Wishful Thinking -2 Upd - 01/27 pg 80 - Page 4

Wow - What an update...

Vrush I had to read Both the version two times…and I say the second One……

There is Fire….Kehthe hai na…Woh Tadap hai isme …Its there in this version……And it looked and felt more realistic……And somewhere I too feel that Geet wont Just stand there…..she will try to talk to him….because she had seen his eyes going blank devoid of all the emotions she had seen in there a few seconds ago….And Geet has always been like this…she has never deterred from making Maan understand the situation…Yes this time its not an easy one……yet hope this time too she turns and runs to him…..

The way I see it….Geet knew that all his anticipation has been because he was more sure of her feelings….the only thing he did not anticipate or see coming was the pregnancy and of-course how would he know….But what she felt for Maan she did not hide….especially the moment he Kissed she gave in confirming that she too felt the same way for him……She gave him signs all the way

But her heart which is actually pure and reflects in her eyes just the way Maan said it….could not keep the news of this Pregnancy from him….She had to be loyal, truthful …..coz that's what Love is for him……

OMG I could just go on and on…..

But Vrush awesome Job….2nd on Rockking (Shilpa's Style)

Love Viji

thanks Armu..

Thanks rev...it was nargis planting the seed...thanks for your help ..with my thought process..

rickks..i hope you are going to give me some gyan...on both updates you have reserved...

I loved both scenes..👏👏👏.but first one was hell lot of emotions, so touching as it was on both their deep pain and sorrow as well, but the second one isn't bad..it's better, but first one was best, for me😃.

brilliant..................

Wow........this is an interesting perspective Vru n Nargis..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 feeling really bsad for both Maneet...😔 Wonder wat d CVs hv instore for us...

i keep forgetting to make a mention of this (have forgotten that is, the previous two times) but your choice of songs makes me think your taste is - well, in genre, if not in theme - quite eclectic... the good way!
[i made a mental note to mention it this time for sure, when i scorlled down before the read and saw Green Day =) ]

anyways - coming to the part ... erm, so maybe i'm going to be the exception in saying this, or maybe not - but fitting this piece into big picture of the current plot, i see subtle, but not consequentially significant difference as an outcome to this version vs shattered dreams ... not in the long run, but only in the current big picture.

I know you insinuated Maan's incline to introspect eventually, and Geet's resolve to leave... but some where it seems like both versions indicate at least one show down before anything like that, or anything else for that matter can happen... so in a way, for me, these two pieces concur to a common conclusion...

what i mentioned in my previous comment on the other hand, is something that would give them no chance for a second showdown, before she leaves and/or Maan introspects... it my personal wish (and just that) to see them face this completely individually through its worse, and come through deserving of each other in fair sense... a second confrontation before hand somehow takes that chance away... it gives them space for correction/redemption/comprehension/realization or such courtesy each other ...

i dunno if i'm making my point distinctly, but if i am, then you know what i mean!

other than that - you're writing is forthcoming and well defining, as usual! =)

cheers,
nj

awesome...really nice you penned down the emotions....

AAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!