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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
such a cute part
prem is hillarious
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved the way Maaneet expressed their Love.......
Im left Speechless........
Every single line is so beautifully written...........
Ur Just Outstanding Dear.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...
Thanq so much for such a Lovely FF
Pls Update Sooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey really good update!

con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update thanks loved baby jannat
The song complied the storyline
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved the engangment scene
so beautiful
loved prem and jannet
loved geets dress
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
READ the whole FF! I m lovin it..
Waitin for maaneet to get married! I m loving jaanat&maaneet momeents..love how jaanat calls maan..daddy..aww! soo sweet.
UPDTSOON!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Last part..go check out my new fanfiction !
Thank you for the support guys love loads
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"Bhai"Vicky Said through tears.

"Vicky!"The Khurana's and Kapoor said in disbelieve,and a confused geet looked on to see Maan running to the stranger and hug him

"Vicky tum agaye wapis,patha hai maine kahan kahan tumhain donda.Tumh kahan chale gaye the.Vicky Naintara ne tumhare saath kiya woh humain patha hai.Usne tumhain hamere khilaf barkaya!Tum soch bhi kaise sakhte ho ke hum tum se nafrat kertein hain!" Maan said while feeling his tears roll down his cheeks.After so many years Maan was finally letting his emotions loose.

" I'm so sorry bhaia,mujhe kuch din phele yaad aya ke main kitna bara bewakoof hoon!Aaap ko ase chor gaya,mujhe apse poochna chaiye tha!Aur yaad ayi apki.Aur aaj jab main agay hoon toh asa kyon lag raha hai jaise sab kuch mere paas hai.Hameri family complete lag rahi hai!Magar Naintara aur Dev kahan hain."Vicky asked searching for his bhabi and brother.

Maan told him everything that had happen in the past few months,and how he met geet in the process.To say Vicky felt bad for geet was an understatement.Her speech made sense,she looked his age maybe younger,yet endured so much.She had nothing but innocence on her face,and the little girl that he found out they had adopted was just as beautiful.Vicky watched as Jannat poked geet and point his way,probably wondering who he was.He watched as Geet gave her daughter a kiss and wishpered something in the child's ear.The child face lit up,and she got down from Geet's hand and crawled towards him.Vicky watched as the child made her way towards him and sat infront of him and looked at him.He watched as the child extended her hands up,in need to be in his arms.Vicky bent down and picked her up,the child gently looked at him with her dowy eyes,and smiled.She was not like any other child,she was confident."chachu!"The girl said while clapping her hands and throwing her hands around Vicky's neck.Vicky was suprised,but felt like he was at home.As he looked at the others they all had tears in their eyes.He watched as geet made her way towards Maan,and give him a quick peck while wiping his tears.She shook her head in disagreement,showing him that it was a happy moment.The moment Geet's eyes fell on Vicky,he felt the love she had for Maan.She gently smiled at him and walked a few steps ahead and greeted him.

"Namaste,aapVicky hain?Main geet apki bhabi.Well hone wali.Patha hai Maan aur main jab dance ker rahe the toh Maan ke raha tha ke aaj kuch bohot acha hoga!Sahi kaha,aaj aap agayein hain toh apne hameri family complete ker di.Mujhse dosti karoge Vicky?"Geet said extending her hands.

",aap bari interesting lagti hain,per mujhe apse dosti nai chaiye.Kuch aur chaiye!"

"Woh kiya?"Geet said looking at him.

"Eik rishta?"

"Wasaiy tum bilkul Maan ki tarah ho.Confusing.Kaise mystery main dala hua hai!"

"Geet" Maan said trying to look angry,but at the same time loving the way she was back to her Kahdoors style.

"haha..Nai asa kuch nahi hai...Mujhe" Vicky said teasing her

"VICKYYY.Main punjaban hoon mere se na panaga lo.Aur main hone wali Mrs Khurana bhi Hoon!"Geet said pulling Vicky's ear,annoyed by her.

"Ow OW OW..Acha acha..Geet App meri behn banogi"Vicky said while looking at Geet who had tears forming in her eyes.

"Chalo jeee,pir se shoro Mrs Khadoos ke ansoon,wasaiy Geet yeh koi family problem toh nai hai?Hey nice to meet you!We haven't met,but Maan talks about a lot Vicky!Im Prem,iska jigeri yaar.Aur geet ka sabse pyara,handsome dost."Prem said while looking at Geet.

"Oh aap ho Prem,Nice to meet you!"Vicky said.

"Vicky dadi maa ko bhul gaye"Savtri Devi said feeling like she had everything.

