(MG) 7 Days Of Love - a mini FF ~p.15 Wednesday upd

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Sonia

@Bobbi.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Chandi, out of all the OSs owhatever fictions i have read, this one in particular is what i have loved.

I don't know how, but i was glued to the laptop reading the second part as i reciceved Anju's PM.

Jokes apart, why don't you try writing a book? Other than your concept, your language used is brilliant just that you're a little wrong with the hindi spelling (which i am too 😳)

Please do continue this bti next week, as i'll wait to read what Geet does.

Damn, Maan's grinding on another woman! Eeik! You got me with that bit.

👏 👏 👏

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sravani899

@sravani899

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

chandini dear

first thing i want to do is this👏👏👏👏

really its really nice and romantic and passionate update dear😉😆😆

i loved it to the core😊

but in between i dint like the comparision of maan to dev but it happens if u have a past like dev so i can understand dear😊

oh my god geet in shirt of maan oh 😳

i blushed while reading the update😳😳

really its really passionate one esp the lift sceen omg i dont know how u r able to right it 😉😳👏👏👏

u took me to the 7 heaven with the passion of maneet or should i say the way u discribed😳

but at the end u made me stand at the very edge of hell yaar

and liked that geet changed her dressing style😲 and also came to club 😲which she doesnt like and she did all these only for maan😃 😉

and i agree they look really cute with the person who said in the ff😆😆😆

and i know maan is stubborn but in romance also 😲😆😆 oh god save geet 😆😆😆

i think maan purposely informed her that he is club so that geet 🤬 ahem ahem

well i am not interested in letting the cat out to bag dear 😉😆😆

so i know ur really going to surprise me with ur next update dear 😃

u r fabulous and romantic writer dear😉👏👏👏

update the ff asap dear 😊

with love

sravs

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malaysiangirl

@Malaysian_Girl

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Anjuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Awesome and thanks for thread dear..I loved it and you are sweetheart..

Chandni-your write up is superb and keep the great work going girl

Well done buddies and have a great week.

with best wishes,

MalaysianGirl@MG

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-aweshome_moi-

@-aweshome_moi-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

*☺️........uffffff,uffff......☺️...*

Chands,now you're bein' really demanding!!>....haha,lolzzz....u knows moi loves poshting looooooooong replies....😆...

What a shooooo romantic part!!>😍...me ijj dead....uffff,loved it!!>😳.........me wajj goin' *red tomato* the whole tym!!☺️....

*Arey yahan par koi under 13 toh nai hai???😲.....😆.....*..

It wajj bootiful Chands....simply love the way you write😳.....makes me fall in love with 'em,even more!!>.☺️......

MUNDA WID NTHER CHICK????😲....Can't imagine him in such an avi......Kya yaar Chands,you know he's a one woman man!!😉☺️....Geet!!....Chamaat-maaring him for bein' such a bewafa!!>....GO GIRL!!.....😎...

Totally loved this part,Chands.....it was....ufffffff.......*dreamy*....😍

I think tht was long enough....Now you post the next long part!!😆

Love,

Amina.

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Anju

@AnjuMaanManiac

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Finally Anju is free for sometime and can comment yipee!

Me doin me usual list rofl I just luv lists! okies well I got time to say just 7 things at the moment hehehe 😆

1) Firstly omg wow I am sooooooooooo overjoyed you decided to continue on with part 2 already and that as well so soon!
rofl I thought it was gonna be one part each weekend hehehehe Good going yaar! 😃

2) Woohoo Maaneet in the morning I have always wanted something like this picturised hehehe. Wow how romantic is Maan!
awww he called her "sunshine" how adorable

lol busy nite they had rofl poor Geet didn't get a winkn of sleep hehehehe

3) I was blushing myself when I read "You thinking about last night?" omg omg omg Maan!!!

4) ROFL hmmm is it Maan's black shirt she grabbed rofl when i find that episode when Geet was in the shower and then came out wearing Maan's clothes I am so going to post it here! rofl
That's the first thought that entered my head when I read it hehehe

5) bechari Geet thought Maan left her just like Dev awwww the poor thing!

6) whoot whoot now that was smokin hot in the elevator!
I am imagning the lift scene already! "He grabbed me by my arms and turned me up against the wall." uff Maan!

"He looked me dead straight in the eyes with anger yet passion."

That was deadly! omg his must be looking at her with such intensity and passion!

7) OMG SHOCKING MAAN WITH SOMEONE ELSE???????????
ANJU IS HYPERVENTILATING! NO NO NO NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEH NAHI HO SAKTA!
MAAN KABHIE NAHI KAR SAKDA!

oh gosh I am soooooooooo scared yaar what is gonna happen now?

Who is the other girl endless possibilities Sameera back? Pari - nah I hardly think it is? OMG did Sasha force herself on Maan yikes!Or someone completely new?

Is it Maan's fault? or the girl that his with is deliberately doing that?
omg omg omg

Anju is gonna have a attack soon!

who is this girl?

ANJU IS SHOUTING OUT "Hai Baba Ji, Maan ko Bachalo" (Geet style 🤣)

ANJU IS BREATHLESS AND IN SHOCK! 😲

P.S. All the best for the next bit yaar 😃

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lody

@lody

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Omg I realy love ur ff and allthe 2part make blushing like read plzzz update soon and plzzzz can u add me on ur pm least plzz am daying her for the next part

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Cutee999

@Cutee999

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

awesome part dear,
thanks for pm me
do continue soon
'waiting for next update....

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Hi,

It's aowsome nice pls do pm whenever u update the next part

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smarty2010

@smarty2010

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

thx 4 the pm n also thx 4 the update.the beginning was gr8 n also vry njoyable.i know we cant hv such scenes in real on tv.thx 2 u tat atleast we can imagine such scenes bet geet n maan.but its a request dont make maan a bewafa.the last part worried me a lot.i know u will add sum gr8 twist. waiting 4 u next update.thx