FF: love of two kinds (mayur's version on req) !!

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
heyyy
nice concept n start
do continue soon
n thanx for pm

thanks dear😃

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

awesome concept
and lovely first part
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: daniella05
awesome concept
and lovely first part
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

thanks daniella😃

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Part 2

as my last part finishes on zaara's face n mayank is still in the room
zaara throw his phone n fullfill with angry
zaara: (screaming) everytime nupur nupur nupur sometimes its mayank who is keep saying nupur n sumtimes it nupur who is keep saying mayank
suddenly mayank come out from the room
m: what happen 2 u zaara??
z: leave me alone, i dont wanna live wid u anymore
suddenly mayank shocked
m: but what happen
z: nupur called u ask her by her self!!
m: zaara
but zaaara walks out from there
mayank called nupur
n: hello m busy will call u later
m: (angry) nupur
nupur shocked
n: what??
m: what did u say to zaara??
n: what do i did??
m: u called on my phone right??
n: yeah to talk to zaara y??
m: what did u tell her??
n: listen i just called her to sat thanks nothing else...n y ur talking to me like this??
m: cuz m mad...u hurt zaara...dont talk to me
n: see i can see ur love for zaara now....what do u mean u will not talk to me...i will tell u to leave me alone...go wid zaara...i dont care
m: nupur
but nupur hang up the phone
m: oh god whats wrong with my day today!!
trying to call nupur
but nuput is not picking up the phone
go in the room
sees zaara is getting ready cuz his mom is coming
suddenly zaara sees mayank coming
just leave from there n the bangles that she was wearing got broke
m: just leave both of them like that they r crazy!! huhh!!
n now door bell ring
zaara goes to open the door
it was mayank's mom on the door
his mom sees zaara's face, which totally say that she was crying
but she dont let zaara notice that
m's mom: hii zaara
they hug each other
z: hi mom..come inside
mom: how r u?? n where is mayank?
z: m fine...umm amm...mayank is inside changing
mom: ohh
than he cums out
sees his mom
m: hi mom n hug her
mom: hi how r u??
m: fine u tell? how ur day have been go so far??
mom: it was good, but it doesn't look like ur day went clear so far
mayank n zaara r shocked
looked @ each other
m: what mom? no it was awesome
mom: yupz my son i can see that
z: no mom seriously it was very good
mom: zaara u too
m: come on mom u can think that i can lie to u but zaara how can u??
mom: cuz ur eyes n face just say the opposite of what u saying
m: oh mom nothing is like that
now goes to nupur
nupur talking to her self saying "i knew it he will fell in love with zaara, i alwayz was scared if he will do anything like that, but i just hate it, y is zaara alwayz in the middle!! y??"
now goes back to mayank
mom: my children i can see that u guyx are not happy with each other
z: no mom nothing is like that
mom: zaara child i know that mayank cant still love u, but u cant mess up wid ur life becuz of him
z: but..
mom: my child i will send the divorce paperz here as soon as possible
now both of them are shocked
n this part ends!!

p.s: sorry for short part, but i think its easy to read short parts n comments directly

!~**~next week's promo~**~!
zaara said i love mayank!!
mayank is shocked himself
also his mom!!

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Edited by missinguonly - 14 years ago

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Tum mayur ko separate tho nahin karnewali ho ,right?? Agar aisa hain tho pehle hi bata do - ki mein baad mein hurt na hojaoon..😒

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi
Tum mayur ko separate tho nahin karnewali ho ,right?? Agar aisa hain tho pehle hi bata do - ki mein baad mein hurt na hojaoon..😒

dear its like ff na is mei saath bhi honge seperate bhi honge but dont worry u guyx will get happy ending😃 dont worry😉