"Dadiii meri sexy Dadi!Wow aap toh aur sexy hogayen hain!"Vicky said running to hug Dadi.

"Dekho kya hal ker diya hai apna!"

"Dadi ab main agaya hoon!"

"Haan haan,chalo Prem ke ami abbu ko bhi Namaste Karo"

"Namste aunty or uncle"

"Namaste beta,nice to meet you"

"Mamaa"Jannat whimpered,feeling very sleepy.

Geet looked at her little princess and picked her up to notice she was sleepy.She looked at jannat in understanding and kissed her.Cradling her for awhile,Jannat fell asleep.She looked around to notice everyone was sitting down and talkin,smiling she took jannat to Dadi's room and gently laid her on the bed.She sat down beside her gently running her hands in her hair.As geet recalled the events of the day,she smiled knowing that everything was just fine.She closed her eyes,for some reason today she missed her mother and father.She really did wish her mother father and sister rano were fine."I miss you mama and papa"Geet said before breaking down and crying.No matter what happen at the end of the day they were her family.

Maan had been sitting with his family laughing at the childhood stories that were being shared by Dadi,and Mrs Kapoor.After a few minutes Maan noticed Geet had not returned for awhile,he looked at Prem who was also looking around for her.He got up,knowing that she went to Dadi's room.As Maan left the family sat down to discuss wedding plans.

"Acha Mrs Kapoor,humne pandit se baath ki thi!Unho ne shaadi moorat nikali hai.Next Monday ko werna 2 saal ke baad wale Monday ki date arai hai!Hum sooch rahen hain ke itna delay na kiya jaye.So next Monday Kaisa rahe ga!"

"Jo apko manzoor Savtri Devi,humain bhi lagta hai ke bas shaadi ker di jaye inki."

"Toh pir sahi hai!Bohot bohot bidai ho aap logon ko!"

"Raja ki ayegi Barat..."Prem sang while vicky and the rest of the adults laughed.

"Oye Nakul mithai toh lao"Prem said.

"Prem bare ho jao ab,bachoon ki tarah na act karo"

"Vicky dekh lo meri kiya kadar hai idher!"Prem said while vicky smiled.

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"Geet,kahan ho abhi tak neeche nayi ayi tum."Maan said before freezing in his spot as he saw geet crying.

He made his way towards her and sat down on the bed,pulling her in to a hug.She did not have to tell him the reason why she was crying,he knew.The way she was looking at Jannat told him she missed her parents.Gently moving her hair from the shoulder he placed a kiss on her shoulder and made his way to her face.Kissing away each tear he inched closer to her lips.At that moment geet's heartbeat became faster,her eyes flickered to his lips.As soon as their lips touched,they felt a strong shock go through their body.Maan had never felt anything softer then her lips,the tears made her lips taste salty.His tongue traced around her lips,gently asking permission to explore the inside of her mouth.Her taste was toxic and addicting like a drug.He sucked on her lower lip,as his hand gently pulled her long beautiful hair.Geet's hand were exploring his muscular chest and slowly making its way to his hair.Their lips moved in sync,and no one could even break the moment.Before it got to far,and seeing Geet's state Maan pulled back to breath.He gently pulled her to his chest and ran his hands up and down her back.While pulling back,geet's hair got stuck to his button.Thats the state both vicky and Prem found them in.

"Humne kuch nai dekha!"Both the boys said covering their eyes.

"Aur Jannat ne bhi nai,wasaiy apni suhaag raath per Jannat ko hamere paas chor ke jaana!"Vicky said watching the two couples pull away withing seconds and blush.Maan was blushing!WOW.

"Woa-h hum arai the abhi"Geet said looking away

"geet kiya Maan itna bura kisser hai ke tum roo rahi ho"Prem said looking at Maan and winking

"Nai!"Geet said feeling shy

"Tum dono ne Kiss kiya!HAWWW"Prem said trying hard not to laugh

"Ab toh dadi ko bathna pare ga!"Vicky said before running out the door.

"VICKY"Geet and Maan ran after him

"Dekho le aya main inhe dadi"

"Geet beta idher aao"Dadi said

"Beta badai ho,tum dono ki Monday ko shaadi horahi hai!"

"really"Maan said happily.

"oho,dulhe ka haal toh dekho dadi"Prem said comming up behind Maan.

"Urah lo mazaq,magar tum meri kushi ko kaam nai ker sakhte"Maan said before hugging dadi.

