.:Concealed Desires:. (MN SS) Chapter2-Pg14 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting concept dear!
I m in
waiting for 1st october
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Thanks yaar....reply k liye....bhale hi mere palle kuch nahi padha but still *rofl*

Aur haan, tere comment ka bhi reply mAIN KAR DUNGA before I update the next part :P
Aur haan, mujhe PM ya sb me GHONCHU ka full form bata dena...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: snazzychamp

Thanks yaar....reply k liye....bhale hi mere palle kuch nahi padha but still *rofl*

Aur haan, tere comment ka bhi reply mAIN KAR DUNGA before I update the next part :P
Aur haan, mujhe PM ya sb me GHONCHU ka full form bata dena...



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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
heya Radz
wassup babes
i am glad to see u back with another ff
n the concept, is just awesome
i am waiting eagerly fr an update

love
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

heya Radz
wassup babes
i am glad to see u back with another ff
n the concept, is just awesome
i am waiting eagerly fr an update

love
pooja




Hi DišŸ¤—šŸ˜ƒ I'm good di! WBU? And how is your life going? It's been ages i have talked wid ya na😭
Anyway..will defo upd Soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Series#1 Turning the Pages'

Chapter 1: The Unofficial Meet up

Oh Gosh! Finally..the day is over. Huh! It was such a bad day man. Wait a second..you are asking why? I mean you are? I thought you knew me well Cookie. Okay, what do you expect from a day like today..already getting late for the office, rushing into the car and just then your damn eyes notice that you are in your bathroom sleepers! Glad I always keep one pair on my backseat.

Ahaan..don't think the day was over, but instead more was waiting for me. My mind was already messed up and in between all this I forgot that I had a meeting to host. And then..Goofing up of course and listening to the harsh comments by our great boss DHRUV VERMA. Huh..hairy guy'no no not hairy guy but a big big bhikaaari! Kutta kamina and blah blah'Arghhh..

You know I would have been behind the bars today if Armaan and Shilpa won't have come in between..I would have surely murdered him..Bloody KKB(Kutta kamina bhikaaari)

Anyway for cooling my boiling mind I went to my most favorite place to eat my most favorite thing. Of course Yummy Pani-Puris under Bengali Sweets. But the time was not so suitable. I had a fight over a pani-puri with some creepy looking guy. Who the hell he was? I remember his name..what it was..ya..Mr Loser..Desperate Loser!

*/^^^^^^^\*

Mayank: Hey this ones for me and not for you'

Nupur: Oh really..is your name scribed on it..no na..so?

Mayank: But I should have paid for it..

Nupur: Oh then you can even pay it now..mm..pani puri waale bhaiye yeh waale ka inse maang lijiyega pasie.. (Now turning to Mayank) So..is it okay?

Mayank: Don't try be so over smart Ms..Ms Wacky Pants..because it doesn't suits your personality..

Nupur: Oh ya..do you think it suits you..you know what you are a big L..a big desperate LOSER..But promise me that we won't meet up again anytime in future..please promise me..

Mayank: Don't worry sweet heart..i'll abide by it..we won't! Huh..

*/^^^^^^^\*

Huh..Desperate Loser..What does he think of himself..Is he the king of this damn world or something like kind of..VIP..Well yeah he is a VIP..a VERY IDIOTICE PIG..hahaha..

I just keep my fingers crossed that he doesn't show his bl^^dy f^^kng face to me anytime! Anyway why am I spoiling my already spoiled mood thinking about him. Lemme doze off to sleep now.

Bbye Cookie..Nupz always loves you.

-Nupz

Edited by PinkSugars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Eloo Peeps!

Keeping by my promise I'm here with an update. The Whole story will be Nupur POV and plus it would be in a diary form. The name of her diary is Cookie as mentioned already. So I won't be able to give you long parts. And one more thing, this story would be divided into three series-Past, Present and Future. Past and Future would be little shorter but Present would be quite long. The story begins with the Past thing.

Hope you had enjoyed reading.

Criticisms are always welcome. Do Comment and Hit the Like Tab.

Thanks!

XoXoXo

-Radzy

Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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No Special Messages this time. LOL actually not just for this time but forever. Because if by chance I forget someone in my Special Messages, then he/she eats my head up. ROFL kidding, but it is a very tedious task na! So no SMs from now!

My Special Sorry goes to my Chuddy Buddy, Pari. Sorry jaan cannot write much. No time left. My practical coming up na. Anyway tu bhi ache se padhai kar and mera naam roshan kar.

My sorry goes for Aryan too. So Sorry for also not informing you that I was out of station for the whole week and plus I had my practical coming up, but they are long stories so will tell you when we'll chat.


And some people Have just fogotten me! Adz meri HHP..Where are you?😭

All The Best to Everyone!

Thanks!

XoXoXo

-Radzy

Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Congo shongo ji..
party de chal :P

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