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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 83 -> Poor Angad, not! Srsly, will he keep his mouth shut?
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just spent the last 4 hours reading your entire FF, and its amazing, egarly waiting for the next update, 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 84 was good...this Angad guy is creapy...watching 'em like that.
Geet, Maan & baby...all very cute!
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxs,,,,I was so worried for GEET....
glad sh is fine..ok..
me so so concerned abt NT..actually..
👏👏👏👏👏
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank God...

geet n her baby's safe!!!

awsumm


continue sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago


part 87 bitter truth part 1/3

sorry for mistake.... x



Geet: maan kuch bolo na... Maan bolo na.... Kuch bolo na maan...


She shakes him... Maan hugged her tight again... "I don't know geet... I will check now... I... She is fine..."

Geet: take me with you....

Maan: no you relax here.

Maan leaves... Security guard was already there...


Dev was sitting outside of the operation room...

Maan sits next to him...

Vicky: how is geet Bhavi?

Maan: she is fine... Have you informed Dadi?

Vicky; no....

Maan: don't... She won't be able to Handel all this shock....

Dev wasn't taking at all.... Shocked... For the first time... He ever realised what NT means to her... Devs cell phone rings... He cuts the call and switches the phone off.

Maan: Dev... Are you alright?

Dev nodes... Indirectly.... No clue what type of question he was answering to...

Maan thought "what type of stupid question I am asking... Of course he is not... When I hard about geet and are child... I was a living dead... Of course same thing is going through Dev...."


Dr walks out....

Dev: is she alright?

Dr: I am sorry... We couldn't save your child. Your wife is conscious... If she doesn't regain her sense with in 12 hours... Then ... It will be hard to save her as well.

Dev couldn't speak.... He was in shock....

Maan and Vicky also had no clue how to comfort him.... Dev broke down again... He sat on the chair...

Maan and Vicky trying to comfort him...


Dadi calls over and over again... Vicky had to make some silly excuses every time...

Maan called the best detective agence... Police... Finding out every details...


Dr eventually came out... Dev didn't look well at all.


Dr left....

Dev sat there in sock... No talk nothing...

Geet stood at the background... Crying her eyes out... Maan quickly embraced her in his hug.... Vicky comforting Dev.....

It wasn't long when NT came back to her sense... No one dared to tell the truth... Geet couldn't face it... She felt guilty taking all the blame on her self....


dev was terrified to go in... no clue how he will face her...


dev: nt

nt: i am felling weird...

dev: nt... i am sorry..

nt: what for?

dev: are child.... he couldn't finish...


nt felt weird like something missin inside her.... something is not right.... she murmured.....

dev sat next to her.... i am sorry.... i had no other option...

nt: what do you mean? still absence of the child...

dev: are child....

nt smiles.... thats the second time you said are child...

dev: are child... he started sobbing... is no more....


nt looked at dev blankly..... tears started to roll down............




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Weeks have passed... NT is back home... Refusing to talk to Dev. She lost more of of her body wait in this two week... Not eating properly. Not sleeping... Geet occasionally stayed with her... Trying her best to bring her out of the sock... But nothing seems to work. She completely refused to talk to anyone.


Dev: bro... What I suppose to do? I am really worried about her.

maan wasn't exactly the best one to ask for sympathy or advice... He was looking for words...

Geet walks in: Dev... Why don't you take Di out somewhere for few days... May be change in environment will help her.

Maan: yes... That's a good idea.

Dev: thanks geet... I will book the ticket now.


He leaves geet and maan walks back to there bedroom... Extremely worried about everything...

Maan made geet relax and he laid down next to... After while she cuddled up in his hug....

Maan strikes her hair.... While geet falls in sleep....


Geet was Extremely worried for past few days... NTs effect was reflecting on her health...

Maan was worried... Trying his best to take off her mind way...


In a day Dev left with NT... Geet wished them good luck... NT still haven't spoken a word... Geet hugged her goodby...


Few more days have passed... Maan trying his best to cheer geet up...


Maan: don't you think we should start to paint are wall...

Geet: umm... Yea sure...

Maan Hughes geet from the back... How about twomoro?

Geet: yea... That's fine...

Maan kissed her cheek... She hugged maan tight...


Next: paint the room... with love.....



hay you all ty or all the lovely comments... truly amazing... well heer is ur update... i am just writing paint the room... so will be up soon 2

xxxx


love keyama

xxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooooo liking it -
feel sorry for NT!!!
hope she does feel a little better n hope geet too can stop blaming her
i wonder hu did it?
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i feel sorry NT i hope she never turn negetive to Geet and blame her cotn soonnnnnnnn thankssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
really sad for wht happened 2 NT.thnxs 2 update
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey..that was awesome update
really nice...felt bad fot NT...
and we are back to happy moments..
waiting for the update...
do keep writing...

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