"Itni jaldi beta"Dadi said laughing

"Maan tum apni happiness hide ker lo thori si,mujhe sharam arai hai"Geet said to him seriously

"haha Mrs Kahdoos aur sharam.Wasaiy bhi after to-"Geet ran to Prem covering his mouth before he said anything.

"Acha tum 4 shatan jao outhouse main soo jao aaj.Aur Jannat ko hum sambal leinge."Dadi said kissing geet on her head before leaving.

The walk to the outhouse was filled with laughs,but geet still remained quite.She was looking at the three men fooling around hitting each other occasionally.She was suprised to see the new side of Maan,his angry face was now filled with a magical light.Just when they were 3 minutes away from the house,it had started to rain.The three men groaned but were silenced by Geet's laugh.They watched as geet twirled around in the rain looking up the sky letting the rain fall on her face.She forgot about everyone around her and while the rain got worse and worse,her laughs got louder and louder.The three men smilled to see her laugh so much,taking shelter under the tree Maan stopped to bring geet with him.

"Geet chalo barish bohot teez hogayi hai!"

"Nai Maan!Itna maza ara hai!"

"Geet"he said pulling her but she freed her hand and spun around.

"It's okay na-"Geet said before sneezing.

When the rain had stopped the 4 made their way towards the house.Geet has been sneezing since the rain stopped and Maan was fuming with anger.Prem asked Geet if she could make her famous hot chocolate.The three were sitting in Geet's room and waiting for her,when she came in she said she was going to change out.As she came in she saw vicky,prem and Maan sleeping.They all felt cold so she took out extra blankets and covered them.When she went to cover Maan,she noticed the smile that played on his lips,gently kissing his lips she tucked him in and went to the spare room.She laid down and went to sleep.The next morning Geet woke up extra early to make everyone food,she called dadi and told her to come over for breakfest with Prem's parent.She felt really sick,but she still made food.Going upstairs she took out a simple sari and wore it.As her condition became worse and worse,geet decided she should take a quick shower hoping the feeling would go away.

Everyone had gathered around the table looking at the delicious food geet had made.Prem was in heaven,while Vicky never tasted better aloo ke parathe in his life.Maan smiled and looked at geet who had made her way to the table.She looked tired and her eyes were red.She sat down beside him while noticing Jannat.Jannat had a little beaker filled with milk,she was hitting the table with it.Geet got up to go get Jannat who eagerly extended her hand to come in her lap.Geet sat back down and looked at Prem who was eating away.Gently geet pulled Jannat closer and she watched as Jannat relaxed in her touch and sucked on her beaker.Geet did not feel like having breakfest,when Dadi noticed she looked at how pale geet was.Everyone watched geet,who had been playing with her food,even jannat was holding the spoon and mixing geet's food.

"Beta aap theek ho na"Dadi asked

"Hmmm"Geet said not having the energy to talk.

"Wow thats the least you have said since you were born geet.Seriously lagta hai your getting sick.Pagloon ki tarah barish main naha rahi thi!Aur pir ghar a ker bhi shower liya.Aur baloon se laag raha hai subah bhi liya shower.Aur tumh toh sirf thande pani se nahti ho!"Prem said putting two and two together.

"Geet"Maan said moving to touch her forehead.

"Beta itni laparwai"Mrs kapoor said.

"Dadi isko toh bohot sakht bukhar chara hua hai!"Maan said glaring at geet.

"Nakul jao ma'am ke liye kuch dawa le aao"Dadi said the servant.

"Nai main theek hoon,Maan ziada na worry karo!"Geet said walking away to clear the dishes.

"Ziddi kitni hai yeh!"Maan said pushing his food away.Before getting up and pulling geet back to the table.

"Maan bachoon ki tarah na act karo,jannat woh role play ker le gi.Choro bohot kaam hai mujhe!"

"haha-I mean bhabi aap na kaam karo ase hi bemaar ho gayen.Humne toh abhi bohot masti kerni hain!"

"Geet beta sahi keh raha hai Maan."

"Dadi main bemaar hui hoon marne nai wali,aap loog kyon fazool main pershan ho rahen hain.Geet said glaring at Maan.

"Kerne dein dadi ishe Kaam,apko toh patha hai isne toh nai soona!"Maan said before following geet to the kitchen.

"kiya hogaya hai Maan,aaram se betho udher jannat ke saath.Aur prem tumhne zaroor moon kholna tha!"Geet said as Maan followed her back .

"Maine kya kiya"

"Geet tum sun nahi rahi ho"

"Maan kiya taang ker ke rakha hua hai!"

"Geet suno lo baath"

"Maaan be quite Main bath nai karoon gi!Eik dafa keh diya na!"

