Dead Emotions An AR FF Chap2- Pg11 8th Novem 2010 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
hey pari.....
nice intro yaar........i just hope armaan is not a ghost.....hehe ..otherwise upto u....
update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkfeather

hey pari.....

nice intro yaar........i just hope armaan is not a ghost.....hehe ..otherwise upto u....
update soon...

Hey thnxx..!
lol..! wait and read and see.!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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new intro....wow armaan is the ghost...cant wait to read the next part...add me to ur pm list....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey dear
awesome start
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm
love
Sonia
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridziqbal

new intro....wow armaan is the ghost...cant wait to read the next part...add me to ur pm list....

Hey...!
Thnxx..! I m glad that u liked it..!
Well u need to wait for that..!
will continue soon..!
Love Ya
Pari
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonialvskajen

Hey dear
awesome start
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

love
Sonia

Hey...!
Thnxx..! I m glad that u liked it..!
Well u need to wait for that..!
will continue soon..!
Love Ya
Pari
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
~Note~
Hii guys updated the FF,,!
Lol.. This one is for my new and best Buddy Sara..
guys my exams are gonna start by 9th october so there will be only 2 more upds b4 my exams
Thnxx
love Ya
Pari
Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

As Usual My morning.. Nothing special Nothing horrible And nothing Else other than a Super incident that happened.. Well Want to see what happened to me then Scroll down to see..!

The Best Singer of the year Award goes to Miss Riddhima Gupta..!

Claps and appreciation everywhere..! But where is the winner Miss. Riddhima Gupta.? Oh there she is.. Wow she looks so beautiful in the white Dress and the way she walks to the stage is mindblowing.. Wow She is soo Lucky to get the award from that handsome Guy Armaan who is also a singer. And wat an coincidence he was a student of this college too.!

He is soo Hott who ever sees him will faint for sure.. And lucky Riddhima Who is getting award from his hand..

Miss Gupta Kindly come to the stage..

Riddhima you can do it no stage fear comeon ridz atleast for him.. Armaan Mallik My crush.. I don't remember from when I loved him. Oops I mean had a crush or whatsoever.. I just love the way he smiles.. His dimples His eyes they are soo deep and its actually like they are telling some story. And.. Oh no let me go to the stage now or I will never get the award from My DreamMan..!

Miss Riddhima Gupta where are you can you please come to the stage..?

She walks to the stage with a huge and a big smile This was the comment by audience when I walked.. I got too happy with that and lol this is wat happened next becoz my my happiness well 2 times happy I was.. Armaan Mallik and Prize wowo Best day in my life.... and in a eager to go and meet oops I mean take award or see Armaan I slipped off.. As usual it happens to me.. always I don't know why but I always keep falling.. and someone caught me when I saw it was Armaan.. wat should I tell Wow me and Armaan My dream Man.. I wish this day oops this moment stops here itself..! Armaan and Me .. Me and Armaan..! Wow a perfect life and day what else could be better.. This is the best day in my life/

Tring tring tring tring tring tring tring tring

Arghh phone and now off go off u stupid phone.. My phone oops I mean its second name is Kabab mein haddi

Ouch Finally that day I realised.. Oh no again a dream.. Ridzi Arghh I don't know why it always happens to me.. Mr.DreamMan why do u always vanish off..!

Well now This is my story- Story OF Riddhima and her DreamMan Armaan Mallik.. I know I can never meet him or never see him once also nor I can have a look at him.. But my policy was that Even if I don't get him it is not wrong to dream about him.. Its not wrong.. I will keep dreaming about my DreamMan though I can never make it true.. I know it is impossible As he is a very great Singer and me I m just a stupid student of the great Music.. But I don't know why my heart keeps telling Though its impossible it maybe possible as even the word impossible says I m possible Right..? Lol so now let me allow you to know more about what happened next in my irregular and stupid and boring life though..

Well I know you people might have heard there is silence before any cyclone.. Same thing happened in my life.. There was total silence.. But suddenly I heard someone shouting Riddhima Ridzi Jaldi sun..

R-Muskiiiii..!!!

Oh ek sec.. She is not the cyclone.. It hasn't started it.. Well she is my best friend Muskaan.. Well more than best friend My sister.. We live in our friend's house as we don't have any house to live..And my friend's dad has a problem keeping us with them well simple reason first of all they have 8 members in their home and now we both.. SO its hard for her.. And We search for homes but as usual nothing happens straight forward with Ms.Riddhima Gupta.. Everything has to be ulta pulta.. SO as usual there had to be a twist in my life too.. Oh So u guys see what is the twist in my life too..!!

