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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Please Update it soon, Dying to read it !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Kar doongi Lol plz bear for sme time :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@all

thnxx for ur lovely comments they are really encouraging..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Thanks to all those who commented this one will be short part coz i dunt find much time to upd this coz of my studies..! and sorry for that.!

Love Ya
Pari
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh God Yeh Room Khulgaya and Wat the Heck..!!
Its a room or some exhibition of arts..!! Uff I wanted to see this room..? I dont believe it..! Something gotta be wrong with me..

Dudee...!!.. Samrat Called... then i realised i was talking to myself..!!


Yea Sam wats wrong..?

Sam: We left cricket to see this room..?

Mayank: I knw dude But... these paintings arent bad at all..! infact they are awesome..!

Sam: I knw dude.. they arent bad at all..! I love them lets go around these and look at them na..!

Mayank: Yep Sure..!

Sam: BTW u wait chashmish.. I will call her too she loves paintings...!

Mayank: Ya sure i also didnt meet her from long back..!

Sam: Ok mein use abhi bulake laata hoon..!

Mayank: Cool..!

Wow this room is really wonderful and the painter is the best i have ever seen these mountains these Hills these Houses, sunset, sunrise all seem soo Dreamy.. Its as if someone sent me to some dream land to just have a look on all these... Not only these there are many more.. The Rain in the forest seems soo real it looks as if the forest which were thirsty for rain have finally got what they wanted rain.. This rain looks so real. And BTW wats this.. there is always a girl in all these portraits.. Well i cant see this girl clearly but i guess till the point i can see i just have to say she is bubbly in the portrait of rain she is jumping with joy.. In the hill she looks soo happy as if she found the whole world's happiness..!

But ya i though wonder why uncle didnt paint her face.. I wish she was really there then i would get to be her friend atleast..!!

Oops i guess dadi is back Oh no.. the key is with Sam.. And Sam is with gunjan..! wat to do..! lemme lock the door and wait for sam to be back so that i can make some excuse..

*Now*

Well after that many things happened which i dont even want to remember my dadi Screwing me up and Lol I dont want to spoil my image anymore..! This Sam is the same still now... World's biggest Alsi Lol..! But thts true and Gunjan The sweetest girl i have ever met..! Now 10 yrs later lemme go and see Gunjan.. This time its only me in the whole house Dadi has gone to Char dham Uff finally a bit freedom,, And Uncle is no more.. So dadi doesnt give the portraits to anyone she believes thats the only way her son will be with her.. But Dadi never goes into the room.. Thts wat dad told me long bak.. so i guess the Portrait girl will be now filled with dust.. Y dont i call Sam and gunjan and we get inside the Room once again.. Lol though last time we nevr saw fully but this time we can coz dadi will be back only the next month..

Now everything in this village has changed and Sam is back frm city his mum told me yesterday nd gunjan oops i forgot i had to recieve her frm station and even samrat will be there so hope i meet him there but how will i identify them,.. Well u can Mayank they are ur best friends so obviously u can dude..! If not u can atleast identify Samrat frm his usual word i mean the famous word 'Chasmish'..

** IN STATION**

One after the other buses goin and coming but no one is getting down and neither there is any Mr.Chashmish Lol but i cant go back i need to find them.! its 2 hrs but still they arent here wat to do.! Lemme go back home and i will come back later...

Sadooo..... Someone called me..

Oh Shit this is not someone this is Sam..! Sam i shouted and i went and hugged him..

And we started to talk Oh god formalities.. And Samrat Wow he changed soo much he is thousand times more handsome than b4.. He is looking like Lol Lemme tell a shorcut all the girls are just looking at him..

Tum Dono... someone shouted again...

Well this time it was a girl and she was really cute and sweet and well i gues i knw her.. My friend Gunjan...!!!!!

Gunjan- Guys tum log mujhe pick up karne aaye ho and u forgot me..!! how Mean..

Sam- Chashmish mein i m sorry woh i was talking to Mayank..

Mayank- hey Gunjan How are u?

Gunjan- Hey.! M gud and lol enuf of formalities.! So is baar kahaan pe tum dono marne ka plan kar rahe ho..? Last time remember..?

Samrat- Oh nahi dont even remind us that.! anyways Mayank phir se Chale room mein,..? i really wanna see them again and anyways dadi to out of station gayi hai na..!

Gunjan- Guys u ppl continue mujhe jaana hai di wait kar rahi hogi..!

Sam- ok mein Bhi tumhari di se baad mein miloonga ab mein Mayank ke saath jaata hoon..!

Gunjn- Ok bye..!

Mayank- Byee..!

*In Home*

mayank- Sam khidki se jaate hai dadi key apne saath legayi hai coz last time remember...?

Samrat- Haan lets go chalo...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Special Messages..!

Pari🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

hi tere liye bas ek line
All the best tu IF pe exam tak mat aa..! aayi to m gonna shw u danda..!


LoDu🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Hii tere liye bhi lamba nahi infact kisi ke liye nahi
bas time nahi hai just gotta upd ff :)
hope u understand..!

nyways bata hwz life and tu on kyun nahi aati..?
Nd m soo showly meine tere FF pe comment nahi kiya..!
Time nahi mila m showlly mila to pakka kar doongi..!!
M soo shwlly again..!


Smarty Pants😆🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

I knw tujhe yeh naam accha nahi lagta
par tubelight se accha hai na😆
Lol Dekh tere liye i updted dono..!
I knw lol beech mein khatam kar diya
par haanm tune maanga tha to isliye de diya :P
Lol..!
And haan showlly igtg fast isliye maine tujhe link pehle nahi diya and nahi CB ko..!
so extremely showlly for that..!
ANd so uske liye i guess tum dono mein se pehle jo bhi aayega use link first ya phir even Pari ko :P

Lol sholly i didnt give long msg na i have to go fast aaj so isliye par tu plz lamba waala de..!
and morepver mera net bimaar hai kaam nahi kar raha its stopping in middle middle so isliye.!


Di🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Hii Meri Diii kaisi ho
m missin u loads..!
itne dino se baat hi nahi hui :(
Hope to talk to u soon.!
nd BTW mera comp theek ho gaya :)
Nd will visit JW FC after exams regularly tab tak bear with me plzz😛
Lol See u soon di


CB🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

LOl tere saath no formality :P
So lol mujhe pata hai ke u r inactive
so isliye bahut chota msg..!
nd anyways gotta complete another FF :P
Lol..!
U knw lol meine tere liye made loads of Kabir sigs nearly 23
so adha ab load karoongi ab means by sat..!
And baki tere bday ko 😃
I wish i cud give u smething better😭
Nyways khair chod,,!
GTG now see u soon..!


Love Ya
Pari/bhootni/Niya/CB
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesome...
great part hah.......pic main koun hai....lol
waise nice upd.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
@Mahi

Lol batadoongi to kya use hai lol wait and read :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Loved reading this part as much as the first one :) Oh, and it's okay if you're not able to update frequently.... as long as we get them, it's fine by us! ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Lovely update Pari
It was too good
keep it up

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