"ok ok bhabi aap kaam kerain pir hum ja ker bahar behtain hain"Vicky signaled for Maan to come,and maan gave up.

Geet had the urge to clean the whole outhouse by herself,she cleaned for 4 hours,and when she was done she went outside to water the plants.Not accepting the fact that she was sick and missing her parents.Geet did her own thing and Maan sulked outside,while Prem hit his head.At night geet had went upstairs to her room and laid down with Jannat by her side.Geet then fell asleep not giving Maan a hug or anything.Maan had enough of her stupidty,he came to tell her to stop acting like a child but saw her sleeping in a room with a single bed.She was obivously mad at him for being so nosy.Maan felt even worse and went to find Prem

"Prem"Maan said

"oh hey Main or vicky lodoo khel rahe the,ajao..............Wait kiya hua"

"geet soo gayi mujhe hug bhi nai kiya"Maan said while vicky and Prem looked at him sadly

"Kuch nai yaar woh bohot ziddi hai,theek ho jaye gi!Pagal ho gayi hai!"

"Prem mujhe eik baath batani hai,woh kaal bohot roo rahi thi dadi ke room main.Apne ammi abbu ko miss ker rahi thi!"

"Acha isliye woh itni roothi roothi si lage rahi thi!"Prem said getting up and pacing the room.

"Bhai,woh miss toh karegi na,hum sirf unko yeh yaad dila saktein hain ke hum hain idher unke dard batane ke liye.

"wasaiy bhi shaadi ka waaqt, eik larki ke liye bohot emotional hota hai!"

Geet woke up the next morning with a massive headache,she felt dizzy.She looked around to see Jannat gently playing with her blanket.As soon as Jannat saw Geet,she gently pulled geet's hand and kissed it saying "mama."Dadi walked in to see Geet in a mess,she walked over followed by a sad Maan.As dadi sat beside her,she was shocked to see geet so sick.

"Maan doctor ko bulao,isko bohot teiz bukhar chara hua hai!"Dadi said frantically as a worried maan went to phone the doctor.

The doctor had adviced bed rest for geet,as she was in no state to walk or sit up properly.Maan had seated himself beside geet,and took her in his lap.An amused Jannat saw this as a time to play so she came and snuggled in to geet even more,and silently giggled.Maan had made her take her medicine,and drink some soup.He kissed her warm head and slept with her for awhile.Prem and vicky had come to see geet who had been sleeping nonstop.Prem had taken jannat with him,because he was afraid she would catch a cold.

The next day Geet woke up feeling much better,although as soon as she got out of bed she heard 3 voices saying "geet" and a very quite voice saying "Mama."Jannat found it funny how everyone called geet's name.Geet turned to look at three men staring her down with anger reflecting in their eyes.Maan had told prem and vicky to go as he wanted to talk to geet alone.He pulled geet to sit infront of him and gently placed her hand on his heart.Maan closed his eyes and let her warm touch steady his heartbeat.

"Geet,yeh dil ki darkhan mehsoos ker rahi ho?"Maan said

"hmmm,mehsoos bhi ker rahen hoon aur sun bhi rahen hoon.Ouye Dusht Danav,tumhara kisi se chakar toh nai chal raha!"Geet said in her punjaban style.

"GEETTTTT,main serious baath ker raha hoon"

"Acha.*gigggling*"Geet looked at Maan trying not to laugh.

"Ab kiya hua!"Maan asked crossing his hands.

"woh asal main,mere se serious moon nai banaya jata,isliye"Geet said smirking

"Geet"Maan threw a pillow at her.

"acha baba,I was just lightening the mood na"Geet said giving him a quick peck.

"acha toh main k-"Maan stopped as he heard giggling .

Getting up he walked to the door and closed it not bothering to check who was standing outside.He slowly walked back to Geet.This girl would be the death of him.

Meanwhile,outside the room dadi,mrs kapoor,vicky ,Jannat and Prem stood making sure they did not do anything funny.Actually the truth was they were here to listen in and bug them about their big day.As Maan started talking the thoughts of the vistor outside the room were silenced,and they listened in.

"Geet,tum shiad janti nai ho magar jab tumhain kuch hota hai toh yeh darkhan rok si jati hai.Tere naam se saansein chalti hain.Aur tum apna kyal nai rakhti.Tum eik din mere se rooth jao toh lagta hai sadiyan guzar gayen hain.Geet tum meri saanson ko roukhta hua nai dekh sakhti na?Toh aaj wada karo,wada karo ke tum apna kyal rakho gi.Geet tumhare liye main kuch bhi kaar loon ga!Magar abh eik pal tumhare bina saza lagti hai."Maan said holding her near his heart.

