Wishful Thinking -2 Upd - 01/27 pg 80 - Page 18

Haila...

jane...wah... shall we write..what they did..after he put the phone down?

here goes..all in jest

Maan sat back in a thud on the bed with relief to finally having daadima put the phone down..

he had more important thing to do..

just then he heard a creaking sound and the next minute..the bed gave way..
and they both tumbled into the hole that happened... laughing

and Maan said...

"tum jab mere saath hoti ho..to kuch galat to hota hi hai....."

IF wont leme like your post rushii, but that was beautiful! i applaud the fact that you summed up a profound, intangible something into brief, well knit words =)

cheers,
nj

wow double trat today..loved it..

Originally posted by: spln

IF wont leme like your post rushii, but that was beautiful! i applaud the fact that you summed up a profound, intangible something into brief, well knit words =)

cheers,
nj

Thanks NJ...

oh..wow...you call more than 2500 words brief..but i know what you mean..

i love to hear what you say...

Originally posted by: mchopra

wow double trat today..loved it..

and the end..Daadi maa..

wow that was funny would love to read more..

thanks chopra..

i shall read you OS after dinner...

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Thanks NJ...

oh..wow...you call more than 2500 words brief..but i know what you mean..

i love to hear what you say...

😲 ur kidding right?!! i meant the poem 😉😆

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Haila...

jane...wah... shall we write..what they did..after he put the phone down?

here goes..all in jest

Maan sat back in a thud on the bed with relief to finally having daadima put the phone down..

he had more important thing to do..

just then he heard a creaking sound and the next minute..the bed gave way..
and they both tumbled into the hole that happened... laughing

and Maan said...

"tum jab mere saath hoti ho..to kuch galat to hota hi hai....."

Are you planning to detail this out or continue? I hope you are :-)

OMG Rush awesome awesome parts!!! just loved them, muah!!!🤗 u r too good!!! ahh love the taveez part, man i am waiting for that day when she'll put it on him!!!😳 Thanks for always giving us such awesome writing, ur dialogues are amazing as well!!

Originally posted by: spln

😲 ur kidding right?!! i meant the poem 😉😆

you know..what..i stand...here...embarrassed...😳

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Are you planning to detail this out or continue? I hope you are :-)

Ah Dol another comic scene..banta hai..na...

hmmm why not...this was in pure fun..
mera ulta dimaag chal raha..tha...