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loved the last line Tia.. Hope Maan joins them too..

enjoyed reading but please Add Maan in to the story more lolz

Hi welcome back...nice part with family patchup....
bt missing maan....so soon take maan into d family....

oye hoye! that was a Fun packed part but... but firstly.... Dios mio! have u actually updated.. or am I imagining it??? 😆

Although u seem displeased with it, I have to let u know .. it was a smashing part woman!! Realllly sweet with all the family members and everything!

I simply LOVED Adi in this, poor guy! hahaha. U painted his character really well!
my fav part actually had to be the little kiddies.. they were sooo adorable! i wanna pinch their cheeks lol i loved their intro as geet got into the car - real cute Tia - loved it!

picturing brij like this was tough but funnnny! pinky-geet-brij are a super sweet trio and it was surprisng but to awesome to imagine him behave / look in this way.. i was in the same position as all the other supposed ppl in the fic who know of brij as the 'rude' guy... if he was the same guy from the show.. he woulda roared "OYE!!" as soon as geet-pinky lifted the cake, heading towards him lol

Everything was wonderfully described, with super lovely details, just making it a really enjoyable read! Fab Fab Fab update once again! Now that u'v updated this much, u'll have to continue soon 😉

Aww.. lovin this!!

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Originally posted by: *angel94*

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Waiting for your comments, Anj! Take your time but don't forget to come back and leave your comments! 😛

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Finally an update after a really long wait! 😊 😊

The update was really good 😊
LOved Geet's family from Darji to brij to the little kids 😊 So lovable 😊
Great to see the warmth between Geet and her family 😊
Was expecting a bit of Maan too like his coming to Mumbai and all 😛
But this part was also important 😊

Hope you update soon with Maan coming to Mumbai 😊
And please don't keep us waiting for too long!
😛 😛

Update soon 😊 😊

Hey Shivangi!

Glad you loved the part! Yup, it was important and I was going to include Maan in this update but it was getting too long. Will try to update soon!😛

cheers,
Tia😳

luved ur ff plzz add me to ur PM list
THANXXX

your ff is defo fab...................gal u've got all the stuff...............amazing dev.............and lovable, adorable brij and lovely grand old man daarji.................they look so harmless in ur fic...........and in the serial my my!!! Loved the update to the core of ma heart...........hoping to see the nxt one with Maan soon......... 😊

welcome back...missed ur update..thanxs a lot for the PM

wasnt it after a decade to update?????????????????????
but it was good............. liked the relation in their family