"Maan.....Ab mere zindagi se pehle,mujhe bohot si zindagion ka khayal rakhna hain.Pehle aap or Jaant,pir dadi..Pir Prem uski toh maine abhi dulhan doondni hai!Aur pir ab vicky bhi agaya hai Maan.Aur Mr and Mrs Kapoor...woh bhi toh mere dil ke kareeb hain.Isliye toh aap hai na!Aap mera nai khayal rakhen ge toh kiya koi aur larki ka rakhe ge."Geet said to Maan with a wink.

"Geet tum sach main bohot achi ho,tum apne bare main bilkul nai sooch thi.Dil kar raha ke main....choro wasaiy bhi ishe gar main bohot se nosy loog hain.Esp jo bahar kare hue hain!Ajao aap andhar dadi,aunty,preem(isko toh main bata tha hoon maan thought),vicky aur meri Jannat."Maan said while pulling geet in his arms.

"wo-h hum ne kuch nai suna!"Dadi said feeling guilty for being nosy.

"achaa Dadi Maa,isliye sabki ankhon main ansoon hai"Maan said narrowing his eyes.

"Woh Maan,kiya hai na 2 premi ko akela chorna,achi baath nai hai...toh Hum tum per spy ker rahe the!"Prem said before covering his mouth for saying to much.

"Oye Prem yaar bahar tum mujhe keh re teh kai kuch bathna nai!Idher tum khud lage hue ho!"Vicky said slapping Prem on the head.

"ACHAAAA!PREM AUR VICKKYYY BHAGOOO AAJ TUM DONO GAYE"Maan said before jumping around the bed to chase the two boys.

"waitttttttt.....Main Jannat ko toh deh doon geet ko."Prem said before going to geet with pleading eyes.

"Geet mujhe bacha lo na,main tumhe ice cream kilaonga"Prem said so only Geet could hear.

"Are main kuch nai keh rahi,tum jao zara maan exercise kera le ga.Now give me my princess Jannat."Geet said

"Mama mama mama mama..momoooo bhagoo"Everyone turned to look at Jannat who was looking at Prem with a serious look.

"Hmmmm-...Bhagooo momo"Geet said using Jannats name for prem.

The ladies watched as Maan ran after the two boys,while Maan was using expressive language.Vicky and Prem were yelling out for help.It was quite a scene.The comedy you see in movies,but this one was a geniuine act.Dadi silently signaled Mrs kapoor to go back.While geet looked on with a daze look.

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The day before the wedding was a very nerve racking time for both the couple, and the family.Khurana's had hired the best wedding planners in the entire country.Jannat had been quite fussy because Geet was really busy,but once jannat was in her mothers embrace she felt safe.

The duo,Vicky and Prem had poked fun at Maan and Geet to a point that they were even more nervous.Since niether one of them were allowed to see each other,they would have a hard time falling a sleep.Prem would never show it but a part of him would always long for geet's love.He would never tell her but a part of him was sad because he felt lonely.

Jannat was his relief,a god sent angel.Each day Prem would play with Jannat,and teach her simple things about life.Jannat was really happy,she stopped calling Prem momo,and got used to calling him mamo.Vicky was content with the way life was turning out to be.On one hand he had a great brother,friend and dadi,on the other hand he had an awesome bhabhi.His respect for Geet had increased,as he watched her be the reason Maan smiled.

The night before the wedding,both Maan and Geet looked out from their perspective rooms.They looked up at the moon as it stood high and proud.Maan and Geet both closed their eyes to pray.A silent thanks... a silent plead... a silent wish...

babaji,kal meri Maan ke saath eik naya safar shoro hone wala hai....Babajii meri hone wale ghar main sirf khusiyaan dena.Aur mujhe hamesha sahi raha dekha na.Babaji Eik nayi shorowat ke liye eik chooti si dua...Mujhe patha hai aap hamesha mere saath rahen ge!"Geet prayed before going back to her bed and laying down.

"Maine kabhi kuch nahi manga.Aaj main idher eik behter zindagi ki prathna kerta hoon.Mujhe nai patha ke zindagi ne mere liye kiya likha hai.Magar mujhe patha hai ke sirf 2 insaan mere saath hamesha rahenge Geet aur Jannat.Kal hameri shadi hai..Bus hamesha apka saya hamere ghar pai rahe." Maan prayed before going to his bed and laying down.

"yeh kon si rasm hai ke apne hone wale pathi ko nahi dekh sakhte shaadi se pehle"Geet said tossing and turning on her bed.She missed Maan's embrace.

