rids are caught up in each others eyes, they are inches away from each other Sid could feel her breath on his face and so could he, their lipds were inches away , they both have flash backs of previous occations when they have been so close.Suddenly sid realises that all eyes where on fixed on them and tries and get out of the mess.He gets off the floor and offers his hand to rids so that she can get up too. Rids feels nostalgic while holding his hands again.She remember how they held their hand together after her birthday nite, while walking on the corridors of sanjeevani….Sid says 'sorry' and quickly walks over to sanjeev and rids to anjie..

( ps: hey guies don't kill me for me for this small update as I have just been back home from uni for this weekend and I don't get to write much while being at home..enjoy )
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update 👏
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update dear 👍🏼

Wow.....some romantic part finally came 😳 SR are getting closer and closer despite Sid's anger😆
Thanks for updating it so quickly......I cannot wait for your next update!!

Great going and I am loving your every update❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
love ur OS❤️
its so beautifully written by u👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowwwwww.,..very very nice update....pls continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
arrey, hint to do! pls! main tumse bheek maang rahi hoon!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi

thanks for this wonderful FF on siddhima, enjoyed it

do continue

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update👏 plzz continue soon & do pm me😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Moumi363

beautiful update👏 plzz continue soon & do pm me😳

I am working on it dude
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: romiosugar

Beautiful update dear 👍🏼

Wow.....some romantic part finally came 😳 SR are getting closer and closer despite Sid's anger😆
Thanks for updating it so quickly......I cannot wait for your next update!!

Great going and I am loving your every update❤️

thanks dude, it will get better

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