Muskaan- Tu abhi tak nahi uthi tu bhi na kabhi nahi sudhregi..!

R- Tu nahi samjhegi Hayye Mera DreamMan..

Muskaan- Phir se armaan tu jaldi aa na.. Hume ghar dekhne jaana hai hum log yahaan aur zyaada din nahi reh sakte u knw na..!

R- haan bechaari Aunty I knw chal lets start tu bahar rukh mein abhi aati hoon..!

Muskaan- Ok jaldi aa..!

Muskaan has a habit wake up early and don't let others to sleep too..! SO ok now here is what happened when we went to search for house..Well ok here is what now cyclone started.. OMG read read

R- Muskaan mujhe nahi lagta ke we are gonna get any house ab.. Itne din se dhoond rahe hai.

Muskaan- Pagal rukh we still have one option left.. there is a house and well lets go and see there..

R- Ok lets go.. But where is it..

Muskaan- Well let me see I have the address in my bag..

R- haan jaldi dekh ke bata na..!

Muskaan- are meine to yahiin rakha tha. Pata nahi kahan gaya..

R- Oh Shit.. Now wat to do.?

Muskaan- Mil gaya…

R- show me.!

Muskaan- Ya see..

R- Muskaan this is the same house..

Muskaan- Same house..?

R- Bhoot bunglow..

Muskaan- tu bhi na… There is nothing like bhoot..!

R- I don't wanna go now..

Muskaan- Ridzi come on..!

R- Ok lets go..

Muskaan- Its I guess 2 min frm this place..!

Ok now guys U came to know that what was the cyclone the so called Bhoot bunglow..!. Bhoot Bunglow.. OMG let me tell u all how scared I m of the word G..h..o..s..t… Someone save me plzz.! Yeh muski to bahadur hai mera kya hoga koi to aao.. Plz bachao and kise pata ke kiska bhoot hai yahaan.. Aur bhoot hai bhi ya nahi.. Par I guess Bhoot hai isliye to log is jagah ke baare mein itni baatein karte hai..!
And let me tell u I know I mean I believe that there is a ghost in this house becoz wen I finished telling tht sentence a strong current of wind started blowing And so many leaves Oh no I think no I mean I m damnsure that there is something wrong in this house…! Save me.. And lol. This house is really beautiful.. I really love this house but I m scared wat if the ghost.. Noo.. Riddhima shhh.. And miss bak Bak started again.. I bet she is not scared I don't know how can she be like this soo brave,.! I wish I was like her..!

Muskaan- Dekh this is the house..

R- Wow Muski kitna accha ghar hai..

Is Muskaan se bhi ab natak karna padega mujhe.. Riddhima be brave and strong

Muskaan- Ise dekh ke lagta hi nahi ke yeh bhoot bunglow hai..

R-Haan exactly was wondering the same..

Oh god forgive me.. I will never tell lies more..Koi to bacho mujhe..

Muskaan- And u got scared for this.. Ridz u gotta be a really a great Darpok.!

R- Chup lets go inside

Noo plz tell no muski plzz Lol I kept thinking this but Muskaan is Muskaan she will never know what is my problem as she is enjoying BB I mean Bhoot bunglow..

Muskaan- Yep lets go..

R- Muski Gate is locked yaar..!

Muskaan- lets go inside and make a try atleast..!

R-Muskaan tu ja na..

Muskaan- Oye akele maarna chahti hai kya mujhe.!

R- tujhe bhi dar lag raha hai right..?

Muskaan- Ah.. Ah.. Nahi to dar aur Muskaan ko impossible,,!

Ok guys this part is only so much.. Next part Bhoot bunglow entry..!

Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello these ones are for my Closest ones..!
As usual first in my List Pari🤗
My bestest buddy ever..!
Hi kaisi hai tu..?
I just miss u yaar,,!
tu jaldi aaja na..!
love u loads..!
To My new best Buddy Tubelight /SmartyPants🤗
Lol OMG tujhe pata hai aaj thursday hai ..!
I told i will upd on thursday and thursday ko UPD kar diya 🤣
pata nahi kaise hua..! par ho gaya lol..!
Aur dekh meine suspense bhi nahi khola ab tak 🤣
khol doongi to mazaa nahi aayega na..!
Lets see who is the ghost..!
Shayad aur 2 chps ke baad pata chal jaye..!
Lol and haan meine dono FF ke liye same to same msg choda hai..!
Aur tu na bas sochti rehna and keep imagining ke gost akhir mein hai kon 🤣
mein tujhe bata doongi par haan baad mein..!
Lol chal aaj ke liye itna kafi hai..!
Agli baar lamba waala doongi..!
To my sweetest and dearest Chuddy Buddy..!🤗
Showlly...! Tujhe first Res nahi karne diya soo showwly..!
I just wanted to UPD this Ff and waise bhi kisi ne bola i mean u knw
Kept telling update kar na update kar na update kar na..!
So just coudnt say no..!
Isliye i updated..!
Anyways tu exam ke baad aa phir pakka plomish tu first..!
And haan All the best for ur exam..!
I know u will do the best..!
To my dearest and sweetest di..!🤗
Hii di.!
kaisi hoo..?
itne dino se baat hi nahi hui..!!
Me Missing u soo much di..!
I miss u a lot di..!
Par wen i come tum nahi aati and jab tum aati ho mein nahi aati..!
I want to talk and tell loads of things to u di..!
Par humare timimgs match hi nahi hote..!
Di tum pehle jaise jaldi nahi aati kyun..?
jab tum aati ho Mein to so jaati hoon :(
and we dont talk only..!
Hope to talk to u soon di..!!
Love ya all
Pari/Boss/hunterwaali/CB/Pari Cake waali Aur baaki ka to yaad nahi :( kitne saare naam hai by god.! 🤣
Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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U write really good.. i think i have told u this already 🤔ahhh!!!!! luk at me * slaps my forehead* I was like concept kya hai re * forgot the concept yaar ..I'm still in dreams of SE (secret exchange)😍...ahh !! shiitt me stupo ..I again had to read the concept lol.😆.but this story is .. a bit cheezy, childish(ridzy) n ghostfull * the characters* , romantic , interesting story😍 ..n once again lemme tell u its really a unique n innovative....So i got attracted to this FF ..This is something called new.*
I said u to update by wednesday but its okiee So basically I frgve you for updating late as that wait ws worth waiting 🤗
okiee !! lemme get back to the First Update😃 u updated it😲 I still don't believe my eyes😲 .*rubbing eyes* yesh u did it 😆
..U know mein ne socha tha shayad u'll give a short update but i got surprised seeing a long one !!!! loved the way you described everything😳...Firstly the dream .🤪. Its such a pleasure to read it☺️ ..I was blushing throughout the dream part ..Felt like .the character RIDZ is not just character ..i could feel it ...felt like its mee!!! ..the way everyone was making her feel shoo special & fortunate to take her award from Mr.Malik & the way u describe every emotion of ridz when she got up the seat n was stepping forward to Malik & suddenly the fall 😍& there must have been an eye -lock for sure 🤗this was a decent example of romance😍..that was spectacular...loved each and every point of it right from the top to the bottom..U know at first sight ..i mean after reading the dream part ..i actually thought this is actually happening not a dream but the gr8 FF writer Niya broke even my dream into pieces but neva knew u would make AM a singer 🤣..dancer bana deti use'... but kuch bhi ho he is a gem ☺️& goshh !!! The phone started ringing but lemme take the opportunity to thank u !!!! from now I'll be cautious will neva keep my phone around me when i'm sleeping 🤣...yeah gud policy of ridzyy" neva meet but neva leave to dream "🤣.. ahh !! cyclone🤣 totally love her tit-bits saying oopps,hayee !!! i had a lovely time reading it.. & now cuming to muskaan & ridz - tu kabhi nahi sudhregi lol ....& her fear for Ghost 🤣..same as us !! n wot about muskaan ..i feel she is confused is she scared or bold? Every person has some phobia she must be having some n must be hiding it from ridzy to make her as if she is by her side n to support n as a protector.. & LOVED the way u expressed ridzy talking to herself ..ye toh bahadur hai but mera kya hoga bachaoo🤣..n enjoying BB 🤣 N Muski ..akele marnaa chhati hai kya mujhe ..
🤣.this was hillarious 🤣.& when i was reading muskaan-ridz part i could remember the most memorable time with my skool friends ahh !! i miss them ..u refreshed those memories ...& yeah m waiting for ghost entry 🤣.ghostophobia*discovery of new word*..
To your update, it was stupendous, outrageous, astounding. Still do i need to tell that I luvd it, one of best updates of your all FF's and my fav after your making out part, & the FF which made me to admire you as a writer which made me to love your writings *big hug* waiting for everything to get unfold very soon ..n ghost n soo finally in first chapter it is reveal that ARMAAN isn't the ghost


n yeah oh shitt !!! m sorry didn't remember at first but a very tightttttttttt squishy hug *taking life out of u r body * thanks for this special dedication of first update lub u mwaahhh !!!🤗🤗


All in all A fab update, splendid job

Lub

sara

Edited by Sara-Ksg - 15 years ago

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