"ufff yaar ab patha chala loog shaadi ke din pehle itne grumpy kyon hote hain.Mujhe lagta hai yeh koi rasm nahi in fact Dadi ka brand new way hai mujhe torture kerne ka."Maan said in the same state as geet.

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THE BIG DAY

The sounds of the bird chirping had woken Geet up.Sitting up on her bed she streached her hands and yawned.Looking around she noticed all sorts of beauty products laid out on her dresser.Realizing it was her wedding day she quickly jumped out of bed and went to the washroom to shower.She had to be ready by 5pm and it was alreadly noon.Comming out of the shower she noticed Pinky and Dadi had come in to the room.Geet's hand were again filled with mehndi,but unlike the ring ceremony it was the real henna.Dadi had adviced geet to put on emergency henna for the ceremony so on her wedding day she could wear henna again.Pinky styled her hair so it was curled and tied in to a twist,with a few strands hanging loose.Pinky had called sasha over who was an expert in doing wedding make-up.Sasha had been suprised to see how beautiful geet looked without makeup.As sasha finished her make-up,dadi had put on the necklace Maan's mom made for her bahu.She then put her necklace on.with chooriyan.After gettling Geet ready the ladies went own way to get ready.4pm every Kapoor family member was ready.They were all waiting for Geet who had been in her room fixing herself nervously.Prem was getting impatient as they had to reach the Mandir on time.With the Khurana's waiting at the Mandir,the kapoor's would bring Geet in as vowed by Prem.Prem walked in to geet's room and was met with the most goregous bride.She looked lovely,but a little nervous.Walking to Geet he slowly tried to contain his laughter,knowing that Geet Handa was about to blow any minute.He was also informed by Vicky that Maan was driving both dadi and him nuts because of his nervousness.

"Geet,chalen."

"h-aan"

"Geet daro maath tumhain patha hai Maan tumhain bohot kush rakhe ga!Haan agar suhag raath ke bare main chinta ho rahi hai toh main batha doon.Maan SIngh Khurana is a perfectionist."Prem laughed but stopped as geet glared at him.

"Prem tum toh mere bhai ho,mujhe nai patha tha Bhai behn se ase baath kerta hai!...Thank you Prem"

"Kis liye"

"Eik dost hone ke liye,aur eik ache momo hone ke liye."Geet said before both of them laughed at the Momo part.

"Chak de padhe" Prem said before helping geet climb down the stairs.

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At the Mandir

"Dadi woh bhag toh nai gayi na!"A nervous Maan asked for the fifth time in a mintue.

"Maan mera saar na kaho,woh loog arahen hain!"

"Dadi main agar usko kush nahi rakh paya toh."Dadi looked at him amused.

"Bhai abh yeh na poochna ke suhag raath pai do premi kiya kertain hai."Dadi laughed out loud,even the pandit was laughing

"Vicky!Mera mazaq na urao."

As Maan seated him self infront of the burning fire he turned around as everyone gasped..It was geet,looking like a heaven sent angel.She made her way to Maan and the ceremony began.As the couple took the sacred rounds around the fire,they remebered their first meeting .After the ceremony everyone congratulated the couples.

Everyone headed to the Khurana Mansion for the party,and the dancing began.Maan and Geet stood by each other and smiled, thats when Geet noticed Maan in a sherwani.He looked handsome,better then any guy in the world.Geet was pulled out of her thoughts as the music started to play.

After the usual marriage rituals,Geet had been escorted to her room where she sat down on the bed filled with flowers.White orcids,were thrown around on the bed making a heart on the bed.Pinky had helped her sit inside the flower heart.She had laughed and said that this was Maan's heart and Geet was in the middle taking up all the space.As Pinky had heard Maan she had made her way outside,and was now bugging him for money.

"Jeja ju..I mean sir..woh paise dein werna main nai jane doongi."Pinky said scared of his wrath.

"Main tumhe fire ker doon ga agar nai hathi."Maan said making his best angry face and trying not to laugh as he saw Pinky's face go pale.

"Oh..sorrry"Pinky said trying to run away but Maan had stopped her.

"Its ok yaar,tumhe meri saali ho na...Since tum Geet ki behn ki tarah ho!Its okay you can call me jija ju.It will be our secret okay?Now where were we..Oh yes the money.How much?"Maan asked as he watched Pinky smile.

"9000"

"bus"

"aap muje aur dena chahtein hain?"

"I was being sarcastic,itne ziada paise."

"Waise toh Geet se milne ke ishe se bhi ziada paise deine chaiye.Maine toh itni kaam kimat lagayi hai.HMPH"

"Acha--"

"Haan asa kerain main andher chali jati hoon Geet ke paas,aap jayen pir"Pinky said turning around.

"Oye nai Pinky,chalo tumhein main 9000 de deta hoon!"Maan said feeling happy that he had took some cash out.

"AWWWW thank you..Jaye apki rajkumari wait ker rahi hai."

Maan smiled and took a breath before opening the door to his room.As soon as he opened the door he saw Geet siting in betweenn the flowers.As his heart soared that Geet was now his,he had made his way towards her.Geet had never felt so nervous in her life.She was quite as Maan sat beside her and pulled her hands in his.He gently removed her veil and satt there admiring her beauty.He moved his hands to stroke her lips,and slowly he moved his hands down to her neck.Removing her necklace,he placed a wet kiss on her neck and watched as she sighed in pleasure.He continued to kiss her exposed skin,until he made his way to her ear.Taking out the earing he gently pulled her earlobe with his teeth.As he removed the rest of geet's jewelry he thought about how good her skin tasted.As her jewelry was put on the night table,he moved so he was close enough.Geet moved her hands to remove his sherwani,as it came of she ran her hands up and down his chest before being pulled in to his embrace.Maan finally captured her lips and started to enjoy her toxic taste,this was one poison he could drink and never die.As the innocent kiss became a hot make out session,maan moved his hands under geet's top.Soon,both geet and Maan were under the sheets.Maan kissed geet everywhere,as Geet whimpered and called out his name in pleasure.Her innocent calls for him,made him insane. Maan and Geet had become one.Maan and Geet had become Maaneet.Lying down beside her,maan pulled a shy geet to his bare chest.

"geet,tum bohot pyari lag rahi thi aaj."Maansaid gently stroking the scar from the gunshot wound she got few months ago.

"hmmm aap bhi"Geet said shyly

"Acha,batao na kitna acha lag raha tha"Maan said loving the way geet shied away from him.

"woh-uh bohot.Infact sabse ache."Geet said looking at him.

"hmmm,geet wada karo mujhse ke aaj se hum kabhi bhi juda nai honge"Maan said playing with her hair.

"nai,never main hamesha aapke paas rahongi."

"Hmm wasaiywoh larki kon thi,jo prem ke saath dance ker rahi thi"

"woh aapke hone wali bhabi hain"

"Huh?"

"hamere saath school jati thi,Heer malhotra.Aur aapne nai dekha woh kaise eik doosre ko dekh rahe the."

"hmm dekha tha!Hmmm Geet mujhe jannat ki yaad arai hai!"

"Main itni boring hoon"

"Nai nai!Bus yaad arai hai na."

Acha main jaker lati hoon,okay!Woh dadi aaj neeche wale kamre main soo rahen hai uske saath."Geet said geting up,but was stopped when Maan held her hand.

"sono,Jaldi ana.Aur dupaata pehn ke jana tumhari neck pai jo lovebites hain woh dadi ko nai dekhane."Maan said smugly.

"Ufff Maaannnnnnnn"Geet said checking the mirror as she saw 3 visible lovebites on her neck.Putting her duppatta around her neck to cover it she left to look for Jannat.

Downstairs dadi was having a hard time putting Jannat to bed,she was crying and kept asking for her mother and father.Her saviour came,as geet walked in taking Jannat from Dadi's hand she gave dadi a sweet kiss on the cheek."it's okay baby,mama is here.You wanna go see daddy.Well he wants to see you!Lets go.Im sorry for disturbing you dadi its nearly 5am,but we could not sleep without her.You should rest now,I will take it from here okay."Dadi smiled trying to ignore the fact they were still up,doing god knows what.She watched as Geet and Jannat made their way upstairs to their room,and Jannats cries turned in to silent giggles.Dadi thanked the forces above for a bahu like geet,and with that she tried to get some sleep.

"Jannat beta kyon itna roo rahi ho.Papa aur mama idher hi hain janu"Geet said walking in to her room.

"Meri Princess"Maan ran to Jannat and took her from Geet.

"Maan chalo you go to bed I will go in the next room and try to make her sleep"Geet said as she saw Maan yawn.

"NO!I mean mere paas beth ker soolao na.Agar tum nai hogi toh neend nai ayegi."Maan said holding her dupatta to stop her.

"Maan aap kiya bache hain ke jab tak ammi raath ko kahani na sunaye aap soyenge nai."Geet said teasing him

"Che che,kitni karab ho!Tum meri amma bana chahti ho,aur mere saath tumne kiya kuch nai kiya"Maan said catching on to her game before laughing at geet who had gone red.

Maan silently guided geet back to the bed,and sat beside her as she silently hummed a lulaby for Jannat.Jannat finally fell asleep after a few minutes,as Geet turned and saw Maan had put his head on her leg and was clutching on to it.Feeling uneasy,geet tried to move but after many attempts she gave up and gently woke Maan up.

"Maan thora sa udher ho jayen maine Jannat ko leta na hai."Geet watched and rolled her eyes as Maan didnt response.

"Maan"

"hmmm"

"mujhe neend arai hai"

"hmmm"

"Maan koi dekhe ga toh kahe ga ke abhi se hi mere gulam ban gaye aap!"that woke him up.

Slowly the couple fell asleep with Jannat taking up the space in between them,and that night with many hopes 3 people finally slept as a family.The next morning everything seemed so new to Maan,as he woke up he saw Geet in a sari drying her hair.Walking up to her he hugged her from the back,and nuzzled his face in to the crook of her neck.As geet gasped,Maan knew what her sensitive spot was.Her neck!She continued to dry her hair and tie it up,but maan would release her hair from the clip.Finally Maan sweetly turned her around and pulled her closer by the waist."Hmm you smell so good"Maan said before hearing a knock on the door.

"Hopefully aap log presentable halat main hoge!Aur kyon nai hoge apke paas janat hai!Geet maine tumse baath kerni hai!"Prem said from the door.

"Arai hoon"Geet said before Maan pulled her back and asked her to to wait,turning her around Maan put sindoor in her Maang.Then he put on the mangalsutar."Perfect Now everyone Knows your Geet Khurana!"Maan wishpered as geet looked away feeling shy.

"itni dair kyon laga rahe ho tum.Geet Jaldi na!"Prem said as Maan groaned and Geet smiled.

"Kiya hai Prem,wait kerlo Aur aram se bolo Jannat soo rahi hai!"Geet said while letting him in their room.

"Geet...Maan Mujhe pyar hogaya hai"Dramatically

Uh woh heer se!OMG this so good!Im so happy for you!"Geet said before hugging her friend

"yeh abh tum kabab main hadi nai bano ge!"Maan said before geet glared at him and said sorry.

"I am so happy meri family poori hogaya hai/Babaji hamein hamesha yoon hi saath rakhe!"

"forever"Maan said before hugging geet.

"foo-evar"Jannat mumbled from the bed and everyone smiled.

True love beats all the odds.No matter how long their journey is,they always thank the higher power for blessing them with love

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2 years Later

Geet was woken by the cries of her 9 month old baby boy,Krish.As she went to pick him up she noticed the lights on in Jannat's room.Walking to her room she saw Maan,Vicky,Jannat and Prem under the covers with a flashlight on!Standing at the doorway she admired their childish behavior to make her daughter happy.Prem had gotten Married to Heer last year.She was perfect for him,today Prem loved to people the Most in his life.Jannat and Heer,the bond Jannat and Prem shared was so refreshing.He had been by her side through everything.Vicky was set to marry Pinky,as they had hit it off great.In two weeks Pinky would be the choti bahu to this family.If there was one person missing,it was Dadi.Few months after Geet's announced her pregnancy,doctors had diagnosed dadi with cancer.Just a few months after Krish was born Dadi died.Dadi was her biggest supporter through the pregnancy.Maan was always to busy freaking out if she was okay.She truely missed her.Comming back to reality she looked at her family and shook her head.

"Main bhi kheloon"Geet said pulling the covers off.And glaring at them.

"Oh-uh I know that look."Maan said gulping.

"TUM LOG PAGAL HOGAYE HO-deep breath-Jannat ko sari raath maath jagao.Kal uska pehla din hai!Aur tum Prem,Heer ko main abhi bhulati hoon.Achi daant paregi you know cause she is pregnant,and your sitting here.Chalo utho.Vicky seede seede bed pai jao.Jannat beta aap bhi..AUR TUM Maan.Apna bando bast karlo cause you are sooooo not sleeping in our room."Geet yelled before heading back to her room

"Maar gaya!"Maan said before calling after geet.

If I were to change everything bad that happened in life,I may have not met the greatest people in the world.I found my peace after totally losing everything.My name is Geet Khurana and this was my story

Edited by Noori93 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
an amazing ending to a really good FF.. this update was really good and thanks for making it extra long!

pm ur new FF link! keep up the great writing !
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Posted: 14 years ago
I read first three parts...wonderful storyline.
Thanks
Will read more ...soon...time for bed now.
Love
Rachana

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